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    Smile Deception

    This is a story after Dennis has returned and n-one knows the truth about him and Zoe ok

    Kerrie opened the door to her silver Porsche, her blonde hair rested gently on her shoulders, she was wearing a vibrant long red coat, black loose trousers and stiletto heel black boots
    She shut and locked the door to her car before walking across the Square heading to the Queen Vic
    The doors to the pub swung open as the pretty blonde headed over to the bar, people drinking stopped and stared
    Chrissie- what can I get you
    Kerrie- an orange juice please
    Chrissie- that’ll be £1.80 please
    Kerrie handed over a five pound note
    Kerrie- keep the change
    She sipped her drink as she looked at her watch her eyes glanced at the door
    She took a cigarette out of a packet in her bag and lit it
    Kerrie smoked her cigarette in silence the doors opened and Kerrie looked up and smiled
    Kerrie- well you’re a sight for sore eyes
    Dennis grinned and kissed Kerrie on the cheek
    Dennis- so what brings you to my humble abode I thought we were meeting tomorrow?
    Kerrie- I got inpatient
    Dennis- that’s not like you now is it
    Kerrie- what are you implying Mr. Rickman
    Dennis- I’m not implying anything Mrs. King
    Kerrie grinned
    Dennis- are you all set
    Kerrie- well I am are you
    Dennis handed her a key and an envelope
    Dennis- this will get you the plans
    Kerrie smiled- think of the money
    Dennis- you mean think of the look on his face when he realises someone has nicked a few hundred grand from him
    Kerrie- well he’ll never suspect his loving wife will he but this is just the beginning I’m gonna take him to the cleaners
    Dennis- remind me why you married him again
    Kerrie- love darling
    Dennis- you hate him
    Kerrie- oh all right money but I put up quite a performance on my wedding day I even cried because I was so happy, more like sick at the thought of being married to him for the rest of my life
    Dennis- now that I would have paid to see
    Kerrie laughed
    Kerrie- well with this robbery he’ll lose a lot of dough next stop will be blackmail I think I’ll need some incriminating pictures of him with his secretary
    Dennis- he’s banging her is he
    Kerrie- oh yes caught them ages ago he doesn’t know that I know though but if he doesn’t pay I’m gonna humiliate him big style
    Dennis- how
    Kerrie- well lets just say pictures like the ones I’m gonna get can end up anywhere really I mean imagine if they accidentally got put in his office or sent to my dad or even myself I mean newspapers could get hold of them nasty blackmailers could poster them around town it could be terrible and I would obviously be devastated
    Dennis- obviously I mean you poor long suffering wife
    Kerrie- exactly and if my father saw them well he’ll be long gone that’s for sure and I’ll be a rich widower
    Dennis- or he don’t die but…
    Kerrie- what
    Dennis- you steal every single one of his businesses and leave him a lonely man
    Kerrie- I like it
    Dennis- well the wicked step-mother is giving me the evils so I better get to work
    Kerrie- I’ll see you later
    Dennis- call me
    Kerrie- will do
    She turned and walked out
    Chrissie- old flame
    Dennis- how did you guess?
    Chrissie- you’re still late for your shift
    Dennis- how about I stay a bit later help you out after hours make up for it
    Chrissie- all right sweet talker but don’t expect me to let you off so easily next time
    Dennis- as if but…
    Chrissie- but what why is there always a but where your concerned
    Dennis- can I work tomorrow and have Thursday off got a card game planned with a couple of mates
    Chrissie- all right but you do tomorrow afternoon as well as the evening
    Dennis- I think I can manage that obviously the stories are true
    Chrissie- what stories
    Dennis- Cinderella you know the wicked step-mother
    Chrissie- you’d look good in a frock
    Dennis- you do a mean stare
    Chrissie- we do have a cellar you know I could lock you in it
    Dennis- I thought Cinderella was locked in the attic but the offer is tempting
    Chrissie- you do know your fairytales don’t you
    Dennis- what can I say I have a lot of free time?
    Chrissie- maybe a double shift will put a stop to that
    Pauline- I hate to interrupt you two
    Her voice dripped with sarcasm as Dennis rolled his eyes
    Dennis- what can I get you Pauline a dry sherry or how about something with a bit more kick a bitter lemon?
    Chrissie tried to hide her smile
    Pauline- you’re just like your father
    Dennis- your usual then
    He served Pauline
    Chrissie headed down to the bar where the Moon brothers were waiting to be served
    Jake- usual please Chrissie
    Chrissie- coming up
    Jake- you seem to be coping well since your husband left
    Chrissie- well you know how it is men are men see a bit of skirt and their mind goes into over drive
    Jake- well you know if you ever need cheering up
    Chrissie- what are you doing tomorrow then
    Jake- you always this forward
    Chrissie- do you always ask this many questions
    Danny picked up his drink
    Danny- I’ll leave you to it shall I
    Jake didn’t notice his brother heading to Alfie and nana
    Danny- sorry about that I think he’s pulled
    Alfie- Chrissie
    Nana- poor thing hasn’t her husband just left her
    Danny- yes nana with some twenty something apparently god knows why if I had someone like that for a wife I’d stay at home everyday
    Alfie- what about Sam
    Danny- what can I say Sam’s great but well…?
    Alfie- your brain belongs elsewhere
    Danny- ha ha
    Jake- all right tomorrow night I’d like that a lot
    Chrissie- I could do with a good night out
    Jake smiled- I think I can manage that

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    Cool - think I'd cope well too if I could trade Den in for Jake, lol!

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    Glad you like it I'll post some more (Totally agree about Jake)

    Kerrie sat at home on the sofa sipping the glass of white wine
    When the door opened and her husband walked in
    Will- hello sweetheart
    Kerrie- hi babes good day
    Will- I’ve had better saw your dad today he wants us to go over at the weekend to his new gaff what do you reckon
    Kerrie- we’ll see anyway you better have a shower and I’ll order Indian or Chinese
    Will- Indian please
    Kerrie- coming up
    She watched her husband climb the stairs to there eight bed roomed house
    Kerrie listened intently waiting for the shower to turn on
    Kerrie grabbed her phone and dialled a number
    Kerrie- it’s me
    A smile spread across her face, faze one was complete

    The next evening Chrissie and Jake stood outside the Queen Vic laughing their heads off over Danny’s failed attempt to chat up a couple of women
    Jake- sorry I had to bring him he got stood up wouldn’t shut up
    Chrissie- that’s ok he really does think he’s god gifts doesn’t he
    Danny walked over holding his cheek
    Danny- she slapped me
    Jake- why
    Danny- I said she had the most beautiful pair of…
    Jake- no wonder she slapped you Muppet
    Danny- I’ll leave you two to it shall I
    Jake- finally you get the message
    Danny grinned and walked off back to the house
    Jake- thanks for tonight and I’m sorry about Danny
    Chrissie- you’ve already said that
    Chrissie lent towards Jake and kissed him
    Chrissie- do you fancy a coffee
    Jake- a coffee would be great
    Chrissie kissed him again and led him to back gate
    As they walked through the cellar Chrissie’s eyes gazed down briefly before she turned to Jake and smiled
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    imagination is a beautiful thing

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    Isn't it just he he

    It was a bright Thursday morning Kerrie awoke with a smile on her face
    She saw the note pinned on her pillow
    Kerrie- see you tonight love more than ever Will
    Kerrie laughed
    She got out her mobile and dialled a number
    Kerrie- Dennis are we all set fantastic I’ll meet you at the usual place six thirty ok see you then
    She hung up then flicked through her phonebook in her phone she stopped at dad for a brief second, no she'd call him later
    Kerrie threw her phone on the floor with a sigh

    Jake opened his eyes he looked across at the woman next to him she seemed so peaceful
    Jake gently stroked a curl from her face before climbing out of bed pulling on his boxers and jeans
    He opened the fridge door and pulled out the milk, the kettle clicked and Jake poured the boiling water into two mugs before heading back to the bedroom
    He placed a mug on the bedside table next to Chrissie before climbing into bed the other side
    Chrissie opened one eye and smiled
    Chrissie- small problem
    Jake- and what might that be
    Chrissie- well Mr. Moon you seem to be still wearing your trousers
    Jake grinned and lent over to kiss her
    Chrissie pulled away slightly
    Chrissie- by the way thanks for the tea
    She placed her arm around his neck and pulled him gently towards her

    Kerrie opened her wardrobe door as she pulled out her favourite black trousers, black boots and a white plunge neck t-shirt and threw them onto the bed
    After Kerrie was dressed she left the house and headed to a café
    She sat next to a youngish man
    Kerrie- Mr. Davies have you proof that my husband is cheating on me
    Mr. Davies- I’m very sorry Mrs. King
    She handed him an envelope of cash and took the photos off him
    Kerrie- and the negatives
    Mr. Davies handed her another envelope Kerrie examined the negatives carefully before bursting into tears and running out
    As she sat in her Porsche Kerrie delicately reapplied her make-up before driving off to Albert Square

    Alfie- morning sleep well did we?
    Danny- fine thanks
    Alfie- where’s Jake
    Danny- dirty stop out didn’t come home but I’ll give you one guess where he is
    Alfie- not the Vic by any chance
    Danny- got it in one classy bird aint she not sure bout the hair though I mean won’t it get in the way
    Alfie- oh shut up you plank
    Danny- I was just saying
    Alfie grabbed a piece of toast and went to walk out
    Alfie- don’t forget I need you to cover me at the stall at three I’m taking Nana for her check-up all right
    Danny- I’ll be there
    Alfie- well you better be
    Alfie walked out

    It was time to open the pub and Jake left Chrissie’s through the side entrance and walked straight into Dennis
    Dennis- watch where you going
    Jake- sorry what can I say I aint slept much
    Dennis- if you hurt her in any way I’ll kill ya otherwise look after her Den hurt her don’t make the same mistake
    Jake looked at Dennis surprised
    Jake- I’ll look after her
    Dennis half smiled and walked past him and into the pub

    Kerrie grabbed her black coat off the passenger seat and slammed the door shut she glanced around the square before heading to the bookies knowing Dennis would be there
    Dennis left the pub and saw Kerrie heading his way and caught up with her
    Dennis- I thought we were meeting later
    Kerrie- I’ve got something to show you shall we go into the office at the bookies
    Dennis- come on then
    Inside Pat was behind the counter handing over some cash to a lucky winner
    Pat- morning
    Dennis- morning Pat
    Pat smiled she liked working for Dennis at the least he was straight well straighter than Andy that was for sure
    Dennis shut the office door
    Kerrie showed him the pictures
    Dennis- I can’t wait for these to be posted up all over the place imagine his face
    Kerrie- my mates gonna sort them out for me I better go six thirty
    Dennis- I’ll be there I promise
    Kerrie smiled and left
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    This is great - liked the little mention of Kerrie touching up her make-up once she got out to the car, she seems like a cool customer! And Jake and Chrissie - awww! LOL at Danny getting slapped before and calling Jake a dirty stop out!

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    Oh she is very cold believe me

    Jake entered the pub later that day
    Chrissie- hi
    Jake- usual please
    He grinned
    Chrissie- what
    Jake- any chance of a repeat performance
    Chrissie- you’re keen
    Jake- what can I say
    Chrissie- you go upstairs give me five minutes
    Jake walked through the back door and up the stairs
    Chrissie- Tracey can you cope for half an hour I need to make a few phone calls
    Tracey- I’ll be fine
    Chrissie smiled and headed upstairs

    Dennis looked at his watch it was half six he sat waiting for Kerrie a black BMW pulled into the car park
    Kerrie opened the window
    Kerrie- jump in them Angel we’ve got work to do
    Dennis- you’re late
    Kerrie- sorry you know what traffic is like this time of night
    Dennis- let’s go
    He climbed in and they drove off
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    Early Friday morning Kerrie opened her eyes she looked across at her husband sleeping next to her and an evil smile crept across her lips
    The phone rang Kerrie sat up and picked up the phone
    Kerrie- hello what yeah I’m Mrs. King yeah hold on
    Kerrie shook her husband awake
    Kerrie- Will it’s the cops
    Will sleepily opened his eyes and took the phone
    Will- what your having a laugh aren’t ya
    Kerrie smirked as he rushed out pulling on his trousers
    Kerrie- babes what’s up?
    Will- I’ve got to go there’s been a robbery
    Kerrie watched out of her bedroom window running to the car
    Kerrie phoned her dad
    Kerrie- dad Will’s been robbed do you know anything about it yeah I’ll meet you there bye
    She quickly dressed and left

    Dennis stood in the bookie’s office staring at the two black bags under his desk he grabbed them and walked out
    Kerrie opened her Porsche door in the middle of the Square and everyone stared as Dennis climbed in and they sped off
    Kerrie- it was priceless Dennis his face now let’s put this money somewhere safe until the time is right
    Dennis- you really enjoyed it didn’t you
    Kerrie- yep and now for the next thing blackmail oh and I saw my dad this morning you know acting the worried wife routine he’s lent me ten grand so that can pay for all the legal work and stuff
    Dennis- having a rich daddy does come in handy
    Kerrie- what can I say my daddy loves me
    Dennis- but would he still love you if he knew what you were doing
    Kerrie- dad hates Will if he finds out he’ll be glad
    Dennis- just be careful
    Kerrie- I’m always careful
    Dennis-well you need to keep out of his way in Walford cos if he sees you
    Kerrie- I am being careful
    Dennis- so what are you gonna do with all this dough
    Kerrie- put it somewhere safe somewhere that no-one will ever think to look
    Dennis- where
    Kerrie- just trust me yeah
    Dennis nodded

    Chrissie pulled her top back on smiling as Jake lay watching her
    Jake- what are you doing tonight
    Chrissie- I don’t know what are you doing tonight
    Jake- seeing this gorgeous girl sex on legs owns her pub every bloke wants her including me but I’m the one who’s got her
    Chrissie- is that right and this gorgeous girl do I know her
    Jake- oh I think you do
    Chrissie- I’ll call you when I’ve managed to chuck my punters out
    Jake- shall I chuck them out now and then we can spend the day up here
    Chrissie- I’d love to but not today
    Jake- later then
    Chrissie- yes later
    She kissed him
    Chrissie- I’ve got to go
    Jake- give me ten and I’ll be down
    Chrissie kissed him again and left
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    Awww, Jake & Chrissie are so cute and Kerrie definitely seems to be getting one over on that husband of hers!

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    Downstairs Dennis walked in
    Chrissie- you’re late
    Dennis- I do have a business to run you know
    Chrissie- I saw you
    Johnny walked in and headed for the bar
    Dennis- saw me
    Chrissie- about an hour ago from the upstairs window going off in a Porsche with the blonde who was here the other day
    Dennis- she’s a business associate and anyway you’re working what were you doing looking out of the upstairs window
    Chrissie glared at him
    Dennis- more sessions with Jake Moon
    He grinned
    Chrissie hit him with a tea towel
    Chrissie- sorry Johnny what can I get you
    Johnny- don’t worry I was enjoying it I’ll have a large scotch please
    Dennis- oh look who’s creeping down the stairs don’t tell me there was a spring in your bed that was broke and he fixed it
    He smiled mischievously as Jake let himself out of the back door
    Chrissie- shut up Dennis go and find something useful to do like change the barrel
    Dennis- you don’t need me to do that when you’ve got Jake
    Chrissie- oh just shut up your worse than a five year old

    Jake pushed the gate and stepped out into the sunshine
    Johnny- so that’s where you’ve been hiding
    Jake- erm yeah Chrissie
    Johnny- I don’t want to hear it, whatever you do in your own time is up to you but on my time you work so get to work
    Jake placed his hands in his pockets and strolled off
    Johnny shook his head and smiled, what it was to be young again
    He watched a silver Porsche drive away from Albert Square the car looked strangely familiar
    Johnny shook his head and walked on

    Kerrie arrived outside a run down shop she strolled in
    Kerrie- Paul come on talk to me Paul
    Paul- alright sexy
    Kerrie- are they ready
    Paul- three thousand pictures are all yours
    Kerrie- you’re an angel
    She counted him out his cash
    Kerrie- six grand like we agreed and if it works another four
    Paul nodded
    Kerrie kissed him on the cheek
    Kerrie- and remember not a word because my father let you off lightly last time
    Paul- lips sealed tight
    Kerrie- good
    She left with her bag full of pictures well they were for tomorrow night and tonight she was going to act the dutiful loving and devoted wife

    Dennis looked across the bar at Chrissie and smiled
    Chrissie- what
    Dennis- I didn’t say a word look I’m sorry all right if Jake makes you happy then go for it
    Chrissie- it’s just a bit of fun something I need right now
    Dennis- well have fun and smile then
    Chrissie- go on get lost go and run your bookies
    Dennis- yes m’lady
    Chrissie- you daft git
    She laughed as Dennis bowed and left
    Johnny- he seems to have perked up a bit
    Chrissie- he’s hurting he just hides it well that’s what happens when your father destroys you
    Johnny- what did Den do to him that was so terrible?
    Chrissie- not for me to tell you it’s up to him maybe he’ll talk to you cos he sure as hell won’t talk to me every time I bring it up he says he doesn’t want to worry me and I’ve got enough to deal with
    Johnny- he’s right
    Chrissie- he might not be my flesh and blood but I’m the only family he’s got
    Johnny- I’ll have a word
    Chrissie- thanks Johnny
    Dot wandered in
    Dot- oh Chrissie is Dennis about
    Chrissie- you’ve just missed him was it important
    Dot- nothing that can’t wait
    Chrissie- has he said anything to you since he got back Dot?
    Dot- not really for me to say Chrissie
    Chrissie- please Dot I’m worried
    Dot- I know he misses Sharon but he won’t call her too stubborn that boy is too like his father I don’t doubt
    Johnny- I’ll have a word maybe he just needs someone to take him under his wing
    Dot- you’re too kind Johnny
    Johnny smiled and left
    Dot- has he not said anything to you Chrissie
    Chrissie- nothing just refuses to open up
    Dot- he will do give him time he’s a man you see not very good at showing their feelings
    Chrissie- you got that right

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