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Thread: Sequel To Deception - Moving On

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    this is really good carry on soon

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    wow this is fab more asap hun

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    amazing clap clap. more more more
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    yay you did some more!!!!!
    its well good!

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    Sorry for the wait and thanks for the replies

    Louise- your making a huge mistake
    Kerrie- no you made the huge mistake when you screwed with my life
    Louise- I loved him I can’t help that
    Kerrie- love him..he was a creep who got what he deserved I’m not sorry he’s dead
    Louise- yes you are I know you are death wasn’t what you wanted for him, you wanted him to suffer when he killed himself that made you hate him even more he’d taken the cowards way out hadn’t he
    Kerrie stood back reeling
    Louise- hit a nerve sweetie
    Kerrie raised the gun and pointed it at her rival’s head
    Kerrie- don’t push it
    Louise- shoot me go on I dare you you’ve already taken away everything from me why not my life
    Kerrie- oh please let me get out the violins
    Louise- like I said Kerrie just get on with it
    Kerrie wiped the tears from her eyes and dropped the gun to the floor and ran out, she felt sick, she couldn’t do it, she couldn’t kill her
    Running back home Kerrie rushed to the bathroom and threw up
    Meanwhile over at Louise’s flat she smiled menaceingly
    Louise- oh Kerrie you just haven’t got the stomach for murder have you but if you can’t I will
    Picking up the gun she tossed it over into nearby bin she was gonna make it slow and painful after all it was the least she deserved

    Kerrie composed herself and made her way across the Square to the party
    Noah noticed her the minute she walked in and his first thoughts of anger changed to worry he’d seen that look on her face before and he knew something wasn’t right
    Noah pushed through the crowd and took his wife’s hands they were freezing cold
    Noah- Hun are you ok
    She looked at him and nodded
    Noah- let’s go home come on
    Taking his pregnant wife more firmly this time he led her out of the pub and home
    Noah- what happened
    Kerrie- nothing everything is fine now

    Three Months past with a blur as Kerrie tried to put Louise and that night firmly behind her
    Now as she lay in hospital cradling her newborn daughter she knew she’d made the right decision
    Kerrie didn’t want to bring up her baby with a murder hanging over her
    Noah- you did brilliantly sweetheart
    Kerrie- thanks she’s beautiful isn’t she
    Noah- she sure is Evie Grace King has a nice ring to it
    Kerrie- I know it does I chose it remember
    Noah- and here was me thinking it was a joint decision
    Kerrie- no I came up with the names honey and you just agreed
    Noah- so I helped make the decision
    Kerrie- I hardly call saying yes to a name making a decision
    Noah- do we have to argue now it’s suppose to be the happiest day of our lives
    Kerrie- whose arguing
    Noah sighed and kissed his wife’s forehead
    Noah- I love you despite everything
    Kerrie- you mean me being right all he time
    Noah- something like that
    Kerrie smiled

    Jake- hey baby just had a call from Noah a healthy baby girl
    Chrissie- whoopee do for her I wish I had gone into labour by now but no I still have to lug this weight around
    Jake kissed Chrissie
    Jake- you look radiant
    Chrissie threw the teatowel she was holding at him
    Chrissie- radiant I look radiant well thanks a bunch next you’ll be saying I’m glowing or blossoming or just a great big fat whale
    Jake tried not to smile as Chrissie stormed off hormonal really wasn’t the word
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    at chrissie and jake!
    This is fab as always more sooon
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    wow thats fab hun more soon x.x.x.x

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    Smile

    I'm back and thanks for reading

    Chrissie- I was thinking babes we could have a huge sort of marque in the Square
    Jake- yeah I guess we could are you sure you want all this fuss I mean the twins haven’t even arrived yet and your planning our commitment ceremony
    Chrissie- I have to plan now before I’m swamped in nappies, talcum powder and formula milk
    Jake- ok Miss Smarty Pants and don’t forget our daughter’s first birthday in two weeks times
    Chrissie- oh please not more parties can’t we just have a few people over and be done with it
    Jake- course we can my angel in fact I’ll sort that out and you carry on with our ceremony plans
    Chrissie- you’re an angel…oh and go and see Noah find out what he wants for Evie and Kerrie’s welcome home party
    Jake- what now
    Chrissie- yes now before you forget
    Jake- yes captain right away captain
    Chrissie- I hope you haven’t forgotten that we still have a spare room if you fancy sleeping there tonight
    Jake- I’m off before I really put my foot in it
    Chrissie- good idea
    Jake left and Chrissie sat down to make some phone calls
    Chrissie- ouch
    These two were certainly kicking a lot today
    Chrissie- pack it in the pair of you I have a million things to do today

    Sharon- exciting isn’t it a new baby on the square
    Dennis- it sure is
    They were sitting in a hospital corridor
    Sharon- I’m nervous
    Dennis- it will be fine trust me
    Sharon- and what if it’s not
    Dennis- baby listen everything will be fine
    Sharon- I hope so I don’t know how much more of this I can take
    Dennis kissed his wife’s delicate hand and squeezed it tight
    Dennis- we’re a team me and you we get through everything together
    Sharon- I know

    Kerrie- look I’ve been in this place a week now I feel fine I look dreadful and the food’s crap
    Nurse- you can go home tomorrow you and baby
    Kerrie- I should hope so by the time I get out of this place no doubt I’ll have picked up some deadly disease and be back in here before I know it
    Nurse- can you keep your voice down Mrs King your scaring the other patients
    Kerrie- whoppee doo
    Nurse- if you can’t keep a civil tongue
    Noah- my wife not causing you grief is she
    Nurse- she’s frightening the other mums
    Noah- I’m sure she is looking like that
    Kerrie- oh charming
    Noah- well pumpkin the no make up look and the hospital nightie look really isn’t you
    Kerrie- if you open your mouth one more time I will personally see that you never ever re-produce again
    Noah- is that a promise
    Nurse- Mr and Mrs King if you don’t mind
    Kerrie- I can leave tomorrow thank goodness
    Noah- what tomorrow are you sure
    Nurse- very sure believe me
    Noah- that’s a pity I had a card game planned
    Kerrie- don’t even joke about that Noah King or I will……
    Noah- what
    He bent down and kissed her firmly
    Kerrie wrapped her arms around him
    Noah- what will you do Mrs King
    Kerrie- now that would be telling
    She pulled him closer and kissed him again

    Louise entered the hospital and soon found the maternity ward
    Louise caught a nurse
    Louise- could you give these to Mrs King please
    Nurse- wouldn’t you like to give them to her yourself
    Louise- I can’t stop…just say an old friend dropped by with my deepest sympathies
    Nurse nodded not quite understanding the strange message
    She took the flowers over to where Noah, Kerrie and little baby Evie were
    Nurse- lilies for you Mrs King
    Kerrie- lilies
    Noah- lilies are a funeral flower
    Nurse- I thought they were a strange chioce as well, they don’t just signify death though they are also a symbol of bad luck
    Noah- that’s just as bad who sent them
    Nurse- a woman she said she was an old friend and she said something about sending her deepest sympathies
    Kerrie- give them here
    Kerrie took the flowers and picked out the card and read it
    The colour drained from her face
    Noah- what is it
    He took the card and read the message aloud
    Noah- Tick Tock Kerrie your time is up
    Kerrie- it’s just someone’s idea of a joke
    Noah- no this is serious who sent it
    Kerrie- Louise I put money on it
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    wow thats fab hun i love this script
    post more soon bree x.x.x

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    Grrrr louise!

    But hehe jake and chrissie and Noah and Kerrie!
    More soon honey!

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