Deception

[Torrie]

Awww, it's sweet that Chrissie's looking out for Dennis and still treating him like family!

[Rach33]

This is 4 u Torrie and can we have more of your stories please

Dennis entered the office in the bookies and sat down he was tired
Pat walked in
Pat- you all right
Dennis- I’ve been better everything ok
Pat- you’ve got a visitor
Dennis- fine let them in
Johnny stepped into the office
Dennis- Johnny take a seat
Johnny- thanks
Pat left and shut the door
Dennis- so what can I do for you Johnny
Johnny- I’m just curious put it that way
Dennis- curious about what
Johnny- why Andy Hunter left you the bookies
Dennis- haven’t a clue I guess we both have history when we both worked for Jack
Johnny- of course Jack Dalton
Dennis- long time ago another life
Johnny- a little whisper was going around that YOU should have taken on Dalton’s little empire and not Andy
Dennis- I didn’t want it
Johnny- Jack looked after you didn’t he
Dennis- when it pleased him
Johnny- you don’t seem too happy at the moment your step-mum is worried
Dennis- I’m fine
Johnny- are you
Dennis studied Johnny carefully
Dennis- I lost someone and I can’t ever get her back too much damage has been done
Johnny- something to do with your father I guess
Dennis- oh you guessed right
Johnny- do you want to talk about it?
Dennis- not really
Dennis took a deep breath
Dennis- I caught my dad in bed with Zoë my then girlfriend
Johnny- he slept with your girlfriend
Dennis- and that’s not all at Christmas I was leaving Zoë, leaving Walford with Sharon
Johnny- Sharon… Sharon Watts
Dennis- that’s right Den’s adopted daughter I loved her we were making a go of things but he couldn't have it he wouldn’t let it happen he’d already split us up once and he did it again
Johnny saw the pain in Dennis’s eyes as he recalled his goodbye to Sharon in the Queen Vic
Dennis- Zoë would have moved on she’s young but I knew Sharon was the one but Den oh Den’s clever he knew my weakness and my biggest weakness was him I couldn’t bare to become my dad so he told Zoë to tell me she was pregnant he knew I wouldn’t go he knew I’d stay and he’d of won again but he didn’t bank on Sharon going he tried to make her stay but she wouldn’t she couldn’t because Sharon can’t have kids
Johnny- I’m sorry
Dennis- nah don’t be I wouldn’t touch her you see I couldn’t not while Sharon was in my head so she looked elsewhere she was so desperate so clingy when I left I realised what I’d done to her to me I couldn’t face Sharon I still can’t
Johnny- it’s time to move on Dennis I better go but it was good talking to you
Dennis- it seems weird months of bottling it up it’s all out now in the open
Johnny- well it won’t leave these four walls I can promise you
Dennis- thanks
Johnny- don’t mention it
He got up and left

[Torrie]

Aww, thanks - I'll post some more soon!

Johnny's gonna have his hands full - he likes looking after everyone, doesn't he? Jake, Dennis and making sure the whole Square runs smoothly. He's a fab character, even if he did throw Andy off a bridge, lol!

[Rach33]

U think he's got his handsful at the minute you just wait

Kerrie arrived home
Kerrie- sweetheart are you upstairs or down
Will- I’m in the lounge
Kerrie strolled in
Kerrie- are you ok honey
Will- no I bloody well aint I’m half a million down
Kerrie- all right there’s no need to take it out on me
Will- I’m sorry Angel
Kerrie- forget it I’m going shopping
She turned and stormed out of the house
Kerrie- forget waiting until tomorrow you miserable git I’m gonna start right now
She climbed in her Porsche and drove off

Kerrie watched Will head downstairs the next morning and pick up a brown envelope
He opened it and dropped the contents Will quickly scrambled the pictures up and hid them
Kerrie- anything interesting in the post
Will- no sweetheart go back to bed I’ll bring you a cup of tea
Kerrie- ok
She smiled as she pulled the duvet around her she covered her mouth to disguise her laughter
Will sat at his desk looking at the photos and the note
Will- three hundred grand or I’ll tell your wife about these
Will quickly got out his mobile he was gonna have to sort this out

Kerrie smiled as she climbed out of the black BMW and looked around the Square she entered the pub
Dennis- how did it go
Kerrie- I had Lee pick up the money 10 minutes ago but I haven’t finished yet
Dennis- oh yeah
Kerrie- I’ll come over tonight and explain make sure you’re at the flat
Dennis- ok what time
Kerrie- 8
Dennis- see you later
Kerrie smiled and left

Danny lay on the sofa at number 41
Jake- oi move over you lazy git
Danny- what no hot date
Jake- what about you Sam stood you up again has she
Danny- no she’s looking after Zoë
Jake- why
Danny- apparently she’s a bit down
Jake- hormonal more like
Danny- so where’s the lovely Chrissie then?
Jake- working where do you think
Danny- so is it serious
Jake- nah it’s a bit of fun
Danny- you better watch it though don’t want her step-son smacking you one again do you I mean first his girlfriend and now his step-mum
Jake- shut up Danny
Danny- where’s Alfie
Jake- he’s taking Nana shopping with little Mo
Danny- a bit cosy isn’t it
Jake- don’t wind him up Danny
Danny- would I do such a thing
Jake- yes
Danny- well thanks very much
Jake grinned and took the TV remote off his brother and flicked channels
Danny- oi I was watching that
Jake- no you weren’t
Danny- how do you know
Jake- all right then what was it about
Danny- it was a film about a bloke and women
Jake- and
Danny- well that’s as far as I got
Jake- muppet now shift
Danny moved his legs and let his brother sit down

Dennis and Kerrie sat in the flat he use to share with Zoë
Kerrie- so do you think he’ll go for it?
Dennis- he’s terrified of your dad he’ll go for it
Kerrie- good
Dennis- shall I do the pick up
Kerrie- it’s too risky I’ll get Lee to pick up again
Dennis- call me when you want me to get on with the other part
Kerrie- I will
She got up and left

Johnny knocked on the door to number 41
Jake opened it
Jake- Johnny come in
Johnny- I want you two to do a job for me tomorrow
Danny got up and stepped into the hallway
Danny- what kind of job
Johnny- I want you to look into all the business dealings of a Will King
Danny- Will King isn’t he the multi millionaire businessman who lives in Kensington has his fingers in all the pies
Johnny- that’s right
Jake- all the business dealings
Johnny- all and talk to his business associates most of whom are women so I’m sure you can charm them
Danny- what’s he done?
Johnny- that’s what I want to find out he also has a secretary she’s easy to get around Louise Phelps
Jake- we’ll start first thing tomorrow
Johnny- good meet me in the Vic at five
Johnny turned and walked out
Danny shut the door – what was all that about
Jake- I don’t know but I think we’ll find out

[Rach33]

Kerrie opened her eyes and quietly crept out of bed she could hear Will downstairs
She heard the letterbox go and knew the post had arrived
Will- what the...
Kerrie smiled
Kerrie headed out onto a landing
Kerrie- is everything ok babes
Will- everything is fine
Kerrie- shall I make you some breakfast?
Will- thanks I need to make some calls give me 20 minutes
Kerrie- ok
She headed to the kitchen and put the radio on and Cyndi Lauper’s Girls Just Want To Have Fun belted out
Kerrie laughed as she started cooking her husband’s breakfast

Jake crept out of the Queen Vic later than planned that morning and he was soon spotted by eagle eyed neighbours
Jake looked up at the window and saw Chrissie watching him he smiled and she smiled back
He jogged over to the house and let himself in

Dennis climbed out of bed and pulled on his jeans he needed some milk
It was a hot day so he pulled on his shirt and left the flat
Women turned and stared as he did up the buttons revealing his torso
Zoë watched him green with envy once upon a time he’d been hers now he couldn’t even look at her
Dennis entered the minute mart and grabbed the milk
Stacey- your looking pleased with yourself
Dennis- what can I say it’s gonna be a beautiful day today
Stacey- so what’s her name then anyone I know
Dennis- not yet no see you later and keep the change
Stacey smiled and watched him leave

Kerrie sat in her Porsche watching her husband deliver another three hundred grand to the meeting point the near mention of her father and he paid how sickening she hated weak men
She re-applied her lipstick and waited for him to leave
A young lad grabbed the bag and got in a taxi
Kerrie dialled a number
Kerrie- Lee get out at the tube then get on a tube to Walford I’ll meet you in the Bridge Street Café on Albert Square
Kerrie sped off towards Albert Square

Jake and Danny entered the Vic
Johnny- sit down boys
Jake- we didn’t find out much his secretary is definitely sleeping with him
Danny- he had a big deal going down with a bloke named Harry Jenson but cancelled at the last minute
Jake- he was robbed earlier in the week with nearly six hundred grand gone disappeared without a trace
Danny- and according to his secretary Mr. King is leaving his 25 year old wife she even showed us the divorce papers he’s sent off for
Johnny- now that is interesting
Danny- what I can’t understand is what a 25 year old blonde doing with an ageing fossil like Will King I mean there’s what 30 plus years between them
Jake- does it matter
Danny- I’m just saying
Jake- well don’t
Johnny- this Harry Jenson how much was the deal worth
Jake- more than you can imagine

Kerrie sat in the café with another bag full of money
Dennis entered and quickly went over
Dennis- sorry I got held up
Kerrie- I want you to take this bag to the lock-up until it’s safe
Dennis- is Will suspicious
Kerrie- no not at all call me
She walked out while Dennis grabbed the bag and headed towards the flat
Dennis arrived at the lock-up and dumped the bag well hidden at the back with the others so if her dad decided to make a rare visit hopefully he wouldn’t find them
Kerrie pulled up outside the lock-up and lifted another bag on to her lap
Dennis climbed in
Kerrie- how good are you at putting up posters
Dennis- I don’t know let’s find out
Kerrie- we’re covering his businesses, a couple of my dad’s ok
Dennis- give me a list then
Kerrie handed a piece of paper
Dennis scanned the list and nodded
Kerrie- take the BMW it’s parked outside the Bookies I’ll drop you off there
Dennis nodded
Kerrie- and I’m going home to hand deliver the pictures to my dad, myself, his business associates, his mother and a couple of newspapers
Dennis- let’s go
Kerrie started the engine- oh and in the BM there’s some stuff that will help the pictures stick
Dennis- keys
Kerrie- in the front pocket of the bag
They sped off

[Torrie]

Heheh, Will should definitely be worried! Can't wait to see his reaction!

[Layne]

sorry i ain't replyed before just read it now AMAZING i wonder whats going to happen
More asap
Luv ya Layne
xxx

[Layne]

I know this ain't anything to do with the scripts but TORRIE how did you get that picture uo(mine always says TOO BIG) And how/where did you get it?Its got your name on how???Sorry i was just wonderin'
Thnkx
luv ya
Layne
xxx

[di marco]

wow your scripts fab! cant wait for the next parts. is johnny allen related to kerrie (maybe her rich dad) or has links to her in some way? hope we get to know how dennis knows her too. just read most of the parts one after the other - great!

[Torrie]

Sorry to Joel Beckett Lover for going all off topic here - though you already know I think this script is fab!

I made the picture along the bottom of my posts myself using Paint Shop Pro and added the text and everything to it - I wasn't sure what size image was allowed on this site so I just kept it the same as I use on another site and there doesn't seem to be a problem with it!