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    Thanks 4 all the replies glad you like it

    The next morning the sight that greeted the Walford market traders shocked them posters of will and his secretary were slammed all over the walls and littered the ground
    Jake- Danny it’s Will King’s secretary Louise
    Danny- not only that it’s Will King that she’s with
    Jake- imagine if his wife finds out according to Louise she had a bit of temper problem
    Johnny stepped out his car and looked at the pictures
    He was holding a familiar looking brown envelope
    Johnny headed towards Scarlet

    Kerrie opened the envelope at breakfast
    Kerrie- are you all right babes you look like you haven’t slept
    Kerrie pulled the pictures out and screamed
    Will- what is it?
    Kerrie punched him in the face
    Kerrie- how could you do this to me
    She threw the pictures in his face
    Will- angel I can explain
    Kerrie- forget it
    She ran upstairs and slammed the bedroom door shut
    Kerrie began to laugh
    She looked at her mobile seven missed calls from her dad
    Kerrie hurriedly packed a bag and dressed
    When she got downstairs Will grabbed her
    Will- don’t leave me
    Kerrie- you make me sick Will you betrayed me I’m going to my dads don’t bother calling
    She ran out of the house and towards her silver Porsche
    Kerrie sped off in a cloud of smoke

    Dennis had to hand to Kerrie she certainly didn’t take being betrayed very well
    He watched as the residents helped Gus clear up the mess
    Kerrie’s Porsche screeched to a halt outside the club
    She walked down the market
    Dennis nodded and she smiled
    Kerrie got out her mobile
    Kerrie- there are pictures of you and Louise everywhere I’m gonna kill her then i'm gonna kill you
    She hung up
    The residents stared at her
    Jake and Danny looked at her she seemed familiar
    Danny- is that his wife
    Jake- looks like it
    Johnny came out of the club
    Johnny- Kerrie
    She turned to him before running to the car
    Johnny- where are you going
    Kerrie- to do her face some serious damage
    She sped off and grabbed her phone
    Kerrie- make sure you stay in the Square I’ll be back later

    Kerrie arrived outside her husband’s office and smiled it was also covered with pictures
    She stormed in and grabbed Louise by the hair and dragged her outside
    Kerrie- had a good laugh with my husband have you
    Louise- get off me your hurting me
    Kerrie- I aint even started yet
    She head butted her
    Louise fell to the floor
    Kerrie picked her up and punched her in the face a number of times
    Kerrie- keep away from my husband or I’ll make sure your pretty face won’t be anymore do I make myself clear
    Louise nodded
    Kerrie grabbed her throat
    Kerrie let her go and walked back to the car as Will pulled up
    Kerrie- I'm going to talk to my father you can look after your bit of fluff she's in a bit of a mess
    Will- Kerrie
    Kerrie got in her Porsche and straightened her hair and make-up before heading back to Albert Square
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    Wow, wouldn't want to get on her bad side! Hope there's more soon!

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    wow that was great. wonder what she has planned for will? also is johnny her dad? just a thought. hope theres more soon

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    Thanks for all the replies and Di Marco here is the answer to your question

    Jake sat on the barstool
    Chrissie- I’ve had funny looks, quiet whispers the works what about you
    Jake- oh only Pauline Fowler mumbling something about your taste in men doesn’t change
    Chrissie lent over and kissed him
    Jake- what was that for?
    Chrissie- call it an apology no-one should have to deal with Pauline Fowler
    Jake grinned and kissed her again
    Kerrie stormed in
    Kerrie- straight vodka no ice make it a double no make it two doubles
    Chrissie- bad day
    Kerrie- my husband’s been shagging his secretary but other than that everything is fine
    Jake- it was you in the street earlier in the Porsche
    Kerrie- yep that was me and my husband was the one in the pictures in case you hadn’t guessed
    Chrissie- are you ok
    Kerrie- me I’m fine and dandy
    Jake- so what did you
    Kerrie- I lost my temper
    Chrissie- with your husband or his bit of fluff
    Kerrie- the fluff I’ve got a bigger and better revenge for my husband
    Chrissie- is she ok
    Kerrie- she’s walking if that’s what you mean
    Kerrie downed both drinks

    Dennis entered the pub and saw her
    Dennis- how did it go
    Kerrie- it’s all going to plan
    Dennis- good are you ok
    Kerrie- I need another drink
    Dennis- my shout then
    Kerrie- well thanks to me you’re not poor so I think I deserve a drink
    Dennis- as it’s you
    Kerrie- two more of the same please he’s paying
    Dennis- so what next
    Kerrie- the final nail in my loving and devoted husband’s coffin that’s what
    Chrissie and Jake looked at each other half-smiling
    Johnny walked into the pub
    Kerrie sat chatting with Dennis
    Johnny stepped towards the blonde and flung the pictures in front of her
    Johnny- what’s going on
    Kerrie looked up and smiled sheepishly
    Kerrie- what he’s a cheat what else could be going on
    Johnny- you’re lying Kerrie the posters and these have got your name all over them
    Kerrie- oh charming
    Johnny- Kerrie
    Kerrie- fine I did it
    Johnny- why
    Kerrie- now he knows what it’s like to be humiliated I sent them to his mum as well and all his business associates
    Kerrie smiled
    Johnny- club now
    Kerrie rolled her eyes
    Kerrie- it’s like being fifteen again next you’ll be stopping my pocket money
    Johnny- don’t push it
    Kerrie- stop treating me like a child anyone would think you’re my dad
    Johnny- I am your dad so move it
    She stormed out and Johnny followed
    Chrissie- his daughter
    She looked at Dennis
    Dennis- what she’s a mate
    Jake- I knew she looked familiar Kerrie King no wonder he wanted us to check out her husband
    Dennis- what
    Johnny- had us look into Will King’s businesses
    Dennis got out his mobile and dialled a number
    Dennis- Kerrie it's me when you get this call me
    Dennis hung up and walked out
    Jake- what was all that about
    Chrissie- I don’t know but if I know Dennis it’s dodgy
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    Kerrie entered Scarlet
    Johnny- what the hell did you think you were playing at?
    Kerrie- having some fun before I ditch my husband
    Johnny- well you better be quick he’s filed for divorce
    Kerrie- what no he can’t not yet daddy I want to divorce him please
    Kerrie looked at him tearily
    Kerrie- it's not fair daddy
    Johnny- I’ll have a word
    Kerrie- thanks dad
    She hugged him
    Johnny- I warned you he’d end up hurting you didn’t I
    Kerrie- well not anymore
    She kissed her dad on the cheek
    Kerrie- I’m going to go home
    Johnny- I’ll go and see your husband
    Kerrie left and Johnny got out his mobile
    Johnny- Jake meet me at the club and bring Danny

    10 minutes later they pulled up outside Will’s offices
    Johnny- follow me
    They entered the building and Jake knocked on the office door
    Will- what
    The trio walked in
    Will- Johnny
    Louise was sitting on the sofa cleaning herself up
    Johnny- my daughter do that did she
    Louise got up and ran out
    Johnny- now about Kerrie she’s my daughter and I aint gonna let you or anyone else take advantage of her do I make myself clear
    Will- crystal
    Johnny- my daughter is willing to give you another chance you let her down and you’ll be letting me down and then we will have another conversation
    Will nodded and Johnny left with Jake and Danny
    Jake- is she taking him back?
    Johnny- only so she can get one over on him
    They got in the car and headed back to Walford

    Kerrie got out her mobile as she stood in the middle of the square her good for nothing husband will get exactly what he deserves
    Kerrie- Will it’s me can we talk please look I’m heading to the house I’ll meet you there
    She headed to her car and sped off
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    wow that was so good. i wonder what shes going to do? and i was right, johnny allen is her dad, i thought he might be. great as usual, cant wait for the next parts

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    Three quiet weeks past with Kerrie making sure Will played the dutiful husband but Kerrie’s devious plan had only just began making Dennis believe she was just going to divorce him the feisty blonde put her plan into action
    Kerrie dialled a number on her mobile as she stood in the kitchen her house phone rang and the answer machine kicked in
    Kerrie- Will I’m going shopping babes if your back before me remember we’re meant to be going to Alison’s for dinner at seven love you
    Kerrie grabbed her coat and left the house

    Dennis sat in the bookies sorting out some paperwork when Johnny arrived wanting a word with him about his daughter
    Johnny sat in front of Dennis watching him carefully
    Dennis- all she told me was that she’d humiliated him now she was going to divorce him and take him to the cleaners if she’s up to something she’s keeping me in the dark
    Johnny- did you know she was my daughter?
    Dennis- she told me yeah
    Johnny nodded and walked out
    Dennis let out a sigh of relief

    Kerrie parked in the deserted car park and opened the garage she picked up two large petrol containers and placed them into the boot
    Kerrie locked up and drove off now for the explosive finale she promised everyone
    She smiled sweetly
    Kerrie pulled up outside a rundown block of flats
    She wandered towards a basement flat with a grey door
    She knocked loudly
    Louise opened the door
    Kerrie- hello can I come in
    She pushed past her and entered the flat
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    dun dun dun........ i really want to know whats going to happen. im assuming she going to set fire to the petrol and blow someone up. i wonder who, will? louise? maybe both? cant wait for the next part

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    thanks di marco for replying your nearly right

    Jake was sorting out the delivery with Danny at the club when Johnny walked in
    Johnny- Jake a word in my office please
    In his office Johnny looked tired
    Jake- that daughter of yours still causing chaos
    Johnny- do you know what I don’t know she’s up to something but won’t say what
    Jake- have you tried Rickman
    Johnny- he knows nothing
    Jake- well who else is there
    Johnny- I’m going to speak to Kerrie tonight she said she’d be at home

    Kerrie- now my husband has been a naughty boy trying to arrange a divorce behind my back
    Louise- how do you know that
    Kerrie- because my sweet I found the letter in his desk about four months ago
    Louise- you knew
    Kerrie-oh I knew all right just like I knew he was shagging you over a year ago
    Louise- what but…
    Kerrie- oh Louise please I’m not the kind of woman to fall apart because her old man is playing away I never loved him anyway no I’ve planned this to perfection I’ve planned this so carefully that my dear darling husband won’t know what’s hit him
    Louise- are you going to kill him?
    Kerrie- kill him no I’m going to ruin him I’m going to take his life and rip it into very small pieces and you are going to help me
    Louise- how
    Kerrie- just listen because the mood I’m in I could do anything phone my home phone and leave a message for Will asking him to meet you tonight in the Epping Woods car park at half nine
    Louise- I can’t
    Kerrie grabbed Louise by her hair and threw her against the wall
    Kerrie- did I sound like I was asking you phone him now
    Louise picked up her mobile phone off the floor after Kerrie let her go
    Kerrie- no use mine
    She handed Louise her mobile phone and Louise dialled the number
    Louise- Will it’s me I need to meet you tonight at the Epping Woods car park at nine please it’s important
    She hung up
    Kerrie- that wasn’t so hard was it now you stay here all night I’m putting someone outside to watch you move and I’ll kill you do you understand
    Louise nodded
    Kerrie- if anyone asks you never saw me and you never ever phoned Will all right
    Louise slowly nodded
    Kerrie- because if you thought what I did to you about the pictures was bad you aint seen nothing yet
    Louise- but what are you gonna do
    Kerrie- make him suffer like I’ve suffered married to him for three years only for him to cheat on me and file for divorce I’m gonna make him wish he had never been born and when the police have spoken to you…
    Louise- the police
    Kerrie- will you shut up for five bloody minutes your really trying my patience
    Louise stopped
    Kerrie- yes the police you dozy cow when they have gone away after you tell them about how you didn’t ring Will you are going away as well to Spain or somewhere else but you are going to disappear and you aint gonna come back do you understand
    Louise nodded slowly
    Kerrie- you try anything and it won’t just be you I’ll be coming after I’ll pay a visit to your little sister she’s at school isn’t she wants to be a vet
    Louise- leave Amy alone
    Kerrie- oh I will sweetheart if you play a blinder, you mess me about I’ll mess your sister about so much you won’t recognise her
    Kerrie turned and walked out of the flat
    She stood outside and breathed in the air right now she needs to sort out the house
    Kerrie walked towards a black BMW and knocked on the window
    Kerrie- if she tries to leave call me fall asleep and I’ll break both your legs
    The man nodded and Kerrie wandered over to Will’s range rover that she had borrowed this morning and got in
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    Wow very interesting. cant wait 4 the next bit.

    P.S Joel Beckett is lovely
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