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    Shoe Cupboard (One-Parter and Demonstration)

    Just another of my absurd ideas. At drama we had to make up sketches where we were shoes, and it's actually a really good way of making up characters. Just match a personality to the style of your shoe! So I thought I'd put it literally, so you know what I'm talking about
    This is just a one-parter, by the way

    The sound of the front door being closed rings out through the house. There is a moment of silence, then from the cupboard next to he front door there comes a voice.

    Voice: Are they gone?

    Another voice: Pinky! Sshhhh!

    Pause

    Voice: Yeah, I think they're definately gone. Turn on the lights Manny.

    There is a shuffling sound, something climbs onto a box and leans against a switch. A dull light fills the cupboard, coming from a bulb hanging from the ceiling.
    Inside the cupboard there are only shoes.

    But the shoes are talking.

    Pinky: (A fluffy boot) I knew they were gone

    Jock: (A battered trainer) Oh shut up! We can never be too careful! I've been here long enough to know. We've had some close shaves before.

    A group of flat girly shoes with different assortments of sequin patterns are huddled in the corner.

    Blaze: (A pink sparkly flat girly shoe) I'm boiling. We never get out of here.

    Lila: (Another flat girly shoe - multicoloured) Yeah. Naomi only wears Stardust now.

    Stardust: (A black and silver kitten heel, huffing in the corner) Well, she's not wearing me now.

    Pierce: (A shiny black shoe) Please, girls, I can barely hear myself think.

    Jock: I'm sure there are more important things in the world than Naomi and Stardust or whatever.

    Stardust: Yeah Lila, you fat cow

    Moira: (A red welly) Girls! I'm sure Naomi likes all of you. It's me that's had my time. No one wears me any more.

    Joss: (A strikingly clean white sneaker) Well, can you blame them? (He drawls smugly)

    Moira: And that's enough from you too.

    Pierce: Kids, please, can you just keep it down? some of us are trying to meditate.

    Pinky: Huh?

    Frosty: (A white flat girly shoe) He's trying to attain a "pure state of mind"

    Blaze: Pure my ass

    Stardust: You don't even have one of those honey

    Moira: Language girls!

    Jock: You tell them. If Greg was still around...

    Joss: Yeah, we know, he would give us a good kick under the heel. But he isn't here, is he?

    Pinky: Nope. There you go Jockyboy. Going to give us a kick yourself then?

    Jock advances on Pinky, she cowers back into Frosty, Blaze and Lila. they push her back.

    Stardust: Ooh, scared?

    Pinky: (Mumbled) He said he'd kick me

    The sound of keys in the door

    Moira: Uhoh, sounds like they've forgotten something.

    Pierce: It shouldn't sound like anything. SILENCE!

    Moira twitches the light switch. the lights go out, just in time for the door to open and someone to enter the house.

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    random i know. what you think?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jada-GDR
    random i know. what you think?
    very random and strange indeed... interesting Jada
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    very random and very strange but brillaint
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    wow i like it!!!! I must thank you, now i have a new creative writing exercise lol
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