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Tamzi

02-03-2005, 15:25

By the way here is some handy information to help you understand my story;
*Chrissie and jake have been dating for 6 months now and it is a public thing and Jake's crazy about her.
*Chrissie has framed Sam for Den's murder and Sam has been sent down for 30years
*Danny has now got a decent job as manager of the video store(Billy's gone).
*..........-That means missing info I cant give you.
*MW-Mystery women
Part 1

Jake:Alfie have you been borrowing my shaving cream again. Its empty!
Alfie:Nope maybe Danny used it he said he had a big date last night.
Jake:Yeah he probably did, you think he could afford his own now he is making money. Where is he anyway?
Alfie:Stayed out all night didnt he, must have got lucky!
Jake walks in
Jake:No offence but exactly who would want to sleep with Danny. I mean he talks in his sleep.
Alfie Really what about?
Jake:Eggs.
Alfie:He is an odd fellow.
Jake:Well I'm going out.
Alfie:Since it's 7am Jake you are either going to go to work, which is unlikely, or you are going to visit your posh bit across the street and bearing in mind you have a bunch of roses behind you back, I would say they are not for Johnny Allen.
Jake: She isn't my posh bit. See you later Alfie.
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Danny stares at the women next to him. He cant believe he got her. He should feel bad I mean it is his...... But he needs some way of relaxing. And anyway it does take 2 to Tango. The women next to him starts to stir, then wakes up.
Danny:Hey darling
MW: Hey sexy. Last night was great. You are so much better than.......
Danny:Thanks. It's a knack.
MW:Must be. Last night was great. The meal and afterwards. I mean......... is just a bit to passionate. I like a guy that just goes for it.
Danny: I aim to please. Anyway I was wondering if you wanted to go to dinner...................................Hears footsteps coming up the stairs
Danny: Who else has a key except you?
MW:I'm not sure.
Rosie:Chrissie? If your up there I need some cleaner the bottle's empty. Sorry I am starting early but Keith has an interview later and I want to go with him.
MW=Chrissie: Oh dont worry its just Rosie. I'll go sort her. To Rosie Just coming Rosie.
Danny:You look great from behind.
Chrissie:Cheeky. Chrissie leaves the bedroom. Hear her mumbling to Rosie. Danny stretches out in the bed. Chrissie returns a minute later.
Chrissie:Now she's back downstairs maybe we can enjoy ourselves. Chrissie crawls back into bed and starts kissing Danny.
Footsteps on stairs once again.
Danny:That must be Rosie agian!
Chrissie: I cant be bothered to get back out of bed. To rosie Rosie I'm kinda busy just look for whatever you need in the kitchen.
Jake: Its not Rosie. I have a present for you.
Chrissie:To Danny Oh My God. Its Jake. Quick hide in the wardrobe. Danny dives into the wardrobe
Jake walks in
Jake:Hey Darling.
Chrissie: What are you doing here?
Jake:Well I wanted to surprise you. Hands her the roses
Chrissie: Thanks.
Jake:Your a bit red. What have you been doing?
Chrissie: Nothing. She tries to push Danny's trousers under the bed, but Jake notices.
Jake:What are Danny's trousers doing under your bed?
Chrissie:What? Oh there not Danny's, there Dens, I found them yesterday. I just miss him so much.
Jake falls for it, but suddenly there is a sneeze from the wardrobe. Jake opens it and finds Danny naked.
Chrissie and Danny talk at the same time.
Chrissie:Jake I can explain, it was just a one night stand. It wasnt meant to happen. Look I really care about you, it was nothing. Jake?
Danny:Bruv look I can explain. It was a one night stand. It wasnt meant to happen. You my bruv I care about you, it was nothing. Jake?
Jake walks out without a word. Tears start to from in his eyes
Danny:Danny leans out of the windowJake please talk to me. JAKE!
Jake keeps on walking till he reaches the bench. Then he breaks down in tears.

TO BE CONTINUED.....
plz tell me what you think

Torrie

02-03-2005, 15:38

Oh noooo, poor Jake - after everything he's done for Danny! :(

di marco

02-03-2005, 16:28

i feel so sorry for jake! that was great, cant wait for the next part

Tamzi

02-03-2005, 16:44

Part 2
Jake starts to walk home in disbelief. He arrives home to Alfie laughing at some random thing on the tv.
Alfie: Man you look rough Jake. What happened? You find her in bed with someone else or summat?
Jake:Actually I did. It was Danny.
Alfie: My God, so that was his big date yesterday then. Jake are you Ok?
Jake: Of course I'm not! Jake suddenly collapses in tears. Alfie I really loved her. I mean Danny can get any girl he wants, but I cant they see me as the boring serious one, but she didnt. I was different with her.
Alfie: Pull yourself together Jake. Listen your Johnny Allen's favourite and if you turn up at work like this he could do something to Danny. Look you are going to go to work and hold your head high. Just try not to break out in a fight with Danny. Thats the key thing. Then you can come home and cry as much as you want.
Jake:Your right Alfie I'll try.
The phone rings.
Alfie goes to answer it.
Alfie:Hello. Yes he's here. No I dont think he wants to talk to you. I mean after what you did.
Alfie hangs up.
Alfie:It was Chrissie
Jake:I guessed. Look I've got to get out of here. I'll see you later
Suddenly door opens and Danny comes running in
Danny:Jake look I've got to explain. Just listen to me.
Jake:See you later Alfie. Maybe we could go for a drink.
Jake barges past Danny and heads to work.
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Jake sits at his desk reading the paper while Johnny is making a phone call.
Johnny: Jake are you sure your alright?
Jake:Yeah why do you ask? Everything is fine. Why do you think it isnt?
Johnny:Well I've been talking to Dennis for half an hour and all that time you've been reading the same page and muttering that you want to kill Chrissie. You had a lovers tiff or something? If you have sort it out I dont want it distracting you from your work.
Jake: Just leave it Johnny OK!
Jake storms out
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Later
Chrissie stands behind the bar pulling Jim's pint while thinking about what happened this morning. She tries to think how she can sort it out.
Jim:Chrissie your soaked.
Chrissie:What?
Chrissie realises that the pint has overflowed so much her skirt is soaked. Suddenly Jake walks in with Alfie.
Jake walks over to the bar.
Jake:Tracey 2 pints please.
Chrissie:Tracey I'll get these. Jake listen to me, I need to explain. Please just come upstairs for a minute.
Jake: Alfie I'll think I'll leave the drink. There's a bad smell in here.
Jake walks out
Chrissie:Alfie what can I do to get him to listen? I actually think I.........love him. I need him.
Alfie:I thought for you it was just a fling.
Chrissie:I know,but I've suddenly realised its a lot more. I'm crazy about him. Alfie please help me. Chrissie starts to cry.
Alfie:Well I would have suggested not sleeping with his brother, but now your going to have to prove you love him. Jake's a sensitive guy and he's easily hurt. He's spent the majority of his life in children's homes after his father beat him. Look I believe he will forgive Danny quite quickly, they need each other. But you are going to have to really work.
Chrissie:Thanks Alfie. Tracey can you take over. I need to lie down.
Tracey:Sure.
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Scarlet's
Danny:Jake your here. Can we just talk?
Jake: The club's opening soon, you need to shift those crates.
Danny:NO! I'm sick of you not listening to me so your going to listen now. Danny throws down the crate and the bottles smash. Now listen to me. Chrissie and me it was a quick thing and thats it. She loves you. Get it? We're both sorry so can you just quick acting like the big baby and GROW UP!
Jake:Yes I get it. I get that you aren't satisfied with the girls you can have, but you have to take my only one. I mean you've had Sam, Sasha, Zoe, Kareena, Stacey, Ruby ,since we got into the square, and now you have to add Chrissie to your list. I get it.
Danny:Oh I give up. You never listen your so stubborn. Danny pushes Jake and storms out.
Jake crashes onto the smashed glass bottles and his head starts to bleed.
Jake: Danny.........
Jake passes out.
TO BE CONTINUED

Torrie

02-03-2005, 17:25

Oh no! I hope Jake's ok - nothing's going right for the poor bloke!

Cherryz

02-03-2005, 17:35

*drops to knees* JAAA- AARGH GLASS! *crumples in pain*

I hope hes okay! and wow, this is an EXCELLENT script

Tamzi

02-03-2005, 19:15

Part 3
Jake hobbles across the square on crutches getting ready for his first time in the vic since his accident last week. That week had been great, he hadnt had to think about Danny or Chrissie, but now he had to think about it all over again. He slowly hobbled in as Alfie held the door. Suddenly he spots Chrissie and Danny holding hands across the bar.
Jake:Alfie I dont think I want to be here.
Danny and Chrissie pull their hands apart and Chrissie hits Danny
Chrissie:Jake it wasnt how it looked.
Jake:It never is with you. But I cant keep on holding this grudge, so how about we try and forget whats happened and get on with our lives.
Chrissie:Jake thats great. Kiss passionately
Jake:I Better go talk to Danny
Chrissie:Fine. See you later Lover.
Jake:Its great to hear you say those words.
Jake hobbles over to Danny
Danny:Jake I am so sorry for what I did. I didnt mean to hurt you. But I just dont get what happened.
Jake:Well when I fell I cut my head open and i bent my leg backwards so the bone snapped. Thanks Danny.
Danny:I am so sorry bruv. But are we OK.
Jake: Danny I think we're going to need work on it. It cant be what it was straight away. But you can start by buying me a pint.
Danny:Sure. Chrissie, a pint for my brother please and a packet of cheese and onion crisps for me.
Chrissie:Coming right up. But Jake thats tap's dripping again, I was wondering if you could have a look.
Jake:Sure. Save that drink for me Danny.
Jake and Chrissie dont resurface for a while.

Part 4
Jake's Birthday and he's opening his presents.
Jake:Oh thanks Nana.
He holds up a bright red and orange hand-knitted sweater
Alfie:Go on Jake wear your new sweater to work.
Chrissie enters
Chrissie:Yeah go on Darling.
Jake:What are you doing here?
Chrissie: Danny let me in. Here's your present. I have an extra one for you later.
Jake:A Box thanks.
Chrissie: Open it.
Inside are a pair of keys for a BMW
Jake,Danny and Alfie:OH MY GOD
Jake:This is like the best present ever Chrissie. Thanks so much.
Chrissie:Well now you dont have an excuse for taking me up the west end.
Jake:Why did I have the feeling there would be an ulterior motive.
Chrissie:I better get going I have to set up.
Jake:Ok see you later.
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Later at the Vic
Everyone:Surprise.
Chrissie:Happy Birthday Jake!
Jake:You did all of this?
Chrissie: Yes because I love you and now for your extra present.
Jake:What?
Chrissie:Well you know how you would love kids?
Jake:..Yeah..
Chrissie:Well I'm pregnant!
Everyone:Oh congratulations!

Jakes faces falls.
Jake:This is really great but I have to make an announcement.
Chrissie:What? I thought you would be happy.
Jake:I am, but there's a problem. I cant have kids. I never could. So it cant be mine. It must be..................
Danny walks in with a bottle of beer in his hands.
Danny:Anyone want to party???
Jake:......Danny's!
TO BE CONTINUED

di marco

02-03-2005, 19:21

oh dear...... poor jake just as he was beginning to forgive them. please post the next part asap thanks

Cherryz

02-03-2005, 19:25

*gasps* omg!!!! daaannyyyyyy! and jaaaaaaake!

Torrie

02-03-2005, 19:39

OMG! Just when things were getting back on track! Hope there's more soon!

Layne

02-03-2005, 21:49

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Luv ya Layne
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Tamzi

03-03-2005, 19:29

Thanks everyone for your positive feedback. Here's some more of an interestin scenario. Enjoy.
Part 5
Jake,Danny and Chrissie sit upstairs in the Vic They are all in shock.
Danny:So, um, are we going to keep it or what?
Chrissie:Yeah, but if we keep it, what will happen between Jake and me?
Danny:Your right, but we can hardly get rid of it.
Chrissie:I know. I've always wanted a kid that's why I thought it was good news.
Danny:Yeah, but if you keep it what will you tell the kid about its dad. Does it grow up believing its Jake's kid or mine?
Chrissie:If I say its Jake's it will shocked eventually to discover its uncle is its dad.
Danny:But if you say its mine it will wonder why you live with its uncle.
Jake:Look I dont want to butt in but I do have my own opinion.
Danny:Sorry Jake. What do you think?
Jake:I dont know. It just seem that when everything is going right,something goes wrong. I just need to get out of here. Being here reminds me of what happened between you two. See you later.
Chrissie:Jake wait.
Jake: See you later Chrissie.
Jake walks out.
Chrissie:Have you noticed how Jake can never face his problems? Why?
Danny:Its because of our father.Whenever something happened that me or Jake did, Jake would always say he did it and he would be beaten. I guess he feels that if he doesnt face up to anything he wont get hurt.
Chrissie:Well I'm going to talk to him. Maybe you can figure a way out of this mess.
Little does Chrissie know that this problems going to sort itself out.
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Note:2 hours earlier
A Blonde scrambles out of a prison laundry truck and is heading off towards Albert Square
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Chrissie is heading off towards Jake's house when she is dragged into the bushes. She comes face to face with Sam Hunter.
Chrissie:Looking shocked. Sam what are you doing here? I thought you were in prison!
Sam:There's always time for a bit of revenge though. You should be the one rotting in that hell hole. Not me. You cheated me out of the Vic and sent me down for a crime you committed. Its time for payback.
Chrissie:What do you mean? If you touch me I'll scream. The cops will be on you in a second.
Sam: I wouldn't advise that Chrissie. Now we're going to go upstairs and talk about this. Got it? And dont try any tricks!
Chrissie:Fine.
They walk acroos the deserted square and through the empty pub. Danny has helped himself to some of the booze before leaving.
In the living room
Sam:Grabs Chrissie by the throat. Now listen up curly. If you dont give me my pub. I'll tell the cops the truth. I still have the evidence.Remember?
Chrissie:You really think thats going to work Sam. You're on the run rememeber! One call to the cops and you're going down.
Sam:Now that's not wise is it. Now your going to sit tight and be quiet, while I get some tea.
Sam walks out. Chrissie sneaks out into the hall and keeps an eye on Sam, while she dials Jake's number.
Jake: Oh its you. I didnt think you wanted to talk to me.
Chrissie:Jake, you've got to help me......
Jake: Oh so now you want to talk and you have the cheek to ask for my help.
Chrissie: Jake, please. She's here and I dont think she's going to leave untill she gets revenge.
Jake:Who?Sounding worried
Chrissie:It's Sa......
Sam snatches the phone and chucks it down the stairs.
Sam:Now that wasn't wise, was it? How are we going to make you learn.
Chrissie:Your not you B****h
They start to fight. Can hear the sound of sirens coming. Jake shouts up.
Chrissie:To Sam. Thats it, you're finished. To Jake. Help I'm up he...AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH
Sam pushes Chrissie down the stairs.
Sam:Actually its you thats going down love.
Sam runs past Chrissie and out of the door, but their are armed police waiting. Sam is escorted to the car.
Sam:I'LL BE BACK!
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Meanwhile
Jake: Over here quick. She's unconcious.
Chrissie:Jake, is that you?
Jake:Yes I'm here love. Jake kisses her one the forehead.
Chrissie passes out.Ambulance Man: Come on we've got to get her to the hospital.
Jake:I'm going with her. I dont know if you need to know, but she's pregnant.
AM: Well we better get moving. Come on.
Chrissie is placed in the ambulance and Jake takes a seat by her.
The ambulance drives away.

Will Chrissie make it?
TO BE CONTINUED.................

di marco

03-03-2005, 20:57

wow, that was so good! :) the part about chrissie and sam had me on the edge of my seat! hope chrissies alright, does she lose the baby? cant wait for the next part, been waiting for this part all day ! lol!!! :D

Torrie

03-03-2005, 21:08

Oooh, I wonder if Sam will be back? And if Chrissie and the baby are okay? Hope there's more soon!

Layne

04-03-2005, 07:36

This is amazing it should really happen they'd get loads of viewers more asap
luv ya layne
xxx

Layne

04-03-2005, 18:06

Can we have more please i want to know if Chrissie is Ok?
Thnkx
Luv ya
Layne
xxx

Tamzi

06-03-2005, 15:23

Here you go veryone. Glad you like it.Sorry its taken so long, I've been busy:
Part 6
Chrissie lies in a coma in hospital. Jake has sat by her side for days.
Jake: The doctor says you can go home soon darling, do you hear me? You'll soon be back behind that bar with a smile on your face. Slowly Jake starts to cry.Chrissie just make some kind of movement if you can hear me.
Chrissie's eyes slowly start to open.
Jake: Doctor, Doctor she's awake. To Chrissie Chrissie, Chrissie.
Chrissie: Jake, is that you?
Jake: Chrissie, I'm right here. Oh love, I'm not going anywhere.
Doctor: To JakeWe're going to have to give her a check-up and its going to take a while. Why don't you go home and have a sleep? It will do you good.
Jake: I do need a sleep. To Chrissie I'll be right back love. The doctor will look after you for a while.
Chrissie: I love you Jake.
Jake leaves.
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Jake arrives home.
Alfie: Jake is that you?
Jake: Yeah. Yawns, Jake wanders into the lounge.
Alfie: How is she?
Jake: Well she's finally woken up, but oh Alfie she's just getting worse.
Alfie: What about the baby?
Jake: He said there's no way it could have survived.
Alfie: I'm so sorry Jake.
Jake: Someone's got to tell Danny though. Look I need to get some sleep then I'm going back to the hospital. See you later Alfie.
Jake heads off to bed.

Part 7
1 week later and Chrissie has arrived home.
Jim: Great to see you back Chrissie
Dot: Yes Chrissie, at least you've got Jake to stand by you.
Chrissie: I Know. she kisses him
Jake: Chrrissie: Sit down for a minute Chrissie. I've got something to ask you.
Chrissie: ........Ok........
Jake: Chrissie, I thought you were so fantastic since I first set eyes on you. I knew you were the one for me when I tried to fix your tap, Chrissie laughs, You've been special to me forever. I've been there for you when you found out Den was dead, when Sam was arrested, when you...you, got pregnant by Danny and when you lost it. But you know what, I want to be there for you forever, so I was wondering if you would do me the honour of becoming my wife? Jake produces a HUGE diamond ring.
Chrissie: Yes. Jake places the ring on Chrissie's finger and everyone at the vic applaudes.

Well it finally be alright for Chrissie and Jake? I dont think so.
TO BE CONTINUED........

di marco

06-03-2005, 15:33

wow that was great. id been waiting for that for ages! :D jakes sooooooo sweet! glad chrissies alright. they make such a sweet couple! :) hope theres more soon

Torrie

06-03-2005, 16:11

Awww, he's so sweet staying with her in the hospital and proposing like that! :)

Layne

06-03-2005, 17:19

More Please hope it all works out(i no it won't it never does in walfors but i can still be hopefull!!)
Luv ya
Layne
xxx

Rach33

07-03-2005, 11:49

Please say she says yes i nearly cried awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Tamzi

18-03-2005, 22:01

Check tomoro for more. Things are about to get much.........

Tamzi

18-03-2005, 22:26

Chrissie lies in bed and glances at the rock on her finger. She smiles and turns over to gaze at Jake. She finds him watching her as well.
Jake: Hiya beautiful.
Chrissie: Hi. You sure you still want to go through with this whole thing?
Jake: What thing?
Chrissie: Marrying me!
Jake: Oh that, well um...
Chrissie punches him on th arm
Chrissie: Cheeky
Jake: Sorry love. Anyway I got to go out. I have to get to work. I've been late for so long.
Chrissie:Well you go good little boy, and i'll make your favourite meal as a thank you later.
Jake: Can't wait. Jake puts on his shirt and jacket and gets ready to go.
Chrissie: Sniggering Jake, you night want to put your trousers on!
Jake: Looking down bewildered That would be a good idea. He puts them on and walks out
Later
Chrissie is walking across towrds the bus stop, when she suddenly spots Jake heading to Pat's old flat. The door suddenly opens and Tina runs out. Chrissie believes that he must delivering a package for Johnny. She walks off.
[2 hours later![/I]
Chrissie is heading back when she spots Jake leaving. Tina is in her dressing gown and Jake's clothes are a mess. He signals he will be back in a minute and has to go get something. Tina bursts out laughing and shoves him down the steps.Chrissie is about to storm off when she decides to follow Jake. He heads off to Mickey's stall. Chrissie listens carefully.
Mickey: Heya Jake. What can I do for you?
Jake: How much for that necklace?
Mickey: 200. its real diamonds. A bargain.
Jake: sure it is Mickey!
Mickey: Look I have proof. Shows him a certificate thing.
Jake: Ok. I'll take it. Hands over the cash. See you later Mickey.
Mickey: Yeah see ya Jake.
Jake heads of and goes into Tina's flat.
Chrissie storms towards the Vic muttering under her breath.
Chrissie; Stupid lying... He makes my blood boil. I want to be with you forever. Just lies. The way he'll paronised me about sleeping with Danny. God.
Little Mo: You Ok Chrissie.
Chrissie:I'm fine. Just leave me alone!
She storms upstairs
Evening
Jake arrives upstairs with a bunch of red roses.
Jake: These are for you. You ok?
Chrissie: Fine.
Jake: Hey where's my dinner?
Chrssie: Didn't make you any! So is she better?
Jake:Looking confused. What?
Chrissie: Is she better than me? Oh and I hope she liked the necklace.
Jake: what are you going on about? and how did you know about the necklace?
Chrissie: Tina. I saw you coming out of her flat after 2 hours. Her in her dressing gown and you... The way you criticised me and Danny. Then you go buying her a £200 necklace and me a bunch of roses. Ha! Thats men. You, Den, Tommy. All the same!
Jake: Well actually. I wasn't sleeping with Tina! I went round there to put together her furniture. She had Jhnny get her load sof it and it needed putting together. Thats why I looked like that. and she had had a bath so thats why she was in her dressing gown. If you look in the roses by the way, you'll see the necklace. I wanted tina's opinion on it. I mean all women love diamonds. But hey I'm sorry for trying. He gets up and storms out. Before he leaves he turns round.
Jake: I'm not so sure I can be married to someone that doesn't trust me. See ya Chrissie.
Chrissie:Jake wait.
Jake doesn't reply and just walks out. She hears the door closlam shut downstairs.

Torrie

18-03-2005, 22:56

For a minute, I jumped to the same conclusion as Chrissie! Glad Jake wasn't cheating, but I just hope Chrissie can make it up to him!

Tamzi

18-03-2005, 23:11

Here's some info to keep you going...
*There is an old face returning
*Someone is arrested
*Jake spills the beans about Andy

TO BE CONTINUED...........

Torrie

18-03-2005, 23:20

Looking forward to it! :)

di marco

19-03-2005, 07:10

YAY! a new part of the script to read! thanks. ive been waiting ages for that, so glad you now posted it! :) jake and chrissie have to stay together, theyre soooo sweet! chrissie really needs to make it up to him. cant wait for the next part, please please dont make us wait quite so long! your scripts FAB!!! :D

Tamzi

19-03-2005, 09:18

Part 9
Chrissie sits upstairs trying to stop crying and go downstairs. She suddenly hears a knock at the door.
Chrissie: Jake?
Dennis: No it's me. I'm back.
Chrissie: Oh.
Dennis: Hardly the welcome I was expecting. Why did you think I was Jake? Why would he be here?
Chrissie: Um. Clenches her fist.
Dennis: Wow thats a big rock. You and dad re-re-doing your vows. Hold on you haven't been cheating on Dad with Jake?
Chrissie: Come upstairs and I'll explain.

Meanwhile
Jake: Maybe I better go just talk to her.
Alfie: You always do everything Jake
Jake: Yeah but I still love her Alfie, No matter what.
Alfie: Well do what your heart tells you.
Jake: I'm going to go talk to her. Grabs coat and leaves

Back at the Vic
Dennis sits in shock on the sofa.
Dennis: I cant belive he's dead. I mean he wasn't such a bad guy that someone should want to kill him.
Chrissie: I knew this would be a bit of a shock for you.
Dennis: Its a major shock, I just cant believe Andy's dead.
Chrissie: Well there's an upside, he left you the bookies.
Dennis: Really? Oh yeah and I guess I'm a teeny-weeny bit upset that my father's dead. But after what he did to me...
Chrissie: I know
Dennis: Now about you and Jake.
Chrissie: What
Dennis: You do realise he's about six years younger than you. Why can you never pick someone your own age?
Chrissie: Just shut up Dennis.
Suddenly Jake walks in.
Jake: Oh hi Dennis. Maybe I better come back later.
Chrissie: Jake wait.
Dennis: Yeah wait a minute Jake, I have something to give you again. He punches Jake. That is for messing with my family for a second time. Just get out.
Chrissie: Helping Jake up. No Dennis you get out. I don't need you here messing up my life. I'm in charge and I love Jake, so just get out.
Dennis: Fine. Storms out.
Chrssie: Let me get you some ice for that.
Jake: Its OK.
Chrissie: No its not. Look sit down and I'll get the ice. Jake sits down and Chrissie returns with the ice.
Chrissie: There you go.
Jake: Thanks. I've really missed this.
Chrissie: What having ice on your eye?
Jake: Yes and just being with you.
Chrissie: I have to. I am so sorry for everything. I just jumped to the wrong conclusion and I couldn't be more sorry.
Jake: OK, well I guess I forgive you. But before we go any further, I have to tell you something.
Chrissie: What?
Jake: I was there when Andy died. I saw everything. I was the one that drove Johnny Allen to the bridge. i thought he was just going to beat Andy up, not.......throw him off. I saw everything. I just can't go on lying to you about it. I just needed to say it. So?
Chrissie: Um. Well I guess I'm glad you told me. Really. She kisses Jake. I am so glad you told me. Kisses him again. It shows you can kiss trust kiss me kiss.
Jake: Good.
Chrissie takes his hand and leads him to the bedroom.

Much Later!
Chrissie and Jake lie in bed.
Chrissie: That was great.
Jake: I know. I really missed it.
Chrissie: Its only been one night.
Jake: So?
Chrissie: Jake look since you've been so honest with me, I have to tell you something.
Jake: What?
Chrissie: I saw.........
Little Mo knocks on the door.
Little Mo: Um Chrissie
Chrissie: What is it Mo?
Little Mo: I just had a phone call. Dennis has been arrested. They want you down the station now.
Chrissie: OK. I'll be right down. To Jake. I've got to go.
Jake: Its alright. You want a lift down there.
Chrissie: That would be great.
Chrissie breathes a sigh of relief. At least she doesn't have to tell Jake yet that she bashedd her husband's head in.
TO BE CONTINUED..........
Here's a few spoilers to keep you going:
*Someone's getting married
*Someone's pregnant
*Two brothers are going to be getting into a major fight.
Hope you enjoyed it.

di marco

19-03-2005, 11:45

yeh i enjoyed it, its FAB!!! :D cant wait for the next part. wonder what dennis done to get him arrested? (or what he hasnt done?). glad chrissie and jake made up! :)

Layne

21-03-2005, 11:53

This is Great, can't wait for the next part, post it soon please put me out of my misery!!!

Torrie

21-03-2005, 13:55

Looking forward to finding out what happens! :)

Tamzi

21-03-2005, 20:30

Part 10
Dennis is pacing around and around in the interview room.
Dennis: I didn't do it.
Copper: (Sarcastically) Sure you didn't
Dennis: Why would I rob my own bookies???
Copper: So why were you bashin the door down?
Dennis: Look my step-mum kiked me out when I punched her fiancee, so I needed a place to stay and I thought why not camp at the bookies, its is mine, but I didn't have a key. It's the truth.
Copper: Ok I'll give you a written warning. If I hear you have done anything, you are going down. Got It?
Dennis: Yes.
Copper: Interview terminated at 23:05. Your step-mum is waiting outside.
Dennis: Thanks.
Dennis heads out of the room.
Chrissie: Dennis, what the hell did you do?
Dennis: I was about to be charged for robbery. Is Jake here?
Chrissie: he's outisde. What do you mean you were about to be charged for robbery?
Dennis: I don't want to talk about it.
Chrissie: Fine. Lets get going. You are going to apologise to Jake?
Dennis: Whatever.
They head to the car
Jake: Dennis.
Dennis: Guess I should be saying sorry.
Jake: Fi.ne
Dennis::Can we just go, I dont really want to be hanging around here?
Chrissie: We're going. I am just glad you're not punching each others lights out.
Jake: All part of the job.
Next Day
Danny is outside the door at Scarlets(his other job) and he is in a bad mood. He's been dumped by his girlfriend and has been given a written warning after falling asleep at work. It's just not his day. Jake walks along with Chrissie.
Jake: Stops talking to Chrissie. Hey Dan, having a good time?
Danny: Quit taking the mickey Jake.
Jake: What have I said?
Danny: Nothing just the way you have to come and rub it in my face.
Jake: What??? Look Dan, me and Chrissie are going to go inside and leave you to think.
Chrissie: Hurry up Jake I am freezing.
Jake: Coming. To Danny. Just tell me what I am I rubbing in your face?
Danny: The fact that you have the girlfriend, sorry fiance and that you have the job and the fact that you have Johnny completing all your wishes and the fact that everybody likes you. Its sickening how everyone just seems to bend down to Saint Jake!
Jake: Shut up Dan. I am not trying to rub anything in and you don't know anything so keep your mouth shut.
Danny; But lets not forget you're not Saint Jake, because you saw Andy Hunter die and I bet you haven't told your fiance that.
Jake: Pushing Danny against the wall. Shut Up Danny. I will hit you in a minute.
Chrissie: And actually Danny he did tell me
Danny: Oh so you trust her with your secrets more than me. Some brother. No wonder dad disowned you.
Jake: Hits Danny. I told you to shut your face. Look sorry Danny I didn't mean to hit you.
Danny: Puches Jake hard.
They start to fight.
Chrissie goes to get Johnny.
Johnny comes out and pulls them apart. Danny's lip is bleeding, he has a black eye and his clothes are ripped. Jake eye has swelled up, his lip is badly ripped, there is a cut down his cheek and he is in a really bad way.
Johnny: Danny my office now. Jake go get your self sorted out.
Danny: Its always me in trouble.
Chrissie: Maybe cause you always start it. Jake I think you need to get to hospital come on.
Danny: Hold on a minute. Jake I;m sorry. I don't know what came over me.
Jake: Looks like you're turning intodad already Danny. Come on chrissie, lets go.
They walk away.
TO BE CONTINUED.....
P.s some of those notes I gave you are coming later.

di marco

21-03-2005, 20:39

i love this script! :D im glad dennis didnt get charged with anything, and danny needs to control his anger! hope theres more soon, cant wait to find out what happens! :)

Layne

21-03-2005, 21:08

great, more soon i hope!!!!

Torrie

22-03-2005, 15:14

Awww, poor Jake and Danny - hope there's more soon!

Tamzi

22-03-2005, 17:49

Thanks everyone for their replies; Torrie, Di Marco and Fantastic Loves Dennis. More coming soon.
Part 11
Jake sits at the bar with a bottle of beer.
Chrissie: You feeling better?
Jake: I'm fine. You shouldn't be fussing over me.
Chrissie: I don't mind. Its that brother of yours that's the problem.
Jake: I know.
Chrissie: What was that whole thing about your dad disowning you?
Jake: Its a long story.
Chrissie: I have all the time in the world for you.
Jake: Thanks. I don't normally talk about, but I guess, well it started off with the school sport day races. Danny always won and I always came last. Dad wanted a sporty child and I wasn't that. So when I didn't do well he would hit me. It went on for years and in the end I had enough. wanted to go. I was sick of being able to hardly walk, from bruises.Dad said that if I left, I was no longer his son. So I left and Danny came with me. Dad died of a heart attack six months later, we didn't go to the funeral. That's why I said Danny was becoming like my dad. Seems like I have become everybody's punch bag, Dad's, Dennis's and Danny's. I am just sick of being pushed around.
Chrissie: God, I never realised what your past was like. I am so sorry. And you're not pushed around. I mean I don't push you around.
Jake: I know you don't. Look how about I go make dinner as a treat. Tracey can take over for a while.
Chrissie: That sounds great.
Jake: I'll get started.
Later
Jake stands outside the kitchen with a french moustache scribbled on.
Jake: Madam, dinner is served.
Chrissie: What is that on your face?
Jake: Ssssssshhhhhh. Just enjoy your meal.
Chrissie: Trying not to laugh. Okay.
Jake leads her into the kitchen. A romantic table is set with candles and roses and plates full of...beans on toast.
Chrissie: Beans on toast???
Jake: I am not the most amazing cook. There is the other option.
Chrissie: What is it?
Jake: Congealed and burnt pasta with solid tomato sauce.
Chrissie: Sounds lovely but I think I'll take the beans. Do I dare ask what's for pudding?
Jake: Chocolate mousse.
Chrissie: You really know how to treat a lady!
Jake: I know I do. Now enjoy your meal and stop criticising me.
Chrissie: Fine.
They enjoy the beans on toast (if that's possible).Jake heads to the freezer (dont ask) for the chocolate mousse.
Jake: Right. Do you want the good news or the bad news?
Chrissie: Bad news
Jake: The chocolate mousse is kinda frozen.
Chrissie: Jake only you could freeze chocolate mousse. What's the good news?
Jake: I can think of a very good replacement for the pudding.
Chrissie: What?
Jake whispers in her ear.
Chrissie: That definitley seems like a great replacement. Come on then.
They head off to the bedroom.Meanwhile a six-month preganant woman arrives in the square looking for a certain moon As she's walking along she bumps into Mickey.
Mickey: Hey love you look a little lost.
Sarah: Um I'm looking for Jake Moon.
Micky: Oh he lives above the pub with his fiancee.
Sarah: Thanks.
She wanders off in the direction of the pub.
TO BE CONTINUED........

Torrie

22-03-2005, 17:58

Uh-oh! Wonder what she wants with Jake! Fab stuff!

Layne

22-03-2005, 18:34

Great more soon, wonder hu dat woman is?? And what she wants wit Jake?

di marco

22-03-2005, 20:10

fab script! :D jakes so sweet, bless him! :) and i wonder what that lady wants with jake, i hope she aint gonna start causing trouble. hope theres more very soon!

Tamzi

26-03-2005, 10:10

Part 12
Its six in the morning and there is a banging on the vic door.
Chrissie: Jake, someones at the door.
Jake: I know I can hear them.
Chrissie: Well I go answer it.
Jake: Why don't you lazy?
Sarah: Jake, I know you're there.
Chrissie: See she wants you.
Jake: Fine. She is probably after my body.
Chrissie: I don't think so somehow.
Jake: I'll go see who it is.
Jake heads downstairs and opens the door. He is shocked to see Sarah.Jake: Come in. What are you doing here? And Um, who's is that?
Sarah: Thats the problem, its.......
Jake: You are not telling me that you don't know whether, Johnny, Danny are the father?
Sarah: Got it in one. I mean it is most likely to be Danny's, but there was that night with Johnny. Dont forget though, we had that thing after Danny and I broke up.
Jake: Well you can rule me out, I can't have kids, Whispers quietly, I think. But why haven't you come found them to tell us?
Sarah: I only found out last month, I thought I was just putting on weight, and I had to come to terms with it.
Jake: Great this is like Russian Roulette.
Jake: Look I got to go check something. You wait here and if my fiancee comes don't say anything.
Sarah: Fine.
Jake leaves and heads across to find Dr Leroy. He runs into the office.
Dr Leroy: Ah Jake I was going to come looking for you. We have your results back.
Jake: What are the results?
Dr Leroy: It seems there was a mistake first time round. You can easily have kids.
Jake: Oh God.
Dr Leroy: I thought that would be good news.
Jake: It would be except I may have already lost one child and someone else may be pregnant with mine. I am in deep s**t
TO BE CONTINUED.....
Who is the father of the baby?
Only one place to find out. Here!

di marco

26-03-2005, 11:01

great as usual! :D oh dear, jake could well be in big trouble! :) love this script, hope theres more soon, cant wait

HAPPY BIRTHDAY for yesterday! :D :D :D did you have a good day?

Layne

26-03-2005, 14:25

Yeh Happy Birthday for yesterday, i 2was out i was going to come on and wish you a happy b'day then sorry!!!
More script soon please!
Luv ya
Layne
xxx

Tamzi

27-03-2005, 11:49

Its fine. I had great b'day by the way di marco. More coming soon(hopefully tomoro).

Rach33

27-03-2005, 13:11

This is fab just caught up keep it coming

Tamzi

08-04-2005, 11:17

Sorry it took so long but I am revising for exams so I dont always have time to post.

Part 13
Jake stumbles across the square shaking. Slowly he realises what he has been told. He opushes open the pub door and sees Sarah and Chrssie talking and laughing.Chrissie: Jake are you OK?
Jake: Fine, just had a bit of a shock.
Chrissie: What?
Jake: You know that whole things about me not being able to have kids, well I can.
Chrissie: So the doctors got it wrong?
Jake: I guess so
Chrissie: But that's great news, we have to celebrate
Jake: There's a problem though
Chrissie: What
Jake: Sarah here is pregnant
Chrissie: So...
Jake: I slept with her so it could be mine.
Chrissie: Oh
Suddenly Sarah starts screaming
Sarah: I think I'm about to give birth
Jake: But you said you were only six-months pregnant
Chrissie: Just shut up Jake and call an ambulance.
TO BE CONTINUED
WHO'S THE DADDY THEN? I'll give you a clue, he has a connection with Scarlet's!

Layne

08-04-2005, 16:04

ohh, womder what is going to happen!!
More soon, or whenever you can!
Luv ya
Layne
x x x

di marco

09-04-2005, 09:03

wow that was great! :D hope sarah doesnt cause trouble between jake and chrissie if it is jakes! :) cant wait for the next part

Sorry it took so long but I am revising for exams so I dont always have time to post.

thats alright. i should really be revising for my exams too, but i spend way too long doing other things instead, this site for starters! :)

WHO'S THE DADDY THEN? I'll give you a clue, he has a connection with Scarlet's!

couldnt that be all of them?! oh youre leaving us in suspense! :D

Tamzi

08-05-2005, 11:22

Right well the thing you have been waiting a month for.....WHO'S THE DADDY???

Sarah sits in the hospital bed with her arms around baby avacado. Chrissie is next to her and Jake is on the phone outside trying to get hold of Danny and Johnny.

Sarah: Isn't he lovely?
Chrissie: Really sweet. Interesting name.
Sarah: Its foreign
Chrissie: I know
Sarah: I heard that in portugenese it means apple of my heart
Chrissie: Don't you mean apple of my eye
Sarah: No it's heart.

Slowly Sarah drifts off to sleep. Chrissie holds baby avacado and starts to gently rock her. Jake creeps in.

Jake: You look like a natural there
Chrissie: Yeah?
Jake: Absolutely. Danny and Johnny are on their way.
Chrissie: Fine well Sarah has talked to the doctors. There going to do the paternity test once everyone has arrived.
Jake: Fine

Zooming forward to the next day
Danny, Jake, Johnny, Sarah, Chrissie and Tina all sit in the Mr Mulroy's office waiting for the results. Suddenly the doctor walks in.

Mr Mulroy: I have the results
Danny: And....
Mr Mulroy: well one of you three has got a 99.9% chance of being the father
Jake: And.......
Dr Mulroy:.....Its Mr.............

To Be continued

.:Kitz:.

08-05-2005, 11:38

NNNoooooooooooooooooo, continue continue continue!!! I need to know who the father is!

di marco

08-05-2005, 12:01

great! :D dont leave us in suspense like that! whos the father? i have to know! lol! :) more soon please, cant wait

Tamzi

08-05-2005, 12:18

Dr Mulroy:.....Its Mr.............Moon
Jake: Yeah. Which one?
Dr Mulroy: Oh um. I don't know
Danny: You don't know
Dr Mulroy: I'll have to go back and check. Excuse me.
He leaves the room
Danny: He doesn't know which one
Chrissie: To Jake quietly Look Jake whateve happens I'll stand by you Ok.
Jake: Thanks. I would have done the same for you
Chrissie: I know
Dr Mulroy enters agin
Dr Mulroy: Right well we've cleared the little hiccup up. The father of avacado is... Mr Moon
Jake: We know that. Which one of the moons?
Dr Mulroy: Oh it's a Mr B Moon
Danny: There are no Mr B Moon's
Sarah: lets out a high pitch squeal
Jake: No way!
Chrissie, Danny, Tina, Johnny and Dr Mulroy: What?
Jake: Dad!
Sarah: Yeah. It was when I was seeing Danny. I got a call saying Danny wanted to meet me in Islington and so I went and he wasn't there, but his dad was. Danny called me up and said it was over. His dad was there and one thing led to another....
Chrissie, Tina, Johnny and Dr Mulroy: EEEEWWWWWWW!!!!!
Jake: So that's our half sister
Danny: And we've both slept with the mother
Chrissie, Tina, Johnny and Dr Mulroy: EEEEWWWWWWW!!!!!

To Be continued

.:Kitz:.

08-05-2005, 12:20

lol, that rocks! i honestly thought it was gonna be Jake! i love the fact they all say 'ewwwwww' togther.lol!

di marco

08-05-2005, 12:34

great! :D that was well funny! wasnt expecting that! :) more soon please, cant wait

Amber

08-05-2005, 12:41

Lol! Just read all of it! It's really good :D
Post more soon

Layne

08-05-2005, 16:46

That is great darlin,!!! Very Good!

EastendersRox

10-05-2005, 16:40

This is great! Really funny!

Tamzi

12-05-2005, 18:15

Chrissie: Wait a minute. You said your dad was dead
Jake: Oh that. Well he isn't dead, we just say he's dead. Easier than saying he sleeps with a different women everyone night and is extremly rich living in a penthouse aprtment overlooking the thames. It doesn't really fit with the wife and child beating image, does it?
Chrissie: Not really.
Danny: I think we should go out and celebrate.
Jake: Celebrate what exactly?
Danny: Neither of us , or Johnny, being the father of avacado
Chrissie: Now thats a plan

Later
Chrissie, Jake, Danny, Johnny and Tina stumble down the stairs at Scarlet's. JAke staggers over to the bar.
Jake: A bottle of your finest champagne sir.
Johnny: On the house of course.
In the time it takes the new barman to get the champagne sorted, Chrissie is being chatted up by a 'charming' man.
Charming man: You have the most beautiful eyes. The way they sparkle. And your lips, so soft. I could just touch them. Kiss them.
He slowly pulls Chrissie into an embrace
Chrissie: Get off you perv. Your old enough to be my
Jake: Chrissie what's going on?
Chrissie: This perverted man was trying to chat me up.
Jake: Hey look mister, you dont mees around with my fiancee! Got it
Charming man: I got it, Jake
Jake: How did you know my name..................Dad?
Chrissie: This is your dad.

To be Continued
xxx

Amber

12-05-2005, 18:31

:eek: OMG I didn't expect that!!
Post more soon I want to know what happens!

Tamzi

12-05-2005, 18:38

I will if you post more of yours amber
xxx

Amber

12-05-2005, 18:42

Hmmmm..ok then :D
I'm typing it up now so it should be on here soon :angel:

Layne

12-05-2005, 19:02

wow now that is a shock!!!!
Post more soon
This is faB!
Luv ya
Layne
x x x

EastendersRox

13-05-2005, 16:15

Great!

di marco

14-05-2005, 08:17

fab! :D jakes dad being there, that was a shock! :) post more soon please, cant wait

Tamzi

14-05-2005, 09:29

Thanks for all the replies. Here's the next bit.

Dad: Yo Jake, wassup?
Jake: what's up? Nothing much except you've just turned up to wreck my life
Dad: No way brother. I'm here to get down with the ladies, like this little beauty right here.
Chrissie: GET OFF ME!
Jake: Leave my fiancee alone, dad. She ain't Susie alright!
Dad: Yo I forgotten about Susie. She's somewhere around here. SUSIE!!!
Susie: I'M COMING MR LUVA-LUVA
Jake: You brought susie here? How inconsiderate can you be?
Danny: Hey what's going on? Dad? (suddenly a sensational red-head comes and puts her arm around the moon's Dad) Susie?
Susie: Oh, Danny? I didn't think you'd be here. Um is he here?
Jake: If you're talking about me, could you at least use my name!
Susie: Oh Jake. Um......This is a bit akward(starts twirling her hair around her finger). So um......you wanna go out for a salad?
Jake: Thank God I didn't stick with you. Why would I want to go out for a salad with you of all people.
Susie: Why not honey?
Jake: For pete's sake stop twirling your hair
Susie: (still twirling hair) I thought you liked it
Jake: I don't. Susie can you just leave me alone? I'm with somebody else
Susie: You're cheating on me. You pig! (she grabs her vodka and tonic and throughs it over Jake) That will teach you
Jake: You *beep* We aren't even together anymore, remember?
Susie: Oops!
Jake: Look Chrissie I hope you don't mind I'm gonna head home.
Susie: So this is your bit on the side. I stay at home all day with the kids cooking a lovely meal, while your working and then you go see your fancy women. WHAT HAVE YOU GOT TO SAY FOR YOURSELF BLONDIE?
Chrissie: Nothing really. Except you don't stay at home and cook all day, you don't have any kids with Jake, I am not his fancy women, I'm his fiancee and you aren't together anymore.
Susie: Oh is that what he told you! Well my wedding ring says different!
Chrissie: Wedding ring?
Jake: Susie its a haribo ring!
Susie: Oh.
Jake: Look I'm going and Dad don't wither you or susie come near me again!

To be continued
xxx