Caught up with the wave's

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ext THE JACKSONS GARDEN
gavin walks up to Ant
gavin:hey
Ant:alright
gavin:nice to meet you
Ant:yeah
gavin:so you skateboard huh?
Ant:yeah loads of the boys in my year do it
Gavin:right...bet you hate school right I did
Ant:no I like school..shame about the people
gavin: people?
Ant:im not what you consider popular I get bullied alot
Gavin:have you told tony and steph im sure they will do something
Ant:as if...itll get worse if I get mum and dad involved
Gavin:if theres one thing I cant stand is a bully do you want me to help
Ant:you?why would you do that
Gavin:your my family..
Ant:I dont even know you
Gavin:maybe this is your chance....

INT:bennys flat
benny:you know what to say?
Joe:yeah
Benny:is that your final answer
Joe:shut up
doorbell goes
Joe:thats her
Benny:thats her
joe:this aint funny
Benny:I know thats why im hiding(camera zooms away and we see bennys head hanging out of a closet he hides it away when joe lets clarrisa in)
clarrisa:what is it?
Joe:I have a confession
clarrissa:what?
joe:it was me that puked on your car
clarrissa:what? why didnt you say sooner
Joe:I dont know..theres something else that £200 ound you left here for those shoes you wanted well I had this tip off from benny about a horse so I thought id treble your money sadly the horse lost
clarrissa:you took advice from that freak???
(a cough emerges from the closet)
clarrissa:well I want my money back
Joe:yeah I know
clarrissa;otherwise no more nurse naughty for an entire month
Joe:what you cant I was just getting the hang of being doctor kinky
clarrissa:well if you dont give me your money back you wont be getting your thermoscope back either (looks at closet)you can come out the closet now benny

benny climbs out looking sheepish(while clarrissa leaves)
benny (looks at joe):doctor kinky?

EXTlayground
Ant is standing in playground and see's his bullys coming towards him
bully leader: yo look at dis home boy ere you got my lunch money today (the other bullys laugh)
Ant:no I aint
Bully:im sorry are you getting cocky with me jackson?you better not be
Ant: why dont you get lost
Bully:I dont belive this this sucker is actually dissing me..get on your knees and kiss my feet otherwise ill kick your ass
Ant:try me
bully grabs ant by the collar
Gavin:id let him go if I where you
Bully:who are you
gavin:im the guy telling you to get your hands off him
bully lets go off ant
bully:i was only messing
gavin:well so am I(grabs bully by collar)whats your name?
bully:Sonny
gavin:well sonny go near my little brother again and ill beat 10 shades out of you...do you get me?
sonny:yeah man
gavin lets him go sonny runs off
sonny:this aint the end my brother will be after you now
(gavin smirks)

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EXT:walking along the prom
Ant:that was amazing
Gavin:I said I hated bullys didnt I?
Ant:did you ever get bullied?
Gavin:no my brother always had my back
Ant:I wish I had a brother to have my back
Gavin:well your gonna have to make do with me
(a suped up car pulls up)
Sonny:thats him bruv(Tariq gets out the car)
Tariq:what?you again I told you what would happen if you showed your face and now you messing with my family he's 15 blood whats your problem?
Gavin:he was bullying Ant here
Tariq:then ants gotta fight his own battles then he dont need some nobody to fight for him...your just a pussy!
Gavin: (laughs) oh that explains why your pleased to see me

(punches Tariq, Tariq returns the punch the two end up brawling on the floor Gavin gets the betetr of Tariq but Tariq hits him with a headbutt Gavin falls back and Tariq repeatidly punches him the face gavin gets up and lays Tariq out with a punch Tariq counters with a kick to gavins right knee both men fall down)

Tariq:this aint over...your dead you hear?....YOUR DEAD!!( tariq and sonny get in the car and drive off)

Ant:whoa where did you learn to fight like that?
Gavin:ant lets go
Ant:that was sooo cool
Gavin:yeah?
Ant:I wanna be like you
Gavin:no you dont trust me on that

INT:the jacksons
Steph:Tony...tony
tony:what?
steph: that was Ants school someone took him out early after a fight
Tony:a fight?
Steph:someone came in and threatened a pupil and took Ant out
tony:sounds like gavin
steph:what so hes fighting 15 year olds now
tony:ill get to the bottom of this (he rings ants mobile)Ant its me when you get this message call me (hangs up)
steph:what now
tony:we wait
(the door opens)
Ant:mum...dad you missed it
Steph:where have you been?(glares at gavin as he walks in)and you whats your game?
Gavin:my game?
Steph:yeah starting fights on children...look at your face again another fight? a 15 year old didnt do that what was it this time...
Gavin:dont wanna talk about it
Ant:gavin beat up Tariq nabil the hardest person in brighton
tony and steph look angered

[Pinkbanana]

I can see how this could become seriously quite addictive reading.

Loving how the characters/storylines are beginning to intertwine – the Sonny business bringing Gavin back in contact with that horrible bloke, Tariq (boo!).

Think its sweet how Gavin is keen to look out for Ant. Showing his caring side, and talking about his own brother, helps to flesh out his character.

I do find the scenes with Benny comical! Also Joe is growing on me, or should that be Doctor Kinky!!!

Cant wait to see what the consequences of Gavin upsetting Tariq will be!

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oh bless you....
I cannot tell you how much I love your comments (and anyone elses) I really hope I do not let you down with how it goes

[Pinkbanana]

You're doing a grand job, D1!

When can we expect to get the next instalment of 'Caught up with the Waves'?!

[DaVeyWaVey]

Just caught up on the latest installments, great stuff! Seems like Gavin will have to watch Tariq, he seems like a nasty piece of work.

I am loving the scenes with Benny.......such a funny character and the dr. kinky stuff! I am loving the humour you are using D1!

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INT:the rabbit
Benny:has she answered any of your calls yet?
Joe: no.....this is all your fault
benny:me how do you work that one out?
Joe:saying about that stupid horse was going to win
benny: oh come on
(clarrissa walks in)
Clarrissa:got my money Joe
Joe:babe I cant afford it you know what
Clarrissa:you spent it quick enough though
Joe: I was drunk
Benny: paraletic actually..remember what that girl said she never met anyone who drinks like you
Clarrissa:what girl
Joe:Errr I dunno what he is on about
Benny:yeah you do that stripper you danced with
Joe: benny(glares at him) sssh
Clarrissa:stripper?
joe:she had clothes on
Benny: (laughs)no she never
Joe:BENNY SHUT UP
clarrissa storms off
Joe: what did you do that for?
benny: what?

(joe runs out after her)
Joe:babe listen to me I would never hurt you meet me on the pier tonight and i'll have your money
clarrissa:well lets put it like this if you have my money Ill have something for you

joe and clarrissa smile

Ext: park
Gavin is jogging around and see's kelly sunbathing kelly notice's him
Kelly:gareth!!
gavin stops
gavin:gavin(correcting her)
kelly:yeah sorry...how are you im sorry about Tariq(looks at his face) have you been in another fight
gavin:yeah with Tariq
kelly:listen dont make an enemy of Tariq he's dangerous
gavin:why do you care?
Kelly:I dont but I dont want Tariq to go after you either
gavin:well I can look after myself
Kelly:listen gavin you dont know him like I do he will kill you if you try to feud with him
gavin:he's all mouth
Kelly:belive me he's not...look theres one way you might be able to build bridges
gavin:why would I want to
Kelly:because you dont need hm after you
gavin: ok what do I have to do
kelly writes down an address
Kelly:have you got a car?
gavin:no
Kelly:well im sure you can find one because tonight you will be racing Tariq

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official trailer for Late night special "fast and furious on the beach!!" coming soon
Part music/part film (music by N-trance set you free)
When I hold you baby,Feel your heartbeat close to me,Wanna stay in your arms forever,Only love can set you free
we see a Suburu imprezza pull up next to a jet black Golf GTI several other engines start reving in the back ground We see Gavin pull up in a feul injected Golf GTI
When we touch each other,In a state of ecstasy,,Want this night to last forever,Only love can set you free
the camera sets to Joe and Clarrissa ripping each others clothes off kissing passionalty under the pier


Music cuts and we set back to the racing we see several cars racing down the prom at high speeds we see kelly cheering on the side lines
we then see back and forth camera work between several scenes police cars giving chase,gavin punching Tariq,Joe and clarrissa running half naked through the lanes,and finally Tariq and gavin squaring up to each other followed by a voice over
what happens when deadly rivals meet

followed by a head on collision and a huge explosion(EDIT I have edited this episode heavily so its not that rude so now i can post it in my normal thread so everyone can read it...being posted later tonight being late night and all )

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Oh super……….cant wait…..

QUOTE FROM TRAILER: A car race, we see a Suburu imprezza pull up next to a jet black Golf GTI several other engines start revving in the back ground, we see Gavin pull up in a fuel injected Golf GTI…

The camera sets to Joe and Clarrissa ripping each others clothes off kissing passionately under the pier… followed by a head on collision and a huge explosion! The mind boogles... Can understand why its a late night special!

I'm really enjoying Caught up with the waves, D1!

EDIT: What time can we expect this instalment to be posted? Fear I shall miss it if later tonight as going out, but shall definitely catch it in the morning!

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Oh super……….cant wait…..

QUOTE FROM TRAILER:The camera sets to Joe and Clarrissa ripping each others clothes off kissing passionately under the pier… followed by a head on collision and a huge explosion! The mind boogles... Can understand why its a late night special!



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thats not quite what the trailer meant ha thats really funny mind....I was thinking of posting around 10 tonight you can always catch up tommrow if you miss it