Truth or lies.....

[Rach33]

Brill as usual babes post more soon

[Angeldelight]

Here we go part 4 hope you like it guys lol

Jake glared at Danny when he sat down in the kitchen
Danny- what?
Jake- you’re an idiot
Danny- why?
Jake- just keep your mouth shut all right
Danny slumped in his chair and ate his toast
Nana- is your friend all right Jake dear
Jake- yeh, she just needs some sleep Nana
Nana- I’ll just take her this tea up and then I’m going shopping
Jake pulled some money out of his wallet, why don’t you buy something nice of yourself Nana
Nana smiled, I don’t need anything dear
Jake- ok why don’t you pick something for dinner
Nana- ok then, she took the money, I’m taking this tea upstairs
Jake- you’re the best Nana
Nana smiled as she walked out of the room
Jake- what’s guna happen if Johnny finds out she’s here?
Danny- we did her a favour
Jake- you think he’s guna see it like that? Were not meant to know her
Danny- relax Johnny won’t find out
Jake- look just keep a lid on it then no one knows she’s here
Danny- ok, ok we gotta get going

Alfie spotted Jake in the square at lunchtime, hey Jake
Jake- what?
Alfie- can you look after the stall for me
Jake- I can’t
Alfie- oh come on please
Jake- I’m sorry Alf
Alfie- where’s Danny?
Jake- café?
Alfie turned and walked into the café

Jake pulled out his key to the front door when Ellie opened it herself, Ellie
Ellie- what you doing here?
Jake- I live here
Ellie- I’ve got to go, see ya later
Jake stood in her way and held her arms, we need to talk
Ellie- I haven’t got time
Jake- tough, he pushed her inside, we've gotta talk
Ellie- look you give me my money and you won’t hear from me again
Jake- what makes you think that?
Ellie sighed, whatever, just give me my money
Jake- I haven’t got it
Ellie- what?
Jake- we lost it
Ellie- you mean Danny was telling the truth
At the surprsie in her voice Jake wanted to smile, about what?
Ellie- you hid the money
Jake- look we were trying to get it back when…
Ellie- when what?
Jake- look we haven’t got it and we have to keep our heads down for a while
Ellie- what have you done?
Jake- nothing just give me sometime
Ellie- fine, stepping away from him
Jake- just like that
Ellie- I have to go, now get out of my way, she walked passed him and towards the doorway
Jake- I’m sorry
Ellie stopped, for what?
Jake- everything
Ellie- apology accepted good-bye
Jake- don’t go
Ellie turned towards him, what?
Jake- hang around for a while
Ellie- why?
Jake- because I want you to
Ellie stood where she was looking at the door, maybe I don’t want to
Jake- just for a few days, I missed you, he stepped forward
Ellie- oh yeh I’m sure you did
Jake- I did, he took her hands, stay
Ellie looked at him, no
Jake kissed her, why not?
Ellie- because I don’t want to, it exploded out of her, I don’t want to be here with you EVER
Jake took a step back, fine
Ellie took a deep breath to make sure she could hold on to her temper, I’ll be back for my money
Jake- I’m sure you will

[Rach33]

fab as usual babes and thanks 4 replying 2 mine keep it up

[di marco]

great script! looks like jake and ellie have a history. cant wait for the next part, hope its soon

[Layne]

Great!!!More soon!!!
Luv ya
Layne
xxx

[Tamzi]

Thats really good. More soon

[Rach33]

Brill babes thanks 4 reading mine love ya

[Angeldelight]

Part 5.....

Ellie stormed out of the house and toward the square when she spotted her dad, knowing he’d figure something out she turned back and walked back to the house on a huff
Jake opened the door
Ellie- you need to hide me, she pushed passed him into the house
Jake- why?
Ellie looked at him, my dad’s back
Jake- oh great
Ellie- yeh well I don’t feel to friendly towards you either
Jake- you know where everything is, he picked up his jacket from the sofa
Ellie- you can’t go
Puzzled he turned round, why?
Ellie- he brought the house, he’s got a key
Jake sat on sofa, and how do you know that?
Ellie- Nana told me
Jake- so
Ellie- he might sneak in
Jake- get a grip
Ellie- you don’t know him like I do
Jake- you’re exaggerating
Ellie- look I don’t want to be here, you don’t want to be here, we both know that, ok
Jake- I don’t mind being here
Ellie- oh shut up
Jake- just getting things straight, he held up his hands as a sing of peace
Ellie- you’re so infuriating
Jake- so are you
Ellie let out a groan of frustration, ohhhhhhh
Jake stood up and walked out the door and into the kitchen; he went straight to the sink and filled the kettle with water, Ellie!
Ellie stood at the door way, what
Jake- you want one?
Ellie- not if you’re making it, she eyed the kettle with disgust
Jake shrugged his shoulders, suit yourself and turned his back on her to pull a mug from out the cupboard
Ellie walked through to the lounge, sat on the sofa and tried to forget where she was, who she was with, he was so irritating and hard headed it made her want to scream. She took another breath, it didn’t matter, she’d be gone in an hour tops

Johnny spotted Danny on the stall and wandered over, wrong job
Danny- I’m helping Alfie out
Johnny- oh yeh
Danny- yeh an Andy’s gone off somewhere anyway
Johnny- he’s not in?
Danny- nah and Jake’s at the house with… …
Johnny- with who?
Danny- no one don’t worry
Johnny- it better be
Danny- look Nana’s not feeling to well
Johnny- I’ll pop round and see her
Danny- she’s in bed
Johnny- I’ll see you later then, and keep out of trouble Danny I mean it
Danny- I will

Jake sat next to her sipping his cup of coffee, watching the T.V.
Ellie- will you stop doing that, she set through her teeth
Jake- doing what?
Ellie- sucking on that coffee
Jake- sorry
Ellie got up and stalked around the room
Jake- restless? He asked sweetly
Ellie- tired, she answered shortly
Jake- you should of got some more sleep
Ellie- you could have told me about Alfie and Nana
Jake looked at her, about what? Why?
Ellie- because I felt like a fool this morning, how the hell was I to know they were here
Jake- oh
Ellie- exactly, I looked like a complete idiot, that’s not something I’m going to forget
Jake- nah that’s Danny
Ellie- don’t placate me Jake, I’m not in the mood
Jake- well what do you want me to say?
Ellie- I don’t know just something, she flung her arms in the air
Jake- what would you like to argue about?
Ellie- I don’t know
Jake stood up facing her, pick something?
Ellie- you and your lame brain
Jake- ok, I don’t have a lame brain
Ellie- you’re an idiot the pair of you are I can’t believe it did business with you
Jake- but you did
Ellie- I don’t know what was I thinking, I must have been mad, completely lost my mind
Jake- you’ll get your money back
Ellie- oh I know I will, her voice had chilled
Jake- I give you my word, you’ll get it back
Ellie- your word means nothing to me, just like your promises
Jake- and what’s that suppose to mean, she’d done it again, he was pissed off
Ellie- you know what it means
Jake- now what have I done?
Ellie shoved him, she had to do something with her rage, you’re a man to start
Jake took her arms before she could shove him again, that’s not my fault
Ellie smiled sweetly, it’s not?
Jake- I can’t help that fact, it’s genetics
Ellie- you can help about being an idiot but you don’t, you can’t
Jake- I’m not an idiot, his voice dangerously low
Ellie- oh yeh, she said sweetly, you are
Jake shook her, what is you’re problem?
Ellie- you are, she stepped to him and crushed her mouth to his
Jake slipped his arms around her, holding her in place
Ellie- we can’t
Jake kissed her again, and again
Ellie pulled at his shirt, quick

[Tamzi]

That's really good. Can't wait for the next bit.

[di marco]

wow, cant wait to see what happens! this is a great script! keep it coming, thanks!