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Thread: Sequel To Deception - Moving On

  1. #21
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    Your all wonderful I'm glad you like it

    Kerrie and Ruby stood in Kerrie’s front room wearing bright orange dresses
    Kerrie- Tina I thought this was meant to be an improvement on the last one
    Tina started to laugh
    Ruby- we look like a pair of giant oranges all round and orange
    Kerrie- these are worse than the vomit coloured ones and that’s saying something
    Tina- I think we’ll have to start again
    Kerrie- you think if I ever wore this out in the open I’d have to wear a brown paper bag on my head these are embarrassing
    Ruby- can’t we just have a normal colour like black or red
    Kerrie- yeah or just go to a shop with my dad’s credit card and buy a couple of dresses
    Tina- all right we’ll go in a few minutes
    Kerrie- here open this
    She passed Tina a bottle of wine
    Kerrie- I think we’re gonna need it

    Chrissie watched the three men enter
    Chrissie- and what can I get you boys?
    Noah- something mind numbing
    Chrissie- a couple of bottles and an orange juice then
    Johnny- please
    Jake- Lia all right
    Chrissie- yeah she’s spark out
    Jake- and you
    Chrissie- wish I could join her I’m knackered Little Mo had to call in Freddie’s really unwell
    Jake- do you want a hand
    Chrissie- you’ve got your own job to do
    Johnny- you can have him back Chrissie I’ve finished with him today
    Chrissie- thanks Johnny well finish your drink babes and then you can take over and I’ll get some kip
    Jake lent over the bar and kissed her
    The postman entered the pub
    Chrissie- post the highlight of my day thanks Terry
    She took the letter off him
    Chrissie- bills, bills, bills, oh and a letter from Dennis
    She opened it
    Noah- enjoying the Florida sunshine is he
    Chrissie- yeah he is
    Jake- is he coming back
    Chrissie- yeah he and Sharon will be back next week
    Jake- wow eight months away and he’s finally coming back I’ll call Pat and tell her
    Chrissie- thanks
    Noah- she has been running his business for him
    Chrissie- well seen as though you offered pop along and see her will you
    Noah- sure after my drink
    Thanks Jessie Wallace For My Fab Banner

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    This is ace can't wait for Dennis and Sharon to come in to it.

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    This is wicked babes! More asap,
    I've posted my script by the way!!!
    Luv ya
    layne
    x x x

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    great! cant wait til sharon and dennis get back! and those orange dresses sound funny! please post more soon, cant wait
    ~x~Tizzy~x~
    A fool and his money are a girl's best friend


    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    Sorry I couldn't post before!
    I was out all day.
    Wow! This is fab !
    Post more soon please
    Thanks for the AMAZING banner Layneykins!

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    Thanks guys you all wonderful I'm glad you like it

    Ruby- oi
    She felt something wet and cold hit her face
    Tina and Kerrie burst out laughing
    Ruby placed her hand onto her face it was paint bright pink paint
    Ruby saw the tin on the floor near her feet open
    Kerrie- don’t you dare
    Ruby flicked the paint off the paintbrush straight at her sister and it hit her all over the bright orange dress
    Kerrie- you just declared war
    Tina- you better not get me involved in this
    Tina screamed as the paint hit her right in her face
    Kerrie- sorry but it’s too late now
    Tina- right that's it

    Noah- do you think you’ll make an honest woman out of Chrissie then
    Jake- one day maybe what about you and...no offence Johnny...the she-devil
    Johnny- none taken it’s true
    Noah- I don’t know if she goes mad decorating the house imagine what she’d do planning a wedding
    Jake- true she does seem a bit well
    Noah- scary, controlling
    Jake- you took the words right out of my mouth
    Johnny- right well I better find Tina and tell her the honeymoon is booked
    The doors to the pub swung open and the three quite tidally women staggered in Ruby and Kerrie still in their awful dresses but all three covered in paint
    Kerrie- drinks please Chrissie what do you think wedding dresses of the year or what
    Chrissie- nice usual girls
    Tina- we’re off shopping in a bit and Kerrie insisted on wearing them
    Kerrie- oh hello darling like the paint put it to better use oh and I got paint on your favourite shirt whoops silly me
    Noah- cheers babes
    Kerrie- don’t mention it sweetheart
    She sipped her drink
    Kerrie- daddy...
    Johnny- why do I have a feeling I won’t like this
    Kerrie- can I borrow one of your cars to go into town with Tina and Ruby for dresses? Please
    Johnny- not dressed like that
    Kerrie- we'll get changed we just wanted to show off the wonderful colours and the really flattering dresses that make my hips look like I'm a size 22
    Tina- oh go on Johnny please
    Johnny- all right but I’ll drive you
    Kerrie- thanks dad come on Rubes
    They walked out
    Noah- well she seems in a better mood there is hope yet
    Thanks Jessie Wallace For My Fab Banner

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    Ha, this is brill darlin, i'm so glad ya decided to do a sequle!!
    More soon
    luv ya
    Layne
    x x x

    Ps Thnkx for repling to my script, i've posted more!
    Luv ya
    Last edited by Layne; 01-05-2005 at 21:45.

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    Fab as per usual
    Post more soon, it's great!
    Thanks for the AMAZING banner Layneykins!

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    Sorry I haven't been posting but I have SAT's starting tomoro!!!!!!!! It is fab babe, can't wait for the next bit. Loving the dresses as well.
    xxx
    Hiro: ...but you flying man! WHOOOOSSSHHH!
    Nathan: Would you keep it down?
    Hiro: ...whooooosh.

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    great again! really liking the dresses, they should wear them to the wedding lol! please post more soon, cant wait
    ~x~Tizzy~x~
    A fool and his money are a girl's best friend


    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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