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    Post Poems

    Sorry if this is wrong, I don't know where to put this thread, so I chose here. Poems are kind of art aren't they.
    If i am in the wrong forum feel freeeeee to move me.
    Please, if you post poems that are not your own, to write the authors name. Do not claim it as your own lol.
    Thankyou, Lisa
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    I wrote this one a couple of months ago, hope you like. Its strange, i understand it beacuse it reflects my life.

    One Wilted Rose

    A wilted rose on the ground
    Dead and lifeless, now found
    This little plant represents a lot to me
    The endless suffering you can't see

    The pain and the sorrow
    You won't see til tomorrow
    The hidden secrets and scars
    Glimmers of hope secured in the stars

    The violence and abuse
    For that there is no excuse
    The mini clone inside of you
    Telling you what to do

    The Hurt and the lies
    The girl who wants to die
    Untie the strings she holds onto
    They keep her alive, just like you

    She wants to free her soul and mind
    Hide the things she doesn't want anyone to find
    Say sorry for her life she feels she has wrecked
    Tighten the noose around her neck

    Alone in the room she'd cry and cry
    In her head she'd wanted to die
    She didn't dare ask her friends for the help she needed
    So she cut until her whole wrist bleeded

    One fateful night her wish came true
    Her friends and family didn't have a clue
    She didn't want the night to end that way
    Talking on her mobile, This is hard to say

    She was struck by a car and fell to the ground
    The car drove off, no-one was around
    She lie dead in the road
    Dead and as red as this wilted rose

    Her family were shocked by this news
    That news and some other news too
    They found the scars and cried out their hearts
    The unplanned killing that destroyed every part

    On rose for each tragic end
    For the families who's lives begin to mend
    If you feel like she did inside
    Ask yourself- Do you really want to die?

    ©Lisa D
    Last edited by Lisa321; 25-04-2005 at 16:31.

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    wow that was great, really emotional!
    ~x~Tizzy~x~
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    Thankyou! :-)
    I'll post a few more then lol
    xXx

    Lisa

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    Mummy and Me

    This has not happened to me in real life
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    Daddy didn't come home last night
    Mummy said he was with his mates
    She was right, when he came stumbling in
    Woke me up, It was late

    Daddy slurred his words
    As he staggered through the door
    The look on Mummy's face told me
    She didn't want him anymore

    I turned away in disgust
    When he came near
    He pushed his face against me
    Kissed me and I smelt beer

    Beer and cider in his breath
    Alcohol that makes him so mad
    Don't want to go to bed tonight
    In the morning I can guarantee Mummy will be sad.

    I will lie awake and hear Mummy scream
    A few bangs and Daddy shout
    I'm too little to even think
    What they're rowing about

    I fall asleep to the sound of crying
    Daddy doesn't cry so it must be Mummy
    In my dreams I know somethings wrong
    I get that worrying feeling in my tummy

    I wake up and worry what to do
    Its the morning and Daddy's gone to work
    I wonder why Mummy has new bruises
    Why she's been hurt

    If I ask her, Will she shout
    I know who's done it, My Daddy, Thats who
    Hurt my mummy and gave her bruises
    Left me scared and helpless, What do I do?

    Do I ignore it, Mummy loves him
    But Daddy must not love Mummy after all
    I don't want to hear my dads voices again
    Then later Mummy fall

    I don't want to see the look on her face
    The one all scared and anxious who flinches so
    I know inside she doesn't have the guts
    The guts to go ahead and say it, Daddy please go

    So for now we live in silence,
    No love at all shared
    Mummy knows about me inside
    That I'm deeply scared

    Scared Mummy will die and leave me here
    Leave me in Daddy's world
    If Mummy dies, who will he hit?
    Surely he won't start on his little girl

    I've phoned my Nan, Left it off the hook
    She can hear everything, what he's doing
    She storms round and shes mad
    Hurray for Nan, We're no longer sad

    Now Mummy's happy
    And Daddy's in prison
    We live together, Just mummy and Me
    Together, Our life has risen

    © Lisa Kymberley Dark

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    That was excellent, please post more!

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    another excellent poem, your writings great!
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    Questions

    Will i ever see him again i wonder?
    When ever i see him my heart beats like thunder,
    Will i be able to cope without him in my life?
    To go through all that pain and strife.
    Not seeing him every day will be pure hell,
    Three words i want to say to him,for me to tell.
    I wish i could tell him what he means to me,
    Is he so blind that he can not see?
    Will i have the guts to tell him before i go?
    What will his response be,will it be so?
    No matter how much pain hes caused me,
    My love eternally grows,he's given me my highs but also my lows.
    Why can't someone help him to see,
    He has one very important part of me
    Forever and always i will love thee,
    because he means so much to me.
    ©michelle w

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    M.a.s

    I know you did it because you thought i'd hurt less,
    but i'm hurting more then ever before and now i'm a total mess.
    I cried so much that i had run out of tears,
    you had really gone, and brought out all my fears.
    There were so many things i had to say to you,
    you thought that i had said it all,but you really hadn't a clue.
    I tried to stop my feelings from getting all that strong,
    because it had happened once before and that had gone so wrong.
    My feelings were so much stronger for you though,
    now i'm in more pain then ever and just wishing it would go.
    Hoping,wishing and praying that you'll get in touch,
    i really don't think i'm asking of all that much.
    I know you really did care for me,
    there were just so many problems that i didn't want to see.
    We could and we still can work them all out,
    because i'm still willing to give it a go so i'll hang about.
    I don't hate you for it though,i don't think i ever could,
    for there were all those things i never understood.
    Well in the end i think we're meant to be together.
    So i'm positive we'll meet again one day,then we'll be forever.
    ©michelle w
    Last edited by chance; 24-04-2005 at 15:59.

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    wow chance them 2 poems were great!
    ~x~Tizzy~x~
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    arrr cheers!

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