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    Exclamation NEW Joint Script: By *Fanatic*Loves Dennis* & Joel Beckett Lover. Please Read!!!!

    Part 1 -Alternate Christmas Ending


    Zoë: I can’t,

    She turned to Den

    Den: Yes you can tell them

    Sharon: Tell us what?

    Den: Come on Zoë; tell them what you just told me

    Zoë: I’m, I’m Pregnant

    They all went quiet; Vicki turned and looked at Chrissie, who then looked at Dennis and Sharon staring in to each other’s eyes, longing for things to go smoothly, just this once.

    Dennis then turned to face Zoë, he then broke the silence

    Dennis: Is it mine?

    Chrissie: huh

    She walked over and put her arm round Zoe

    Chrissie: Dennis, you really think she’d tell us all this if it weren’t yours?

    Dennis: I don’t know, could you?

    Zoë burst into tears

    Zoë: No

    Dennis: No what?

    Zoë: No I couldn’t <she gave a side wards glance to Den, who stared right back at her, and nodded> Yes it is yours

    She began crying again

    Chrissie wrapped her arms round Zoë

    Chrissie: There, there babe, it’ll be Ok

    Sharon: Congratulations, I guess <sarcastically>

    Den: Princess, there’s no need for that.

    Sharon: Your right dad, there’s not so I take it back but well done

    Zoe: well done for what?

    Sharon: Well your timing is perfect, Dennis is just about to leave you and you spring this bombshell on him, Coincidence?


    Vicki: Sharon, of course its not a coincidence, Zoë didn’t know Dennis was leaving its not like she’s just told us to keep Dennis here, Right?

    Zoë started crying again

    Dennis: For Gods Sake stop crying, your acting like a baby yourself

    Zoë stopped crying, but snivelled

    Dennis was sitting on a chair, looking in to space.

    Dennis: How far?

    Zoë: How far what?

    Dennis: How far between here and Angie’s Den,?How far gone are you?

    Zoë: Um, not sure, a few weeks tops.

    Dennis: What and you just decide to tell me now

    Zoe: I didn’t know
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    Dennis :what so its just an inkling?

    Zoe: no course not

    Sharon: So when did you find out then, when where you planning to tell us?

    Zoe: Us, tell us?

    Sharon: that’s what I said

    Chrissie: Sharon

    Zoe: I wasn’t planning to tell You, I was going to tell Dennis tonight
    <looks at chrissie> Like a late Christmas Present

    Zoe starts crying into Chrissie’s arms

    Dennis:Stop crying, for goodness sake

    Den: Dennis, theres no need for that, can’t you see the poor girls upset, I mean you were gonna leave her

    Sharon: Gonna, we’re still going Dad, aren’t we Dennis?

    Sharon tugs on Dennis’s Arm

    Sharon: Dennis?

    Dennis Huh?I don’t know this isn’t what I expected, its not easy Sharon, I mean she is carrying my child

    Sharon: What, and I’m not,

    Dennis: I didn’t say that

    Sharon: You didn’t need to

    Dennis: Sharon

    Sharon: NO, I understand I can’t have kids, she can, so you might as well stay,

    Sharon runs off

    Dennis: Sharon

    Vicki: No, I’ll go

    Vicki follows

    Dennis paces around for a bit then sits down

    Dennis: so when did you find out?

    Zoe: Yesterday, I was late and I felt a bit ruff so I took a test

    Dennis: Just a test, so its not definite?

    Zoe: No but…

    Vicki walks in
    They all look at her

    Vicki: Sharon wants to be on her own

    Dennis: <turns back to Zoe> So you might not be pregnant?

    Chrissie: You almost seem happy at the idea?

    Dennis: No, but is true?

    Zoe: Yes, I mean I think I know my own body Dennis.

    Vicki: Yeh course, because you get all that morning sickness stuff

    Chrissie: Yeh, thanks for that Vick’s, Have you been sick babe?

    Zoe: Yeh, this morning and a bit before but I think that was just shock

    Chrissie:Aww, poor babe, Does anyone else know?

    Zoe: Apart from the chemist who sold me the test

    Dennis: Zo’ this is serious,

    Zoe: Who’s Laughing?

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    Hope you all enjoyed it!!!
    Right your turn joel beckett lover!!!!
    Part 2 please, it don't matter when just post it asap, it took me ages to write that and i know you have another script, but we need a title or is ot ok the way it is?

    B bck on later

    Luv ya all
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    Part Two Hellooooooooooooo everyone Hello LaYne

    SAVE JAKE AND DANNY

    Dennis- well I’m certainly not laughing

    Zoe- you think I planned this do you think I wanted a baby

    Dennis- how the hell should I know like Sharon said it’s pretty convenient

    Chrissie- Dennis leave her alone haven’t you done enough

    Dennis- enough all I ever did was fall in love I didn’t set out to hurt anyone

    Den looked at his son with disgust and contempt

    Zoe- only you didn’t love me

    The tears began to flow again

    Dennis- no I didn’t I’m not even going to pretend I did I can’t I love Sharon

    Zoe- but we’re going to be a family

    Dennis- based on what a £6.99 pregnancy test if you think I’m giving up Sharon for that you’ve got another thing coming

    Zoe- but…

    Dennis- no buts I’m going to find Sharon

    He turned and stormed out
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    How about Twisted Lies or Christmas Blues I’m running out of ideas

    Sharon sat on the bench in the middle of Albert Square her life was now in tatters a baby it was ruined her and Dennis were over the minute the words spilt out of Zoe’s mouth

    Sharon felt a hot tear scorch her cheeks as she tried to imagine life without Dennis one word sprung to mind EMPTY

    Her eyes fixated on the ground slowly pulled themselves up as a familiar shadow fell across her

    Dennis- Sharon

    Sharon- she’s having your baby

    Dennis- I know but…

    Sharon- no buts it’s over

    Dennis stumbled slightly as the words came out over it couldn’t be
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    Nooo, i'm crying thats fab, love the titles to, i'll do another part 2more
    g2g
    speak 2 ya soon
    luv ya
    Layne
    xxx

    Love ur script 2.
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    cool script! hope the different ending is that dennis stays with sharon!!!

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