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crumpet
27-05-2005, 21:23
leo and demi were cleaning up after aleesha's first birthday. alesha had gone to dot and jim's house
demi was climbing up the ladder and slipped!
Leo leaped and caught her just in time. Leo looked into demi's eyes while stillholding her and they stayed like that for 3 minutes. leo carried demi to tye sofa and it only took him 5 minutes to clear the rest up

demi: i'm sorry leo i didn't mean to fall

leo: don't worry, the only thing that matters is that you are ok

the millers were out and so leo and demi were alone(leo was accepted as faily now)

leo picked up demi and took her up into the bedroom. he placed her gently on the bed and bent down and took out a ring.


leo: demi miller. will you marry me?

(ok please tell me what you think of this and i know there is hardly anything in this but if anyone responds to this, i will put much ,more action into the nest script!)

di marco
30-05-2005, 11:29
great! :D wonder what demis gonna say! :) post more soon, cant wait

crumpet
30-05-2005, 16:20
demi: me? marry you? wow! you wnt me to shut up and give you an answer dont cha!

leo: um, yeah ,might help

demi: well my answer is........

darren walks in and yells

darren: wow! DEMI'S GONNA GET MARRIED!

all the millers rush upstairs

kieth: my lady lucks all grown up and off to destroy people sniff

rosie: this is great

demi: SHUT UP EVERYONE! i aint decided yet!

darren: well, hurry up and say then!

leo: will ya?

demi: corse i will !!!!

there is a massive celebation and mickey walks in looking extremely dull and is crying
(to be continued)

di marco
30-05-2005, 16:21
great! :D oh no whats wrong with mickey! :) more soon please, cant wait

crumpet
30-05-2005, 16:51
mickey: i-i-i i've lost the stall

demi: so?

mickey got all wound up and pushed demi over causing her to break her arm

demi: i was only joking!

leo tried to protect demi but leo got punched in the face!

rosie and kieth were trying not to take sides so they went out of the room and went shopping

darren pushed mickey to the wall and said, look, you aren't my brother so don't you dare do that to leo and demi!

mickey: i am your brother! you cant kick me me out! kieth is my dad and mum is mum!

demi: she hasn't told ya yet? don't worry, dad dpnt no yet either

mickey: what?

darren: why would we tell you?

the i knock went on the door

leo: i'll answer it

it was leo's dad and he grabbed leo by the neck and he tried to strangle leo, demi ran to help leo but leo's dad grabbed demi by the neck too!

stacy just happened to be passing

stacy: oi? baldy egg head!

leo: stacy! don't say that!

demi: don't worry, stacy'll sort it out!

leo's dad drops leo and demi and tries to beat up stacy but stacy is to good at aerobics and gymnastics so she does loads of kicks and flips

leo's dad then gets a brick and smashes it against stacy's head and knocks her out and he runs away

(to be continued)

di marco
30-05-2005, 16:54
great! :D hope staceys alright! :) more soon please, cant wait

crumpet
30-05-2005, 17:09
this is at night tiome ok?

leo's dad puts oil around stacy, stod inside the ring of oil and sets fire to it!

leo and darren try to stop him and save stacy but were stopped by the fire, a ehlicopter arrived to pickup leo's dad and left stacy, demi+ leo+ darren and every1 who was watching in the square looked miserably at stacy's death place

darren started crying cos he had always loved stacy but was to afraid to show it

hint: this aint the end of stacy slater
(to be continued)

di marco
30-05-2005, 17:13
great! :D good that it aint the end as i like stacey! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
30-05-2005, 17:24
di marco, can you also reply to stacy conflict Please??
thanyou!

stacy woke up and grabbed her gun a claw gun ab=nd she shot it at a chimney and she pushed the trigger and she pushed a gain and it made her fly up to were the claw had shot!

darren ran up to stacy when she got down safely and gave her the biggest cuddle EVA!
stacy whispered something in darren's ear

WHAT WAS IT?
(to be continued)

di marco
30-05-2005, 17:26
great! :D dun dun dun lol! :) more soon please, cant wait

crumpet
30-05-2005, 17:40
darren took stcay to the hospital were she was checked over and she was fine

stacy had whispered to darren
this is what it was
stacy:i love you
darren was super happy

stacy came out
stacy: hi kid

darren:me?

stacy: yeah, hey, i've got 2 ticket things, i dont need tem, you and demi go or something!

darren: i'd rather go with you!

stacy: me? the gobby cow?

darren: yeah!

stacy, ok, meet me here at 7:00 tomorrow

she kissed darren on the lips for a brief while but it was long enough for darren to know that his dream had come true!
(to be continued)

Charmed
30-05-2005, 19:21
Great stuff!Please put more demi and leo in it!

di marco
31-05-2005, 08:54
great! :D glad staceys alright! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
31-05-2005, 16:30
leo found demi at the park and sat next to her on the swing

demi: hi

leo: hi! were's aleesha?

demi: at home,

mean while, stacy and darren were at the chip shop buying chips!

they went on holiday and came back in a couple of years

back to leo and demi,

demi: do ya wanna see her?

leo: yeah, i'd love to!

they went home and saw aleesha!

in 1 year time, demi looked very white,

demi: leo?

leo: what?

demi: i have to go to the doctors!


(to be continued)

di marco
05-06-2005, 08:25
great! :D whats wrong with demi! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
05-06-2005, 08:39
leo: why?

demi: well, i think, i-i-

leo: you what? tell me, i wont get mad!

demi: you will!

leo:i wont!

demi:YOU WILL!

leo: i promise i wont

demi: i - i-i-i-i-i-i think i'm pregnant again

leo:WHAT?

he lobs a glass lamp at demi and walks out leaving demi on the floor with a massive cut on her head

di marco
05-06-2005, 08:45
great! :D evil leo! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
05-06-2005, 09:10
darren asks leo what the matter is and leo just punches darren and says

LEO:MILLERS ARE THE SICKEST PEOPLE ON EARTH!

darren: runs home and finds demi

he gets the 1st aid kit and finds demi's unconscious

di marco
05-06-2005, 09:12
great! :D and i thought leo was nice! :) more soon, cant wait

Charmed
06-06-2005, 18:58
Wow!that was brilliant!DO MORE A.S.A.P!

crumpet
08-06-2005, 19:01
leo is sitting in the park and a=pauline is walking aleesha

pauline: o, hello leo, you're aleesha's dad aintcha? heer ya go, i shall leave her with you so you can catch up

pauline pushed aleesha into leo's arms and ran to the laundrette because she had a lot of costumers

leo went to the millers and found that demi wasn't there!

darren: done enough damage today havent you?

leo: i didnt mean to be mean!

darren: i'll take aleesha for a start and you'd better not show your face here again!

leo ran to the hospital and collapsed on the way

Charmed
08-06-2005, 20:09
thats really good.I wonder what will happen next.Post more

di marco
09-06-2005, 07:35
great! :D oh no leo collapsed! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
09-06-2005, 18:34
leo woke up in hospital and found demi next to him

demi: go away you'll hurt me!

leo: go away you doctors, you'll hurt her!

demi gets up

demi: SHUT THE HELL UP LEO, YOU AREE THE ONE THAT'S GONNA HURT ME, YOU CHUCKED THAT GLASS AT ME, YOU'RE OUT TO GET ME, DON'T COME NEAR ME!

leo: b-b-b-but i love you

Demi: WELL I DON'T

this is the end, there is another script leading from this after lots of people have answered 2 this

crumpet
09-06-2005, 18:34
that will come out in 2 more weeks

di marco
10-06-2005, 06:23
great! :D sad to see it end! :) cant wait for the sequel

crumpet
10-06-2005, 19:07
there will b a sequel in 2 weeks

Charmed
10-06-2005, 22:54
can't wait to the sequel to find out why Leo did hit demi with a lamp!That was really good! :cheer: :thumbsup:

crumpet
12-06-2005, 09:13
http://www.soapboards.co.uk/forums/showthread.php?t=11038
hey there's a doctor who script i did! check it out

Charmed
10-08-2005, 22:17
When are you gonna do the sequel?

Gadders
19-08-2005, 17:05
when is the sequel going to be written i love it so far but love to no what happens between leo and demi