great! a jake and chrissie bit yay! hope theres more soon, cant wait
great! a jake and chrissie bit yay! hope theres more soon, cant wait
~x~Tizzy~x~
A fool and his money are a girl's best friend
thanks to vicky for making the banna!
Who cares why he was out late at night HE'S DEAD HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA this is brill I told you it was but please go with oyur other idea of killing the OTHER person off PLEASE
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Eventful beginnings
Part 4
Chrissie- here Mo did you wana take those flowers over to Jane?
Mo- do you think it’s too early?
Chrissie- she’d appreciate it, wouldn’t she?
Jake- I think you should
Chrissie- who asked you
Jake shrugged his shoulders, just another opinion
Mo- yeh, yeh I think I will
Chrissie- thanks Mo
Jake- why didn’t you take them
Chrissie smiled, why didn’t you offer?
Jake- because
Chrissie- come to think about it, you’ve been funny today
Jake- watching a guy die kinda takes it outta ya
Chrissie lent forward, you saw it? The accident?
Jake- Yeh the girl was really shook up
Chrissie closed her hand over his, I’m really sorry
Jake- yeh, me too
Chrissie- do you wana talk about it?
Jake- nah I’m ok
Chrissie kissed his cheek if your sure
Jake held her hand and lent closer as she drew back, now that you mention it
Chrissie laughed, I know your game Mr Moon
Jake sighed as she slipped away, it was worth a shot
DC Dallas- did you get anything?
DC Malloy- absolutely zilch, he was a good guy, family man. It doesn’t make sense to them
DS Dallas-tell me about it
DC Malloy- back to the scene of the crime
DS Dallas smiled, yes boss
Freya sat lying back on the hospital bed in a nightgown. Her hair was a pale blonde that fell to her shoulders, her eyes were as green as summer grass and her chin had a small dent where a man could brush his finger. Her neck was in a collar and her arm in plaster but she was alive. Her slim build and thin skin would carry bruises reminding her day after day of the horror she had caused. She’d remembered the loud thud and the sight of a man being shocked to life in the back of an ambulance, she couldn’t get them out of her head.
Nurse- how are you feeling?
Freya- I don’t know
Nurse- you’ll be feeling better soon
Freya- I killed him didn’t I?
Nurse from what the police have said it was an accident
Freya began to cry, tears falling silently down her bruised cheeks
Nurse- it was an accident, she passed Freya a tissue, you can’t blame yourself
Freya- but I’m alive and he’s-
The nurse took her hand, it was an accidents they happen all the time and there never anyone’s fault.
Danny- I know I couldn’t believe it, it was like slow motion
Minty- what did the police say?
Danny took a swallow of his beer and looked across at the faces sat around him. It was an accident, he walked out, she swerved too late
Minty- not a nice way to go
Danny- your own blood on the pavement
Garry- yeh well, he was a good guy
Minty- yeh I suppose he was
Danny- yeh well even the good un’s gotta leave this life
Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005
Thnak you for more Chrissie and Jake. Forget about Ian, who cares he's dead. More more more
xxx
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Nathan: Would you keep it down?
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Just read all of it!! Great Stuff, post more soon
Ian is dead haha!!
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
I'm loving it babes but you already know that post more soon
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great! liked the jake and chrissie part! post more soon, cant wait
~x~Tizzy~x~
A fool and his money are a girl's best friend
thanks to vicky for making the banna!
here you guys, glad you like the Jake and Chrissie i had to cheer myself up some way!! hehe
Eventful beginnings
Part 5
Freya sat flicking through a magazine, she was restless, she’d always hated hospitals, the creepy sounds and smells. They brought back bad memories, but when faced with those memories she’d rather face the fact that she’d killed a man.
DC Malloy and DS Dallas walked over to Freya’s bed, I’m sorry to comeback but we’d thought you’d like to know
Freya- what is it?
DC Malloy- it appears that Mr Beale had been driving and CCTV footage shows that he walked out into the road, it isn’t your fault
Freya- really? The hope in her voice showed on her face
DS Dallas- yes, there was nothing you could have done
Freya- what about his family?
DC Malloy- they’ve been informed
Freya- I’d like to send a card, I am sorry
DC Malloy- maybe you should wait a while, why don’t I have a counsellor come here to see you? It might help, to talk things through
Freya- erm… ok
DS Dallas- you’ll be able to go home soon
Freya smiled at them, thank you
DC Malloy- we’re just doing our job
Freya- thank you anyway
They nodded and walked away from her bed and out of the ward
Nurse- here you need to take these
Freya- ok, she took the pills and swallowed them with the water provided
Nurse- you’ll need to rest
Freya- I’ve been resting for 3 days in here, I think I’ll go for a walk
Nurse- ok but be back in 10 minutes
Freya smiled for the first time in days, thank you
Nurse- 10 minutes
Jane sat in the living room of her home with out Ian, staring at the walls around her
Lucy- Jane
Jane wiped her eyes, what is it Luce?
Lucy- are you ok?
Jane- yeh I’m ok
Lucy- I miss him you know
Jane- yeh me too, listen can you go and get Peter, I need to talk to you both about something
Lucy- what is it?
Jane- why don’t you go and get peter and I’ll get us some drinks
Dot- oh Pauline how you feeling?
Pauline- oh I don’t know |Dot, I just can believe it
Dot- it’s such a terrible thing, how are you coping?
Pauline- I’m ok I think, but poor Jane she doesn’t know what she’s doing
Dot- and those poor children
Pauline- yeh I’m going round to see them later
Dot- they’ll be grateful, would you like a cup of tea?
Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005
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