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    Lightbulb Eventful beginnings

    I began writing this the night Phil came back and was arrested, as i HATED ian for telling the police where Phil was, That was a really EVIL thing to do.
    so here we go, tell me what you think...........

    Eventful beginnings

    Part 1
    The rain began to fall, the raindrops hit the windscreen and the wipers swished musically.

    She looked up and in the mirror, the lights blinding her eyes, she blinked but it was too late. The car swerved and shuddered as a body rolled over the hood and hit the wet windscreen smearing it with blood.
    She screamed the only sound to be heard but for the screeching of brakes on the wet road. Her heart bounded in the chest, blood ringing in her ears.

    Ian lay in the wet cement, blood seeping out of his head and running away with the rain.

    Freya sat back against the seat as the car swung to a holt, her breathing was fast and audible. She closed her eyes and swallowed back the panic she felt rising in her throat.

    It was silent, eerie and cold. The loud knock on the window rang in her head and had her jumping in her seat, she looked into the brilliantly clear, icy blue eyes. She tore her gaze from his eyes to his mouth watching his lips move.
    She rolled down the window, taking a deep breath of the cold night air.
    Jake- are you all right?
    Freya- I... I... I...
    Jake- are you hurt? are you in shock?
    Freya- no I’m... I’m fine
    Danny- Jake it's Ian Beale
    Jake- ave you called an ambulance?
    Danny- All ready done
    Last edited by Angeldelight; 08-05-2005 at 14:51.
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    good, thought that was well evil what Ian did. Hope ian dies or is paralysed.
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    great! wanna know what happens to ian! cant wait for the next part, hope its soon
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    You posted it wow I told it was good DIE IAN DIE he he
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    Talking Eventful beginnings pt2

    Eventful beginnings, pt 2...

    The blue, red and white lights flashed around her, what had she done? She’d killed a man.
    DC Malloy- Miss Galloway, can you tell me what happened?
    Freya shook her head, I don’t know
    DC Malloy- You need to think, why did you swerve?
    Freya- the lights
    DC Malloy- lights, where?
    Freya- the lights were bright, then a bang, tears rolled down her face, I hit him
    DC Malloy- so you looked behind you and were blinded by the lights?
    Freya- yeh
    DC Malloy- Did you swerve?
    Freya- I hit him, the shudder and loud thud would echo in her mind, in her dreams for years to come
    DC Malloy- The paramedics are going to take you to the hospital now
    Freya lay back on the bed, her neck in a collar, hospital?
    DC Malloy- Just to make sure you’re ok, do you want me to contact anyone?
    Freya sighed as she felt the pain relief swim through her blood stream, there is no one

    Freya opened her eyes to see a white light rushing passed her, what?
    Doctor- you’re ok Miss Galloway
    Freya- where am I?
    Doctor- your in hospital, your heart just stopped and we brought you back
    Freya- back?
    Doctor- we’re going to make sure your ok, check you over now

    DC Dallas walked up to the Beale house, it was cloaked in darkness and unsuspecting of the words she was about to speak, those alone would change lives, children's lives forever.

    Freya sat in the hospital bed, looking around her at the doctors rushing around saving lives. She’d destroyed one tonight, she’d killed a man and shattered a family.
    DC Malloy- Miss Galloway, can I talk to you?
    Freya- Yes, what’s going to happen?
    DC Malloy- we need to talk to you about what happened
    Freya- I didn’t mean it, a single tear rolled down her cheek, I’m sorry
    Last edited by Angeldelight; 08-05-2005 at 14:51.
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA he's dead he's dead haaaaaaaaa

    This is brill
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    i take it you like this one then!!!! lol lol
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    great! glad ians dead, he was soooooo annoying! hope theres more soon, cant what to find out what happens
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    he's dead oh yeah! more
    xxx
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    Nathan: Would you keep it down?
    Hiro: ...whooooosh.

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    Talking Eventful beginnings, Pt 3.....

    Eventful beginnings pt 3

    Jane sat in the Kitchen, the sun shining through the window, with DC Malloy.
    DC Malloy-I’m sorry Mrs Collins
    Jane- but how?
    DC Malloy- there was an accident, and he died on the way to hospital
    Jane- he’s dead?
    DC Malloy- I’m afraid so, I know this is a big shock but could you tell me what Mr Beale was doing walking around the streets at 12o’clock in the morning?
    Jane- We had a row, shouting
    DC Malloy- About?
    Jane- the kids, working late, I told him to work out his priorities and went to bed.
    DC Malloy- did he come to bed?
    Jane- I don’t know, I was angry at him and fell straight to sleep
    DC Malloy- thank you for your time Mrs Collins, I know it’s a difficult time for you
    Jane stood up looking around lost, ok thanks
    DC Malloy- I’ll see myself out

    That morning the square was bussing with news and rumours about the accident.
    Chrissie- you’ve heard about it
    Little Mo- I know what a terrible thing
    Chrissie- do you think we should send flowers or a card or something?
    Little Mo- that would be nice, yeh I think we should
    Jake walked through the doors of the Vic and smiled when he spotted Chrissie at the bar. He carried on smiling a when he got to the bar.
    Chrissie- what are you smiling at?
    Jake- your sunny cheer
    Chrissie- really, what do you want?
    Jake’s eyes glittered, what I really want
    Chrissie laughed, down boy this is a family pub
    Jake laughed, in that case I’ll have a pint
    Chrissie lent forward on the bar, please
    Jake leaned closer, please
    Chrissie smiled, sure and she moved away.

    DC Malloy knocked on Pauline’s front door and waited for her to answer, she turned to her partner, take the next one
    DC Dallas- will do
    Pauline opened the door, hello
    DC Malloy pulled out her badge, Hello Mrs Fowler I’m DC Malloy, I’m investigating the incident last night, could I come in
    Pauline’s gaze had already swept over the badge she held out, of course

    DC Dallas buzzed both flats in the building hoping to find some one home.
    Gus- yes
    DC Dallas- I’m DC Dallas, I’d like to speak to you about the incident earlier this morning
    Gus- sure, I’m buzzing you in

    Pauline- I just can’t believe it
    DC Malloy- I’m sorry for your lose Mrs Fowler, his next of kin ahs been informed
    Pauline- But I’m his aunty
    DC Malloy- His partner was his registered next of kin, we’ve informed her, I’m sure she’s need a lot of support
    Pauline- yes of course and the children
    DC Malloy- can you tell me of any reason why Mr Beale would be out at that time?
    Pauline- I don’t know, I just don’t know

    Gus- I mean I knew him but not that well
    DC Dallas sat in the living room of Gus’s small apartment; you wouldn’t know what he was doing last night? At that time of night?
    Gus- I’m sorry man, I just don’t know him that well
    DC Dallas- Thank you for your time, if you think of anything, he pulled his card out of his pocket, please contact me
    Gus- sure man straight away
    Last edited by Angeldelight; 11-05-2005 at 17:57.
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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