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    It Ain't Easy

    I don't know what people will think of this as it's slow at the start, but it will get better I promise

    Here goes..

    It Ain't Easy
    Part One

    "Sign the papers Den." Chrissie said as she slid the small pile of forms across the bar, "Sign them and I won't tell the world how you ruined three lives"
    "Is this it?" He laughed, "I would've thought you'd've had me shot.. But the most pain I can get is a paper cut when I tear these up!"
    "Don't joke about this."
    "What are you gonna do to me?"
    "You don't know what I'm capable of."
    "Why don't we talk about this alone." He said glancing at a frightened Zoe and a quiet Sam.
    "I'm not going anywhere." Zoe protested.
    "Neither am I" Sam agreed.
    Chrissie turned to face them. "I'll be fine. Go." She mouthed at them.
    Den opened the door for the two women and closed it behind them.
    "Well, what's it gonna take for you to sign over the Vic?" Chrissie asked.
    Thanks for the AMAZING banner Layneykins!

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    do more i love your scripts

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    wow im loving this it really good more soon

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    Brilliant start,please post more soon

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    this looks like a good script amber you must do more

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    Im looking forward to this a good start

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    this looks really good do more soon plz

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    Yey a new script from you!!!! I love your work honey and what a fab start more soon xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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    wow!! it's fab, more soon please

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    Thanks everyone Btw Layne, I'm loving your new banner, tis gorgeous.. and sad DENNIS! Why? Why? WHYYYYY?.. Sorry for the Dennis outburst.. Ermm here's the next part

    It Ain't Easy
    Part Two

    "What?" Chrissie cried, "You want me to have your child?"
    "Yep." He replied secretly smiling, knowing he'd win either way.
    "No. No. Never. Not after you cheated on me."
    "The Vic stays mine then."
    "Is that all you care about? Your precious pub?"
    "Oh you know I love you. But I love the Queen Vic more."
    "I've had enough. I can't take it anymore. You've gone one step too far this time." She screamed as she took her wedding ring off, throwing it on the floor. "You know, I thought you truly loved me. But I was obviously wrong."
    She walked out, picking up her handbag on the way. Den picked up one of the champagne glasses and threw it at the wall in anger.
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