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    Part 26

    “ Sharon, what did you say ?!? “ says Phil.
    “ I said I’m coming back to Walford. America can get stuffed.” I say.
    “ I’m more than happy to see you back, Sharon” says Phil.
    “ That’s good then, I want to come home” I reply
    “ Sharon, are you sure about this ?” says Phil.
    I wipe my tears.
    “ Certain , absolutely positive” I reply.
    “ Thinking of Walford makes me think of people I love. There’s Mum, Dad and there… there..there is Dennis” I stutter. I burst into tears.
    “ Sharon please don’t cry” says Phil.
    “Phil are you crying ?!? “ I exclaim.
    “ Um, yeah. You have made me cry Sharon, I don’t like seeing you upset “ cries Phil.
    “ I will see you soon then” I say
    “ Take care Sharon “ says Phil
    “ I will” I reply
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    great! more very soon please
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    Sorry I haven't posted any of this a a while.


    Part 27

    I look back on my empty flat. This place has caused me nothing but trouble. I came to start a new life here. How could I have been happy without the one thing that I love. Dennis, I will never stop loving you, you will always be in my heart..
    “ Come on Mia, let’s go” I say.
    I pick up Mia’s changing bag. Hanging out of it is the teddy bear that Dennis bought for our baby. Sharon, don’t cry. I carefully put the teddy bear safely into my hand luggage.
    “ Mummy” says Mia.
    “ Mia and Mummy are going on an adventure. Won’t it be fun? “ I say holding back my tears.
    I walk through the hall and close the door behind. Goodbye America, Hello Walford.
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    great! wonder what its going to be like back in walford. more very soon please
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    Here is the last part

    Just a little speech. I would like to say thank you to all the people that have commented on this fiction and I hope you have all enjoyed reading it. Don't forget, Sequel to Mia is my future, Comming soon....

    Dedicated to everyone who is commented, Thanks

    Part 28

    I step out of the black cab, Walford doesn’t look any different. Same smell, same houses, same atmosphere you get the drift. There is new people, I don’t recognise them. Where has the community gone. There is some place, I would like to go before I show my face.
    I walk into Walford Cemetery. I sure this place has got fuller. People are always dying these days. I walk over to Dennis grave. Looks just like it did a year ago.
    “ Baby, it’s Sharon.” I say.
    “ I brought Mia with me, just to say hello”
    ” She doesn’t understand any of this Dennis. Dennis, I really miss you, I need you here” I say.
    I feel the tears trickling down my face.
    “ I need you here to keep me warm at night, I want us to snuggle up in front of the TV again. Dennis, I miss these days *sigh* I wish you would come back to me. “ I cry.
    “ I promise you I will make you proud. Raise your little girl to the best she can be. Dennis, you will always be in my heart. I love you for forever, I mean it!”
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    fab! awwwww how sweet! cant wait til the sequel
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    That was a fab last part it has been great all the way through i really like it well done.Can't wait for the sequel

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    more more more more more more pretty pwease
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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