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the doctor went to his own bed and thought about what melissa had said.
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rose: melissa? how come you recognise the doctor after all those years?
melissa: he looks exactly like he does now...
the doctor couldn't sleep, he was thinking about what had happened when he'd divorced melanie (melissa's mum)
so he walked to melissa's room and found she wasn't in it, he then heard rose and...
melissa was in her room, the doctor wouldn't let her go anywere else so he made melissa a room next to rose's room.
melissa had a plan, no matter how much she totaly loved her dad, she was going...
doctor: rose, come out of there now!
rose: make me!
the doctor waited and rose came out. she looked around to make sure the doctor wasn't anywere. but the doctor was hiding and he jumped out...
*goes to check when easter is and sulks in the corner*
cool, thx, look at my other dr who script!
(i've done a script on dr who meets eastenders before and i was going to do it again but you've done it!!!!! it's really good by the way :))
ok, once again, this is the 10th dr script :) as people may know, after reading some of my other scripts, i have a wierd wierd imagination :) :searchme:
it was a snowy day and rose and the...
(ok, sorry for not posting in like AGES but my computer broke down)
the tardis was now squished and the doctor was staring at it.
rose was laughing and she walked over to him.
rose: you...
(you'll find out lol)
the girl stared at the doctor and smiled at rose.
dr: y-you're dead!
melissa: that's a nice way to say hi to you're niece!
doctor: i-i'm sorry! i didn't mean to kill...
(ok, if you dont like it, fine but please reply? this is my first dr who script! :searchme: o, and it's the 10th doctor just in case you didn't realise :) )
it was really sunny and rose walked to...
the doctor walks away and goes back to the tardis and can't OPEN the door!
doctor: AH! WHY CAN'T I OPEN THIS?
rose looks out the window
rose: looking for the keys???
doctor: yes, give...
is that the end???? this is SO cool!
the doctor is just about to see were rose had gone and he couldn't see her
then rose came up behind the doctor
rose: hi!
the doctor span round and hugged rose
doctor: i thought you were...
jake walked back to casie to take her to the funeral place but she was gone and he ran to chrissie and fouind her kicking casie and jumping on her as she squeezed casie into a small place were den...
that's the end!
should i do a sequel ?
answer yes and the ideas you want in the sequel
cos i will put all the ideas into the sequel and make A BRILLL script!
please say your asnwer
rose was just about to open the door of the tardis and all of a sudden a helicopter came and shined a light onto her
voice from helicopter: ROSE TYLER, STEP AWAY FROM THE BLUE BOX!
rose was...
that you can do more of?
NOOOOOOOOOOO, CAN'T YOU DO A SCRIPT LIKE IT but with out all this stuff?
More!
emma turned to jake, her eyes red and mascara smudged
emma: correction, I am going and you stay here, my life isn't wortjh living so bye!
she ran to the trainstation and jake ran after her
...
NO NO NO! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE? YOU GUYS ARE SCARING ME NOW COS IF YOU WITNESSED A MURDER AND SOMEONE LIKE CHRISSIE BLAMED IT ALL ON YOU WHEN SHE DID IT, WOULD YOU LIKE IT? NO! so think...
look out for another smashing cup!
thanks for the advice dimarco!