episode 1
EP1:INT Essex police station
A boy walks in a room filled with convicts all talking to their relatives the boy sits down oposite a convict
convict:hello gavin
Gavin:hello Jamie
(the two lads hug)
gavin:how are you?(looks at bruising on jamies head)
jamie:fine...just a scrap
gavin:im..sorry I didnt mean for this to happen
Jamie:its ok
gavin:if it wasnt for me you wouldnt be here
jamie:ITS OK!!
(everyone looks over)
jamie:sorry im just a bit stressed you know (long pause)hows mum?
gavin:I dont know have'nt seen her in a week shes done another runner
Jamie:whats new
Gavin:J this is wrong its me that should be where you are I beat Tommy up Im the one who whacked him the tourque wrench
Jamie:I know
Gavin:its not to late to admit the truth
Jamie:and leave you here...listen gav you're the bright one you're the one who is going to get somewhere, im the waster im ok to stay here
gavin:but
jamie:but nothing..listen Im not stupid all tommys boys are still after you you wont get far if you stay here ...thats why ive arranged for you to live with uncle tony
gavin:what?
jamie:im hoping you can make something for yourself in brighton
gavin:brighton? but J
Jamie:take this...(passes him envelope)
gavin:what is it
jame:a grand...that should give you a head start now go get your stuff and go
gavin:I dont know what to say
jamie:dont say nothing to anyone thats what(gavin nods)now go ill see you in court
gavin:bye J (gets up to walk off but turns round) ill make you proud I promise
ext:brighton pier gavin is holding a peice of paper with his uncles address on(gavin sighs) he see's several suped up cars bomb past at a fast speed Gavin sneers at their attempt at racing and walks on the pier,he see's a girl standing there crying
gavin:you ok?
girlsobs)yeah
gavin:yeah looks like it
girl:whats it to you?
gavin:nothing but you look like you need someone to talk to
girl:well I dont
gavin:fair enough (leans on side of pier and stares out to sea)
INT
uncle tony opens kitchen door
tony:hows the dinner coming along?
Steph:its ok but burnt (holds a plate in front of tony)
Tony:looks great
steph:are you sure about this?
tony:what?
steph:well we have'nt seen him since he was 5 and if he is anything like his mum and jamie
tony:listen darling Jamie said he needed a chance to prove himself like I did once..remember?
steph looks at him
Steph:it was diffrent back then
Tony:honey like it or not...life's never gonna be the same
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Last edited by diamond1; 06-08-2006 at 20:02.
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