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    A return to Walford (fanfic)

    This is another story I've decided to write, but I'm still carrying on 'Friendship should last forever'!!!
    Hope you like this, tell me your comments and if I should carry it on or not.

    Part 1

    It had been a long time, almost a year, yet it felt like a day. Everything was the same, the Vic still stood in the corner of the square, Arthur's bench was still there, the smell even smelled the same.
    She got out the cab, her delicate feet strapped in bright pink diamonte' heels, followed by long, sexy, low slung jeans with a glittery belt. A pink low- cut gypsy top with of course her diamond pink heart necklace. Her lips were a rosy pinky glossy colour, her skin a mocha brown and her hair, long, flowing and a gorgeous, glossy chestnut brown.
    She grinned, looking around the square, what a great place to bring a new life.
    She then reached into the cab and unstrapped the small bundle. Her hair was a fine light blonde colour, hardly there. Her tiny hands and feet matched the colour of her Mum. Her bright eyes were the colour of her Dads.
    "Let's go find him shall we baby?" She smiled, picking up her luggage.

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    YES! Please carry on, I can't wait to see what happens next.

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    Part 2

    She frowned as she looked around the Vic. Where was he? Why wasn't he at the bar? Who were half these people? Perhaps things had changed after all.
    She clucthed her baby tight to her chest, smiling at the people staring at her. The baby started crying.
    "Shhh" She breatched, rocking her tiny bundle. She walked up to the bar, struggling with the bags.
    "Well well well! Look who it is!" Chrissy smiled.
    "Hey" She replied back. "Um, where's Alfie and Spencer?"
    "Oh, they don't work here anymore hun, I run the Vic now" Chrissy smiled again, not believing what she was seeing, the girl had changed so much, and a baby! This was something.
    Just then Zoe walked in with Sam, they'd just come back from shopping. Zoe walked over to the bar and she looked around. She spotted her. Her mouth dropped open. She then gave an enormous grin.

    "Hey Zo, bin long hasn't it"

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    This is great please post more! who is it?

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    Looking forward to finding out who it is!

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    ooo its kat isnt it! ooo i want more please!

    thanks torrie for my gorgeous banna!!
    Dennis: A moment of insanity. I only went an' proposed, didn't I?

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    Nope it ain't Kat!

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    this is great more asap. love emma.

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    Part 3

    "Oh My God!!!!" Zoe exclaimed, walking over to her. "Oh, my god, oh my god, oh my.."
    "God?"
    "Yes! You look so.....so different, and you have a baby!!??"
    "Yep, name's Jasmine, wanna hold her?"
    "She's, she's yours right?"
    "Yes, corse! Though I can't find him, he don't live ere' any more does he?"
    "You mean...you mean that the father of this baby is"
    "Got it in one Zo!"

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    it's Sharon... please let it be Sharon...
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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