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    MOTORWAY JUST OUTSIDE BRIGHTON INT MORNING.

    ROBERTS CAR GOES SPEEDING DOWN THE MOTORWAY HEADING INTO BRIGHTON.

    SOMEWHERE IN BRIGHTON/ROSIES FLAT INT MORNING.

    ROSIE (CHRISSIES MUM) WALKS INTO THE FLAT JUST COMING OFF HER NIGHT SHIFT AT THE CLUB, SHE PICKS UP THE POST AND WALKS INTO THE KITCHEN AND TURNS THE KETTEL ON. ROSIE GOES THROUGH THE LETTERS AS SHE COMES TO THE FINAL ONE SHE SEES ON THE ENVELOPE THE COUNCILS LOGO, ROSIE LOOKS WORRIED AND THROWS IT IN THE BIN. THERE IS A KNOCK AT THE DOOR AND ROSIE JUMPS, SHE LOOKS THROUGH THE WINDOW AND SEES ROBERT, NOT KNOWING WHO HE IS SHE LOOKS WORRIED. ROSIE WALKS TO THE DOOR AND PUTS THE CHAIN ON AND OPENS IT.

    ROSIE: Can i help you
    ROBERT: Im looking for Chrissie im Robert her husband
    ROSIE: Oh why didnt you say

    ROSIE TAKES THE CHAIN OFF AND OPENS THE DOOR, SHE SLAPS ROBERT HARD ACROSS THE FACE.

    ROSIE: Now get lost
    ROBERT: No please Rosie is she here
    ROSIE: No she aint here
    ROBERT: Well where is she
    ROSIE: At work i suppose
    ROBERT: Well when will she be back
    ROSIE: Sunday for her lunch as always
    ROBERT: She dont live with you anymore
    ROSIE: No she lives with Mark
    ROBERT: Whos Mark
    ROSIE: Her boyfreind.

    ROBERT LOOKS STUNNED AT WHAT ROSIE HAS JUST REVEALED.

    ROSIES LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

    ROBERT IS SAT ON ROSIES SEATEE, ROSIE WALKS IN CARRYING TWO CUPS OF TEA.

    ROBERT: How long has she been with this Mark
    ROSIE: She was with him before you came along
    ROBERT: I dont remeber her ever talking about him to me
    ROSIE: Well i dont suppose she did, she really did love him until they broke up
    ROBERT: What changed
    ROSIE: Marks mum died and he isolated Chrissie they split up and the wedding was off
    ROBERT: The wedding
    ROSIE: Yes the wedding and then she met you and you made her life hell.

    THE LION/RICS BEDROOM INT MORNING.

    RIC AND COURTNEY ARE LYING IN EACH OTHERS ARMS.

    RIC: You know Courtney i have not been this happy for a very long time
    COURTNEY: The same here Ric
    RIC: I think...i think i might love you

    ROSIES LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

    ROBERT AND ROSIE ARE STILL TALKING.

    ROBERT: I need to see her Rosie please
    ROSIE: Oh no Robert you made her life hell
    ROBERT: Please shes all i have got Rosie i love her with all my heart please
    ROSIE: Oh yeah and what are you going to tell her aye how sorry you are and it will never happen again
    ROBERT: Please just give me the adress
    ROSIE: Alright fine but she wont take you back Robert she is with Marc now
    ROBERT: Ok if she says no i wont bother her ever again.

    THE LION/RICS BEDROOM INT MORNING.

    RIC AND COURTNEY ARE STILL LYING IN BED TALKING.

    COURTNEY: Do you think Sharon will be ok when she comes back
    RIC: I hope so Courtney i really do, now lets talk about something else
    COURTNEY: Like what
    RIC: Me and you
    COURTNEY: Whats there to talk about
    RIC: Marry me Courtney

    CHRISSIE AND MARCS HOUSE/KITCHEN INT AFTERNOON.

    CHRISSIE IS SAT AT THE TABLE EATING A SANDWICH, THE DOORBELL RINGS AND CHRISSIE ANSWERS THE DOOR SHE LOOKS SHOCKED TO SEE ROBERT.

    CHRISSIE: Robert what are you doing here
    ROBERT: Hello Chrissie

    TIME HAS PASSED AND BOTH CHRISSIE AND ROBERT ARE SAT IN THE KITCHEN.

    ROBERT: So what about you and this Marc
    CHRISSIE: We have been finished for a while now
    ROBERT: But your mum
    CHRISSIE: She does not know she has enough to deal with at the moment.
    ROBERT: Why did you break up
    CHRISSIE: Becuse i realised something
    ROBERT: Whats that then
    CHRISSIE: I still love you thats what

    CHRISSIE AND ROBERT KISS.

    THE LION INT/RICS BEDROOM AFTERNOON.

    COURTNEY AND RIC ARE NOW BOTH SAT UP TALKING.


    COURTNEY: Are you serious Ric i mean really
    RIC: Yeah i am
    COURTNEY: Then yes

    CHARNLEY POLICE STATION INT AFTERNOON

    VIC IS BUSY IN HIS OFFICE WHEN A POLICE OFFICER WALKS IN.

    PO: Sarge
    VIC: What is it
    PO: We have found evidence
    VIC: What sort of evidence
    PO: Its evidence to prove that Alex Macklin is still alive hes been sighted around Birmingham
    VIC: What

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    THE MACKLINS/BATHROOM INT MORNING.
    JENNY IS SAT ON THE BATH SHE IS LOOKING AT A PREGNANCY TEST IT READS POSITIVE.

    THE BOOKIES/NICKS OFFICE MORNING.

    NICK IS SAT BEHIND HIS DESK WHEN COURTNEY WALKS IN.


    NICK: Courtney what a pleasent suprise
    COURTNEY: Aint it just i have an update
    NICK: An update
    COURTNEY: Rics asked me to marry him
    NICK: Your kidding your actually telling me that the old coot has fallen for you
    COURTNEY: I think he has you know he told me that he loved me
    NICK: Well now we need to make a descision
    COURTNEY: Oh yeah
    NICK: Do you go with it or run with his money now

    VIVS HOUSE/KITCHEN INT MORNING.

    TRUDY IS IN THE KITCHEN LOOKING IN THE PAPER, VIV WALKS IN.

    VIV: What you looking at
    TRUDY: What oh just the Cafe is finally up for sale
    VIV: You still dont have that dream of buying the place do you
    TRUDY: It would be great behined that counter serving all those people
    VIV: Im sure Jill thought that and look what happened to her
    TRUDY: Yeah but my cafe would be different
    VIV: And anyway Trudy you dont have enough money
    TRUDY: Maybe Nick could help me
    VIV: I doubt it Trudy
    TRUDY: Anyway enough of me how are you
    VIV: Well you know this and that
    TRUDY: No really Viv come on
    VIV: Im fine im just so angry that bitch Phillipa has come back
    TRUDY: We all know why though dont we
    VIV: She wont get a single penny im going to make sure of that

    THE GARAGE/ANDYS OFFICE AFTERNOON.

    JENNY AND ANDY ARE TALKING IN THE OFFICE.

    JENNY: We are alright aint we Andy
    ANDY: Yeah we are good
    JENNY: Do you think another baby in the family would destroy it all
    ANDY: Steady on Jenny Brooke has not even got a boyfriend let alone a child
    JENNY: Yeah well...

    THERE IS A KNOCK AT THE DOOR.

    ANDY: Can we finish this later darlin

    VIC WALKS IN.

    ANDY: So i take it you have come to tell me that you have found Alex
    VIC: No but it is news on Alex
    ANDY: Well come on then spit it out
    VIC: Alexs has been sighted around the Birmingham area
    ANDY: What well get some bloody police down there and get him
    VIC: Its not that easy Andy we are looking for him dont worry
    ANDY: You better find him and fast

    THE LION/BAR INT AFTERNOON

    PHILLIPA IS SAT AT THE BAR DRINKING A GLASS OF RED WHINE. VIV WALKS IN AND PHILLIPA SEES HER.

    PHILLIPA: Well, well look who it isnt
    VIV: Im sick and tired of your comments Phillipa why dont you go back to where you came from
    PHILLIPA: Oh how common you think im going to leave before James will is read
    VIV: Your not going to get a single penny Phillipa
    PHILLIPA: Im still married to him i will get evreything i have had my lawyers on to it and lets just say im feeling very confident
    VIV: Well i will see you there then wont i
    PHILLIPA: You bet and may the best bitch win

    PHILLIPA SMIRKS AND VIV LOOKS ANGRY.

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    VIVS KITCHEN INT MORNING.

    TRUDY IS MAKING A CUP OF TEA WHEN VIV WALKS IN SHE HANDS HER THE TEA.

    VIV: Oh i dont want that
    TRUDY: Come on it will build your strength up

    VIV TAKES THE TEA.

    TRUDY: What are you so worried about Viv, James wont have left Phillipa anything shes just here to cause trouble.
    VIV: She thinks that i want the money like im some sort of golddigger but im not i just dont want that bitch to get anything
    TRUDY: And she wont so stop worrying, your taxi will be here in a minute so you best get yourself ready.
    VIV: But what if she gets evreything i mean what if she gets away with it
    TRUDY: James would have never of left anything to her, he is not that stupid.

    VIV TAKES A SIP OF HER TEA AND LOOKS WORRIED.

    THE LION/CELLAR INT MORNING.

    COURTNEY SHUTS THE CELLAR DOOR AND TURNS ON THE LIGHT SHE WALKS DOWN THE STAIRS AND DIALS A NUMBER IN HER PHONE.

    COURTNEY: Hey hansome...its going fine trust me...they are both idiots...Ric thinks that i love him...And Nick just fancies me...But its you i want baby...Its all going to be ares...evrey single penny.

    COURTNEY LAUGHS.

    CHARNLEY PARK EXT MORNING.

    JENNY IS SAT ON THE SWINGS SHE IS LOOKING DEPRESSED, TRUDY WALKS PAST AND SEES HER SHE WALKS UP TO HER AND SITS ON THE SWING NEXT TO HER.

    TRUDY:
    Jenny whats wrong
    JENNY: Nothing im fine
    TRUDY: No your not come on tell me whats up its Andy aint it
    JENNY: No well sort of
    TRUDY: Whats he done
    JENNY: Nothing much he has been the perfect husband this last month
    TRUDY: Well what is it then look if your worried about Alex well you heard Vic he said there was no way he would come back
    JENNY: Trudy im pregnant
    TRUDY: What

    JAMES SOLICITORS INT MORNING.

    JAMES SOLICITOR IS SAT BEHIND HIS DESK, VIV AND PHILLIPA ARE SAT OPPOSITE HIM WAITING FOR HIM TO READ THE WILL.

    PHILLIPA: You know Viv there really is no point you being here becuse lets face it im getting evreything
    VIV: Is that wishfull thinking Phillipa

    CHARNLEY PARK EXT MORNING.

    TRUDY AND JENNY ARE SAT ON THE SWINGS. TRUDY IS STUNNED AT JENNYS ANNOUNCEMENT.

    TRUDY: Pregnant well thats good news
    JENNY: I dont know Trudy
    TRUDY: I dont understand what you mean
    JENNY: Things have been going fine for us all lately and Brooke has finally forgiven us about the adoption and Steves behaving himself
    TRUDY: So whats the problem
    JENNY: The last time i was pregnant the whole family got excited and then i lost it, Andy wouldnt talk to me,Steve treated me like dirt and i turned to drink.
    TRUDY: But you wont lose this one Jenny you just need to be careful
    JENNY: I was carefull last time Trudy, and if i have this baby Steve will resent me even more for not paying him enough attention.
    TRUDY: Oh now come on Jenny Steve is just an attention seeker he will get over it
    JENNY: I dont even know if i want this baby
    TRUDY: Your not seriously thinking about having an abortion
    JENNY: Its for the best

    ANDYS GARAGE/OFFICE INT MORNING.

    ANDY IS WORKING HARD ON HIS COMPUTER WHEN KAT WALKS IN.

    ANDY: Oh and what do you want
    KAT: Have you missed me Andy
    ANDY: You dont make me laugh
    KAT: Funny becuse the last time me and you saw each other well we were very close
    ANDY: That was in the past Kat i have moved on since then
    KAT: Yeah you have been busy married twice 5 kids, one dead and one a psycho.
    ANDY: Dont you dare talk about David that way and...wait a minute what do you mean 5...i only have Brooke,Steve,Alex and David.
    KAT: Wrong Andy you see i came back to Charnley for a reason and that reason was to get evreything you owe me and are son.
    ANDY: I dont know what your talking about
    KAT: Im talking about Warren Andy hes your son
    ANDY: What
    KAT: And if you dont pay up soon then the whole world will know your dirty little secret and do you know who i will go to first Lucy Scotsman thats who
    ANDY: What do you want
    KAT: Three thousand pound by Monday or i will go and visit her.

    JAMES SOLICITORS INT MORNING.

    THE SOLICITOR IS READING THE WILL TO PHILLIPA AND VIV.

    SOLICITOR: To my darling Viv my one true love i leave evreything that i own to you
    PHILLIPA: What you must be joking
    SOLICITOR: And to my bitch of a wife Phillipa i leave her nothing becuse that is all the daft cow deserves
    PHILLIPA: This is a scam it must be
    VIV: Like you said Phillipa the best bitch will win.

    VIV SMILES KNOWING SHE IS VICTORIES OVER PHILLIPA WHO LOOKS FURIOUS.

    ST PAULS CHURCH/GRAVEYARD JAMES GRAVE EXT AFTERNOON.

    PHILLIPA WALKS UP TO JAMES GRAVE SHE IS HOLDING SOME FLOWERS, SHE PLACES THE FLOWERS ON JAMES GRAVE.

    PHILLIPA: You may have got the last laugh James but for what you have done i will make your true loves life a living hell, i will be back James i always come out on top. Rot in hell becuse thats where you belong.

    PHILLIPA TAKES ONE LAST LOOK AT JAMES GRAVE AND SLOWLY LEAVES.

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    EXETER STREET OUTSIDE PENNYCROFT FLATS EXT MORNING.ROBERTS BLACK BMW PULLS UP OUTSIDE THE FLATS, ROBERT STEPS OUT OF THE CAR FOLLOWED BY CHRISSIE. CHRISSIE LOOKS AROUND EXETER STREET AND TAKES A DEEP BREATH AND WALKS INTO THE FLATS HOLDING ROBERTS HAND.

    THE MACKLINS ANDY AND JENNYS BEDROOM INT MORNING.JENNY IS SAT ON THE BED WITH THE YELLOW PAGES SHE IS DIALING A NUMBER, THE CAMERA PANS DOWN TO THE YELLOW PAGES WHERE ON THE PAGE IT REVEALS ABORTIONS.

    JENNY: Hello...yes i would like to make an appointment please...Next week ok fine...thankyou.

    JENNY PUTS THE PHONE DOWN AND WONDERS IF SHE IS DOING THE RIGHT THING.

    ROBERTS FLAT/FRONT ROOM INT MORNING.
    LUCY IS SAT AT THE TABLE DRINKING A CUP OF TEA, THE DOOR OPENS AND IN WALKS ROBERT AND CHRISSIE, LUCY LOOKS SHOCKED TO SEE HER.


    LUCY: What the bloody hell are you doing here
    CHRISSIE: Hello Lucy
    LUCY: Oh Robert you really are a stupid idiot.
    ROBERT: Oh here we go and anyway what are you doing here i told you to move downstairs
    LUCY: Well someone needed to look after you flat for you
    ROBERT: Yeah you were just being nosey as usual
    LUCY: I really can not believe that you even considered bringing her back into your life
    ROBERT: I love her mum and i want to be with her for the rest of my life and if you dont like that then you can shove it becuse i dont care anymore about what you or anyone else thinks.

    THE COMPLEX EXT AFTERNOON.
    VIV AND TRUDY ARE WALKING THROUGH THE COMPLEX THEY STOP AT THE CAFE.
    TRUDY: So do you think we have seen the last of Phillipa
    VIV: I really do hope so Trudy

    TRUDY TAKES A LOOK AT THE CAFE.

    VIV: You really want this place dont you
    TRUDY: Oh its nothing but a stupid dream
    VIV: Well that stupid dream is about to come true
    TRUDY: What are you talking about
    VIV: Trudy you know James left me quiet alot of money what from all the propeteys and business he owns, and i know that you had your eye on this place and so i brought it for you
    TRUDY: Viv thats wonderful but i cant take it
    VIV: Yes you can Trudy and you will

    TRUDY AND VIV HUG.

    VIV: There is something else i want to tell you
    TRUDY: What is it
    VIV: James left me his villa in spain and im going away for a few weeks so i want you to do something for me
    TRUDY: Anything
    VIV: I want you to watch over the family becuse i really do have a funny feeling something bad is going to happen
    TRUDY: Nothings going to happen Viv you go and enjoy yourself dont worry about a thing.

    THE LION INT AFTERNOON.

    RIC AND COURTNEY ARE SAT AT THE BAR KISSING, THE DOOR OPENS AND SHARON WALKS IN.

    RIC: Sharon your back early
    COURTNEY: What a nice suprise
    SHARON: Thanks i wanted to suprise you well do i get a hug.

    RIC AND SHARON KISS, SHE SEES AN ENGAGEMENT RING ON COURTNEY.
    SHARON: Who is getting married
    RIC: We are
    SHARON: What
    COURTNEY: Oh Sharon its going to be fantastic

    COURTNEY AND RIC HUG, COURTNEY SMIRKS AT SHARON WHO LOOKS FURIOUS.

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    THE COMPLEX MORNING EXT.

    ALAN AND TRUDY ARE SAT ON THE BENCH LOOKING AT THE CAFE.

    TRUDY: Its all ares Alan evrey last bit of it.
    ALAN: Yeah and just think hard work
    TRUDY: Oh Alan it will be a breeze.
    ALAN: I cant even cook
    TRUDY: Well you can work at the counter and do the accoutants.
    ALAN: Yeah i suppose you know we better start advertising for more work.
    TRUDY: Oh yeah i forgot about that
    ALAN: And we need a buisness plan.
    TRUDY: Bloody hell it is hard work.

    THE LION KITCHEN INT MORNING.

    COURTNEY IS SAT AT THE TABLE READING HER MAGAZINE. SHARON WALKS IN AND PUTS THE KETTLE ON.

    SHARON: Where is Dad
    COURTNEY: Gone the brewerey
    SHARON: Good becuse its time me and you have a little chat
    COURTNEY: What about dont worry i have saved you a space to be my bridesmaid.
    SHARON: You dont need to becuse i am not coming to the wedding becuse there will not be a wedding.
    COURTNEY: I think there will Sharon becuse your dad loves me and...
    SHARON: You love his money if you think that i will let you walk all over my dad then you can think again you gold digging bitch.
    COURTNEY: Sharon there is absolutley nothing you can do about it i will marry your father and once i have your out of the picture once and for all.

    COURTNEY STORMS OUT OF THE KITCHEN.

    THE GARAGE ANDYS OFFICE INT AFTERNOON.

    ANDY IS LOOKING IN HIS SAFE WHEN KAT WALKS IN.

    KAT: So do you have my money then or what
    ANDY: You know what tell Lucy tell who ever you like i really dont care.
    KAT: Funny becuse Trudy was telling me that you were on your last warning with Jenny and some how i dont think she will take to kindly to Warren being your son. So my money.

    ANDY PICKS OUT A HEAVEY ENVELOPE AND PASSES IT TO KAT.

    ANDY: You ever breathe a word of this and i will kill you Kat family or not.

    THE LION INT AFTERNOON.

    COURTNEY IS SERVING PETE A BEER.

    PETE: Thank you darling and can i just say how good looking you are.
    COURTNEY: Thank you very much your not so bad yourself.
    PETE: You know if you ever get board with old man Grand and you want something a bit younger then just give me a call.

    COURTNEY SMILES.

    CHARNELEY ABOARTION CLINIC EXT AFTERNOON.

    A TAXI PULLS UP OUTSIDE THE CLINIC, JENNY STEPS OUT OF THE TAXI AND PAYS THE DRIVER SHE WALKS TO THE DOOR BUT SHE STOPS AND WONDERS IF SHE IS DOING THE RIGHT THING, SHE TAKES A DEEP BREATH AND WALKS INTO THE CLINIC.

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    THE COMPLEX PALMERS CARPETS EXT MORNING.

    LORRY PULL UP TO THE FACTORY AND THEY ARE FOLLOWED BY A BMW. MAX PALMER STEPS OUT WITH HIS DAUGHTER LOUISE.

    LOUISE: I still dont see why i have to come with you
    MAX: Becuse princess this is a brand new start for us all this is a brand new start for you
    LOUISE: Look Dad i would rather be getting settled in the house
    MAX: Well you can tonight we have work to do
    LOUISE: What are you talking about
    MAX: Your going to be my new secretery
    LOUISE: Oh no Dad please
    MAX: Its time you earnt your money for once come on

    MAX AND LOUISE BEGIN TO WALK INTO THE FACTORY WHEN ANDY WALKS TO HIS GARAGE AND NOTICES THAT MAXS CAR IS BLOCKING HIS DOOR WAY.

    ANDY: Hey you
    MAX: You talking to me
    ANDY: Depends this your car
    MAX: Yeah it is
    ANDY: Well move it
    MAX: Its fine where it is
    ANDY: If you dont move it i will.
    MAX: With what

    MAX WALKS INTO THE FACTORY, VIC PULLS UP.

    VIC: Andy can i have a word
    ANDY: Yeah come into my office.

    THE ALLEYWAY EXT MORNING.

    COURTNEY IS WALKING DOWN THE ALLEYWAY WHEN PETE STOPS HER.


    COURTNEY: Im not up for any of your games Pete
    PETE: What games
    COURTNEY: Oh come on im not stupid
    PETE: Look i see the old man has gone out
    COURTNEY: Out all day taking his bitch for a daughter with him
    PETE: An empty flat and a bar full of booze sounds like heaven
    COURTNEY: I have a pub to run
    PETE: Yeah but not all day and lets face it i can give you 10 times more than old man grand can ever do.
    COURTNEY: All right but its a one off i shut at three
    PETE: Great

    COURTNEY AND PETE BOTH WALK OFF NOT REALISING THAT WARREN HAS BEEN LISTENING TO THE WHOLE CONVERSATION FROM BEHINED THE BINS.

    THE GARAGE/ANDYS OFFICE INT MORNING.

    VIC AND ANDY ARE TALKING.

    VIC: Alex is getting closer Andy we are playing a dangerous game
    ANDY: Well what the hell are you going to do about it
    VIC: We need to catch him thats for sure and i have an idea but its up to you if we go through with it.

    THE LION INT AFTERNOON.

    COURTNEY IS BEHINED THE BAR AND THE PUB IS BUSY, PETE IS SAT AT THE BAR WATCHING COURTNEY. WARREN WALKS IN CARRYING A BAG, HE WALKS THROUGH THE BACK MAKING SURE NO ONE NOTICES HIM HE WALKS UP THE STAIRS AND GOES INTO COURTNEYS BEDROOM, HE PULLS OUT OF HIS BAG A CAMERA AND PLACES IT IN A PILE OF CLOTHES HE SWITCHES ON THE CAMERA AND SMILES.

    THE GARAGE/ANDYS OFFICE INT AFTERNOON.

    ANDY AND VIC ARE STILL TALKING.

    ANDY: So let me get this straight you want me to fake my own death and then stage a funeral and then Alex might just might turn up.
    VIC: He will turn up Andy so what do you say
    ANDY: Alright lets do it.

    THE LION YARD EXT EVENING.

    THE BACKDOOR OPENS AND WARREN WALKS OUT WITH HIS CAMERA, HE QUIETLY SHUTS THE DOOR, HE WALKS OUT OF THE YARD INTO THE ALLEYWAY AND TURNS ON THE CAMERA AND SEES COURTNEY AND PETE, WARREN SMILES.

    WARREN: Money money money.

    WARREN WALKS OFF LAUGHING.

    Next week: Its the finale week where anything can happen!!!

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    THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

    ANDY JENNY AND THE KIDS ARE ALL SAT DOWN WE CAN SEE TWO SUITCASES PACKED.

    BROOKE: You leaving Dad
    ANDY: Yeah but its not how you think listen Alex is close by and well me and the police have come up with a plan.
    JENNY: Your Dad is going to fake his death now its going to be hard for the next few weeks and we are going to have a funeral.
    STEVE: But why would Alex come back now your dead
    ANDY: Oh trust me he will come back and when he does im going to get him once and for all.

    THE LION THE YARD INT MORNING.

    COURTNEY WALKS OUT OF THE LION AND EMPTYS THE BINS, THE BACK GATE OPENS AND PETE WALKS IN.

    PETE: Aye up gorgeous
    COURTNEY: Not now Pete last night was a one off.
    PETE: Oh come on just one more go.
    COURTNEY: Im not some toy that you can play with
    PETE: Alright but once you have had me you will be hard to please dont play to hard with Ric now we wouldnt want him to have a heart attack.

    PETE WALKS OFF WITH A GRIN ON HIS FACE. COURTNEY PUTS THE RUBBISH IN THE BIN AND WATCHES PETE WALK OFF.

    EXETER STREET EXT AFTERNOON.

    ANDY IS PUTTING HIS BAGS IN HIS CAR, LUCY WHO IS WALKING FROM THE COMPLEX SEES HIM.

    LUCY: Leaving are we
    ANDY: Now why would i give you the satisfaction Lucy
    LUCY: The day you leave im going to have a street party
    ANDY: The day i leave your going to be so depressed becuse lets face it Lucy who else do you have to plot againts and fight with.
    LUCY: Your going to get what you deserve Andy Macklin i promise you that
    ANDY: How is Shawn i suppose he feels right at home locked in that cell. Mind you i suppose it is better than being with you.
    LUCY: Go to hell Andy
    ANDY: You know i might just do that.

    ANDY SMIRKS BEFORE GETTING IN HIS CAR.

    ANDY DRIVES OFF AND ROBERT AND CHRISSIE WALKS UP TO LUCY.

    ROBERT: What did he want
    LUCY: I really dont know

    THE ALLEYWAY EXT AFTERNOON.

    COURTNEY IS WALKING DOWN THE ALLEYWAY WARREN JUMPS OUT AT HER AND MAKES HER JUMP.

    COURTNEY: What are you trying to do Warren
    WARREN: You have been a naughty girl Courtney
    COURTNEY: What are you going on about
    WARREN: Im talking about you and Grouse
    COURTNEY: I dont know what your talking about
    WARREN: Oh i think you do and it would be a real shame if your secret got out especially seen as though its on DVD
    COURTNEY: You recorded us you make me sick
    WARREN: Say what you want but if you dont pay up i will reveal all you have 24 hours.

    WARREN WALKS OFF COURTNEY LOOKS WORRIED.

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    EXETER STREET EXT MORNING.

    LUCY IS STANDING AT HER FLAT DOOR WHEN THE PAPERBOY HANDS HER THE PAPER SHE READS THE HEADLINE "LOCAL BUISSNESS MAN KILLED IN HORRIFIC CAR CRASH" LUCY LOOKS AT THE PICTURE OF THE MAN AND IT IS ANDY. LUCY LOOKS SHOCKED AT WHAT SHE SEES.

    THE BOOKIES/NICKS OFFICE INT MORNING.

    NICK AND COURTNEY ARE ARGUING.

    NICK: What the hell were you doing you realise that you could destroy evreything we have worked for.
    COURTNEY: Look maybe you could just scare him off.
    NICK: You really dont know Warren do you he wont listen to me he wont listen to anyone
    COURTNEY: You have a gun persuade him
    NICK; Im not pointing a gun at my nephew
    COURTNEY: Well what are we going to do
    NICK: Im going to have to tell him
    COURTNEY: Letting him in on it you cant
    NICK: Trust me its going to work.

    THE MACKLINS FRONT DOOR EXT MORNING.

    TRUDY IS AT THE DOOR TALKING TO JENNY

    TRUDY: Im so sorry about Andy
    JENNY: Its fine Trudy
    TRUDY: Look i know you might find it tough but we will get through this
    JENNY: Trudy its fine Andys not dead
    TRUDY: What are you talking about
    JENNY: Come inside

    THE LION KITCHEN INT AFTERNOON.

    COURTNEY AND SHARON ARE TALKING.

    SHARON: I know your game Courtney and your time is running out
    COURTNEY: Why what are you going to do Sharon your Dad is in love with me and theres nothing that you can do about it
    SHARON: We will see Courtney we will see.

    SHARON WALKS OUT AND COURTNEY S PHONE RINGS SHE ANSWERS AND IT IS WARREN.

    COURTNEY: Im not giving you what you want
    WARREN: Tick tock Courtney times up.


    THE PARK EXT AFTERNOON.


    WARREN SMILES AND PUTS THE PHONE DOWN, HE TURNS ONLY TO BUMP INTO NICK.

    WARREN: Watch it oh its you
    NICK: Yeah its me
    WARREN: What do you want
    NICK: A talk if you dont mind
    WARREN: Im busy i have stuff to do

    WARREN BEGINS TO WALK OFF.

    NICK: What like blackmail Courtney

    WARREN STOPS AND TURNS BACK TO NICK.

    WARREN: I dont know what your talking about
    NICK: Oh i think you do Warren now im warning you tell anybody about the other night and you will get hurt.
    WARREN: What have you got to do with it
    NICK: Thats not relevent
    WARREN: No come on Nick why would Courtney tell you about me
    NICK: Im your uncle
    WARREN: Hold on ive just figured it out you and her your scamming old man Grand aint you

    NICK DOES NOT ANSWER

    WARREN: Oh this is brilliant
    NICK: Look you cant tell anyone
    WARREN: Why whats in it for me
    NICK: You can have a cut in what we get well what do you say.

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    THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

    JENNY,TRUDY,ALAN,BROOKE AND STEVE ARE ALL DRESSED IN BLACK.

    JENNY: Are you ready for this we cant let anyone know that Andy is still alive we need to catch Alex once and for all.

    EVREYONE NODS IN AGREEMENT THE FRONT DOOR OPENS AND VIV WALKS IN BACK FROM SPAIN. SHE IS CRYING.

    VIV: Oh my poor Andy
    JENNY: Nobodys told her
    TRUDY: I thought you did
    VIV: Told me what

    ROBERTS FLAT INT MORNING.

    CHRISSIE COMES OUT OF THE BEDROOM DRESSED FOR THE FUNERAL, LUCY IS PUTTING ON HER EAR RINGS AND ROBERT IS TALKING TO HER.

    ROBERT: No trouble today mum
    LUCY: Im going to a funeral and the only reason i am going is to make sure that son of a bitch is dead.
    CHRISSIE: Lucy that a horrible thing to say
    LUCY: Oh come on Chrissie that man destroyed are family what with him putting Shawn in prison and his affair with you.
    ROBERT: Anyway were just going to the funeral and thats all.
    LUCY: Oh you two might but im going to the wake as well and tell evreyone what that man really was.
    ROBERT: No your not mum think about his family.
    LUCY: Oh like he thought about ares we used to be the Top dogs of Exeter Street until he turned up and ruined evreything. Its time the whole street knew what he really is.

    EXETER STREET EXT MORNING.

    THE RESIDENTS ARE ALL STANDING IN THE STREET AS THE HEARSE PULLS UP WITH ANDYS COFFIN, JENNY AND THE REST OF THE FAMILY STEP INTO THE CAR. THE CAMERA FOCUSES ON COURTNEY,SHARON AND RIC.

    COURTNEY: How strange it is that after evreything Alex did he never managed to kill his dad but instead it was a car.
    RIC: If it wasnt for Andy a lot of people would still be very much alive.
    SHARON: Yeah but you cant blame Andy for all of this madness
    COURTNEY: Well someone has to take the blame
    RIC: Lets just thank god that Alex is dead at least we wont have anymore chaos.

    AS RIC SAYS HIS FINAL WORDS THE CAMERA PANS TO THE BACK ALLEY WHERE HIDING BEHINED A BIN AND WATCHING THE STREET IS ALEX WHO IS HOLDING A GUN!!!

    THE GRAVEYARD EXT MORNING.

    THE RESIDENTS ARE GAVERED AROUND ANDYS FAKE GRAVE.

    LUCY: [WHISPERING TO ROBERT] The evil swine is finally six feet under
    VIV: What was that Lucy
    LUCY: Nothing Viv
    VIV: Oh come on Lucy for once you have been given centre stage to say your piece
    LUCY: I dont think i should say
    VIV: No please do we are all dying to hear
    LUCY: Well ok then i was saying how Andy is finally where he belongs dead and buried.
    VIV: One day Lucy you will get whats coming to you
    LUCY: Yeah oh and one last thing i hope Andy rots in hell.

    LUCY WALKS OFF TOWARDS THE WOODS.

    JENNY: You evil bitch

    LUCY SMIRKS AS SHE WALKS INTO THE WOODS.

    ROBERT: Look im sorry evreyone for her outburst
    VIV: She can say what she likes the miserable old cow.

    THE WOODS EXT MORNING.

    LUCY IS WALKING THROUGH THE WOODS WHEN SHE BUMPS INTO A MAN SHE LOOKS AND SEES THAT THE MAN IS ANDY.

    LUCY: What the hell
    ANDY: Lucy suprise
    LUCY: But your...and there all...what the hell is going on.
    ANDY: Thought you got rid of your worst enemy once and for all did you Lucy
    LUCY: Your supposed to be dead Andy
    ANDY: Well seems like im still alive dont you think
    LUCY: But what about the crash and evreything
    ANDY: All a trick
    LUCY: That is some sick trick
    ANDY: No not to trick you to trick Alex
    LUCY: But hes dead
    ANDY: Wrong again Lucy my son is still alive and i reckon hes close by...SO WHY DONT YOU SHOW YOUR FACE ALEX...COME ON...YOU HAVE WAITED FOR THIS MOMENT ALL ALONG TO SEE YOUR OWN DAD DEAD AND BURIED...WELL GUESS WHAT IM NOT...SO WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR ALEX COME ON SHOW YOURSELF YOU COWARD.

    ALEX SUDDENLY APPEARS FROM THE BUSHES POINTING HIS GUN RIGHT AT ANDY WHO WITH LUCY LOOKS SHOCKED AND AFRAID.

    ALEX: Hey Dad is this what you want a final standoff me and you.
    ANDY: Go on then shoot me or better still shoot her.
    LUCY: What are you doing.
    ANDY: But then again you shoot her and you would be doing me a huge favour Alex so whos it to be.
    ALEX: I only came here for one reason to check if you were really dead and if you werent then i would make sure that you would be so see you hell dad.
    ANDY: Alex think about this

    ALEX PULLS THE TRIGGER AND FIRES A SHOT RIGHT AT ANDYS STOMACH HE FALLS TO THE GROUND IN PAIN AND LUCY SCREAMS. ALEX STARTS TO WALK CLOSER TO LUCY POINTING THE GUN RIGHT AT HER.

    ALEX: Kill two birds with one stone aye

    ALEX LAUGHS AS LUCY SCREAMS FOR HELP.

    See you next year for another explosive Season of Exeter.

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