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Bryan
18-05-2005, 18:50
Bridge Street - Night

The side door to the Vic opens, Chrissie and Jake stumbled out, Sam slumped between the middle of them.

Chrissie: How are we gonna pull this off?

Jake: I donno, pretend she's drunk

Chrissie: (sarcastic) good plan

Jake: Christ Chrissie the trouble i go to for you eh?

Chrissie: Yeah well I'm worth it

Jake: I know you are, why dyou think i came back?

Chrissie: (teasaing) ah...how sweet, has little jakey got a crush?

Jake: I'm not a little kid Chrissie, it's more than a crush

Chrissie: Besotted then?

Jake: Don't flatter yourself

They pass a couple of clubbers leaving Scarlet.

Chrissie: God Sam eh? Remind me not to let you loose with a bottle of gin in the future.

Jake: Will be a bit hard wont it, considering...

The pair walk along silently for a few seconds

Chrissie: (flattered) so i am really worth it Jake?

Jake: worth what?

Chrissie: coming back for, sticking up for... and well you know...

Jake: youre more than a shag chrissie, unlike danny i know how to treat a lady...

Chrissie: i shoud hope so, cus this is one lady that isnt woed easily

Jake: it will be fun trying tough... (he smiles)

Millers House - Night

Keith puts down his ABC's for Toodlers book book and talks to Rosie.

Keith: Hey rose...

Rosie: What love?

Keith: What are we on the planet for eh?

Rosie: to pay taxes, have babies and die, thats what my mom used to say

Keith: The Millers, how boring are we eh? Imagine someone doing a tv show about us, it would be so boring...

Rosie: Um...

Sam's Flat - Night

Chrissie and Jake have entered Chrissie's flat, Jake is tied up some rope, and Chrissie is writing a letter.

Jake: You sure they'll fool this Chrissie?

Chrissie: Peggy? She can hardly tell what time of day it is, never long whether her daughter had suicidal tendecies or not.

Jake: Well if you're sure.

Chrissie seals the envelope and places it on the coffe table.

Jake: Common then, help me get her up..

The pair pick up sam, and insert her head in a noose, they tigthen it and make it look like she hanged herself.

Chrissie: Perfect no-one will ever no, (effectiionatly) thanks Jake.

Jake stares at her, he moves towards her and begins to kiss her tenderly, but Chrissie pulls back.

Chrissie: I told you Jake, i wont be woed easily,

Jake: Who knows what the future holds?

Chrissie: We'll see.

Chrissie and Jake leave the room, and switch of the light, they leave the house, the door slams shut.

Close-up of Sam's hanging body

(To Be Comntinued)

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Bryan
18-05-2005, 19:07
someone please tell me what u think... been waiting for about ten minutes lol

Tamzi
18-05-2005, 19:17
Fab babes. so sam comitted 'suicide' more more more
xxx

Bryan
18-05-2005, 19:25
for all those aware:

i am writing a soap opera of my own and anypone who would be interested in helping me: i.e giving me critical feedback or ideas, email me on the adress given on my profile

many thanks bondboffin

WattsRulee
18-05-2005, 19:50
i luv it!!

Layne
18-05-2005, 20:09
Really good, more soon
Luv ya
layne
x x x

Amber
18-05-2005, 20:43
Post more soon or else i'll hang myself!

di marco
19-05-2005, 08:59
brill! :D wonder when anyone will find sam? loved the bitchy comment about peggy! lol! :) more soon please, cant wait
(ps. cant wait for your new soap either, can tell its gonna be good!)

EastendersRox
19-05-2005, 17:07
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!