the little oh paul makes me soooooo mad at times cant wait till tommorow
the little oh paul makes me soooooo mad at times cant wait till tommorow
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1. INSIDE THE LION INTERN NIGHT
EVREYONE IS STOOD OR SAT STILL IN SILENCE ANDY IS STANDING CLOSE TO VIV LOOKING SHOCKED PAUL IS SMIRKING IN THE BACKGROUND AT JAMES.
ANDY: You have cancer
VIV: I was going to tell you later on at home
ANDY: I dont understand how did he [POINTS TO PAUL] know about you having cancer
VIV: I...I dotn know
BROOKE RUNS OUT OF THE PUB CRYING
JENNY: Brooke
JENNY FOLLOWS WITH ANDY BEHINED HER
2. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN NIGHT
A CAR IS SPEEDING DOWN THE ROAD, BROOKE DOES NOT SEE THE CAR, ANDY AND JENNY BOTH RUN OUT OF THE LION AS BROOKE STEPS ON TO THE ROAD AND GETS HIT BY THE SPEEDING CAR JENNY SCREAMS AND ANDY LOOKS FURIOUS AS HE WALKS CLOSE TO THE CAR WHICH SPEEDS OFF.
JENNY: BROOKE SPEAK TO ME
JENNY KNEELS DOWN BY BROOKE
ANDY: DONT TOUCH HER
JENNY: IM NOT
VIV,TRUDY AND ALAN BOTH COME RUNNING OUT FOLLOWED BY THE REST OF THE RESIDENTS
VIV: Oh god no
TRUDY: Some one ring an ambulance
PAUL STEPS OUT WITH SHARON PAUL LOOKS GUILTY AS HE SEES WHAT HAS HAPPENED, ANDY LOOKS TO PAUL
ANDY: You see what you have done
ANDY STANDS UP AND SLOWLY WALKS TO PAUL
ANDY: Your evil and im going to make you pay for what you have done
PAUL: I have not done anything
ANDY: I hope you rot in hell
ANDY PUNCHES PAUL WHO FALLS TO THE GROUND, THE AMBULANCE ARRIVES AND THE PAREMEDICS COME OUT TO ASSIT BROOKE
JENNY: Is she going to be ok
PAREMEDIC: She is not in a good state come on lets get her to hospital
THE PAREMEDICS CARRY BROOKE INTO THE AMBULANCE FOLLOWED BY VIV AND JENNY ANDY WALKS TO THE DOOR.
ANDY: I will stay here and wait for Steve
JENNY: Ok
THE AMBULANCE DRIVES OFF
EVREYONE ELSE WALKS BACK INTO THE LION EXCEPT FOR SHARON WHO IS CHECKING PAUL WHO IS SITTING ON THE FLOOR LOOKING DAZED, JAMES IS LOOKING ON.
PAUL: I will get that stupid fool once and for all
SHARON: My god
PAUL: What
SHARON: Listen to your self, Andys daughter could die becuse of your stupid war with him
SHARON POINTS VIOLENTLY TO JAMES
SHARON: Well things have gone too far this time Paul maybe Shawn was right maybe me and you are a mistake
PAUL: What
SHARON: Im leaving Paul and i dont know when i will be back
PAUL STANDS UP AND GRABS ON TO SHARONS ARM
PAUL: Please Sharon dont do this
SHARON: Let go of me your not going to make me change my mind
SHARON RUNS ACROSS TO THE HOUSE, PAUL TRIES TO FOLLOW BUT JAMES STANDS IN HIS WAY
PAUL: Move
JAMES: I would be carfull if i was you after all accidents can happen
PAUL: What are you talking about
JAMES: Just watch your back
PAUL: Get lost
PAUL SLOWLY WALKS TO THE HOUSE JAMES SHOUTS.
JAMES: Dont say i did not warn you
PAUL LOOKS TO JAMES AS HE WALKS BACK INTO THE HOUSE
3. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT
SHARON CAMES DOWN THE STAIRS WITH HER SUITCASES PAUL WALKS IN TRYING TO STOP HER FROM LEAVING
PAUL: Sharon please dont do this
SHARON: My taxi will be here in a minute
PAUL: Your taxi
SHARON: Im leaving Paul
PAUL: But your coming back right
SHARON: I dont know, i have lived here all my life and your driving me away
PAUL: I am not doing anything at all
SHARON: Look what you have caused a young girls life is at risk becuse of you
A CAR HORN SOUNDS
SHARON: Thats my taxi
PAUL: Sharon please
4. EXETER STREET EXTERN NIGHT
THE TAXI IS WAITING OUTSIDE THE RAMSAY HOUSEHOLD RAIN BEGINS TO FALL AS THUNDER AND LIGHTINING BEGIN. A WIND PICKS UP SWINING THE LION SIGN TO AND FROW
5. INSIDE THE LION INTERN NIGHT
LUCY AND SHAWN ARE BOTH LOCKING UP
LUCY: Fancie a drink
SHAWN: Yeah why not
LUCY WALKS BEHINED THE BAR AND BEGINS TO PULL SHAWN A PINT WHEN SUDDENLEY THE LIGHTS GO OUT
LUCY: What the
SHAWN: Its probably just the weather
LUCY: Yeah i think we have a storm coming
5. EXETER STREET EXTERN NIGHT
THE RAIN IS FALLING RAPIDLY ON THE STREET AND THE WIND IS PICKING UP SHARON WALKS OUT OF THE HOUSE WITH HER SUITCASES AND GETS IN THE TAXI PAUL WALKS OUT OF THE HOUSE ON TO THE ROAD TRYING TO STOP THE TAXI BUT IT SPEEDS OFF, TEARS FALL FROM PAULS EYES AS HE WATCHES THE TAXI LEAVE, PAUL TURNS TO THE PARK WHERE HE SEES SOMEONE PAUL SUDDENLEY LOOKS SHOCKED AS WE HEAR TWO GUN SHOTS PAUL FALLS TO THE GROUND. FADE OUT WITH THE CAMERA LEAVING EXETER STREET WITH THE STORM CONTINUING AND PAUL LYING IN A PUDDLE OF WATER BLEEDING
EXETER WILL RETURN SOON!!!
fantastic conclusion! could see this happening on screen! great stuff! make sure your back soon! i cant do without my daily intake of Exeter!
WOW i have some big competiotion when my season two starts. come back soon
Another fantastic banner by Vixie-Lou
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