Firstly, I'd like to say what Students is about.
Students is a soap written by me. It is following the lives of pupils in thier school, as they cope with death, trauma, affairs, fights and twists along the way - making one hell of a bumpy ride!
Students has already started on Talk Walford, and has exceeded it's 100th episode.
To start with, the first...10 or so episodes are fairly dull and badly written, but this is because I started writing it about 9 months ago - so I have improved a lot since then. All the episodes will be posted here and I hope it will be as successful as it is at Talk Walford, with quite a few people reading.
Episode 1: Year 10: September:
The bus pulled up at the kerb and the gravel cruched under the wheels. Jake walked off the bus, looking up at the building in front of him. Jake trailed off and Kelly followed.
“Jake. Wait” Kelly shouted after him. Jake spun round, smiling.
“Hi” he whispered.
“Where you shooting off to?” She asked.
“Erm… I’m not actually sure. Want to follow?” Jake answered. Kelly laughed.
“Yeah. I’d like that” In the hall, the double doors swung open and Bella walked in. She smiled and liked her teeth. She opened another door and bumped into a girl.
“Watch it, will ya” Bella shouted. The girl snarled and look dirtily at her. “Look at me” Bella said “I’ve been in the school 5 minutes and I’m already making enemies” she laughed. The girl laughed too. She held out her hand. “I’m Bella, she said”
“Hi Bella.. I’m Gina” the girl said as they shook hands.
Chris ran after Billy. “Billy! Wait. Wait!” he screamed. Billy turned around and lifted his head up.
“Chirs! How are you?” Billy questioned.
“Great thanks. I have a feeling this’ll be a brilliant day!” Chris smiled. They headed towards the hall. After the bell rang, they were sorted into form groups. Kelly, Gina, Jake, Chris, Billy and Bella were all in the same form. They headed towards the form group. I small hut, separated from the rest of the school. A tall man turned round as the class sorted themselves into a line. “I’m Garry and this…” he said “…Is your form room” he finished. Carley looked up and down at the hut.
“Oh great(!)” she said sarcastically. The form tutor asked her name. She answered and he told her to keep her opinions to herself. Jake turned around and smiled at her. She smiled back and rolled her eyes. The group sat down at the desk.
“And last, But not least Pete” The form tutor finished the register. He told them they could talk for 5 minutes. Pete walked over to a little boy in the corner of the room, on his own, talking to himself. He sat down next to her.
“Hi” he said, quietly.
The boy looked up at Pete and smiled. “Hi” he replied. “I’m Matt”
tbc...