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    All's Fair in Love And War (EE)

    Hello everyone,
    my much awaited script has arrived,(only jokin!)
    If i don't reply, its because i'm still writing it!

    I know the title is rubbish but hey i tried!
    Short bit for now, more in a bit!



    This is for you Rachel!!!



    A black Cab pulled up outside 43b Albert Square, Dennis and Zoë’s old flat.
    The door opened and out stepped a gorgeous women, she was in a red low cut halter top which over the top she wore a white see-throughy blouse unbuttoned tied in a knot at front, mini skirt and high Red Wedge shoes, the outfit was perfect it showed off her gorgeous curvy body and her natural tan. She was a brunette with soft flowing curls just past her shoulders.
    She paid the cab driver and he drove off.
    Women * to herself *: So this is the brilliant Walford,
    She looked around she obviously wasn’t to impressed with the place
    Last edited by Layne; 01-05-2005 at 19:33.

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    Who is she and thanks babes I'm loving it already please post more as soon as
    Thanks Jessie Wallace For My Fab Banner

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    Glad ya like it!
    You'll find out who she is soon!

    She started walking towards the Vic, she fumbled in her bag for something then bumped into someone, the contents of her bag went everywhere
    Women: look I’m really sorry; I didn’t look where I was going
    She bent down and started picking her things up
    The person she had bumped into was Alfie
    Alfie: aww, no darlin’ it was all my fault, in a rush to get everywhere
    He bent down started helping her. They both went for her keys and then came up together
    Alfie: <slightly embarrassed> There
    He handed her the keys
    Women: Thanks
    Alfie: Well I mean all in a days work,
    Women: Yeh, started laughing
    Alfie: Right well I’ve got to go nice meeting you…
    Women: Kacey
    Alfie: Nice meeting you Kacey,
    Kacey: Nice meeting you to
    Alfie: Alfie, Alfie Moon,
    Kacey:It was nice to meet you Alfie, Alfie Moon
    Alfie: Alright bye,
    He started walking off towards the market
    Kacey: Oh Alfie hang on a minute
    Kacey ran after him
    Alfie turned round
    Alfie: Yes?
    Kacey: do you know where this place is?
    She pulled a crumpled piece of paper out of her pocket, on it was an address she showed Alfie
    Alfie: yeh darlin’ its just straight on three houses in, the one with the black door
    Kacey: ok, thanks a lot, see you around
    She walked off in the direction Alfie had just told her to go
    She looked down at the piece of paper, it read:
    5 Albert Square, Walford,
    There was a phone number underneath but she didn’t have the bottle to ring it, it had been a good few years since…

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    OH MY GAWD does she know Johnny oh postively mysterious please post more sooooon

    Luv ya loads
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    It drags on a bit, this script, the best bit is like near the end!
    So it will get better!
    Sorry its in short bits, i have t make it last as i'm still writing some of it!

    This is for you rachel, because so far your the only one reading it! And because i luv ya!

    She found it Number 5, she stood there for a while, just staring at the black door.
    Kacey* to Herself*: I have to do this it’s now or never
    She started walking up the stairs, she got to the top. She was just about to knock when the door flew open
    Johnny: Hello, can I help
    Kacey: Ummm, yes, Is Chrissie in?
    Johnny: Chrissie?
    Kacey: Yeh, Chrissie Watts, this is where she lives, ain’t it?
    Johnny: No, she used to live her with her husband, but she lives in the pub now, The Queen Victoria
    Kacey: Oh right sorry to bother you Mr…
    Johnny: Allen, Johnny Allen
    Kacey: Allen? * puzzled*
    Johnny: Yeh
    Kacey looked at him, and stared into his eyes
    Kacey:Ok, thanks sorry to bother you!
    She turned and started to walk down the steps
    Johnny ran after her,he put his hand on her shoulder causing her to turn round
    Johnny:Have we met before?
    Kacey: No, No not that I can remember
    Johnny: Sorry, its just you seem familiar
    Kacey:Its ok
    She walked off towards the pub
    Johnny shook his head and jumped into his car, he drove past Kacey and waved.

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    OHHHHHHHH even better she knows the formidable Mrs Watts and recognised Johnny I'm hooked babes this is top stuff well worth the wait

    Luv ya LOADS cos you posted this for me
    Thanks Jessie Wallace For My Fab Banner

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    Aww, thanks babe, i'm so glad ya like it everything MIGHT become clear soon!

    Her ya go for you because I luv ya More!!

    Kacey got to the Vic, she stood there, she knew for definite she was here, she was having the same feelings she had back outside Johnny’s house, there were people going in and out, it was obviously a good boozer. She looked around, she then looked back at the pub doors,
    Kacey: Not yet
    She turned and walked away

    Kacey’s phone starts ringing, she reaches into her pocket and answers it
    Kacey: Hello
    Mystery Man: Hey Sexy, how are you?
    A smile appeared on Kacey’s face
    Kacey: Oh its you, I’m fine babe, well there is one thing bothering me
    MM: And whats that?
    Kacey:Being away from you!
    MM: Well I miss you too babes, where are you now, still in Manchester?
    Kacey: Uhhhh, no
    MM: So where are you then,
    Kacey: In Walford
    MM: What! I thought we were going to meet there tomorrow, you know together
    Kacey:I know, I know and I’m sorry but I just had to come today.,tell me is everyone always gossiping?
    MM:yeh you won’t have much trouble fitting in!
    Kacey:Yeh nice one!
    MM:Have you seen her?
    Kacey: Seen wh…Oh no not yet but I will do, I mean I’ve got nowhere to stay!
    MM:Yeh that’s going to be a good conversation, Hi we’ve not seen each other in a while can I kip here tonight?
    Kacey: Yeh well,
    MM: and don’t forget, don’t tell anyone who I am, I’ve history round
    Kacey:Yes you’ve told me a thousand times

    All of sudden, Kacey saw two very familiar faces
    She recognised them instantly

    Jake: Yeh Danny, b’coz that’s going to work!
    Danny: well you never know it could
    Jake: Yeh ok then, if it works I’ll snog the queen

    Kacey giggled at the comment, they hadn’t changed!
    Kacey:Yeh babe, look I have to go now, but I miss you
    MM:Yeh, miss you too, Love you
    Kacey:Love you Bye
    She put the phone down and put it back into her pocket, and followed the brothers

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    So she knows Chrissie, the sexy Moon boys and Johnny and who is her mystery man post more soon I can't wait
    Luv ya cos this script is brill and your da best
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    Thnkx!!Yeh she knows alot of people!! You'll find out who her mystery man is soon!!!
    your so nice to me, my script ain't that good, i'm goignt o have to stop postiing soon or writing quicker, i'm running out of script!!!
    Yor Are Offically my Number 1 fan!
    So this is for you because your my SPECIAL friend!!
    Luv ya Lots xxx



    Jake and Danny were now walking through the gardens
    Danny:I’ll hold you to that
    Jake:hold me to what?
    Danny:Snogging the queen
    Jake:Well I’ve always had a sof…..

    Kacey had caught up, she was right behind them
    Kacey:Small world,this is ain’t it?

    Jake & Danny turned round
    Kacey:Hello boys!
    Jake:Kac is that you?
    Kacey:Yeh
    Danny:Oh my god
    he hugged her
    Kacey:Been a while right?
    Jake:You can say that again
    Jake gave her a hug to.
    Jake: so what you doing in Walford?
    Kacey: Could ask you the same question?
    Danny: well it’s a really long story, firstly….
    Jake: Danny,
    Danny: Sorry, uhh , we’ve family here, a cousin and nana!
    Kacey:Its Alfie right?
    Jake:Yeh how do you know?
    Kacey: we met earlier, but don’t worry he doesn’t know who I am, or that I know you two!
    Jake: Anyway I though you were in spain?
    Kacey: Yeh, well I was, but I’ve been back in England for a while now!
    Danny: But why?
    Kacey: Why, I don’t know really, I guess my family
    Jake: Yeh but I thought you said didn’t have any
    Kacey: No, I said that my dad had left when I was young, my mum had died, but that don’t mean I don’t have any family, I thought you two would of realised that being BROTHERS and all?
    Danny: Oh, so you’ve got a brother?
    Jake and Kacey looked at each other and laughed
    Danny: What?
    Kacey: You boys ain’t changed, but somehow Danny I think you may have got more stupider!
    Jake: I don’t think that is possible!
    Danny: Hang on a minute before you go taking the Mick! You didn’t answer the question Kac, Do you have any brothers or sisters?
    Kacey: Yeh I have, didn’t you guys meet my brothers in spain?
    Jake: Yeh we may of done, what were there names?
    Kacey: Jason and Lewis
    Jake and danny looked at each other
    Danny: No doesn’t rinf any….
    Jake: No actually I think we did meet them, yeh we did, they were nice!
    Kacey: Oh Jake , I din’t know you felt that way, I mean they are my brothers
    Jake:Not like that
    Kacey:I know, I know, I was just teasing!
    Danny: so Kacey….
    Last edited by Layne; 01-05-2005 at 21:45.

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    This is great!
    Sorry, I couldn't post before because I was out all day.
    Post more soon
    Thanks for the AMAZING banner Layneykins!

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