oh my days!
oh my days!
EXT. DEVON ROADS - DAY
Nick rushes out of the car, in a panic. He calls 999 on his phone.
Nick: Ambulance please…yeah….I’ve ran someone over…common get here quickly…near Baymoore…bye..
Nick puts down the phone and runs around towards the person…he has a look of shock on his face, he’s ran over Daniel Mansfield.
Nick: Daniel…
Daniel: Help me! (pain) Help…its my leg…its bleeding…
Nick: Don’t worry….the ambulance is on its way…
Nick is worried.
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH – DAY
Richard and Tanya reach the police, who are positioned around a body bag.
Policeman: Mr Taylor?
Richard is speechless.
Tanya: Yes, he is…and Im Tanya Donagoon, Ed’s sister.
Policeman: The body matches the description of Edward, but naturally we need you to identify him…
Tanya: Yeah sure…
The policeman unzips the bodybag and opens it to reveal a body. Tanya turns away and throws up. Richard stands on the spot staring at the body.
Policeman: Is it Edward? …… Mr Taylor…is this your son?
Richard: Yes…yes it is….
omg......
come on bb we've been waiting long enough!!!!! hurry up lol
(p.s 6000th post )
Originally Posted by Luna
Congrats Luna on your 6 thousandth post wowsers !!!!
BRYANNNNNNNN CHURN EM OUT BABE YOUR FAN CLUB IS CALLING U
Nick and Richard ... they got some problems on their hands...looking forward to the STORY.. bring it on Bry
I have finally got round to reading Devon Seas and its fab Bry!!!!
Hurry up and post the next bit hon - can't wait to read more!!
Isn't he terrific Em.. one of these days we are gonna say I KNEW HIM WHEN,, hes got a way with words ....Originally Posted by jojomum
I've told Bry that I hope he remembers me when his name is up in lights!
wow very good!!!! more pleaaaaase
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