we will find out tommorow plus Vivs family arrive yay
we will find out tommorow plus Vivs family arrive yay
1. HOSPITAL WING INTERN DAY
EMMA IS SITTING BY JAKE WHO IS HAVING HIS EYES CHECKED BY THE DOCTOR.
JAKE: So why cant i see
DOCTOR: Im not entirley sure we are going to do some tests ok
JAKE: There is a cure right
DOCTOR: Well lets just wait and see
THE DOCTOR WALKS OFF, JAKE TURNS TO EMMA.
JAKE: I wish i could see your beutiful smile
EMMA: I do to
JAKE: I love you
EMMA: I love you to
EMMA KISSESS JAKE ON THE FORHEAD
2. OUTSIDE VIVS EXTERN DAY
CAMERA FOCUSES ON THE FRONT DOOR WHEN WE SEE A FIST WHICH KNOCKS ON THE DOOR, VIV OPENS IT AND LOOKS AND SMILES
VIV: Your here
CAMERA TURN TO SHOW ANDY,JENNY,BROOKE AND SCOT
ANDY: Mum
VIV AND ANDY HUG.
VIV: And how are my two favorite grandkids
BROOKE: We aint kiddes anymore
JENNY: Brooke dont be rude, im sorry viv
SCOT: Hi gran
VIV: Hello Scot well come in
3. VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY
JENNY,ANDY,BROOKE AND SCOT WALK IN FOLLOWED BY VIV WHO SHUTS THE DOOR
VIV: Now whos for coffee
3. THE PERRYS KITCHEN INTERN DAY
PHILLIPA IS SINGING TO THE MUSIC FROM THE RADIO WHEN JAMES WALKS IN.
JAMES: Mornin
PHILLIPA: Morning
JAMES: Your in a good mood this morning
PHILLIPA: Yes i suppose i am
PHILLIPAS PHONE RINGS SHE PICKS IT UP AND READS THE TEXT, SHE SMILES.
JAMES: Who is it
PHILLIPA: Oh just the phone company
JAMES: Well anyway i better be going
PHILLIPA AND JAMES KISS AND JAMES WALKS OUT OF THE KITCHEN, PHILLIPA READS THE TEXT AGAIN AND SMILES
4. VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY
VIV,JENNY AND ANDY ARE ENJOYING A CUP OF COFFEE THE KIDS ARE IN THE STREET.
ANDY: So how come Aunty Trudy and Alan are living here
VIV: Its a long story so what have you been up to i have not seen you in a while
JENNY: Well i have been doing absolutley nothing these last few weeks but pack
VIV: Yes well thats what happens when you move house so Andy what made you decide to buy the Garage
ANDY: Well after buying another propetie it suddenly came to me one day to well return to my roots and work in a Garage
VIV: When you say work you mean be the boss
ANDY: A bit of both and then i saw the advert in the paper and thought why not
VIV: Well i suppose and you are going to be moving in when
JENNY: Just before Christmas we hope
VIV: Wonderful
5. CANAL SIDE EXTERN DAY
PHILLIPA IS SITTING ON A BENCH WATCHING THE DUCKS WHEN VIC COMES FROM AROUND THE CORNER PHILLIPA SEES HIM AND STANDS UP AND THEY HUG AND KISS.
PHILLIPA: I missed you last night
VIC: Me to
PHILLIPA: So what did you want to ask me
VIC: Come and live with me in America
PHILLIPA: America, me and you well i dont know what to say
VIC: Yes
PHILLIPA: But James
VIC: Do you love James
PHILLIPA: I dont know
VIC: I will give you till Christmas Eve
PHILLIPA: What
VIC: Just make the right choice
VIC KISSESS PHILLIPA AND SMILES AND WALKS OFF INTO THE DISTANCE
6. THE HOSPITAL WING INTERN DAY
EMMA IS SITTING BY JAKE WHO IS TRYING TO SEE THE DOCTOR WALKS UP TO THEM.
DOCTOR: We have the results
JAKE: And
DOCTOR: The fumes from the alchol has indeed damaged your eyesight and i would like to operate as soon as possible but im afraid there is only a 25% chance of you being able to see again.
JAKE: I will do it.
It starts off as a nice day evrey resident is smiling and happy but little do they know that disaster is just round the corner. Paul is haunted by his past when a dark secret is close to being revealed to his devoted Sharon.
PAUL: What the hell are you doing here
As evreyone is on the way home the coach slowly drives up to the top of the cliff to take one last look, but Chrissie gets a text message warning her there is danger close by. Suddenly the engine explodes and the Coach spins out of control into the deep murky sea water.
SHOW THE COACH FALLING FROM THE COACH AND INTO THE SEA!!!!
TRUDY: NOThe fight for survival is on and only few will make it back to EXETER STREET!!!! BUT WHO????
wow it was kind of scary in a way but you know lookin forward to it i got something up my sleeve for christmas. So um don't worry ForeBridge is gonna be shocked for ever.
can i suggest that you start a thread with pictures of your characters and a breif description of them so its easier for posters to catch up if they havent read before, see the devon seas - characters and locations profile thread for ideas
Wow this is amazing well done. Keep it up
Last edited by Lindy; 17-12-2005 at 13:32.
i might do that my next episode is up tommorow
Can't Wait
Looking forward to your next part.
1. THE HOSPITAL DAY INTERN.
JAKE IS LYING ON THE BED HOLDING EMMAS HAND WHO IS SITTING ON THE BED BESIDE HIM PLAYING WITH HIS HAIR, JAKE IS BLINDFOLDED WITH BANDAGES.
JAKE: If i go blind, i mean if i am blind you can leave me
EMMA: Im not going to leave you not now not ever
JAKE: You deserve better than this, you will be running the shop be yourself and looking after me.
EMMA: I have Trudy working for us now and i can hire some more staff. I am never ever going to leave you i love you too much.
JAKE: I love you to.
2. INSIDE THE LION INTERN DAY
LUCY IS SITTING ON A CHAIR LOOKING AROUND REMINISCIG OVER SOME OF THE GOOD AND BAD TIMES OF THE LION, WE HAVE FLASHBACKS OF SHAWN AND AMYS WEDDING AND THERE RECEPTION IN THE LION. THE NEXT FLASHBACK IS WHEN SHAWN AND AMY BROUGHT BABY KRISTEN HOME THEN IT TURNS TO THE FLASHBACK WHEN MIKE KICKED OUT LUCY AND HANDED HER DIVORCE PAPERS FOR HER BIRTHDAY AND THEN IMMEDIALTLY CHANGES TO LUCY BUYING THE PUB OFF MIKE.
3. THE BOWLERS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY
HUGH WALKS IN LOOKING TIRED AND OUT OF BREATH HE IS CARRYING TWO CARRYBAGS, HE SMILES AND WALKS OVER TO A CUBORD AND PUTS THE BAGS INSIDE HE LAUGHS.
HUGH: This is gonna be a good Christmas.
4. THE GARAGE INTERN DAY
ANDY IS IN HIS OFFICE DOING SOME PAPERWORK WHEN JENNY STORMS IN WITH STEVE.
ANDY: Jenny i thought you were out shopping and whats Steve doing here.
JENNY: Teacher caught him smoking behined the Science block could have caused a fire and to top it off he told the teacher to f off, hes been suspended for a month.
ANDY: Oh Steve
STEVE: It wasnt my fault
JENNY: So what you were made to do those things, well you can forget about Christmas
ANDY: Now come on Jenny we were alot worse than him at School
JENNY: Thats not the point
ANDY: Look you go and finish your shopping and Steve can go round his nans and help her put up the Chrsitmas Decerations.
JENNY: So your not going to punish him
ANDY: I think him going to help mum put up the decerations is hard enough dont you.
JENNY STORMS OFF WITH STEVE AND SLAMS THE DOOR, ANDYS MOILE RINGS HE ANSWERS IT.
ANDY: Hello Darlin how are you...yeah well thats Christmas for you...tonight no i cant how bout boxing day yeah i will see you then love you lots.
5. THE HOSPITAL INTERN DAY
SAME AS BEFORE EXCEPT FOR THE DOCTOR TAKING OFF THE BANDAGES OF JAKE VERY CAREFULLY.
EMMA: Well
JAKE BLINKS AND RUBS HIS EYES THERE IS A FEW MOMENTS PAUSE AND JAKE BEGINS TO CRY.
JAKE: I...I...can see...i can see
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