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Thread: Sequel To Deception - Moving On

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    I have been neglecting this script and I am very sorry i'm a very bad person i know

    Well here I am anther part to my story enjoy and very sowwie to all my readers I am building up to the finale and I promise you it's got a lot of twists and turns Thank you again

    Special thanks to Layne your a star and always reply so this ones for you

    Kerrie climbed out the car with Noah carrying their newborn daughter, she was exhausted and slightly concerned, Louise was out to get her at all costs, no matter who got hurt
    Noah- you ok gorgeous
    Kerrie flashed him one of her smiles but he saw through it very quickly
    Noah- just relax I’ll protect angel I promise she can’t hurt us anymore we’re a family
    Kerrie- I know it’ll be fine
    Kerrie knew deep down this was one fight Louise was not giving up on, she was coming after her and there was nothing she could do about it, except wait

    Chrissie- no I said I wanted… oh never mind
    She slammed the phone down, bloody florists
    Jake- problem
    Chrissie- nope where’s our daughter
    Jake- being smothered by Pat downstairs
    Chrissie- well she can keep her for now because I have to go through these with you
    Jake- what
    Chrissie- commitment vows dumb ass
    Jake- who you calling a dumb ass, dumb ass’s girlfriend
    Chrissie grinned, he could always put a smile on her face
    Chrssie- well what do you want to say
    Jake- dunno what do you want me to say
    Chrissie- how commited you are Blah! Blah! And all that
    Jake- I am commited
    Chrissie- ohhhhhhh just go away I’ll write it go on your useless
    Jake- but you still love me even though I’m useless
    Chrissie- I’ll think about it
    Jake kissed her gently on her nose before walking out

    Sharon and Dennis stood outside the hospital unable to let the news sink in properly
    Sharon- can you believe it
    Dennis shook his head unable to speak
    He took Sharon’s face in his hands and kissed her, both had tears streaming down their faces
    Sharon- I love you
    Dennis- I know god I love you too
    He kissed her again clinging to her, not wanting to let her go
    Sharon- what she we tell everyone
    Dennis- whatever you want to tell them
    Sharon- nothing for now this is our secret, it’s our time to celebrate
    Dennis- I bloody love you Mrs Rickman
    Sharon took his hands in hers and squeezed them tight before they set off back to Albert Square

    Kerrie- no I’m staying here
    Noah- come on baby just for half an hour people want to meet Evie
    Kerrie- half an hour
    Noah- yep then you can come back here I promise
    Kerrie- all right but I need to put my face on first so give me ten minutes
    Noah smiled- ten minutes try twenty
    Kerrie glared at her husband
    Noah- I was joking
    Kerrie- funny ha ha
    Half an hour later they left the flat and headed over to the Vic
    As they crossed the Square a familiar face was watching from the shadows
    Last edited by Rach33; 16-04-2006 at 18:32.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Joel_Beckett_Lover
    I have been neglecting this script and I am very sorry i'm a very bad person i know

    Well here I am anther part to my story enjoy and very sowwie to all my readers I am building up to the finale and I promise you it's got a lot of twists and turns Thank you again

    Special thanks to Layne your a star and always reply so this ones for you
    1. yes you are a very bad person!
    2. Yay another part but what a finale No you can't end it it must go on forever i love this fic, (but yey twists and turns)
    and
    3. Aww thanks honey I do love this fic!!!

    Evil louise Grrrrrrrr, but how cute are jake and chrissie And what news have sharon and dennis got prae thee tell?

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    yay yay yay you posted more. Ooooooh it'a all happening i'm so glad we're having a ******* ****!!! hehe she'll probably kill me if i actually wirte it down. post more soon, pretty pwease
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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