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    VIVS CAFE INT MORNING

    VIV is behined the counter serving customers while SALLY and LIZZIE are sat down both drinking coffee

    LIZZIE
    Come on mum you know it makes sense

    SALLY
    I agree with you buying the salon is a good idea but you know what your dad thinks

    LIZZIE
    Cant you convince him

    SALLY
    Look i will have a chat with him later but i am not making any promises

    MAX walks in and goes to the counter to speak to VIV

    VIV
    Oh hello Max what can i get you

    MAX
    Erm nothing sorry Viv im looking for Val

    VIV
    Oh i see well she is not on shift today can i leve a message

    MAX
    Nah i will pop round cheers anyway Viv

    VIV
    No problem

    MAX leaves

    FADE OUT

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    THE BELL BACK YARD EXT MORNING

    ANDY is smoking while on the phone looking around making sure no one can hear his conversation

    ANDY
    Look im struggling at the minute its not easy....No you listen....Look shut up will you...Look i will be round in a few days i just need some more time...Dont try and blackmail me...Hello...Hello

    FADE OUT

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    HANCOCK FRONT ROOM INT AFTERNOON
    JIMMY is sat at the table going through some paperwork when there is a knock at the door JIMMY goes to answer the door and EDNA walks in she spots the paperwork

    JIMMY
    You alright mum

    EDNA
    No not at all

    JIMMY
    Why whats wrong

    EDNA
    Me and your father have just had a chat about your situation

    EDNA looks at the paperwork

    JIMMY
    Oh what did he go and tell you for look dad has probably made it sound worse than what it seems

    EDNA
    Twelve grand debts Jimmy is pretty much as bad as it gets if you ask me...What have you been doing you silly fool

    JIMMY
    Look it will be fine im just late on a few bills thats all

    EDNA
    Jimmy dont treat me like im soft your in real trouble here and you need to sort this you could lose evreything

    JIMMY
    And dont you think i know that mum a lecture is the last thing i need

    EDNA
    Listen me and your dad we have some savings put away for a rainy day he doesnt know about it because well i didnt want him to put it all on a horse...Let us help you son

    JIMMY
    I cant do that mum...I got myself into this mess and now its up to me to get myself out of it.

    At the top of the stairs JAY and WILL are sat both listening and looking concerned

    FADE OUT

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    THE BELL FRONT ROOM INT AFTERNOON

    ANDY and KATE both walk in to the living room KATE is still looking unhappy

    KATE
    So come on then whats your grand plan

    ANDY
    Look the likely hood is that i will lose my licence meaning...

    KATE
    Meaning that we lose this place our business and our home gone forever

    ANDY
    Kate will you hear me out please

    KATE
    This better be good

    ANDY
    Your right without my licence we have no pub no home...But if we get you a licence then we are covered aint we...The courts cant touch you so long as i admit full responsibility

    KATE
    So you mean my name above the door

    ANDY
    Exactly

    KATE smirks at the idea

    KATE
    Sometimes Andy you really are a genius

    KATE'S phone starts to ring she answers

    KATE
    Max what's wrong....Yeah ok...Val coming too...Ok well i wont be long

    FADE OUT

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    WILL AND JAY'S BEDROOM INT AFTERNOON

    WILL and JAY are sat on their beds discussing what they have just heard.

    WILL
    We need to find a way to help out dad

    JAY
    Yeah like what

    WILL
    Well i am going to take as much overtime as i can and you need to start looking for a job

    JAY
    It aint easy i have been tryin

    WILL
    Well you are going to have to try harder unless you can think of a better plan

    FADE OUT

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    MAX AND CHRISSIE'S LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON

    MAX VAL and KATE are all sat around the table talking

    VAL
    So go on then what is the emergency

    MAX
    Its mum

    VAL
    Oh here we go look Max whatever lie she is telling you now i am not intrested

    MAX
    Listen Val its serious this time

    VAL
    Oh it always is where she is concerned

    KATE
    Val will you be quiet and let Max tell us what he needs to tell us

    MAX
    Well i went to see her the other day and well she told me she has been to the hospital

    KATE
    Is she ok

    MAX
    No bab she has got cancer and doctors reckon its terminal
    VAL and KATE look worried about what MAX has just revelaed.

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