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    Omg How Fabby Is This More Soon Or Else!!

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    Episode 2 - scene 4 - Walker mansion

    The scene starts in the Twins' bedroom

    Lainey: Lauren are you ok
    Lauren: Yeah just shocked thats all
    Lainey: Tell me about it this is a big shock

    While this discussion is going on the scene cuts to Lana in the kitchen chopping up carrots for dinner, she has a worried look on her face.

    Lauren: Tell me about it, but what i don't get is how she can have the nerve to bring us up to tell the truth *thinks* well me actually since you still have issues with it, then lie about something as big as this

    As this conversation continues we see Lana heading up the stairs and as she is doing so she is listening to the discussion her daughters are having and her facial expression changes to a dissapointed look

    Lainey: I know but it's over with now
    Lauren: No it isn't not by a long shot
    Lainey: Oh Lauren please don't start, this should be good news
    Lauren: It is, until you get to the part where mum lies to us
    Lainey: There might be a reason she didn't tell us
    Lauren: Well dad couldn't have been violent or she would never have let Lewis and Lindsay go with him, but maybe you are right, maybe there is more to this

    Lana walks into the twins' bedroom

    Lana: Look Lauren, i wasn't going to tell you but i do have a number for your father *hands her the number*
    Lauren: WHAT?? You was still going to keep lying
    Lana: Well yes but...
    Lauren: Just get out
    Lana: But...
    Lauren: I SAID GET OUT!!!!

    Lana leaves with tears in her eyes, we see Lauren sitting crying with Lainey hugging her, after a few moments thought Lauren goes and follows her mother to the garden and Lainey follows closely behind

    Lauren: Mum
    Lana: What?
    Lauren: Why did you teach us to be open and honest with you
    Lana: That is the way things should be Lauren
    Lauren: Like you was with us about Lewis and Lindsay you mean?
    Lana: Now Lauren that is not fair
    Lauren: Isn't it? If we hide things from you we are punished, why should this be any different?
    Lana: Punish me if you like, if that is what it will take to get it out of your system go for it, do your worst
    Lauren: Okay...we want to go live with dad
    Lana: WHAT??
    Lainey: Lauren....
    Lauren: What? she lied to us, this is a pretty big thing to lie about
    Lana: I didn't lie
    Lauren: Well you didn't exactly tell us the truth either, now if you don't mind i want you to get dad's number and ring him, in the mean time i will be packing my things

    Lauren walks off still sort of crying the camera zooms slowly out the further away Lauren gets from Lainey and Lana and we see Lainey is hugging her mother as the scene ends
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    Ohhh This Is Going To Be Good =] Aww Poor Lauren! More Soon Hun x

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    Wow Lauren has took it pretty badly, do kinda feel sorry for Lana - she was only doing what she thought was right.

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    Episode 2 - Scene 5 - Walker mansion and Lindsay’s room

    Linds is in her room and her phone rings, it's Lana, the scene cuts between them both talking

    Lindsay: Hello
    Lana: Hello, is Luke there?
    Lindsay: No i am afrraid he is work
    Lana: Oh i see, are you Lindsay?
    Lindsay: I am, who are you?
    Lana: Not sure i am the one who should be telling you that my love
    Lindsay: I'm not your love
    Lana: No course not...sorry
    Lindsay: How do you know me?
    Lana: Ask your dad dear, just tell him Lana phoned, he will know who it is
    Lindsay: NO!!! I ASKED YOU!!!
    Lana: You have that temperment aswell then
    Lindsay: What is that supposed to mean...look just tell me who the ******* you are
    Lana: If i must
    Lindsay: Yes you must...now go on, im listening
    Lana: Well i dear, I am your mother
    Lindsay: Is this some kind of sick joke?
    Lana: No, not a joke at all, im ringing because Lauren wanted to meet you Luke and Lewis
    Lindsay: Excuse me? Lauren is?
    Lana: Oh my dear do you not know, you have two sisters my end of the line, Lauren and Lainey, you were triplets
    Lindsay: Oh my god...and they know about me?
    Lana: Yes dear they do, but only just
    Lindsay: Does Lewis know
    Lana: He should do, he was 5 when he went to live with Luke and yourself
    Lindsay: I'm ever so sorry i really have to go, i will tell dad you called

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    Luke Stewart - Played by Bobby Davro

    Luke is the father of Lindsay Lewis Lauren and Lainey, and ex husband of Lana, he and Lana split when Lewis was 5 and the triplets were 2, Luke took Lewis and Lindsay to live with him and Lana kept Lauren and Lainey but Luke is about to find that you can not escape the past forever.

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    Episode 2 - Scene 6 - Luke's Office.

    Lindsay storms into her father's office after getting off the phone with Lana. She stands infront of his desk in an obvious mood.

    Luke - What Now?
    Lindsay - Guess who just phoned!
    Luke - Who?
    Lindsay - My Mum!
    Luke - Ahhh...
    Lindsay - Don't Ahh me what's this about me being a triplet?
    Luke - See i was going to tell you, i just didn't know when the right moment was.
    Lindsay - That still doesn't help! Apparently she want's to speak to you about one thing or another.
    Luke - I'll phone her back when i'm less busy then.
    Lindsay - But the main thing is why didn't you tell me?
    Luke - I just said i didn't know how to.
    Lindsay - Dad i'm 14 not 4 and a half, don't you think i could handle it?
    Luke - I Just didn't think you were ready to know.
    Lindsay - But after all the times i've told you i wished i had a sister and you just ignored me and went onto a diffrent subject, you could of told me after i said that!
    Luke - Will You calm down?
    Lindsay - No i won't. I don't want to talk to you till you come up with a better excuse then "I Didn't think you were ready to know!"

    We see Lindsay storm out the room, and a dull thud indicating that she's slammed the door.
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    Sorry for lack of updates in this been busy with college and forgot about it but it's back

    Scene 7 - Stewart house & Walker Mansion

    Luke picks up the phone and dials a number, the scene cuts to the Walker mansion where the phone is ringing, Lana answers the phone (the scene cuts between both conversations)

    Lana: Hello this is Lana Walker how may i help you
    Luke: Nice...very nice
    Lana: Oh Luke it's you
    Luke: YES IT'S ME *calms down a bit* what the hell do you think you are playing at?
    Lana: Come again
    Luke: You know what i mean, you phoned Lindsay and told her about you and the girls
    Lana: Oh that
    Luke: Don't "oh that" me...do you realise what you have done you stupid cow? you have ruined my weekend off...the weekend i was meant to spend with my daughter...RUINED
    Lana: I I I...Im sorry Luke i didn't think
    Luke: NO!!! THAT IS THE BLOODY PROBLEM WOMAN YOU NEVER DO anyway Linz tells me you wanted to talk to me
    Lana: Ah yeah well i'm not sure i should tell you now
    Luke: You will tell me, you ruined my weekend and probably my whole entire life to tell me what ever it is you have to say so you will tell me
    Lana: Ok...well it's about the girls
    Luke: What? Are they ill?
    Lana: No it's nothing like that...
    Luke: OH WILL YOU JUST SPIT IT OUT WOMAN
    Lana: They want to live with you Luke
    Luke: That's crazy...i don't even know them...besides i don't have the room
    Lana: Look Luke, Lauren hates me, she doesn't want anything to do with me, i'll move out of here and you Linz and Lewis can move in here
    Luke: I'm not sure Lana, it's not that i don't love the girls but i have not seen them for 13 years but i would like to see them though but i'm not sure living together will be the best idea
    Lana: How about you bring Linz and Lewis round to my place this weekend, the girls would love to see you all
    Luke: Urm okay sure, I think Linz want's to talk to the girls is that okay?
    Lana: Course i will just get them

    Lana and Luke call their daughters to the phone we see Linz rush down to the phone then we see Lauren and Lainey excited to pick up the phone in their bedroom, the scene ends when both sides have said hello

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    Lewis Stewart - played by Edward Savage

    Lewis is Lindsay's 18 year old brother, he is very keen on football and hopes to play professionally one day, he was took off to live with Luke & Lindsay at the age of 5 but since then he has left the family home and lost all contact with Lindsay but they appear to be lying about why, will they ever tell the truth about this family fued.

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    I know i haven't updated this for sometime but is anyone interested in it starting again??

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