Freshers (New 10 Part Drama Series)

[Bryan]

can i be cheaky and ask for comments from people when they read it, just so as know people are reading it/enjoying it lol, it encourages me to right more then, and of course you all want to read more don't you?

[Trinity]

I love it Bry - the characterisation and scene setting are both fab.

Do the Scottish people live in Scotland - if so there is no way the parents - especially the step-dad- would have driven down to Southhampton. It is a long, long way.

My folks are relatively well off middle class people who doted on me and they took me to the train station in Glasgow when I went to London and visited me once a year, lol.

[Abigail]

I love it. My favourite part is when Jess is unpacking, all the f-ing and blinding give a real sense of the atmosphere and tension between Jess and her step dad.

When's the next part going to be up?

[Bryan]

I love it Bry - the characterisation and scene setting are both fab.

Do the Scottish people live in Scotland - if so there is no way the parents - especially the step-dad- would have driven down to Southhampton. It is a long, long way.

My folks are relatively well off middle class people who doted on me and they took me to the train station in Glasgow when I went to London and visited me once a year, lol.

Indeed it would be a massize journey. I know it's a mamouth amount of time on train alone. But i'd have envisaged them stopping half way and staying in a travel lodge on the way down. Karl thinks that taking her all that way is justification enough for her to treat him with respect.

Good spotting though Hope you continue reading Trinity! Appreciate the comment!

[Bryan]

I love it. My favourite part is when Jess is unpacking, all the f-ing and blinding give a real sense of the atmosphere and tension between Jess and her step dad.

When's the next part going to be up?

I've got all of episode 1 written, but I'll only post 3 scenes a day, if i wrote anymore no one would wanna read a big amount in one go!!! So, some more tomorrow!

[Layne]

Ooh i'm liking it
I like the complete contrast between Alex and Jess, and it will be interesting to read more about them and see how they develop.
Oh its like being at Uni already!

[DaVeyWaVey]

Loving this so far! I thought the scene with Karl, Jess and Mary was brilliant. Love the hate between Karl and Jess!

[Katy]

Its really good so far. Love the introduction to the two characters.

Quick question what does Ext and Int mean when describing the scene?

Sorry for sounding a bit thick.

[Abigail]

I think it means external and internal i.e. inside or outside.

[Katy]

oh right! Now i really sound thick!!!