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  1. #11
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    HANCOCK TAXI RANK OFFICE-DAY

    JIMMY is sat at his desk working the phone line booking in the taxis.

    JIMMY
    Yes love will be with you in 10 minutes just on his way now
    LEN walks into the office JIMMY put his head set down
    JIMMY
    Alright Dad how are you
    LEN
    Champion pal Champion...Aye got a right good tip for you today on the horses
    JIMMY
    Oh Yea will have to have a look in a bit
    LEN
    That problem you told me about the other week is it er is it sorted lad
    JIMMY
    Oh i bloody wish dad
    LEN
    And you still aint told Val
    JIMMY
    Could you imagine her reaction she was always set againts me getting this place said it was worthless and well she was right as always
    LEN
    Thats women for you always right...Look lad if you need some money i...
    JIMMY
    No dad you couldnt lend me enough to get myself out of this hole
    Phone starts to ring
    JIMMY
    Look dad im going to need to get back to work
    LEN
    Yeah alright lad
    LEN leaves the office looking concerned for JIMMY

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    THE BELL SMOKING AREA EXT-DAY

    ANDY is outside smoking when his phone rings he looks unhappy and answers

    ANDY
    How many times do i have to tell you you dont ring me i ring you....What yeah its coming stop stressing...How is he...Yeah well end of the week i will have it i promise....Yeah bye.

    ANDY hangs up looking uneasy

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    CHRISSIE AND MAX KITCHEN INT-DAY

    CHRISSIE is making 2 cups of tea for her and dad Brian. She brings them over to Brain who is sat at the table eating a sandwich

    BRIAN
    Oh cheers love....You know i cant wait until they have finished building that blasted kitchen...Im missing home cooking especially your mothers
    CHRISSIE
    Kate said you have been in the Coach almost evrey day for the past 2 weeks for lunch
    BRIAN
    Well how else am i supposed to eat you know i wish i never agreed to this kitchen
    CHRISSIE
    Yes well you should know better than anyone else mum always gets her way
    LIZZIE walks in through the back door and sits down next to BRIAN AND CHRISSIE
    BRIAN
    Oh hiya love
    LIZZIE
    Eating again Dad
    BRIAN
    What is this evrey tom dick and harry watching how much i am eating
    LIZZIE
    Never mind dad your kitchen will soon be ready and you can enjoy mums cooking all over again
    BRIAN
    Oh i really cant wait for some home cooking
    LIZZIE
    Listen dad have you seen the paper the hair dressers is still for sale
    BRIAN
    Oh not this again Lizzie i said no and i meant it
    LIZZIE
    Come on dad you know it makes sense i mean im already running the place so we may as well own it
    BRAIN
    I said no Lizzie and we are not having this discussion again ok
    LIZZE
    Fine
    LIZZIE storms out slamming the door behined her BRIAN look angry
    BRIAN
    That bloody girl

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    CORNER SHOP INT DAY

    SILVIA is working behined the counter while talking to SALLY, VIV is filling up her basket with goods.

    SILVIA
    So Sally how is the kitchen coming along
    SALLY
    I never knew there was so many different types of sinks there is literally hundreds
    SILVIA
    Bob said Brian was complaining the other evening
    SALLY
    He is missing his home cooking which i can understand but it wont take much longer
    SILVIA
    I would love a new kitchen just need to convince Bob
    SALLY
    It is most certainly worth it Silvia
    VIV walks up to the counter with her goods
    VIV
    Afternoon girls how are we
    SALLY
    Oh Viv i was thinking about you this morning i have something for you if you would like it
    VIV
    Oh yea and what is that
    SALLY
    Well my old work tops i mean your kitchen could do with a re vamp how would you like them
    VIV
    You cant be serious
    SALLY
    Pardon
    VIV
    You are offering me your hand me downs who on earth do you think you are
    SALLY
    I was only offering
    VIV
    Yes well dont
    SALLY
    Oh really

    SALLY leaves the shop

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    THE BELL BAR INT: EVENING

    ANDY and KATE are both working behined the bar BOB and BRIAN are sat having a drink and the bar is busy with other locals

    BOB
    Hey did you hear your Sally upset Viv
    BRIAN
    Oh not again for goodness sake what about now
    BOB
    Well i dont understand it Sally offered Viv your old sideboards i dont really see the problem with that
    BRIAN
    Women Bob i will never understand bloody women
    Camera cuts over to the door where two policemen walk in with Inspector Barlow ANDY looks uneasy about this
    BARLOW
    Andrew Macklin
    ANDY
    Whats up now Barlow
    BARLOW
    I have a warrant to search your premesis for stolen goods paticulary trianers

    The police start to search the pub as the regulars look on KATE and ANDY look nervous at what the police are about to find.

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    bakedbean, you might want to look at changing the way you are scripting this, I find it very difficult to read ...

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    Yea I typed it on word and when I copied here it didn't look right so I'm going to have to figure that one out.

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    Episode 2 scene 1

    FADE IN

    THE BELL LIVING ROOM INT MORNING

    ANDY is sat down on the sofa next to BETH drinking a cup of tea KATE walks in lookng angry


    ANDY
    Still not speaking to me i take it then

    KATE ignores ANDY and sits down and starts to read her magazine

    BETH
    Silent treatment dad is never good how are you going to get out of this one

    KATE
    He isnt Beth your dad has really gone and done it this time

    ANDY
    Evreything is going to be fine

    KATE
    Really (getting angrier) You cant seriously believe that evreything is going to be fine we could lose this place Andy and its all because of your stupidity. How many times did i have to tell you dont bring any of your stolen goods here

    ANDY
    I was trying to make us some extra money

    KATE
    Yea well im sick to death of it all Andy you better come up with a plan because im not willing to lose this place we have worked to damn hard to keep The Bell going so you better get your thinking cap on and sort out this mess

    FADE OUT

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    Episode 2 scene 2

    FADE IN

    THE HANCOCK KITCHEN INT DAY

    VAL is making a fry up JIMMY walks in looking tired

    VAL
    Blimey you look exhausted

    JIMMY
    I feel it i had a terrible nights sleep

    VAL
    You were tossing and turning most of the night you kept waking me up

    JIMMY
    Oh im sorry love

    VAL
    You havent been yourself lately hardly sleeping and being grumpy most of the day are you sure there is nothing going on

    JIMMY
    No Val im just struggling to get to sleep

    VAL
    Maybe i should book you for a doctors appointment

    JIMMY
    No i dont want to see no doctor Val

    Val's mobile starts to ring she looks at it and it says Mum

    JIMMY
    Not going to answer that then

    VAL
    No

    JIMMY
    She has phoned for you evrey day this week Val

    VAL
    Yeah well she can keep on ringing
    FADE OUT

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    FADE IN:


    LEN AND EDNA KITCHEN INT MORNING

    EDNA brings in a cooked breakfast for a gloomy looking LEN

    LEN

    Cheers chuck

    EDNA
    Well you could crack a smile Len

    LEN
    Sorry chuck im just not in the mood

    EDNA
    Whats wrong Len you have been like this for days im worried about you

    LEN
    If i tell you promise me you wont get angry and all guns blazing

    EDNA
    Go on then how much have you lost on the horses this time

    LEN
    Oh i wish it was that chuck i really do

    EDNA
    So if its not the horses then what...Are you in some sort of trouble

    LEN
    Not me chuck not me...Its our kid...Jimmy has gone and got himself into so much debt chuck i just don't know what to do.

    EDNA
    How much debt Len

    LEN
    Enough that we cant afford to help him

    LEN and EDNA both look concerned as the scene fades
    FADE OUT

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