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    Something To Remember - Jakissie (Sequel)

    Ok!
    This is a sequel to 'Your Love Is My Oxygen' but it says 'No Name Yet' because I didn't have a name for it at the time.

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    Anyways if you can't remember what happened basically Chrissie knew about Zoe and Den and she'd fallen in love with Jake. She told Den and he threatened to kill Jake if he saw them together. Chrissie almost died in a car crash when she was getting away from Jake. Jake proposed and she agreed but then she found out he'd had a fling with Zoe. She didn't want to marry him but then she missed him and they made up. Jake proposed again after finding out Chrissie was pregnant. She accepted again. Den escaped from prison (he was set up by Phil ) and came back to kill Jake. He didn't manage to but found out Sharon had been back and went to find her. He ran over Zoe (unfortunately he didn't kill her!) and he died. Zoe left Walford. At their wedding Chrissie went into labour and had twins.

    Ok, I think that's about it!

    The first part is kind of strange but you'll find out why alot later.

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    Something To Remember - Part 1
    Chrissie was sat on a chair at the table in the kitchen. The kettle boiled. She got up and poured her eighth cup of coffee that night. She placed it on the table and sat back down. Silence. She hated it. It made her feel so alone, like she was just a shadow in the moonlight and nothing more. Like no one knew she existed and like no one cared. It made her think of what had happened over the last couple of months. She buried her face in her hands, not wanting to think about it. But she couldn't stop thinking about it. It had been the one thing she hadn't stopped thinking about all night. It was his fault. She couldn't have it happening again. So she was left with one choice. End it. The same thought ran wild through her mind as thought about when it started.

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    Chrissie's Flashback
    A black cab pulled up outside the Queen Vic. Chrissie got out holding her daughter in her arms. Jake joined her after paying the driver and picking up his son and their bags. She opened the back door and Jake went to put the bags upstairs. No one had seen Chrissie since her wedding day apart from Jake. She wanted to keep the fact that she had twins a suprise. It was good to be back, she thought. She took a deep breath and pushed open the doors to the bar. Sharon rushed over with a smile spread across her face.
    Sharon: She's gorgeous!
    Chrissie: I know! You can hold her if you like.
    She took her out of Chrissie's arms and into her own.
    Chrissie: Thanks for looking after the Vic for me.
    Sharon: It's okay.
    Chrissie: Well, me and Jake have talked it over and we want you and Dennis to have these..
    She took out two tickets to Thailland.
    Sharon: I can't take those. Think about it, you are giving me two tickets to what is meant to be your honeymoon.
    Chrissie: Well we've decided we'll go somewhere once we're settled with her.
    She pointed to the baby.
    Sharon: Are you sure?
    Chrissie: Positive.
    Sharon: Oh thanks! I'm sure Dennis will be very pleased.
    Jake walked in with their son.
    Sharon: You had two?!
    Chrissie nodded smiling.
    Sharon: That's great!..What are their names?
    Jake: Well this little fella is Adam Joshua Moon and she's Haylie Ashleigh Moon.
    Sharon: They're nice names.
    Jake grinned. Sharon looked at her watch.
    Sharon: Blimey! I almost forgot to open up! Here you go.
    She placed Haylie in Chrissie's arms carefully and unbolted the doors of the Vic..


    More..?
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    Yeah This Is A Really Good Start

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    Fab start honey, post more soon please xxx

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    Sorry it's a little short!

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    Something To Remember - Part 2
    Chrissie: Can you stay off of work today? I want you to be around me and the babies for a couple of days.
    Jake: Alright I'll phone Johnny to check.. Will you hold him Chrissie?
    Chrissie: Sure -She took Adam from him-
    He went out and dialled Johnny's phone number and waited for him to pick up.
    Johnny: Hello?
    Jake: Hello it's Jake.
    Johnny: Oh hi Jake.
    Jake: Do you need me at work today?
    Johnny: You're going to have to do Danny's shift because he thinks that if you can have time off, he can too. I need you in any way because Billy's ill.
    Jake sighed.
    Jake: Ok I'll be at work in about 10 minutes.
    He put the phone down and went back into the bar.
    Jake: I'm sorry Chrissie. Johnny said--
    Chrissie: Jake please don't do this to me.
    Jake: It's not my fault. Billy's ill.
    Chrissie: Oh and what about Danny is he incapable of doing any work?
    Jake: No he isn't going to work because he thinks he can have time off because I have time off.
    Chrissie: That's typical of Danny!
    Jake: I know but that's not the worst of it..
    Chrissie: What now then?
    Jake: Well Johnny said that I have to do Danny's shift tonight.
    A few of the regulars went to the bar to order drinks.
    Jake: I'm sorry.. I'll make it up to you.
    Chrissie: Jake, just go.
    Jake: I'm sorry. I'll see you later.
    He walked out. Sharon served someone then came over.
    Sharon: Are you alright?
    Chrissie: I'm fine, just fine.
    She left the bar with Haylie and Adam, feeling disappointed.
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    Awwwwww poor Chrissie! post more soon tis fab! x

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    Sorry about the wait.

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    Something To Remember - Part 3
    Alfie walked into Scarlets. Jake was sitting at a table doing the orders.
    Alfie: Alright?
    Jake: -He sighed- Yeah.
    Alfie: Oh come on, married life isn't that bad!
    Jake: No it's not that..It doesn't matter, anyway what are you here for?
    Alfie: Well I need to ask you a favour..
    Jake: Go on then, what is it?
    Alfie: Well I'm visiting Spencer next week for 4 days and I need you to look after Nana whilst I'm gone. I can't trust Danny especially when she has the flu. She needs to take her tablets every 4 hours so you'll have to be there to get her up in the night and give her the tablets. Can you do it for me? 'Cause otherwise I can't go..
    Jake: Yeah alright then.
    Alfie: Thankyou!
    He left. Jake put his head in his hands regretfully.

    Later on..
    Jake walked into the Vic. Chrissie served another customer.
    Jake: Are you ok?
    Chrissie: Yeah, I'm fine.
    He walked round the bar to her. He took her hands in his.
    Jake: I'm sorry. I've had a go at Danny and I've talked to Johnny and I can have the rest of the week off.
    Chrissie: I'm sorry too. I overreacted. I shouldn't have shouted at you like that.
    Jake: I deserved it though.
    She shook her head.
    Chrissie: No you didn't.
    She kissed him gently.
    Jake: But I will.
    She frowned.
    Jake: Alfie wants me to stay with Nana next week because he's going to see Spencer. She's got the flu.
    Chrissie: For how long?
    Jake: 4 days.
    Chrissie: Really?
    Jake: Yeah.
    Chrissie: It doesn't matter.
    She bit her lip to stop herself from crying. Jake could see she was upset.
    Jake: How about I take you out to dinner tonight?
    Chrissie: Alright then.
    She tried to smile.
    Chrissie: Sharon, is it ok if we go out?
    Sharon: Yeah of course it is. I'll babysit if you want.
    Chrissie: Thanks babe.
    She got her coat and they both left out the back door.
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    Awww well at least jake has made it up!!! Post more soon i honey i love it!
    Layne
    x x x


    Oh and have a good holiday honey! Will miss ya xxx
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    Wow Amber this is amazing Jake and Chrissie and babies I can't wait for the next part when you get back

    Have a good time babes we'll miss you it looks gorgeous there you lucky thing
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    this is really good Amber. Hope you enjoyed your holiday
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    Thankyou!

    I had a great holiday but I've just walked in so I'm pretty tired.

    I've written a few parts on paper so it's just a matter of typing it up

    I will post more as soon as possible.. after I've watched EE and Bromwell High on tape
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