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    Chrissie walks free

    Well this is the first time ever putting a script on any board but please tell me what you think?

    Part one

    She couldn’t believe her ears when the judge said not guilty she was Happy. She was getting out. She could hear Sharon sigh a long and sad one; she could hear Peggy calling her names.

    Jake: Chrissie!

    She looked she sat there with tears of joy in her eyes she couldn’t even recognize him but she recognized his voice when she got let out the court room she ran to him and they hugged. She was so happy.

    Ruby; Chrissie are you free?
    Chrissie: Yep!
    Ruby; Oh my god dad will be so happy and so will Kerrie!
    Chrissie: I know now let’s go back to Walford.

    Jake, Chrissie and Ruby all got in a cab that took them back to ruby’s house where Johnny and Tina and Kerrie and Noah were all waiting for the news. They all walked in.

    Ruby: Dad, Tina, Kerrie and Noah I have a surprise for you!
    Kerrie: What?
    Ruby: This!

    End of part one

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    good, but we need some explanation:

    why has tina come back?

    why are the allens close to chrissie?

    whos kerie and noah?

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    sorry people.

    Tina came back to see Johnny.
    Kerrie and noah are friends of johnnys.
    Chrissie's connections lie with The Allen's being her family

    Hope you enjoy it

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    Good Start.
    Thanks to Abi for my fab avatar!

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    Part two

    Here's the next part!

    Chrissie took a deep breath and walked in with Jake. Kerrie just screamed!

    Chrissie: Heya!
    Kerrie: You got off!!
    Chrissie: Of course it was classified as self defense though that stupid cow Sharon didn’t think so!
    Johnny: Watch your mouth she’s your stepdaughter!
    Chrissie: I really don’t care, anybody want to come to the Vic for a drink it will be on my lovely fiancé Jake.
    Everybody: Sure.

    They all walk out the door and standing up at the Vic window was Vicki and Sharon they were looking right at Chrissie and Jake and the others.

    Chrissie: Oh great this is all I need!!
    Jake: what is it?
    Chrissie: Vicki is back?
    Jake: who’s Vicki?
    Chrissie: Den’s youngest daughter.
    Jake: I’ve heard about her.
    Chrissie: I bet you have! Come on let’s get going.

    They all walk into the Vic but as soon as Chrissie put her foot through the door there was a deathly silence as the old landlady walked into the Vic.
    Last edited by Tannie; 17-12-2005 at 20:52.

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    Good start more soon x

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    Quote Originally Posted by jake_luva
    sorry people.

    Tina came back to see Johnny.
    Kerrie and noah are friends of johnnys.
    Chrissie's connections lie with The Allen's being her family

    Hope you enjoy it
    how is she related to the allens?

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    Great start, more asap

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    sorry i'll post more soon and the answer to Bondboffin's question. She is Johnny's daughter.

    Thanks for replying.

    Tanya xx

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    Quote Originally Posted by jake_luva
    sorry i'll post more soon and the answer to Bondboffin's question. She is Johnny's daughter.

    Thanks for replying.

    Tanya xx
    Good 2parts more soon

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