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    Max and Stacey's affair is revealed!

    Part 1

    Max: So, you gonna say something?


    (Bradley in a daze after finding out about the affair)


    Bradley: How longs it been going on?! (angry)


    (Max looks at him)


    Bradley: With Stacey, how long's it been going on?! (angry shouting)


    Max: It's not going on (quick to jump in)


    (Bradley looks at him)


    Not anymore.


    Bradley: So what?! did you finish it?!


    Max: No.


    Bradley: Did she?!


    Max: (looks at him) Yeah.


    Bradley: When?! (sternly)


    Max: Before you got back together. It was a mistake!


    A stupid mistake! That got out of hand.


    Bradley: (annoyed) When did it start?!


    Max: Christmas.


    Bradley: When?! (Max looks at him) What day?!


    Max: Christmas Day.


    (Bradley looks at him, shocked)


    Bradley: I went to your house on Christmas Day, to apologise, for having a go at you.


    Max: I know (guiltily).


    Bradley: You spilled something on your shirt. You told me Stacey had done it!
    Was that when you slept with her?!


    Max: Bradley, it ain't...


    Bradley: I poured my heart out to you. I told you I loved her (upset).


    Max: Bradley.


    Bradley: Provide a laugh did it! An interval entertainment, while you two lay in bed together.


    Max: No! It wasn't.


    Bradley: I trusted you.


    Max: Look, it was Stacey that did all the running. She threw her self at me. Bradley, you know what she's like!


    (Bradley looking at him in disgust)


    Bradley: You know, I knew what you were like, but I didn't think you'd stoop this low. What you have done has destroyed our relationship forever. Do you realise that?!

    I hope she was worth it.
    Last edited by littlemo; 04-01-2007 at 01:23.

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    That's really good Little Mo!!
    You know how to write these characters Hope to see more of your work.. or more to this

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    Wow! That's fab Little Mo! Is there more to come?

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    i love it! you write so well and stay so true to the characters. are you going to continue this one?

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