ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh a letter please kill Johnny please nasty Johnny his faulkt Danny's dead the big meanie die and go and rot
ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh a letter please kill Johnny please nasty Johnny his faulkt Danny's dead the big meanie die and go and rot
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brill! i hate johnny! was it johnny sending the body parts to chrissie? evil evil johnny! more soon please, cant wait
~x~Tizzy~x~
A fool and his money are a girl's best friend
thanks to vicky for making the banna!
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Hiro: ...but you flying man! WHOOOOSSSHHH!
Nathan: Would you keep it down?
Hiro: ...whooooosh.
Final part I
Jake turns his back on Johnny and heads to the Vic. Johnny heads after him.
Johnny: Jake wait, you have to understand why I did those things.
Jake: How can you justify sending body parts in the post and sending that letter?
Johnny: I think you need to tell me what you know about that letter
Jake: Fine, lets go to the cafe
They wonder into the cafe.
Jane: Jake? I thought you were dead.
Jake: So did a lot of people. COuld we have two teas please.
Jane: Sure. It's on the house.
Jake and Johnny go to a table in the corner
Ian: What do you think you're doing? Free teas?
Jane: Look, the man's just come back from the dead. He deserves a free drink.
Ian: You could have given him a higher price, he wouldn't know the price had changed.
Jane: IAN!
Johnny: So what do you know about this letter
Jake: I know yousent it to my mum, who was so ill the shcok would have killed her. I know you describded me being thrown off the cliff and then being...chopped up and mailed to my girlfriend. Johnny she had a heart attack when she read that. She nearly died.
Johnny: Jake, I only did it so you would have no one to go to. Look they were threatining to kill Ruby if I didn't do it. I didn't want her to die.
Jake: Oh so it was fine for me and Danny and my mum to die though.
Johnny: look, when someone close to you is dying you do whatever you can to save them. Look Jake, I am sorry thopugh.
Jake: Forget it Johnny. What you did it was despicable.
Jake gets up.
Jake: Make those teas take out.
Jane: Sure thing. She hands Jake the teas
Jake walks out. Thanks.
Johnny departs just after
Someone sits in a black Car. We don't see their face.
Person in Car: Boss he's just left the cafe
Boss: Ok then, lets roll.
TO BE CONTINUED...... FOR THE FINAL TIME
Hiro: ...but you flying man! WHOOOOSSSHHH!
Nathan: Would you keep it down?
Hiro: ...whooooosh.
oh my god this is brill please let Jakey be all right awwww I'm loving this
Thanks Jessie Wallace For My Fab Banner
Lat jake be ok!
More soon
Layne
x x x
please tell me the NASTY people in the car are after Johnny and NOT Jake... EVIL johnny... EVIL Johnny... he didn't have to do that to Chrissie... Johnny is EVIL... EVIL i tell you...
Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005
Final Part II - I have decided to add one more part after this
Jake heads into the Vic upstairs.
Jake: Chrissie I'm back
Johnny: Wait Jake
Jake: Quit following me.
Johnny: Lets go somewhere and talk
Jake: We've already done that.
Suddenly there is a cry from the lounge. Jake runs in.
Edie: Hello Jake
Jake: What are you doing here?
Edie: Paying your girlfriend a little visit
Jake: Get off her. (He steps forward)
Edie: Don't move or she gets it. (She holds a gun to Chrissie' head)
Suddenly Johnny walks in
Edie: Oh Johnny too, I've been wanting to see you. Fred lock the door. Well know we are all here maybe we can sort out our problems.
Jake: Problems?
Edie: The fact you're alive, Johnny's told you everything and you can tell your girlfriend everything.
Jake: What about the fact you're here isn't that a problem?
Edie: No. All I want s for someone to pay. Because in a minute someone in this room is going to die!
Johnny: What have all of us done wrong?
Edie: Jake isn't dead and knows everything we did. Johnny, you could easily go to the cops, best way to shut you up for good. Chrissie here she could know something plus she nicked my fella.
Jake: I never was your fella. Plus what about you two, you could die. I mean Johnny has a gun under his coat. (johnny pulls out his gun0
Johnny: Edie, you killed Danny and tried to kill Jake. You don't deserve to live and Fred well he went along with it.
Edie: Well lets see who dies
(both guns are raised)
(Camera scans room) (Chrissie screams it is heard in the market below. Everyone looks up. A gunshot rings out across the square)
TO BE CONTINUED WHEN I RETURN NEXT WEEK...............
Hiro: ...but you flying man! WHOOOOSSSHHH!
Nathan: Would you keep it down?
Hiro: ...whooooosh.
nooo you cant leave it there!!!
is jake dead??? whose dead!!!
more soon please!!!
thanks torrie for my gorgeous banna!!
Dennis: A moment of insanity. I only went an' proposed, didn't I?
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