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    Episode 1 - Scene 2 - Day house

    Jason gets home from work and Gerard is cooking dinner

    Jason: Hey dad, Mmmm that smells good
    Gerard: *Smiles* Hey Jason
    Jason: You really need to talk to mum
    Gerard: Why what has she done now?
    Jason: Started on Chloe again
    Gerard: Because of the whole baby thing again?
    Jason: Yes, she shouldn't be allowed to talk to people, i tried to talk to her and she starts waffling on about how i am defending my "girlfriend"
    Gerard: I will talk to her but you know what your mother is like
    Jason: Yeah don't i just

    Suzy comes in from shopping

    Suzy: Give us a hand with the shopping will you Gerry?
    Gerard: I can't i am cooking tea love
    Suzy: Oh yes i forgot men don't do multitasking do they?
    Gerard: Actually we do, see i am cooking and i am about to tell you off at the same time
    Suzy: Tell me off? How old do you think i am?
    Gerard: Funny you should ask that because i was beginning to wonder
    Suzy: What? Will you stop talking riddles please?
    Gerard: You getting at our Jason because he defends Chloe
    Suzy: Well he is always defending her over me
    Gerard: Because there is no need for you to start on her all the time

    The scene shows Lisa coming down the stairs

    Lisa: What is the arguing about this time
    Gerard: Your mother has been starting on little Chloe Miller again
    Suzy: And as always Jason defends her
    Jason: Because she doesn't deserve the crap
    Suzy: She had a baby when she was 13 and ruined her life
    Jason: So did Sophie but apparently that is different
    Suzy: It is
    Gerard: What? How is it different?
    Jason: Exactly what i said, it is no different at all
    Gerard: No it isn't son
    Lisa: STOP! God you lot take the fun out of disfunctional Jason you need to start defending mum and not Chloe she is not your family so leave her to fight her own battles for one will you?
    Suzy: Leave your brother alone Lisa
    Lisa: OMG i stick up for you and he is still your little golden boy, i don't know why i am even here
    Suzy: Go kill yourself then like you have threatened so many times before, do us all a favour

    Lisa runs upstairs in tears

    Gerard: DON'T YOU DARE! THAT IS BANG OUT OF ORDER, INFACT GET OUT OF MY HOUSE
    Suzy: No
    Gerard: LEAVE!
    Suzy: Where will i go?
    Gerard: I DON'T CARE JUST GO
    Suzy: Gerry don't be like that
    Gerard: NOW!!!

    As the scene ends we see Suzy leave the house
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    Another blow to soap as another actress leaves!
    Wendy Richard has quit her role as Suzy day just a day after Adele Silva announced she was leaving. Wendy is leaving because she has been diagnosed with terminal cancer and wants to spend the rest of her days with her life partner and family instead of having a busy schedual filming all the time.

    It is another big blow to London Stories, we can't reveal wether Suzy will be written out or recast, lets hope they recast the role though.

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    Name: Dave White
    Age:42
    Played by: Ross Kemp
    Character bio: Dave is a business man and owns several business' around London so is well known. He is a tough guy but has a sensitive side which is seen quite a bit in the beginning, how long until he shows his tougher side?

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    RICHARD'S CHARACTER TO BE KILLED OFF
    Following the shock announcement earlier this afternoon that Wendy Richard was leaving London Stories due to ill health the soap's creator Vicky has decided to kill off the character of Suzy Day. We caught up with her to ask her about her decision.

    "I was saddened to hear about the health issues which face Wendy at this present moment in time. She told me she wanted to leave and i respected her decision, but it has left me in the lurch a bit, i wanted to do so much with the character of Suzy day but after alot of thought about it i came to the decision to remove Suzy from the show as i felt the only woman who could play the part was Wendy so i will be writing her out instantly and i can confirm she does die, but how she dies is the secret. I can also reveal that following this announcement i am bringing in a new character that wasn't planned until about half an hour ago played by Ross Kemp"

    There you have it folks, one in and one out.

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    Episode 1 - scene 3 - Day house/Local park/Hospital

    Gerard, Lisa, Jason and Roxy are in the family room, Gerard and Lisa are both crying and hugging eachother, Roxy looks uncomfortable.

    Roxy: knock knock

    everyone looks at her

    Roxy: What?

    11 hours earlier..........

    Lisa: OMG i stick up for you and he is still your little golden boy, i don't know why i am even here
    Suzy: Go kill yourself then like you have threatened so many times before, do us all a favour

    Lisa runs upstairs in tears

    Gerard: DON'T YOU DARE! THAT IS BANG OUT OF ORDER, INFACT GET OUT OF MY HOUSE
    Suzy: No
    Gerard: LEAVE!
    Suzy: Where will i go?
    Gerard: I DON'T CARE JUST GO
    Suzy: Gerry don't be like that
    Gerard: NOW!!!

    As the scene ends we see Suzy leave the house

    Neighbour: Alright Suze? I heard shouting?
    Suzy: You would do wouldn't you
    Neighbour: Meaning?
    Suzy: Meaning you are a nosey cow
    Neighbour: Charming

    Suzy continues walking meanwhile the scene cuts to Lisa's bedroom where she is still crying, Roxy walks in

    Roxy: Lise?
    Lisa: *wipes her eyes* Ignore me Rox
    Roxy: What's up?
    Lisa: My mother is a bitch that's what

    Roxy hugs Lisa

    Lisa: I am popping out for a while
    Roxy: Want me to come with you?
    Lisa: Nah i want to be alone for a bit
    Roxy: Ok

    We see Lisa leave the house through her bedroom window and the scene cuts to Suzy now walking in the park, a man is walking towards her

    Man: Alright Suze?
    Suzy: Been better
    Man: Trouble at home again?
    Suzy: Gerard kicked me out

    They both sit on a nearby bench

    Man: Why?
    Suzy: I told Lisa i wanted her to die
    Man: Not like she has been the best daughter in the world
    Suzy: No
    Man: Look Suze i really do have to get back, i left chicken in the oven
    Suzy: Oh no matter i shouldn't have kept you anyway
    Man: Pop round tomorrow for lunch yeah?
    Suzy: Yeah, yeah that will be nice

    the man walks away from the bench Suzy is still sitting on as he gets a little further away from her he stops to turn round and look at Suzy, the scene cuts back to the Day's house.

    Gerard: That woman makes me so mad sometimes
    Jason: I know dad
    Gerard: Jase, can you finish dinner i need to get some fresh air
    Jason: Sure dad

    Gerard leaves the house and Roxy comes down the stairs

    Jason: Alright Rox?
    Roxy: Yeah can't say the same for Lisa though
    Jason: Oh well she will be
    Roxy: I hope so, she has been good to me
    Jason: Yeah because a 15 year old is the only friend she can get
    Roxy: Don't be so mean
    Jason: Well it's true
    Roxy: Whatever Jason!

    Jason gets a phone call from a mate

    Jason: Alright Bri?
    Jason: Yeah yeah mate i am good just cooking dinner
    Jason: No there was an argument here earlier and Mum and Dad have gone out
    Jason: Yeah we are having pie and chips
    Jason: Oooh very nice, wish i was having that
    Jason: Yeah alright mate chat later yeah?
    Jason: Yeah cool see ya

    Jason hangs up and the scene cuts back to the park a man is walking his Alsation Bruno

    Man: Bruno wait for me, im not as young as i used to be *laughs*

    The man finally catches up with Bruno to find him barking, Suzy is lying on the floor and the man runs up to her

    Man: You alright love?
    *pause*
    Man: Can you hear me darling?

    The man pulls a phone out of his pocket

    Man: Ambulance please, yeah im at Clapham common park, yeah a woman is here looks like she has been attacked, hurry please

    Man: It's alright love help is on the way, just stay with me for a bit longer love

    An ambulance speeds up the grass and two paramedics get out

    Paramedic 1: Out the way please mate
    Paramedic 2: What's your name mate?
    Man: What?
    Paramedic 2: Name?
    Man: Oh yeah sorry mate urm Dave, urm Dave White
    Paramedic 1: Alright Dave we are going to take her to hospital
    Dave: Can i come aswell?
    Paramedic 2: What about the dog?
    Dave: Oh yeah i totally forgot about Bruno, can i pop by later see how she is doing?
    Paramedic 2: Yeah no worries mate

    The scene cuts to the day house again and we see Gerard come back in

    Jason: This is nearly done
    Gerard: Good lad

    The scene cuts to Roxy's room and we see Lisa coming through Roxy's window

    Roxy: Alright Lise?
    Lisa: Yeah not bad

    The scene cuts to the hospital and we see Dave pulling up in his Jag, he gets out of the car and rushes in he sees one of the paramedics that were at the scene of the accident

    Dave: Alright mate im here to see that girl i found earlier
    Paramedic: Oh right yeah let me take you to the doctor in charge of treating her
    Dave: Thanks

    They both head down a corridoor

    Paramedic: Wait here
    Dave: Sure mate

    The paramedic walks through two double doors

    Paramedic: Steven?
    Steven: Yes Barry
    Barry: The guy who found her is outside
    Steven: Oh right i will have to go and have a word with him, does he know?
    Barry: No
    Steven: Ok

    Steven and Barry leave the room and Barry keeps walking while Steven stops to speak to Dave

    Steven: Hello
    Dave: Hello i am Dave i found the woman
    Steven: Dr. Steven Marrick
    Dave: How is she?
    Steven: She died of multiple stab wounds
    Dave: Stab wounds? I never saw any stab wounds
    Steven: You wouldn't have
    Dave: I can't believe this
    Steven: You will need to talk to the police
    Dave: The police?
    Steven: Yes we are looking at murder, and as you found her you will need to speak to them
    Dave: Oh right yeah no worries
    Steven: Do you know her name at all?
    Dave: No but i know her surname is Day, her boy used be mates with my boy
    Steven: Thank you i am sure that will help alot

    The police are seen in reception and we see Steven talking to them, they then make their way over to Dave

    Policeman: You found the body of the lady who died right?
    Dave: Yes
    Police woman: We would like to chat, and we may need you to come down the station later
    Dave: Yeah sure whatever you need
    Policeman: How did you come to find the body?
    Dave: I was walking my dog Bruno, in the park
    Policeman: What did you do upon discovering the woman?
    Dave: WHAT DO YOU THINK I DID? I PHONED 999
    Policeman: Alright sir if you can calm down please
    Dave: Sorry mate just been a bad day you know? Not every day you find a woman on the floor then find out she died a few hours later
    Policeman: Yes sir we respect that you are under alot of stress today
    Dave: Understatement i think
    Policeman: So do you know this woman?
    Dave: Only that her boy Jason used to be friends with my boy John, her surname is Day but i don't know anything else mate
    Policeman: Okay thank you sir that will do for now, please call us if you have anything that might help us with the investigation, we may need to contact you for more questioning do you have a mobile number sir?
    Dave: Yes here take my card, has all my contact details on there incase you can't get me on one phone.
    Policeman: Thank you for your time sir

    The police walk away from Dave and speak through their radios asking the man on the other end to spped things up on the fingerprint test. The man the other end of the phone says the woman's name is Suzanne Day, on this news the scene shows that all the days are asleep in bed, then it cuts back to the hospital

    Policeman: Do we have an address
    Radio man: Yes 51 Lyham Road
    Policeman: Better get round there, thanks Mike
    Mike: No worries mate

    The scene cuts to the police pulling up outside the Day's house and knocking on the door. Jason opens the door

    Jason: Can i help you
    Policeman: May we come in?
    Jason: Yes sure
    Policeman: And you are?
    Jason: Jason day
    Policeman: Do you live alone Jason?
    Jason: No my dad and sister are here to, and my sisters friend Roxanne lives with us aswell
    Policeman: Can you get them up please
    Jason: Yeah ok

    Jason goes to wake the family up and they all come down one by one and see the police

    Policeman: You all are?
    Gerard: I am Gerard, this is my daughter Lisa and her bestfriend Ro..
    Policeman: Roxanne yes sir we was told by Jason
    Gerard: I see, what is this about?
    Policeman: Sit down sir
    Gerard: Ok

    The whole family sit down

    Policeman: Earlier tonight a man was walking his dog in the park and discovered your wife had been attacked, she was unconscious at the time, he immediately phoned 999 and your wife was taken to hospital but died 8 hours later
    Gerard: No, not my Suzy?
    Jason: Are you serious?
    Policeman: Do i look like i am joking sir?

    Everyone beings to cry

    Policeman: I really am very very sorry

    Policeman gets a call

    Policeman: We have to go sir, but someone will be here in a while, and my boss will need yo speak to you all in the morning, we will let ourselves out, the policeman and his collegue leave and the family head into the family room, Lisa hugs Gerard and they both begin to cry amd Roxy looks uncomfortable

    Roxy: knock knock

    everyone looks at her

    Roxy: What?

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    I really like this. Love the way you're setting the scenes. Althrough Suzy irritated me i didn't want her dead. More Soonx

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    Episode 1 - Scene 4 - Local nightclub

    The scene opens showing the camera up high above people who are in the nightclub dancing to the song Things can only get better by D:ream. The shot slowly comes in on them and looks around the nightclub before cutting to the office starting from the floor and working it's way up to find Dave sitting there crying. The phone rings and he wipes his tears away and answers still a bit teary.

    Dave: H...he..hello
    Caller: Hey babe it's me
    Dave: Oh hi hunni
    Caller: You ok? You sound like you been crying?
    Dave: No not really darling
    Caller: What happened?
    Dave: Was out walking Bruno lastnight and i found a woman lying on the ground, i went to take Bruno home and then had some tea before heading up to the hospital to see her
    Caller: OH NO! Did you see her? is she ok?

    There is a silence for a few seconds

    Dave: She died *begins to cry again*
    Caller: *Cries to* Why are you at the club?
    Dave: Wanted to keep busy
    Caller: You should have come to see me
    Dave: You didn't need me stressing you out with the baby coming
    Caller: Don't be daft you can't go through this on your own
    Dave: I am ok
    Caller: You always act like the tough guy, but you are a big softie and no way are you ok
    Dave: I am a man for a start, guys don't show emotions, and then there is the fact i have a reputation, i can't ruin it by showing i am upset
    Caller: You always go on about this big repuation you have Dave but you are human, you are allowed to have feelings you know
    Dave: Guys like me do not not have feelings
    Caller: Fine you know what Dave you can just deal with this on your own, i don't have the patience for this right now

    The caller hang up and as the scene ends Dave cries again
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    Episode 1 - Scene 5 - Day house

    As the scene opens we see Ashleigh and Chloe approaching the door where the Day family live, Ashleigh is holding a card and some flowers, Chloe knocks on the door and Jason answers it.

    Jason: Oh hey Chlo *bends down* Hey little Ashleigh
    Ashleigh: I got these for you *holds out flowers and card*
    Jason: Thanks *takes them*
    Chloe: Actually they are for the whole family, i am so sorry to hear about your mum Jase
    Jason: Ya don't have to Chlo, i know she was tough on you, and to tell you the truth i hate her for it
    Chloe: Don't say that J, she was your mother
    Jason: Yes and she should have been supportive, but the silly old bint was horrible to you, horrible to my sister, horrible to Roxy and even my dad
    Ashleigh: Do you hate my mummy aswell?

    Both Jason and Chloe laugh

    Jason: No of course not sweetheart, just my mummy
    Ashleigh: I love my mummy
    Jason: I bet you do darling, look Chloe if you are not in a hurry why don't you come in, Lisa is upstairs she will love to see Ashleigh, and me and you can talk
    Chloe: You sure?
    Jason: Yeah will be nice to not think about mum for a while
    Chloe: Ok then
    Jason: Ashleigh why don't you go upstairs and find Lisa
    Ashleigh: Okay *runs off excitedly*
    Jason: Sit down Chlo
    Chloe: Thanks *takes a seat* how are the rest of the family?
    Jason: Oh you know, dad is finding it hard, especially as he is one of the suspects, and Lisa is to as she can't proove where she was at the time
    Chloe: And you and Roxy can?
    Jason: Yes me and Roxy had an argument, neighbours heard it so they have put us somewhere else at that time
    Chloe: That is one thing, but what about Lisa and Gerry?
    Jason: They are back and forth from the police station at the moment helping with enquiries, dad is there now
    Chloe: Should you not be with him?
    Jason: If one of them killed my mum i have no intention of being there to support them, i know neither of them were here at the time the police say she was attacked
    Chloe: So you think they could have done it?
    Jason: They both had reason, why not? You seen the news? Mothers abducting their own children, why can't daughters and husbands murder their mother's and wifes? It's a sick world out there Chlo
    Chloe: Oh i know that Jase but seriously? Gerry killing Suzy? are you sure? Everyone knew Suzy were more likely to kill Gerry not the other way around, and Lisa? she don't have the mind to think up something like that does she?
    Jason: She was on the streets for nearly 10 years, she could have picked anything up, i don't know her well enough now to know what she is capeable of, all i know is she was not in THIS house the day my mum died

    Jason breaks down in tears and cries leaving Chloe to comfort him as the scene ends
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    New co-writter hired for London Stories
    A new writter to help Vicky write her soap London Stories has been oppointed, we can exclusively reveal that the writters name is Tanya, she has written several of her own scripts mainly based around Holby City, namely popular character Connie Beachamp.

    We caught up with Vicky to ask her about Tanya's role in the soap. This is what she had to say to us.

    I have been contemplating getting help to write the soap for a while now, i knew Tanya writes her own stuff and would be a good choice for the role of co-writter, i still plan the episodes mainly and will tell her the kind of stuff i want to happen, but she can give me ideas aswell, or if she does not like something she can tell me and come up with a way to make it better, i look foward to working with Tanya in the future
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    Adele replacement rumours!!
    With the news a few months back that Adele Silva had quit her role as Lucy Marsden before she had even began filming, we have been waiting to hear who, if anyone would be replacing Adele.

    Names are flying everywhere, some rumours have it that Lucy Marsden will now be played by American actress Sophia Bush best known for her role in One Tree Hill as Brooke Davis. Others say English actresses Charlie Brooks or Lauren Crace could take over the role, better known as Janine Butcher and Danielle Jones in Eastenders.

    We was hoping to catch up with London Stories writer Vicky or co-writer Tanya but both have avoided the press since the news was leaked hopefully we will be able to catch up with them soon and get official news as to who the role will go to but for now all we have are rumours

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