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    Exeter

    QUICK NOTE: "PAUL CAN NOW WALK AGAIN BUT WILL ALWAYS HAVE A WALKING STICK BY HIS SIDE."

    EPISODE 1

    1. THE LION/BAR INTERN DAY

    LUCY IS BUSY WITH STEPH PUTTING UP THE CHRISTMAS DECERATIONS WHEN CHRISSIE WALKS IN FROM THE BACK WITH HER COAT ON AND CARRYING A BAG.

    CHRISSIE: Im off now Lucy

    LUCY: Oh ok then love

    CHRSSIE; Thanks

    CHRISSIE WALKS OUT JUST AS SOME OF THE CHRISTMAS DECARATIONS FALL DOWN.

    STEPH: I think it gonna be one of those days

    2. RAMSAY HOUSEHOLD KITCHEN INTERN DAY

    SHARON IS BUSY COOKING WHILE SOPHIE IS MAKING A CUP OF TEA. SOPHIE PURS THE WATER INTO THE CUP AS SHE TURNS ROUND SO DOES SHARON WHO ACCIDENTEALLY KNOCKS THE CUP OUT OF SOPHIES HAND ONTO THE FLOOR.

    SOPHIE: Oh my gosh now look what you have done
    SHARON: Im sorry
    SOPHIE: Mum brought me that last Christmas
    SHARON: I will get you another one
    SOPHIE: YOU BETTER

    PAUL WALKS IN

    PAUL: Whats going on

    SOPHIE STORMS OUT PAUL TURNS TO SHARON.

    SHARON: Dont ask

    3. OUTSIDE THE CAFE EXTERN DAY

    JILL IS BUSY POSTING A SIGN UP THAT READS "CHRISTMAS TEA 24TH OF DECEMBER" ALAN WALKS UP.

    ALAN: Christmas Tea aye i might bring Trudy to that
    JILL: Well you better hurry im nearly fully booked.

    4. THE LION BAR INTERN DAY

    LUCY IS AT THE BAR WITH VIV WHEN STEPH COMES OUT OF THE TOILET LOOKING VERY PALE.

    VIV: You look terrible
    STEPH: Ive just been sick
    LUCY: I think you should go home me and Viv can handle evreything
    STEPH: Are you sure
    LUCY: Go on home

    5. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

    PAUL AND SHARON ARE WATCHING TV TOGETHER

    PAUL: Fancie going out for tea tonight
    SHARON; Yeah why not

    6. THE LION BAR INTERN NIGHT

    THE PUB IS VERY BUSY WITH ALL THE LOCALS HAVING A LAUGH ALAN AND TRUDY ARE PLAYING POOL WHILE HUGH IS TEACHINF NICK HOW TO PLAY DARTS VIV AND LUCY ARE BUSY BEHINED THE BAR.

    LUCY: Blimey i did not think it would be this busy
    VIV: Yeah i bet youll miss it though
    LUCY: Of course this has been my home for over thirty years
    VIV: Then dont sell up
    LUCY: No its time to move on

    7. RESTURANT INTERN NIGHT

    PAUL AND SHARON ARE ENJOYING A MEAL TOGETHER

    SHARON: This is lovely
    PAUL: I know that Sophie can be a bit of a handful
    SHARON: Say that again
    PAUL: Its just she wants me and Eilleen to get back togther but thats not going to happen
    SHARON: I know
    PAUL: Sharon marry me

    8. THE LION BAR INTERN NIGHT

    THE PUB IS NOW EMPTY VIV PUTS THE LAST FEW GLASSESS ON THE BAR WHILE LUCY WAITS AT THE DOOR.

    VIV; I hope Steph is back tommorow
    LUCY: Yeah so do i
    VIV: Well i best be off
    LUCY: Ok then

    LUCY OPENS THE DOOR FOR VIV WHO WALKS OUT LUCY CLOSES IT AND PUTS THE BOLT ON. SHE THEN TURNS OFF THE LIGHTS TO THE BAR BUT AS SHE TURNS ROUND SHE IS HIT ON THE HEAD WITH A BAT.

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    good but just a few questions

    1.Who is Steph
    2.is'nt Nick a bit young to be in a pub
    3.have you read my Emmerdale script yet

    post more soon please.

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    i introduced steph in the last episode of the last season she is the new bar maid
    nick is 14 but kids are allowed in the lion

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    very nice please post more soon

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    next episode up tommorrow

    will sharon accept pauls proposal
    and will Lucy escape from the fire!!!!!!!!

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    Episode 2

    1. THE LION THE BAR INTERN NIGHT

    THE BAR IS DARK THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES ALONG THE BAR AS WE SEE BOTTLES SMASHED ON THE FLOOR AND ALCHOL POURING OUT OF BROKEN GLASSESS THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES TO THE EDGE OF THE BAR WHERE WE SEE LUCY LYING IN A HEAP WITH BLOOD RUNNING DOWN HER HEAD. A BLACK BOOT APPEARS BY LUCY THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES UP TO THE TOP OF THE PERSONS LEG WHO IS HOLDING A PHOTO OF THE SCOTSMAN FAMILY THE PERSON LIGHTS A MATCH AND SETS THE PHOTO ALIGHT AND DROPS IT ON THE FLOOR AND THE FLOOR BECOMES ENGULFED IN FLAMES. THE PERSON RUNS OFF WITH LUCY STILL UNCONCIOUS ON THE FLOOR.

    2. RESTURANT INTERN NIGHT

    PAUL AND SHARON ARE STILL SITTING AT THE TABLE PAUL IS HOLDING SHARONS HAND THERE IS WAITERS CLEANING EMPTY TABLES.

    SHARON: What
    PAUL: Marry me
    SHARON: [SHE SMILES WITH GLEE AS SHE CRYS HAVE SOME SOFT ROMANTIC MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND] Yes
    PAUL: You mean it
    SHARON: Yes, yes i want to be Mrs Paul Ramsay

    THEY HUG AND SMILE AND THEN KISS

    3. THE LION THE BAR INTERN NIGHT

    LUCY IS STILL LYING ON THE FLOOR WITH FLAMES DRAWING CLOSER AND CLOSER TO HER HAVE SOME DRAMATIC MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND.

    4. OUTSIDE THE SHOP EXTERN NIGHT

    JAKE WALKS OUT OF THE SHOP YAWINING HE GOES ROUND THE BACK AND BRINGS BACK WITH HIM THE DUSTBIN HE QUICKLY GLANCES AT THE PUB WHICH HAS ORANGE LIGHT FLASHING INSIDE JAKE LOOKS AGAIN WITH SHOCK AND RUNS BACK INTO THE SHOP.

    5. INSIDE THE SHOP INTERN NIGHT

    EMMA IS COUNTING THE MONEY FROM OUT OF THE TILL WHEN JAKE RUNS BACK IN.

    JAKE: Ring the Fire service
    EMMA: Jake
    JAKE: Just do it tell them there is a fire at the Lion
    EMMA: What
    JAKE: Just do it

    EMMA RUNS TO THE PHONE AS JAKE RUNS BACK OUT.

    6. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN NIGHT

    JAKE RUNS OUT OF THE SHOP AND UP TO THE LION

    JAKE: LUCY, LUCY

    VIV OPENS HER DOOR AND WALKS OUT WITH ALAN AND TRUDY TO SEE WHAT IS GOING ON.

    VIV: Jake whats going...oh my god
    ALAN: Fire
    TRUDY: Is Lucy inside
    JAKE: Thats what i am going to find out

    JAKE RUNS DOWN THE ALLEY AND TO THE BACK OF THE LION

    VIV: JAKE NO

    7. INSIDE PAULS CAR INTERN

    PAUL IS DRIVING THE CAR WHILE SHARON IS SITTING IN THE PASSENGER SEAT THEY TURN INTO EXETER STREET SEEING THE PUB.

    PAUL: Whats going on
    SHARON: I dont know

    8. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN NIGHT

    EVREYONE FROM THE STREET ARE NO OUTSIDE EXCEPT FROM EMMA WHO RUNS OUT OF THE SHOP TO VIV. SHARON AND PAUL STEP OUT OF THE CAR.

    EMMA: The fire service are on there way, wheres Jake
    VIV: He is inside
    EMMA: NO JAKE

    9. THE LION THE BAR INTERN NIGHT

    LUCY IS STILL LYING UNCONCIOUS ON THE FLOOR AS THE FIRE IS BUILDING UP. JAKE RUNS IN COUGHI NG AS THE SMOKE DEEPENS HE SEES LUCY AND PICKS HER UP. PART OF THE BACK DOOR COLLAPSES HE LOOKS AROUND AND RUNS INTO THE CELLAR WITH LUCY AS THE FIRE BEGINS TO BURN DOWN THE BAR.

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    very good as usual nice to have you back

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    Episode 3

    1. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN NIGHT

    EVREYONE IS STANDING OUTSIDE WAITING FOR JAKE AND LUCY TO WALK OUT ALIVE.

    PAUL: Did you ring the fire service
    EMMA: Yeah
    PAUL: How long ago
    EMMA: About ten minutes
    PAUL; They should be here by now
    VIV: They need to be out of there now
    JAMES; Look im going in
    PHILLIPA: No james please

    JAMES WALKS FORWARD TO THE LION WHEN THE DOOR EXPLODES KNOCKING DOWN JAMES.

    PHILLIPA: JAMES
    VIV: Oh my god

    THE FIRE COUNTINIUES TO RIP THROUGH THE NOW OPEN DOOR WHILE JAMES IS LYING ON THE FLOOR. PHILLIPA AND VIV ARE ATTENDING HIM.

    2. THE LION THE CELLAR INTERN NIGHT

    SMOKE IS FASTLY SPREDING THROUGH THE CELLAR WE SEE JAKE CARRYING LUCY, HE SEES A SMALL WINDOW AND PUTS LUCY DOWN ON THE FLOOR AND HE RUNS TO THE WINDOW BUT REALISES IT IS TO SMALL TO FIT THROUGH.

    JAKE: HELP SOMEONE HELP [JAKE COUGHS AND COLLAPSES]

    3. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN NIGHT

    SAME AS BEFORE ACCEPT JAMES IS STILL ON THE FLOOR WITH PHILLIPA AND VIV ATENDING HIM.

    PAUL: Where are they
    SHARON: There here

    FIRE ENGINES SPEED ROUND THE CORNER WITH A FEW AMBULANCES THEY ALL STEP OUT AND THE FIRE MEN BEGIN TO PUT OUT THE FIRE.

    INSPECTOR GROUSE: Is there anyone inside
    EMMA: Yes my boyfriend Jake Mkcall and Lucy Scotman
    INSPECTOR GROUSE: Ok

    GROUSE RUNS OVER TO THE FIRE SERVICE TO TELL THEM ABOUT LUCY AND JAKE

    EMMA: What if they dont make it
    ALAN: They will love dont you worry
    NICK: We were in there earlier dad
    HUGH: We all were son

    4. LION CELLAR INTERN NIGHT

    JAKE AND LUCY ARE BOTH ON THE FLOOR UNCONCIOUS THE ROOF OF THE CELLING BEGINS TO CRACK WHEN SUDDENLY IT ALL FALLS DOWN ON TOP OF LUCY AND JAKE. HAVE SOME DRAMATIC MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND FOR THIS MOMENT THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES AROUND THE RUBBEL WE SEE JUST LUCYS HEAD AND ARM IN THE RUBBEL BUT JAKE IS NOWHERE TO BE SEEN.

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    very good please post more soon

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    Episode 4

    1. OUTSIDE THE LION EARLY MORNING.

    THE FIRE IS NOW OUT AND THE FIRE SERVICE ARE LOOKING INSIDE OF WHATS LEFT OF THE LION. EMMA,ALAN,TRUDY AND VIV ARE ALL STANDING OUTSIDE.

    VIV: I think you need some sleep Emma
    EMMA: No i want to know if Jake is all right
    TRUDY: He might have got out.
    ALAN: Trudy is right

    JILL WALKS OUT OF THE CAFE AND UP TO VIV,EMMA,ALAN AND TRUDY.

    JILL: Hey any sign
    VIV: No
    JILL: Well im doing tea and i could cook you up a fry up if you want no charge
    ALAN: Yeah that would be nice, come on Emma
    VIV: If they find anything youll be the first to know.

    2. CELLAR INTERN DAY

    THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES AROUND THE RUBBEL IT STOPS WHEN WE SEE LUCY, SHE SLOWLY OPENS HER EYES AND LOOKS AROUND.

    LUCY: [VERY QUITLY AND IN AGONY] Help, please help

    3. THE CAFE INTERN DAY

    EMMA,ALAN,TRUDY AND VIV ARE ALL SAT AT A TABLE DRINKING TEA.

    TRUDY: How did it happen
    VIV: I dont know
    ALAN: Any news on James
    VIV: No last i heard was he was fine just a few cuts and brusies.
    TRUDY: First the Plane Crash and now this what next
    ALAN: Yeah your telling me
    TRUDY: You ok Emma
    EMMA: Im fine it just that...

    EMMA STOPS SPEAKING WHEN SHE SUDDENLY SEES A VISION OF JAKE LOOKING HAPPY BY THE COUNTER.

    TRUDY: Emma, Emma
    EMMA: [JUMPS] What yeah im fine

    4 INSIDE THE LION INTERN DAY

    THE POLICE AND FIREMEN ARE SERCHING THROUGH THE RUBBEL INSPECTOR GROUSE WALKS IN AND TALKS TO ONE OF THE POLICE MEN.

    INSPECTOR GROUSE: Well any sign
    POLICE MAN: Not yet sir, we still have alot to serch through
    INSPECTOR GROUSE: Have you checked the Cellar
    POLICE MAN: Not yet sir there is to much rubbel in the way and it has caved in
    INSPECTOR GROUSE: Do you think we will be finding them alive
    POLICE MAN: Unlikly sir

    5. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

    PAUL,SHARON AND SOPHIE ARE HAVING AN ARGUMENT.

    SOPHIE: WHAT YOUR MARRYING HER
    PAUL: Yes you dont need to shout
    SOPHIE; But you cant
    PAUL: Why not
    SOPHIE: Becuse i dont want you to
    SHARON: You cant always have what you want Sophie
    SOPHIE: I was not talking to you if you marry her i will never forgive you

    6. THE LION THE CELLAR INTERN DAY

    THE POLICE AND INSPCETOR GROUSE ARE SERCHING THROUGH THE RUBBEL.

    GROUSE: Found anything yet
    POLICE MAN: Sir i have found a female body

    GROUSE RUNS THROUGH THE RUBBEL TO THE POLICE MAN WHO HAS NOW PULLED OUT LUCY.

    GROUSE: How is she
    POLICE MAN: Not good sir, she has a weak pulse
    GROUSE: Get her to the Hospital and quick, we have one more to find and hurry or else we could be to late

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