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    Not bad, keep trying, your doing good.

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    heya sorry about the delay am not allowed on the internet

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    Great script. Please do more when you can.

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    part 3

    They all walk out the door and standing up at the Vic window was Vicki and Sharon they were looking right at Chrissie and Jake and the others.

    Chrissie: Oh great this is all I need!!
    Jake: what is it?
    Chrissie: Vicki is back?
    Jake: who’s Vicki?
    Chrissie: Den’s youngest daughter.
    Jake: I’ve heard about her.
    Chrissie: I bet you have! Come on let’s get going.

    They all walk into the Vic but as soon as Chrissie put her foot through the door there was a deathly silence as the old landlady walked into the Vic.

    Dennis: Well she’s out!
    Chrissie: Looks like it doesn’t it!
    Dennis: What can I get you?
    Chrissie: Large bottle of champagne!
    Dennis: coming up (He gets the bottle of champagne and Get’s the glasses and puts 8 glasses out)
    Chrissie: There are only 7 of us!
    Dennis: What am I not allowed some?
    Chrissie: I thought you were like Sharon and wanted me to be found guilty?
    Dennis: No, I really don’t care who killed Den and you were there for me after what Den had done!
    Chrissie: Yeh well he’s not worth worrying about now I am going to get on with my new life!
    Sharon: What new life?
    Chrissie: Oh you haven’t heard have you! I and Jake are getting married!
    Dennis: congratulations!
    Jake: Thanks Dennis.
    Sharon: Wow you’re getting married
    Chrissie: I just said that!
    Sharon: I know!
    Chrissie: So why the hell did you say it again!

    Just at that point Vicki walks down and turns to face Jake.


    end of part 3

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    sorry i'm jake - luva to i just signed on the wrong one.

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    wow its getting good welldone more soon

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    Thats good well done more soon please

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    part 4

    Vicki: How can you look Chrissie in the face at night, Kiss her or hug her when you know that she is a murderess and killed my father?
    Chrissie: Excuse me Vicki but I don’t see why you’re asking that question because was it not Last Christmas you told me that you wished your father was dead because he paid more attention to Sharon and he kept on treating you like a child? And when he is dead you mourn and don’t care what anyone else is feeling?
    Sharon: Did you actually wish he was dead Vicki?
    Vicki: Yeah because he didn’t even care about me or Dennis we were his Children we had a piece of him somewhere in us but you, you’re adopted but he spent more money and cared more about you then he did with me or Dennis did you ever notice that?
    Sharon: Were did all this hatred come from?
    Vicki: What do you mean where did it come from I’ve always felt it!
    Chrissie: I really don’t think this is the right place to argue!
    Sharon: Yeah I agree with Chrissie!
    Vicki: Well I don’t agree with the murderess!
    Dennis: Vicki I have had enough of you now go upstairs and calm down!
    Vicki: Seeing as you’re not my Father! You’re my Brother and my Uncle which is not right you and Sharon should never have gotten married it is just not right!
    Sharon: Right pack you’re bags and I’ll book a flight for tomorrow and you can go and live with Pauline because I can’t have you in the same Room as me!

    She walks out and heads over to Arthur’s bench and thinks to herself.
    Chrissie walks over to her.

    End of part 4

    Thanks to everyone who has replied

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    Brill. More asap please.

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    heya sorry about the wait my dad has just flattened my computer which means that i cna't put a new part up because it is no longer on my computer sorry. but after i have installed msn office i will type some more a.s.a.p!!

    Luv Tanya
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