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is there any part of the country its set in?Originally Posted by daveywavey
Ok thanks i will tell as many people as i can about it and is it ok if you do make my banner for me?? because i don't know how to make one. If you can, thanksThe only problem is i don't know what pictures/images to put on it.
any ideas of actors/actrress youd like to see star in it?
any tag lines or phrases?
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I thought of a tag line- Hinston High- The homes of secrets and lies!
It's set in a busy part of the country- london.
and if i get pictures of actors and actresses then can you make a banner for me please!
smile && be happy!
i've read it like you asked and i like it. a lot! so keep it up
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My next script will be up tomorrow!
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heres a banner that i made for DaveyWavey:
Tannie...<3
Wow i love the Banner and the script is really good More soon please
Thank you for the amazing banner Lea
Joe Mcelderry is gorgeous and amazing
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Yep don't worry there will be more soon. The next script will be up a bit later on and thank you BB for my banner
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This is really good well done can't wait to read more and the banner is fab
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(It’s early morning in Hinston High)
Scene 1- The Café
(Felicity has just woken up and walks into the café where Pat is turning the café sign to open)
Felicity: You still haven’t told me who was at the end of the telephone line last night?
Pat: Oh Felicity please! Can you just give me a break love?
Felicity: You have got bags under your eyes, you didn’t sleep well did you?
Pat: No I couldn’t but we all have one of those nights where we can’t switch off.
Felicity: Don’t give me that mum, I seen you on the phone last night. You said something and you just slammed the phone down.
Pat: Look someone got the wrong phone number ok and I was just angry because it was getting late and I was about to go to bed so that’s why I slammed the phone down.
(Dave suddenly appears and interrupts)
Dave: Are you sure it wasn’t those prank callers again?
Pat: I am pretty sure, so can you stop giving me the third degree?!
Dave: Whatever.
(Dave is about to leave)
Pat: Oh Dave wait! I will need your help at the café so don’t you think of doing anything else.
Dave: Oh mum, I do need a social life!
Pat: And you can have one, after you helped me out today! You must help me, you can’t say no.
Dave: Ok mum.
Scene 2- The Pub
(Greg is banging on the pub door where Mike rushes to open it)
Mike: Greg, we are not open yet.
Greg: Look I need to speak to Chloe urgently!
Mike: I am sure it can wait, stop exaggerating.
Greg: Is she there though?
Mike: If you must know she is, she is cleaning as we speak.
Greg: Can she have say 3 hours off work?
Mike: Are you joking?!?! No of course she can’t.
Greg: Please, we were meant to go on a date but Nina wouldn’t let her leave work.
(There is a pause for a few seconds)
Mike: What’s in it for me?
Greg: Umm.,. Chloe doing overtime, a few drinks on me.
Mike: Nina’s gona kill me for this but Kat will be here in a few hours and the pub doesn’t open til 12, so yes I suppose you can take her off on a date. Anyway I hope this date is worth it.
Greg: It is. Look let’s just say, me and Chloe will be overlooking Hinston river in a few hours.
Mike: Oooh sounds good, I will get Chloe now.
(Mike shouts to Chloe who is cleaning some pub tables)
Mike: Chloe! Loverboy’s here!!
Chloe: Lover boy?
Mike: Greg.
Chloe: Oh Greg, tell him I am busy.
(Greg bursts in)
Greg: I am sure you can miss a few hours of work, I got your message.
Chloe: Oh I am sorry Greg, I thought I let you down and you would never want to speak to me again.
Greg: Look come on get your coat Chloe, I got a big surprise for you.
Scene 3- The Butleys House
Danny: Oh for goodness sake mum, how many more bloody times! I don’t want to go to school.
Julia: Your education is important, you must attend school. Sally and Marianne do, so why can’t you?
Danny: Well there’s a difference between me and Sally and Marianne. Sally and Marianne are swots, I am not.
Julia: Your dad will tell you, you must go to school!
Danny: Of course he would, he is a teacher for Christ sake! Why dad wanted to be a teacher is beyond me?!?!
Sally: Danny, are you coming?
Danny: Why would I wanna walk with you?
Sally: Well you’ve got no one else to walk with.
Danny: So I must sink so low and resort to walking with my own sister. No thank you!!
Sally: Well I am off, see you later mum.
Julia: See you darling.
(Sally leaves shutting the front door behind her)
Danny: I actually feel quite ill.
Julia: No excuses.
Danny: I suppose I could go to school for the fags.
Julia: You will not, you will go to school for the learning.
Danny: Oh please mum! Don’t patronise me, I am not a little mummy’s boys anymore.
Julia: I am not listening to you for any longer.
(Julia exits)
Scene 4- The Weatherbys House
(Sean appears from Christina’s bedroom where Jack comes out of the bathroom and bumps into him)
Jack: Umm…excuse me?
Sean: Oh you must be Christina’s dad, Jack?
Jack: Yes I am, who are you?
Sean: Christina’s new boyfriend, I have already introduced myself to Alicia and Sam.
Jack: You have stopped here for the night?
Sean: Umm yes… why is that a problem?
Jack: Well I didn’t see you here when I got home.
Sean: Well me and Christina were in bed by the time you arrived back.
Jack: I beg your pardon?
Sean: Umm we were in bed together, me and your daughter?!
Jack: You have made yourself very cosy haven’t you in my household! How long have you and Christina been dating?
Sean: Just under a month.
Jack: Your taking things very fast aren’t you??
Sean: What’s with all these questions?
Jack: I am just curious.
Sean: I have a feeling you don’t like me.
(Jack draws closer on Sean so he is breathing deeply against him)
Jack: I don’t.
Sean: I won’t mess Christina round you know?!
Jack: Good. You better not or there will be trouble.
Scene 5- Greg and Chloe
Greg: Here we are!
Chloe: We are by Hinston river.
Greg: Look to your left.
(Chloe turns to her left)
Chloe: Oh my god! It’s a hot air balloon!
Greg: I told you our date would be very special.
Exeter the street of lies
Wow i am really loving hinston high it has some great potential
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