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    Episode 1 - Scene 3 - Church

    Lindsay is standing crying with Jamie holding her outside the church, the scene cuts to a car pulling up with Lucy Ellie and Kacey inside, we see them get out the car, Ellie is crying and Kacey has her arm round her

    Lucy: Oh look who is here
    Kacey: Lucy what is your problem with Lindsay we are all friends
    Lucy: Candi promised ME the leader position not her
    Kacey: Now is not the time or place for your pathetic jealousy Luce it's Candi's funeral lets sort this out later
    Lucy: NO!! I want to sort this out now
    Kacey: Oh noooo don't you dare, just let it go
    Lucy: If Linz wants a fight i will give her a fight *starts to head towards Lindsay shouting her name but Kacey pulls her back*
    Kacey: *Points at Ellie* Look at her

    Nothing happens

    Kacey: I SAID LOOK AT HER!!
    Lucy: *Looks at Ellie* What??
    Kacey: SHE IS YOUR BEST FRIEND, LOOK AT THE BLOODY STATE OF HER AND ALL YOU CARE ABOUT IS THE FACT YOU AIN'T RUNNING THIS POXY CLUB *breaths* look just look after her will you?

    Lucy holds Ellie while Kacey heads to see Lindsay

    Lindsay: Does she have something to say?
    Kacey: Just ignore her
    Lindsay: She has changed since Candi died, i'm going to find out what is up with her once and for all
    Kacey: No Linz just leave it, now is not the time or the place for this we will have a meeting tomorrow and sort this out
    Lindsay: Okay, you're right this is Candi's day we can sort what ever crap we have to sort out another day
    Kacey: Exactly now lets go and wait for the cars to get here

    As the scene ends we see Kacey Lindsay & Jamie going to stand with Ellie and Lucy by the road waiting for the funeral cars

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    Ohhh Lucy Isn't So Happy Is She! But Yeah It Is Candi's Day. Fabby More Soon Please

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    Vicar Julie Johnston - played by Dawn French

    Julie comes into the soap as the vicar leading Candi's funeral and offers support to Candi's friends afterwards but is there a reason she is being so nice to them?
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    Ohhh Now This is getting good and Trust you to choose Dawn French As the Vicar

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    Episode 1 - scene 4 - Outside the church

    The car rolls up with Candi's coffin in it followed by the car with other mourners in, the undertakers get out of the car

    Jamie: Aww that poor family i would hate to think what they are going through right now
    Lindsay: *cries very loudly*
    Lucy: *looks at Linz* Drama queen
    Kacey: Shut up Luce

    Candi's parents get out of the car followed by her 6 brothers who head to the car with her coffin in it and pull it out ready to carry it into the church, the 4 members of the Candi club follow behind the brothers and walk into the church behind the coffin to the song Candy Shop by 50 Cent when the brothers get to the front of the church they place the coffin down and take their seats and the vicar stands up and says a few words about Candi

    Vicar: We are gathered here today to say good by to a very dear daughter, sister, niece, auntie and friend, Candi Billington was taken by God on July 31st 2007 she was a popular girl in school, maybe not an angel when she was alive but she certainly is one now. I would now like to invite one of Candi's friends up to say a few words, Ellie McPherson

    Ellie gets up and each member of the Candi club pat her arm to show her some support, she gets up and turns around and we she she is crying and she starts to speak through tears

    Ellie: My friend Candi was the best friend in the world, she run our our little group in school, then we was called the SugarChicks but since Candi was murdered we have re-named ourselves the Candi Club because no matter who runs the club from now on to us Candi will always be our leader and if we can lbe half as good as she made our gang we will be happy. Candi was fun loving and as the vicar said she wasn'y an angel but she...*cries but then tries to hold back tears* she.... *breaks down in tears*

    Lucy gets up and hugs Ellie then begins to speak

    Lucy: What Ellie is trying to say is no matter what Candi did and how horrible she seemed she loved her friends and all of her family.....

    The scene cuts to the mourners crying at these words

    Lucy: and everyone in school wanted to be her friend, as Ellie said if we can live up to her expectations and be half as good as she was we will be happy

    Lucy holds Ellie in her arms and takes her back to sit down

    Vicar: I think we will all agree that they were lovely words from both Ellie and Lucy, now it has been requested we don't do hymns as Candi didn't like them instead we will all sing Candi's favorite song Were all in this together by the cast of High School Musical

    the mourners get up and start singing we see the members of the Candi club dancing and clapping along just as Candi would want them to when the song gets to the first chorus the coffin goes behind the curtains and we see the 6 brothers put their heads down then the mourners head outside to see the temporary plaque for Candi outside and as the scene ends the camera looks at all the flowers that have been left

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    Episode 1 - scene 5 - The flying pig (local pub)

    The mourners are gathered in the local pub for Candi's wake, Lucy Lindsay Jamie & Kacey are talking to eachother and we see Ellie is talking the vicar

    Vicar: So how are you coping El?
    Ellie: Not to well to be honest and Luce isn't making it any easier
    Vicar: I thought it was sweet her getting up to help you out today
    Ellie: Well it was the least she could do the way she has been behaving recently
    Vicar: Well isn't it to be expected what with Candi being killed the way she was?
    Ellie: We wouldn't mid if that was her issue
    Vicar: Oh?
    Ellie: Well ya see she reckons Candi was going to stand down from leading the SugarChicks and promised Lucy the role but she was killed before anything was said so we was left without a leader after the murder so we all said Linz should do it seeing as she was Candi's best friend and ever since Luce has been possesed with jealousy, i think we are having a meeting about it tomorrow we can't keep this up we are arguing like cat and dog
    Vicar: You all have to pull together at a time like this
    Ellie: Tell me about it *looks at the Candi Club girls* i better get back to them actually
    Vicar: Okay Ellie but you remember hunni if you ever need to talk you know where i live
    Ellie: Thanks *goes and joins the girls*

    Lucy: Hey Ellie come sit down
    Lindsay: What was you talking to the vicar about?
    Ellie: *looks worried and thinks quickly* Just about the service, you know what she said something very bizarre
    Kacey: What?
    Ellie: She said if i wanted to speak to someone i know where she lives
    Lindsay: *Looks over at the Vicar and sees she is talking to someone else from school* Hmmmm i am going to find out some more about her when i get home
    Kacey: Come on Linz she is a Vicar not a murderer
    Lindsay: You're so lucky Candi wanted you in this club or else i'd kick you out of it

    Kacey runs off crying

    Ellie: That wasn't very nice *Gets up and goes after Kacey*

    Ellie follows Kacey outside and we see Lucy follow on behind leaving Linz and Jamie on their own

    Ellie: Kace wait...Kacey come back
    Lucy&Ellie: KACEY!!!
    Kacey: *turns around still crying* What?
    Ellie: Ignore her
    Lucy: Yeah she is a cow
    Ellie: Lucy would you quit it, im sick of you going on and on about you you you all the time
    Lucy: Ooooh sorry, i'll go shall i?
    Ellie: If thats what you want don't let me stop you
    Lucy: FINE!! I will
    Kacey: STOP IT BOTH OF YOU!!! What the hell is happening to us?
    Ellie: I dont know
    Lucy: I tell you what is wrong with us...
    Ellie: If you dare mention the fact you don't run this group i am actually going to kill you
    Lucy: Never mind then
    Ellie: ARGH!!! would you please just let it go, Kace look Linz was out of order back there
    Kacey: She was right, i am nothing like you guys, you guys stick together and i just say and do things to mess it up
    Ellie: Don't say that, you held us together this morning, Lucy wanted a fight with Linz but would you let her?
    Kacey: *Thinks and says in a quiet voice* no
    Ellie: Exactly
    Lucy: Els can i have a word with you a sec
    Ellie: Yeah ok one sec, Kace take this *hands her a tissue* dry your eyes put your head up and smile *head over to Lucy* what?
    Lucy: What do you say we go out there, tell Miss Boss woman we want Kace to be team leader
    Ellie: You are a genius, but if we do i don't ever want to hear about Candi promising that place to you again ok?
    Lucy: Promise, no more leader rubbish
    Ellie: Okay we do it
    Lucy: *Smiles and goes over to Kace and grabs her wrist* Come with us

    The three girls go back out to Lindsay and Jamie

    Ellie: Can you leave us alone for a bit Jamie
    Jamie: Sure *Goes to the bar*
    Lucy: Linz you was out of order to Kacey and we want you to apologize
    Lindsay: Oh come on guys you have to admit she is nothing like us at all
    Lucy: If we was all the same it would be boring, now say sorry
    Lindsay: Why?
    Lucy: Because we are all friends
    Lindsay: I'm not sorry though so i'm not going to say it when i don't mean it
    Lucy: In which case Linz i am very sorry to do this *removes the club team leader badge from Lindsay's neck* we have decided we don't want you as team leader any more
    Lindsay: Oh and who is going to run it may i ask? you? you would run this club into the ground in a week
    Lucy: Actually no not me *turns and faces Kacey* Kace we want you to run it *places badge around Kacey's neck*
    Kacey: Uh...Uhh..me?
    Ellie: Yeah you, as i said we need you
    Lindsay: Kacey? *laughs* have you all lost your mind? she can't run this club she's weird
    Lucy: You said that about Candi to start with...remember?
    Kacey: *to Ellie* Did she really?
    Ellie: Yep
    Lindsay: I'm not going to watch a freak like her ruin this club
    Lucy: Suit yourself but like it or not Kacey is the new team leader
    Lindsay: I'm out of here, i'll join my own group and we will be better than you
    Lucy&Ellie: Okay...good luck
    Lindsay: ARGH!!!! Jamie we are leaving *storms out with Jamie following*

    the scene ends with them all congratulating Kacey and Kacey looking happy that she has found some real friends and they all place their hands on top of eachother in a tower count to three then as they break the tower they shout The Candi Club

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    Episode 1 - scene 6 - school bus

    The scene starts with the kids talking on the school bus about Lindsay leaving the Candi Club then it zooms into Lindsay and Jamie

    Lindsay: They are all talking about me aren't they
    Jamie: I think so, you was a big part of the Candi Club they are bound to talk about it
    Lindsay: Yeah you're right, look babe i'll be back in a sec i've got to join a new club asap
    Jamie: Okay gorgeous

    Lindsay walks up the bus looking at all the other cliques but realises none of them seem right untill her eyes stop on a girl and a boy sitting together the scene cuts to them

    Boy: Well can you believe that the Candi club are in trouble, they are way more popular
    Girl: I know i was so shocked that i laughed it off i mean......

    Their voices fade to cut back to Lindsay and the boy spots Lindsay heading towards them

    Boy: Shhhh
    Girl: *spots Lindsay and shuts up*
    Lindsay: Don't stop on my account i know it is shocking that i have left the Candi Club but they are my past i am now trying to sort out my future starting now
    Boy: Oh okay, im a little confused but sure
    Lindsay: Well you see *thinks* urm what are your names again?
    Boy: I am Samuel Cook and....
    Girl: I am Violet Roberts
    Lindsay: Well you see Samuel with me no longer in the Candi club i am looking for new best friends so i figured the smartest kids in school were my best option
    Violet: Us?
    Lindsay: Exactly right
    Samuel: But why us?
    Lindsay: Why not?
    Samuel&Violet: Your Lindsay Stewart
    Samuel: Thats reason enough
    Lindsay: Do you not want me to join your club
    Violet: Of course we do, it would boost our street credit but why us?
    Lindsay: I realised popular cliques aren't for me
    Samuel: Fair enough, in which case welcome to the boffin club
    Violet: There is one rule though
    Lindsay: Okay?
    Violet: No bunking lessons
    Lindsay: Done!
    Samuel: In which case...
    Violet&Samuel: Welcome aboard

    The scene ends with Jamie turning round to see Lindsay sitting with the boffin club and he looks disgusted
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    Woooo =] Wonder what Jamie's Going to do about Lindsay Ohhh i love it and you know i love it more soon hun x

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    The vicar seems quite mysterious...i think there is something about her..

    I wonder if Jamie will carry on hanging out with Lindsay now she's in the boffin club.

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    Episode 1 - scene 7 - Class room

    As the scene starts we see all the cliques are talking together, the Candi Club are talking about Lindsay, the Cookie Club are talking about the usual crap (sex/porn/women/sports) suddnely the boffin club walk in followed by Lindsay and the whole room goes quiet and all the students nudge eachother and point towards the door, Violet and Samuel walk in and Lindsay heads towards the Candi Club

    Lucy: Well, well, well Lindsay Stewart with the boffin club
    Lindsay: Yes i am with them, so what?
    Lucy: So nothing i am just suprised you left us for...
    Lindsay: For what?
    Lucy: Well...for them, they ain't exactly popular are they?
    Lindsay: You are so small minded, nothing like Violet and Samuel they...
    Lucy: *laughs* Violet and Samuel, you are actually calling them by their real names? *laughs* well well you have made yourself some new friends haven't you
    Lindsay: Yes i have they don't have a bad thing to say about anyone, not even you bunch of freaks
    Ellie: You see now that is just plain rude
    Lindsay: Who asked you smelly Ellie?
    Kacey: Smelly Ellie? Linz how old are you 14 or 4?

    the other girls laugh and Lindsay storms off the scene closes with the Candi Club and the Boffin club starring at eachother
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