Sequel To Deception - Moving On

[Angeldelight]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh there so sweet together. they make a great couple and even better parents, your writing is so fantastic.

where are Sharon and Dennis? are they coming back? they are coming back aren't they? they're not in america right? sorry just want to know there back together AGIAN

[Rach33]

They are I promise just not yet I know I promised and they will be there SOON and it will be explosive for at least three characters

[Layne]

This is BRILL!!!
Sorry i only just realised that you'd posted it!
I feel so bad for not repling yet!
This is very very very good tho, i'm loving Jake and Chrissie!!!!!!Together!!!!!
With a baby!!!!!

How cute!!!
Post more soon
Luv ya
Layne
x x x

Sorry for not repling again!

[di marco]

absolutely fantastic! jake and chrissie are so sweet as parents! hope theres more soon, cant wait

[Rain_]

loads more please....FANTASTIC!!

[Rach33]

Hello more of me sequel I'm so glad your all liking it

Tina- booked the cars yet
Johnny- I’m onto it today
Ruby- where’s Kerrie gone
Johnny- something about finding Noah
Ruby- I’m off to Stacey’s what time do I need to be back
Johnny- two
Ruby- I’ll see you then
She walked out
Tina- I’ve got another dress fitting in an hour and I need to sort out the flowers
Johnny- just slow down there isn’t a rush
Tina- not a rush we get married in less than two weeks
Johnny- I’ll tell you what I’ll get out of your hair and go and pick up the honeymoon tickets
Tina- ok see you later
She kissed him and carried on reading the bridal magazine

Johnny arrived at the club, Jake was already there sorting through the accounts
Jake- you look like how I feel
Johnny- being a dad getting to you
Jake- sleep wise yeah what about you wedding plans going well
Johnny- I think so I’m trying to keep well out of it
Jake- Kerrie settling into the Square all right
Johnny- oh yeah I’m surprised Noah’s still in one piece
Noah entered the club
Noah- is she here
Johnny- no
Noah- thank god for that can’t hide here for an hour could I
Johnny- if you make yourself useful
Noah- anything than having to listen to Kerrie giving me another ear bashing she’s like a woman possessed
Jake- you knew what you were letting yourself in for
Noah- I know only have myself to blame wedding plans going ok
Johnny- I think
Noah- staying well out of it good plan I did that with the decorating and now I’ve got a Princess Barbie bedroom
Jake- nice
Noah- exactly

[di marco]

fab! im liking the character of noah, hope to find more out about him! hope the next parts soon, cant wait

[Layne]

This is great! I like the whole decorating the room pink thing! Its great!
Post more asap1
Luv ya
Layne
x x x


Ps We are not likin it, we are LOVING it!

[melonb]

i luv it!! deception was great! keep going! yay
more moe more

[Angeldelight]

I Love It!!!! Really Good Keep Posting