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LOOK OUYT WORLD! DOLPHIN DRAMA QUEEN IS COMING THROUGH!
Its ok
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Hiro: ...but you flying man! WHOOOOSSSHHH!
Nathan: Would you keep it down?
Hiro: ...whooooosh.
Thanks for the replies and for forgiving me
PART 27
Jake mopped the beads of sweat from Chrissie's forehead. She was in the hospital having the baby.
Dr: Okay now, push.
She squeezed Jake's hand hard as she did this.
Jake: Owwwwwww!
He shook it.
Chrissie: You think that's painful? Well do you wanna have this baby for me?
Jake: No thankyou.
Chrissie pushed again. She screamed in pain.
Dr: It's almost over. Just one more push.
She pushed once more and the pain was over. She'd had the baby.
Dr: It's a girl!
The midwife cleaned the baby and wrapped her in a blanket. She handed her to Chrissie.
Chrissie: She's beautiful Jake.
Jake: She must take after her..
Chrissie: ..Mother?
Jake: Well I was going to say father but whatever suits you.
She hit him gently, holding the baby in the other arm.
Chrissie: Here, you hold her.
He cradled her in his arms. A tear of happiness rolled down his cheek. Chrissie just smiled as she watched him. A nurse came into the room carrying a clipboard.
Nurse: -To doctor- Sir, I think you should see this.
He looked at the clipboard.
Dr: Oh.
Chrissie looked at the doctor, suddenly feeling worried. What if there was something wrong with the baby?
Chrissie: What is it?
Dr: Well..
To be continued...
Thanks for the AMAZING banner Layneykins!
I feel an arm breaking coming on. hat is on that clipboard? Post more a.s.a.p please. Fabby as usual
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Hiro: ...but you flying man! WHOOOOSSSHHH!
Nathan: Would you keep it down?
Hiro: ...whooooosh.
aww a ickle baby girl, don't let anything be wrong with her!
Fabi, post more soon
luv ya
Layne
x x x
awwwwwwwwwwwww da bebe is here awwwwww but what's wrong be nice Amber pleaseeeeeee
Thanks Jessie Wallace For My Fab Banner
aww sweet baby!! but whats wrong??!!!
thanks torrie for my gorgeous banna!!
Dennis: A moment of insanity. I only went an' proposed, didn't I?
yey yey yey... they have a ickle bebe... a tiny ickle bebe girl... yey yey yey... Jake and Chrissie have a daughter... please don't let anything be wrong... please don't be mean... WE WANT THE BEBE TO BE ALL RIGHT... WE WNAT THE BEBE TO BE ALL RIGHT... i duno whether we could forgive you if the bebe is poorly...
Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005
Thanks for reading it
This time I'm not lying. It is the end this time.
Just one more thing, do you think I should do a sequel? I have got a few ideas in mind but they're all kinda lame
Let me know
PART 28
Dr: Well the computer got your details and another patient's details mixed up.
Jake: And?
Dr: And there's another baby on the way.
Chrissie: WHAT?!?
Jake: You mean we've got twins?
Dr: Yes.
Chrissie: I can't have another baby. I just can't.
Jake: Chrissie, you can do this. You've just gotta try.
He squeezed her hand reassuringly.
Chrissie: Alright. I'll do it for you, 'cause I love you.
Jake: Well that's good to know but you've got another kid on the way.
Several painful moments later..
Chrissie sat with her little baby boy in her arms. She had just given birth for the second time. She sighed with relief. Jake smiled and looked down at his daughter, Haylie. She was sleeping peacefully.
Jake: I love you.
He kissed Chrissie softly on the lips.
Chrissie: Do you want to hold Adam again?
Jake: Yeah alright then.
She passed him to Jake.
Jake: You know one thing that we've made today?
Chrissie: 2 beautiful little babies? A marriage?
He shook his head.
Jake: A family.
She smiled. Tears fell from her eyes. She had never been happier. It had been the best day of her life.
THE END
Last edited by Amber; 11-07-2005 at 18:41.
Thanks for the AMAZING banner Layneykins!
oh my god, wow that was lovely! i'ms o close to tears!!!
Wow!
yes please do a sequel,please
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
I'm really upset that it has finished,but well done was a great script and i loved reading it!
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