Hi people.
I have started a story but I haven't thought of a name for it yet so any suggestions are welcome !
Anyway here's the first part,
Enjoy !
PART 1
Chrissie had been seeing Jake secretly as she had recently realised what a nasty piece of work Den really was. Zoe had told her about him trying to make her pregnant. She wanted to hurt him so much but she knew nothing would be able to destroy him. She just thought she'd act as if she loved him, but when she said she was going shopping, she'd be with Jake. Little did she know that this would all change...
Chrissie: Den i'm just going out for a walk..I'll be back soon.
Den: Alright.-He smiled at her.-Just be back whenever you want.-He leant over and kissed her, she cringed, but he didn't notice.-
She smiled and left the Vic's usual buzz, heading for the Moon's. She knocked on the door. Jake opened it, then smiled.
Jake: Hello. How are you?
Chrissie: Hi. I'm fine. Can I come in?
Jake opened the door a little bit more and took her hand, then let her in. She smiled lovingly at him. For a few moments she was caught up in his dreamy gaze...Until he kissed her passionately. She closed her eyes and she felt so happy. Mind you she always did when she was with Jake. She pulled away, smiling.
Chrissie: I can't wait until Den knows and this is all over. All of this hiding and all of these secrets. And we can be together. At last.
Jake: When are you going to tell him?
Chrissie: Tonight.-She smiled and walked into the living room. Jake followed and kissed her softly.-
Chrissie felt like she was being watched but took no notice of it. They carried on kissing and then ran to Jake's bedroom. Chrissie undid the buttons on his shirt. He kissed her neck. She giggled. He slid his hand under her top and unclipped her bra...
Later on..
Chrissie kissed Jake once more. Then she remembered she said she'd only be out for a while. Chrissie looked at her watch. It was three hours ago that she had left the Vic and closing time had been and gone.
Chrissie: I've got to go.
Jake: Good luck then.
Chrissie: Good luck for what?-She looked at him with a puzzled expression spread across her face-
Jake: Breaking up with Den.
Chrissie: Oh right..I'll come over as soon as i've told him. Ok?
Jake: Sure.
She got out of the bed and collected her clothes that were scattered across the room then got dressed. She kissed him lovingly then left. She walked to the Vic and opened the doors. She walked over to Den.
Chrissie: Sorry. I found this really great shop and I guess I just lost track of time.
Den: No it's alright.-he smiled-
Chrissie: We need to talk.
Chrissie was so nervous but she just wanted to get it over with. She swallowed.
Chrissie: Den, I can't live like this any more. I have been seeing Jake ever since Zoe told me you tried to make her pregnant. I'm sorry but I don't love you -tears slipped down her cheeks- I love Jake.
Den: Zoe told you.
Chrissie: Yes and I told Jake about it and he was so nice and we just clicked I guess.
Den: I saw you with him.
Chrissie: What?
Den: Today. You and him were kissing and then you both ran upstairs.
Chrissie: I'm sorry.
Den was angry now.
Den: So you think that if you say sorry everything goes away? Well my sweet, it doesn't. It just get's worse because if I ever see you with him again, I will kill him. -shouting- Got it?
She nodded her head silently.
To be continued..
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