eefiction

[bakedbean]

Hey this is pretty good, maybe you could do your own soap like me i would love some competition.

[Jessie Wallace]

keep it up, your doing well.

[baileya]

Im really glad you have liked the previous parts so here is the next one

Trisha: Well I better get going.
Demi: Ok I hope you are alright
Trisha: Same to you Demi. Remember what I said!
Demi: I will. Ill come to the door with you.
Demi and Trisha go to the door and trisha leaves. Rosie enters the Hall.
Rosie: Demi everyone has gone now. We will leave you alone if you want.
Demi: Thanks mum.
Demi goes into the living room followed by Rosie. Demi lies on the couch.
Rosie: Do you want anything to eat darling?
Demi: No mum Im not hungry.
Rosie: Demi you have to eat. You aint eaten since you have came home and the doctors said you didnt eat anything whilst you where in hospital.
Demi: Ill have something later.
Rosie: Ok. Will you be ok on your own for an hour because Ian has asked me and Dad to go to the vic for a drink with him.
Demi. Yes Ill be fine. Dont get drunk!!!
Rosie: Ok see you later.
Rosie leaves with Keith and Demi falls asleep. Half an hour later Demi wakes up in a very hot sweat and she starts to be sick.
Demi. Help!!......Darren.......Mickey........Anyone!
No one replied. Demi fainted. About half an hour later Rosie and Keith returned.
Keith: Dems were home. Dems...Dems.
Rosie: Keith she must be asleep.
Keith: At half past eight?
Rosie enters the Living room.
Rosie: (panicking) Keith. Help! Demi aint moving!
Keith rushes in
Keith: Rosie Dial an ambulance.
Rosie: (dialling the number) I need an ambulance.
Reciever: Whats the problem?
Rosie: Yes hurry its my daughter shes not responding.
Reciever: Ok What address are you at?
Rosie: 27 Albert Square.
5 minutes later the ambulance arrived at the door.
Ambulance man: Hello Demi I am a paramedic were going to take you to the hospital!
Demi did not respond.

NEXT TIME: WILL DEMI BE OK?? WHAT WILL HAPPEN IF SHE IS FINE? WILL SHE DIE???

Hope you enjoyed this one as much and I will be happy to hear your replys.

[diamond1]

hahahah classic story really good not answering the paramedic thats our demi

[baileya]

thankyou the next part will come tonight after ive watched tonights eppy over and over again! So keep posting until about 11 when i post the next part.

[baileya]

Ok then here is the next part hope you enjoy it.

In the waiting room all of the millers are waiting for news on demi.

Mickey: I cant believe whats happening to us! They must of seen that demi couldnt cope with the outside world. I think they let her home to early.
Rosie: I think weve been putting to much pressure on her with the party and everything.
A consultant enters.
Rosie: (standing up) Hi doctor, whats the news?
Consultant: Well Demi is awake. But we cant let her out until she eats something. We would also like Demi to see someone for her mental state straight away but we need your approval before this can happen.
Keith: Doctor we will do anything to help our Demi get back to being that lovely little girl.
Consultant: Ok if you are all happy with that...
The consultant looks around and everyone nods.
Consultant:... Does anyone want to sit with her during her session?
Rosie: Yes. I will.
Consultant: Ok then would you like to follow me.
Rosie follows the consultant to a room down the corridor. He stopped just before they entered the room.
Consutant: Mrs.Miller I would like to warn you that this will be very stressful.
They entered the room where Demi, a nurse and another woman were sitting.
Rosie: Oh Demi it is great to see you awake.
Demi: It is great to be awake mum.
The woman clears her throat.
Psychologist: Ok then shall we get started. Demi I would like you to know that this is to help you get over this terrible incident. So then Demi what is on your mind?
Demi: Everything. How am I going to get over Leo?
Psychologist: Demi to tell you the truth you will never get over him deep down because he is your first love. But you are a lovely girl and you will meet loads of other boys.
Demi: What about Aleesha, what am I going to tell her when she asks for her daddy?
Psychologist: You tell her the truth and tell her that daddy died full of love and before daddy died he told you to look after her. Aleesha is a beautiful baby and show your love for leo on her. Then gradually everything will get easier.
Demi: That is all that is on my mind. Thankyou. Come to think of it Im getting quite hungry.
Everyone smiled.
Psychologist: Remember Demi if you ever want to talk. Ring the hospital and ask for june.
Demi: Thanks.Thanks alot.
Rosie: Were really greatful.
Demi and Rosie head for the waiting room and enter it.
Demi: Hi everyone.
Darren: Alright sis. You gave us another scare.
Demi: Sorry. Shall we go home?
The millers leave.

NEXT TIME: DEMI TAKES A TRIP TO LEOS GRAVE.

please reply with your views n comments.

[Charmed]

Wow...the next part sounds great,Demi visiting Leo's grave!

[baileya]

Ill post the next part later please post more comments until then.

[baileya]

Ok then here is the next part.

Back at the millers Demi is asleep on the couch.

Darren: (shaking Demi) Dems...Dems...Ive made you some toast.
Demi: (waking up) Thanks Darren. Ive really missed you (Demi hugs Darren) Im going to go out in a bit.
Darren: Where you going?
Demi: Well I think I might go and get some flowers and put them on Leos grave.
Darren: Its up to you Dems.
Darren leaves Demi eating her toast. After she eat her toast she strapped Aleesha in her pram.
Demi: (Talking to Aleesha) Shall we go and see Daddy?? Shall we go and see Daddy??
Demi and Aleesha head down to the cemetary. Down at the cemetary she sits down at Leos grave.
Demi: Hello babe,weve really missed you havent we. I want you to know that I am going to look after Aleesha even more just for you. I need to say this and get it off my chest. It was a mistake. Gavin was really forcing me to take it.
Demi pulls something from Aleeshas pram.
Demi: (tear in her eye) I have to put this hear to remind you of us.
Demi puts a picture of Demi,Leo and Aleesha on his grave. Back at the millers Darren is watching the tv and Mickey arrives back from work.
Mickey: Alright Darren wheres Demi?
Darren: Shes gone to Leos grave.
Mickey: (Angry) DARREN WHY DIDNT YOU STOP HER! DONT TELL MUM. ILL GO AND GET HER BACK!!
Mickey leaves Darren shocked. Down at Leos grave Demi is sitting alone pushing Aleesha when Mickey arrives behind her.
Mickey: Alright Sis?
Demi: (Turning around) Oh hi Mickey. Just thaught Id come and put these on Leos grave.
Mickey: Any better?
Demi: (slight smile) Ye. Alot better. Now he knows how I feel.
Mickey: So,shall we go home?
Demi: Ye come on then.
Demi and Mickey leave arm around each other.

NEXT TIME: ROSIE AND DEMI TALK AND ROSIE TELLS DEMI SOMETHING IMPORTANT. YOULL BE SHOCKED!!!!!

post your comments on this part if you will

[baileya]

Ill post the next part later on.