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    Smile Sequel To Deception - Moving On

    In Deception for those who may not remember all the details

    Kerrie King arrives in the Square as a mate of Dennis's who is planning on ripping off her husband Kerrie is also Johnny Allen's daughter and also set her husband up on an arson charge as well. Kerrie struggled to deal with the guilt and attempted suicide but she failed and lives again and she was also having an affair with her husband's brother Noah who have now set up home together in Albert Square. Jake and Chrissie are together and early into the relationship Chrissie falls pregnant neither are sure whether they want the baby until Chrissie takes a tumble down the stairs both mum and baby are fine and a year later they have a beautiful five month old daughter Lia Moon. Johnny is marrying long term lover Tina and Dennis who eight months previously went to America to be with Sharon is on his way back WITH Sharon. Can't think of anything else If any queries about what happened just ask

    Here we go

    One Year Later

    Chrissie and Jake were sat at the breakfast table in the Kitchen in the Queen Vic
    Chrissie- what are you up to today?
    Jake- now that would be telling
    Chrissie- Jake Moon your rubbish at keeping secrets please
    Jake- this secret I am keeping
    Chrissie got up and placed her plate in the sink
    She heard him get up
    Jake wrapped his arms around her waist
    Jake- I was thinking tomorrow as it’s your birthday I’d get Alfie to baby-sit and we can have some you and me time
    Chrissie- yeah that would be nice
    He kissed her neck
    Chrissie- down boy
    Jake grinned and kissed her lightly on the lips
    The screams of their young baby crying broke them apart
    Jake- I’ll go you go and set up downstairs
    Chrissie- thanks what would I do without you
    Jake walked into his and Chrissie’s bedroom and scooped up the baby in his arms
    Chrissie watched him from the hallway smiling she was lucky but even when she was this happy there was still a dark cloud hanging over her hanging over this pub
    She shook her head and made her way down the steps
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    Wow!

    Post more soon or else I will stamp my feet, and scream until I pass out, then carry on screaming when I am conscious again!
    I loved the JC lovin'
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    GREAT! loving jake and chrissie, its so sweet! cant wait for the next part, hope its soon, i already know its gonna be good
    ~x~Tizzy~x~
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    Yeow! The follow-up!

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    awwww thanks guys I'm glad your liking it

    Kerrie- and what the hell is wrong with Blossom Pink
    Noah- nothing apart from the fact it makes the room look like a Barbie palace
    Kerrie- it’s fine
    Noah- well I’m not sleeping in there
    Kerrie- don’t then go and sleep in the spare room but don’t expect me to come and tuck you in at night
    Noah- I wouldn’t dream of it
    Kerrie- good
    She stormed down the stairs
    Noah- I hope you come back in a better mood
    Kerrie- oh go and play in the traffic
    She grabbed her coat and stormed out the house

    Kerrie made her way over to her dad’s house
    She knocked loudly and Ruby answered
    Kerrie walked in
    Ruby- are you all right
    Kerrie- marvellous where’s dad
    Ruby- kitchen
    She stormed in
    Johnny- and a good morning to you Kerrie
    Kerrie- is it
    She sat herself down and helped herself to some toast
    Johnny- what’s Noah done
    Kerrie- he hated the colour of the bedroom
    Johnny- is that it
    Kerrie- isn’t that enough
    Tina- what colour is it
    Kerrie- a nice pink
    Tina smiled
    Kerrie- all right it’s horrible but like I’m going to tell him that
    Tina- never let them win hey
    Kerrie- exactly how are the wedding plans going you know Tina it’s not to late to change your mind I wouldn’t wish my dad on anyone
    Johnny- oi watch it
    Kerrie grinned and pinched a bit of toast off her dad’s plate
    Tina- bridesmaid fitting at two don’t be late
    Kerrie- overjoyed
    Tina- it’ll be fine this time
    Kerrie smiled- god I hope so
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    Great, a sequel. Loved chrissie and jake in the first part. HHHMMM a pink bedroom....... its fab babe.
    More more more
    xxx
    Hiro: ...but you flying man! WHOOOOSSSHHH!
    Nathan: Would you keep it down?
    Hiro: ...whooooosh.

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    fab! the pink bedroom was funny! cant wait for the next part, hope its soon
    ~x~Tizzy~x~
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    This is getting better and better.
    More soon please.

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    wow babes this is brill, i mean WOW, i can't wait for the bits with Sharon and Dennis, yey yey they're together yey yey
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    I'm glad you all like it I love reading the replies cos ur all ace

    Jake made his way down the stairs carrying his baby daughter in his arms
    Chrissie- she seems settled now
    Jake- she is
    Chrissie- proper little daddy’s girl surprised there’s any room for mummy
    Jake- come here you know your my number one girl
    Chrissie grinned and kissed him
    Chrissie- so…
    Jake- no way it’s a surprise you will not find out what you birthday present is until tomorrow morning so you’ll have to be patient
    Chrissie pouted
    Jake- and don’t put that wounded look on your face
    Chrissie- I don’t know what you’re talking about here I’ll take her or you’ll be late for work and I don’t want Johnny firing you
    Jake- I’m going
    He passed baby Lia to Chrissie and kissed them both before leaving
    Chrissie- come on then sweetheart just you and me for half an hour
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