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Thread: Sequel To Deception - Moving On

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    post more plz
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    this is fantastic. please post more when you get a chance.

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    Sorry AGAIN for the delay I'm useless I know

    Layne I'm going on January the 11th (My birthday) what about you

    Here I am again with my story thanks for the replies

    When Kerrie opened her eyes the next morning reality hit her Louise was back in town and she meant business
    Turning over she noticed Noah had already gone they’d argued furiously last night
    Kerrie pulled herself out of bed and made her way to the window as she looked out onto the Square she noticed her watching the house
    Despite fuming to herself Kerrie knew she needed to keep a lid on her anger she’d got rid of Louise Phelps once she’d certainly do it again

    Jake- I hear I missed quite a show last night
    Chrissie- you certainly did Kerrie went mental at the poor woman
    Jake- well if I know Kerrie they’ll be more to come
    He grinned and kissed Chrissie before turning to walk out
    Jake- I shouldn’t be too long I just need to go over the books with Johnny
    Chrissie- ok remember hospital appointment at three so you can’t be late
    Jake- wouldn’t miss it for the world
    Chrissie snorted and buttered herself some more toast

    Dennis stared at his fiancé as she desperately tried to finalise their plans for the wedding, the pressures were definitely getting to her and with the added worry of the results if this failed he wasn’t sure how she’d take it but he knew that they’d try again
    Sharon- that was the registry office
    Dennis- what did they want
    Sharon- they’ve had a cancellation and they knew we wanted the wedding to be sooner well I agreed
    Dennis- agreed when for
    Sharon- an hour
    Dennis- an hour you are joking
    Sharon- I’m fed up with all the plans Blah! Blah! Blah! Let’s get wed baby
    He grinned and wrapped his arms around her waist
    Dennis- all right you’re on
    Sharon- well you better get dressed I’m not marrying you in nothing but a pair of boxers
    Dennis- yes ma’am
    He saluted her and strolled off to the bathroom for a quick shower

    Kerrie left the house and made her way across the Square she stopped at where Louise sat on Arthur’s bench
    Kerrie- comfy
    Louise- very
    Kerrie- trust me it won’t last I’ll personally see to it that your as uncomfortable as possible
    She walked away with one plan in mind extinction
    Kerrie dialled a number on her phone
    Kerrie- hi it’s me I have a little problem that I want you to sort out for good…….
    Thanks Jessie Wallace For My Fab Banner

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    What is Kerrie gonna do!
    Post more as soon as you can honey!

    I was going the 7th January but nige said he weren't doing that one so we rearranged and i'm going 25th February now!
    layne
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    yay yay yay you posted... more more more... more more more...
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    yay u posted more woot woot woot

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    brill u posted more. can we have more soon please!!!

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    Smile

    A big thanks and a big sorry for all the readers my new years resolution (A little late I know) will post story more often you can all have a go if I fail to keep my promise

    Story is a bit up and down since both Chrissie and Dennis have disappeared off screen but I hope you enjoy anyway

    That night as people gathered in the pub and giggly and secretive Dennis and Sharon decided to reveal their little secret
    Dennis- me and Sharon have some news...
    There was a pause
    Jake- come on then don’t keep us waiting
    Sharon- today we got married
    There was a stunned gasp then everyone cheered and soon a party was starting

    Kerrie watched from her window and people stayed at the pub partying she couldn’t have asked for a better way to keep everyone out of the Square
    Noah had gone over ages ago they still hadn’t spoken properly since their argument last night he was stubborn ass when he wanted to be
    Reaching for the gun resting on her bed side table she made her way down the stairs and out in the Square she’d had Louise tracked all day and knew exactly where she’d be

    Chrissie and Jake smiled as they watched the happy couple
    Chrissie- I wish we could marry
    Jake- one day angel one day I promise
    He kissed her lightly on her forehead and carried on serving the many punters

    Kerrie knocked on the door to a dingy looking flat and Louise opened the surprise on her face was soon replaced with fear when she saw what Kerrie was holding
    Thanks Jessie Wallace For My Fab Banner

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    Quote Originally Posted by Joel_Beckett_Lover

    Jake- one day angel one day I promise
    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats soooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!
    Fab as always honey! Post more when you can!
    God i have missed you and this script *hugs*
    luv ya
    Layne
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    ooooh go kerrie

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