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    we will find out tommorow plus Vivs family arrive yay

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    Episode 8

    1. HOSPITAL WING INTERN DAY

    EMMA IS SITTING BY JAKE WHO IS HAVING HIS EYES CHECKED BY THE DOCTOR.

    JAKE: So why cant i see
    DOCTOR: Im not entirley sure we are going to do some tests ok
    JAKE: There is a cure right
    DOCTOR: Well lets just wait and see

    THE DOCTOR WALKS OFF, JAKE TURNS TO EMMA.

    JAKE: I wish i could see your beutiful smile
    EMMA: I do to
    JAKE: I love you
    EMMA: I love you to

    EMMA KISSESS JAKE ON THE FORHEAD

    2. OUTSIDE VIVS EXTERN DAY

    CAMERA FOCUSES ON THE FRONT DOOR WHEN WE SEE A FIST WHICH KNOCKS ON THE DOOR, VIV OPENS IT AND LOOKS AND SMILES

    VIV: Your here

    CAMERA TURN TO SHOW ANDY,JENNY,BROOKE AND SCOT

    ANDY: Mum

    VIV AND ANDY HUG.

    VIV: And how are my two favorite grandkids
    BROOKE: We aint kiddes anymore
    JENNY: Brooke dont be rude, im sorry viv
    SCOT: Hi gran
    VIV: Hello Scot well come in

    3. VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

    JENNY,ANDY,BROOKE AND SCOT WALK IN FOLLOWED BY VIV WHO SHUTS THE DOOR

    VIV: Now whos for coffee

    3. THE PERRYS KITCHEN INTERN DAY

    PHILLIPA IS SINGING TO THE MUSIC FROM THE RADIO WHEN JAMES WALKS IN.

    JAMES: Mornin
    PHILLIPA: Morning
    JAMES: Your in a good mood this morning
    PHILLIPA: Yes i suppose i am

    PHILLIPAS PHONE RINGS SHE PICKS IT UP AND READS THE TEXT, SHE SMILES.

    JAMES: Who is it
    PHILLIPA: Oh just the phone company
    JAMES: Well anyway i better be going

    PHILLIPA AND JAMES KISS AND JAMES WALKS OUT OF THE KITCHEN, PHILLIPA READS THE TEXT AGAIN AND SMILES

    4. VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

    VIV,JENNY AND ANDY ARE ENJOYING A CUP OF COFFEE THE KIDS ARE IN THE STREET.

    ANDY: So how come Aunty Trudy and Alan are living here
    VIV: Its a long story so what have you been up to i have not seen you in a while
    JENNY: Well i have been doing absolutley nothing these last few weeks but pack
    VIV: Yes well thats what happens when you move house so Andy what made you decide to buy the Garage
    ANDY: Well after buying another propetie it suddenly came to me one day to well return to my roots and work in a Garage
    VIV: When you say work you mean be the boss
    ANDY: A bit of both and then i saw the advert in the paper and thought why not
    VIV: Well i suppose and you are going to be moving in when
    JENNY: Just before Christmas we hope
    VIV: Wonderful

    5. CANAL SIDE EXTERN DAY

    PHILLIPA IS SITTING ON A BENCH WATCHING THE DUCKS WHEN VIC COMES FROM AROUND THE CORNER PHILLIPA SEES HIM AND STANDS UP AND THEY HUG AND KISS.

    PHILLIPA: I missed you last night
    VIC: Me to
    PHILLIPA: So what did you want to ask me
    VIC: Come and live with me in America
    PHILLIPA: America, me and you well i dont know what to say
    VIC: Yes
    PHILLIPA: But James
    VIC: Do you love James
    PHILLIPA: I dont know
    VIC: I will give you till Christmas Eve
    PHILLIPA: What
    VIC: Just make the right choice

    VIC KISSESS PHILLIPA AND SMILES AND WALKS OFF INTO THE DISTANCE

    6. THE HOSPITAL WING INTERN DAY

    EMMA IS SITTING BY JAKE WHO IS TRYING TO SEE THE DOCTOR WALKS UP TO THEM.

    DOCTOR: We have the results
    JAKE: And
    DOCTOR: The fumes from the alchol has indeed damaged your eyesight and i would like to operate as soon as possible but im afraid there is only a 25% chance of you being able to see again.
    JAKE: I will do it.

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    Coach Crash Promo

    It starts off as a nice day evrey resident is smiling and happy but little do they know that disaster is just round the corner. Paul is haunted by his past when a dark secret is close to being revealed to his devoted Sharon.

    PAUL: What the hell are you doing here
    As evreyone is on the way home the coach slowly drives up to the top of the cliff to take one last look, but Chrissie gets a text message warning her there is danger close by. Suddenly the engine explodes and the Coach spins out of control into the deep murky sea water.

    SHOW THE COACH FALLING FROM THE COACH AND INTO THE SEA!!!!
    TRUDY: NOThe fight for survival is on and only few will make it back to EXETER STREET!!!! BUT WHO????

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    wow it was kind of scary in a way but you know lookin forward to it i got something up my sleeve for christmas. So um don't worry ForeBridge is gonna be shocked for ever.

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    can i suggest that you start a thread with pictures of your characters and a breif description of them so its easier for posters to catch up if they havent read before, see the devon seas - characters and locations profile thread for ideas

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    Wow this is amazing well done. Keep it up
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    i might do that my next episode is up tommorow

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    Can't Wait

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    Looking forward to your next part.

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    Episode 9

    1. THE HOSPITAL DAY INTERN.

    JAKE IS LYING ON THE BED HOLDING EMMAS HAND WHO IS SITTING ON THE BED BESIDE HIM PLAYING WITH HIS HAIR, JAKE IS BLINDFOLDED WITH BANDAGES.

    JAKE: If i go blind, i mean if i am blind you can leave me
    EMMA: Im not going to leave you not now not ever
    JAKE: You deserve better than this, you will be running the shop be yourself and looking after me.
    EMMA: I have Trudy working for us now and i can hire some more staff. I am never ever going to leave you i love you too much.
    JAKE: I love you to.

    2. INSIDE THE LION INTERN DAY

    LUCY IS SITTING ON A CHAIR LOOKING AROUND REMINISCIG OVER SOME OF THE GOOD AND BAD TIMES OF THE LION, WE HAVE FLASHBACKS OF SHAWN AND AMYS WEDDING AND THERE RECEPTION IN THE LION. THE NEXT FLASHBACK IS WHEN SHAWN AND AMY BROUGHT BABY KRISTEN HOME THEN IT TURNS TO THE FLASHBACK WHEN MIKE KICKED OUT LUCY AND HANDED HER DIVORCE PAPERS FOR HER BIRTHDAY AND THEN IMMEDIALTLY CHANGES TO LUCY BUYING THE PUB OFF MIKE.

    3. THE BOWLERS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

    HUGH WALKS IN LOOKING TIRED AND OUT OF BREATH HE IS CARRYING TWO CARRYBAGS, HE SMILES AND WALKS OVER TO A CUBORD AND PUTS THE BAGS INSIDE HE LAUGHS.

    HUGH: This is gonna be a good Christmas.

    4. THE GARAGE INTERN DAY

    ANDY IS IN HIS OFFICE DOING SOME PAPERWORK WHEN JENNY STORMS IN WITH STEVE.

    ANDY: Jenny i thought you were out shopping and whats Steve doing here.
    JENNY: Teacher caught him smoking behined the Science block could have caused a fire and to top it off he told the teacher to f off, hes been suspended for a month.
    ANDY: Oh Steve
    STEVE: It wasnt my fault
    JENNY: So what you were made to do those things, well you can forget about Christmas
    ANDY: Now come on Jenny we were alot worse than him at School
    JENNY: Thats not the point
    ANDY: Look you go and finish your shopping and Steve can go round his nans and help her put up the Chrsitmas Decerations.
    JENNY: So your not going to punish him
    ANDY: I think him going to help mum put up the decerations is hard enough dont you.

    JENNY STORMS OFF WITH STEVE AND SLAMS THE DOOR, ANDYS MOILE RINGS HE ANSWERS IT.

    ANDY: Hello Darlin how are you...yeah well thats Christmas for you...tonight no i cant how bout boxing day yeah i will see you then love you lots.

    5. THE HOSPITAL INTERN DAY

    SAME AS BEFORE EXCEPT FOR THE DOCTOR TAKING OFF THE BANDAGES OF JAKE VERY CAREFULLY.

    EMMA: Well

    JAKE BLINKS AND RUBS HIS EYES THERE IS A FEW MOMENTS PAUSE AND JAKE BEGINS TO CRY.

    JAKE: I...I...can see...i can see

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