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    great! a jake and chrissie bit yay! hope theres more soon, cant wait
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    This is cool!

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    Who cares why he was out late at night HE'S DEAD HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA this is brill I told you it was but please go with oyur other idea of killing the OTHER person off PLEASE
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    Talking Eventful beginnings, pt4

    Eventful beginnings

    Part 4

    Chrissie- here Mo did you wana take those flowers over to Jane?
    Mo- do you think it’s too early?
    Chrissie- she’d appreciate it, wouldn’t she?
    Jake- I think you should
    Chrissie- who asked you
    Jake shrugged his shoulders, just another opinion
    Mo- yeh, yeh I think I will
    Chrissie- thanks Mo
    Jake- why didn’t you take them
    Chrissie smiled, why didn’t you offer?
    Jake- because
    Chrissie- come to think about it, you’ve been funny today
    Jake- watching a guy die kinda takes it outta ya
    Chrissie lent forward, you saw it? The accident?
    Jake- Yeh the girl was really shook up
    Chrissie closed her hand over his, I’m really sorry
    Jake- yeh, me too
    Chrissie- do you wana talk about it?
    Jake- nah I’m ok
    Chrissie kissed his cheek if your sure
    Jake held her hand and lent closer as she drew back, now that you mention it
    Chrissie laughed, I know your game Mr Moon
    Jake sighed as she slipped away, it was worth a shot

    DC Dallas- did you get anything?
    DC Malloy- absolutely zilch, he was a good guy, family man. It doesn’t make sense to them
    DS Dallas-tell me about it
    DC Malloy- back to the scene of the crime
    DS Dallas smiled, yes boss

    Freya sat lying back on the hospital bed in a nightgown. Her hair was a pale blonde that fell to her shoulders, her eyes were as green as summer grass and her chin had a small dent where a man could brush his finger. Her neck was in a collar and her arm in plaster but she was alive. Her slim build and thin skin would carry bruises reminding her day after day of the horror she had caused. She’d remembered the loud thud and the sight of a man being shocked to life in the back of an ambulance, she couldn’t get them out of her head.
    Nurse- how are you feeling?
    Freya- I don’t know
    Nurse- you’ll be feeling better soon
    Freya- I killed him didn’t I?
    Nurse from what the police have said it was an accident
    Freya began to cry, tears falling silently down her bruised cheeks
    Nurse- it was an accident, she passed Freya a tissue, you can’t blame yourself
    Freya- but I’m alive and he’s-
    The nurse took her hand, it was an accidents they happen all the time and there never anyone’s fault.

    Danny- I know I couldn’t believe it, it was like slow motion
    Minty- what did the police say?
    Danny took a swallow of his beer and looked across at the faces sat around him. It was an accident, he walked out, she swerved too late
    Minty- not a nice way to go
    Danny- your own blood on the pavement
    Garry- yeh well, he was a good guy
    Minty- yeh I suppose he was
    Danny- yeh well even the good un’s gotta leave this life
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    Cool and brill!

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    Thnak you for more Chrissie and Jake. Forget about Ian, who cares he's dead. More more more
    xxx
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    Just read all of it!! Great Stuff, post more soon
    Ian is dead haha!!
    Luv ya
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    I'm loving it babes but you already know that post more soon
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    great! liked the jake and chrissie part! post more soon, cant wait
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    Talking Eventful Beginnings

    here you guys, glad you like the Jake and Chrissie i had to cheer myself up some way!! hehe

    Eventful beginnings

    Part 5
    Freya sat flicking through a magazine, she was restless, she’d always hated hospitals, the creepy sounds and smells. They brought back bad memories, but when faced with those memories she’d rather face the fact that she’d killed a man.
    DC Malloy and DS Dallas walked over to Freya’s bed, I’m sorry to comeback but we’d thought you’d like to know
    Freya- what is it?
    DC Malloy- it appears that Mr Beale had been driving and CCTV footage shows that he walked out into the road, it isn’t your fault
    Freya- really? The hope in her voice showed on her face
    DS Dallas- yes, there was nothing you could have done
    Freya- what about his family?
    DC Malloy- they’ve been informed
    Freya- I’d like to send a card, I am sorry
    DC Malloy- maybe you should wait a while, why don’t I have a counsellor come here to see you? It might help, to talk things through
    Freya- erm… ok
    DS Dallas- you’ll be able to go home soon
    Freya smiled at them, thank you
    DC Malloy- we’re just doing our job
    Freya- thank you anyway
    They nodded and walked away from her bed and out of the ward
    Nurse- here you need to take these
    Freya- ok, she took the pills and swallowed them with the water provided
    Nurse- you’ll need to rest
    Freya- I’ve been resting for 3 days in here, I think I’ll go for a walk
    Nurse- ok but be back in 10 minutes
    Freya smiled for the first time in days, thank you
    Nurse- 10 minutes

    Jane sat in the living room of her home with out Ian, staring at the walls around her
    Lucy- Jane
    Jane wiped her eyes, what is it Luce?
    Lucy- are you ok?
    Jane- yeh I’m ok
    Lucy- I miss him you know
    Jane- yeh me too, listen can you go and get Peter, I need to talk to you both about something
    Lucy- what is it?
    Jane- why don’t you go and get peter and I’ll get us some drinks

    Dot- oh Pauline how you feeling?
    Pauline- oh I don’t know |Dot, I just can believe it
    Dot- it’s such a terrible thing, how are you coping?
    Pauline- I’m ok I think, but poor Jane she doesn’t know what she’s doing
    Dot- and those poor children
    Pauline- yeh I’m going round to see them later
    Dot- they’ll be grateful, would you like a cup of tea?
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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