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Princess
05-05-2005, 21:56
This is my own version of what will happen when Sharon and Dennis return!

Part one

A black taxi pulls up outside the Queen Vic. A pretty blonde woman with a handsome young man on her arm step out. Yes Sharon and Dennis are back in town!

Dennis: Home sweet home!

Sharon: mmh

Dennis: Why are you so quiet?

Sharon: I’m just a bit nervous about seeing dad, that’s all.

Dennis: Don’t worry. Do you want me to come with you?

Sharon: No I need to do this by myself. You go put our stuff in the flat.

They’ve bough their old flat!

Sharon looks up at the Queen Vic. She takes a deep breath before walking in.

Pauline: Sharon, what are you doing here?

Sharon: Hi Paul!

Pauline: Is Vicky with you.

Sharon: No just me….and Dennis.

Dot: Dennis?

Sharon: Yeah, he’s over at the flat. He’s looking forward to seeing you,

Dot: Ooh I say! I’ll pop over now.

Chrissie walks out behind the bar. Her face turns white as she spots Sharon!

Chrissie: Sharon?

Sharon: Chrissie.

Chrissie: Do you want to go upstairs. We need to talk.

Sharon: Yeah I think we do. Is dad here?

Chrissie: That’s what I need to talk to you about………………

Amber
05-05-2005, 22:28
Oooh Brill!
Post more asap!
:wub:

Skits
06-05-2005, 13:55
excellent. more soon.

Angeldelight
06-05-2005, 16:45
ohhhhhhhhhhhh exciting, please post more, need to know what chrissie says

EastendersRox
06-05-2005, 17:01
This great, post more soon! Wonder what she'd say!

Princess
06-05-2005, 17:13
{Chrissie and Sharon are upstairs in the living room of the Vic.}

Sharon: I thought you’d be back in Spain by now.

Chrissie: What?

Sharon: I thought you and dad would have broken up by now.

Chrissie: We have.

Sharon: Then why are you still here?

Chrissie: He left.

Sharon: What?

Chrissie: He left me. He ran off with another woman half his age.

Sharon: Where is he now.

Chrissie: I don’t know.

Sharon: He wouldn’t just leave this place. Its his life. Tell me the truth.

Chrissie: That is the truth.

Sharon: Come off it Chrissie. We both know you’re lying. Something happened that night I came back and I’m going to find out what.

Chrissie: I don’t know what you’re talking about.

Sharon: Oh you might have been able to feed everyone round here some story about him running off but you can’t fool me. Tell me what happened.

Chrissie: Sharon I’m telling you the truth, nothing happened!

Sharon: So you wouldn’t might if I went downstairs and had a little chat with Zoe or Sam then, would you?

Chrissie: They’ll just tell you the same. You can’t ask them.
Sharon: Oh I can.

{Sharon storms downstairs but Chrissie is close behind.}

What will happen next???????

Angeldelight
06-05-2005, 17:19
oh wow, i really really hope Sharon doesn't find out what they did!!! i think Dennis would have believed her

phils little sister
06-05-2005, 17:22
very good!!! :cheer: :cheer: :cheer: any more

Princess
06-05-2005, 17:39
Chrissie: Wait?

Sharon: If you won’t tell me the truth someone else will!

{Meanwhile in the bar.}

Zoe: Is there any service around here? I’ve been waiting ages.

Sharon: Oh so sorry Zoe what can I get you?

Zoe: Sharon?

Sharon: Oh so you remember me do you?

Zoe: Listen Sharon about that I’m really sorry.

Sharon: I’m the one that should be sorry for ever believing you in the first place.

Zoe: I didn’t mean to.

Sharon: How can you not mean to do something like that?

Big Mo: What the hell are you talking about?

Sharon: Oh you don’t know!

Zoe: Please Sharon don’t.

Sharon: They gotta know the truth someday Zoe.
{Taps glass.}

Chrissie: Don’t to this Sharon.

Sharon: Ladies and gentlemen. I’ve got an announcement to make. I’m sure you were all devastated when Zoe lost her baby. I’m sure you all shared the pain with her. You really showed your caring side. But the truth is she was never pregnant! Not with Dennis’ baby anyway. It was my dad’s. She got pregnant by her boyfriend’s father!

{Zoe goes to run out but she bumps into a familiar face at the door!}

Dennis: Zoe?

Zoe: Dennis?

phils little sister
06-05-2005, 17:41
brilliant :cheer:

Angeldelight
06-05-2005, 17:43
oh wow...... GO SHARON! GO SHARON! GO SHARON! that was brill and it kept her mind from wandering to ASking Sam about Den, good thinking

Amber
06-05-2005, 17:45
OMG!
That's all I can say!

Princess
06-05-2005, 17:52
Zoe: What are you doing here?

Dennis: I live here. Its my home.

Zoe: But…

Dennis: What? Just because you getting pregnant was one big fat lie, you expect me never to come back again. Well you’re wrong.

Zoe: I just thought….

Dennis: Well you thought wrong. You know Zoe, you’re pathetic. I really cared for you. I was just starting to have feelings for you again but you through it all back in my face. I’m with Sharon now and we’re stronger than ever. Nothing can stop us this time. Not you, not Den not anybody. Sharon and me is forever.

{He walks over to the bar and kisses Sharon. Zoe runs home horrified!}

Amber
06-05-2005, 17:55
Woooooo! Go Dennis!
Post more soon, this is fab!

Angeldelight
06-05-2005, 17:59
WOW............. go Deniis go, you tell the whiny cow!!!!!!

i am loving thid scprit sooooo much it's really brill, you have to post more

MORE MORE MORE

Princess
06-05-2005, 18:12
Chrissie: You’re back as well then Dennis.

Dennis: I’m back alright.

{Chrissie and Dennis hug.}

Chrissie: I missed you.

Dennis: Me too. Is Den around?

Sharon: it’s a long story. He ran off with some woman half his age. Isn’t that right Chrissie?

Chrissie: Yeah.

Dennis: You alright?

Sharon: Oh she’s perfectly fine.

Dennis: So where is he Spain?

Chrissie: He could be anywhere.

Dennis: Are you going to try and contact him?

Sharon: I don’t know. He lied to me. He can’t expect me to forget that.

{Chrissie nervously changes subject.}

Chrissie: So are you going to stay and have a drink.

Dennis: No there’s a lot to do at the flat. We’ll back later on tonight.

Chrissie: That’s fine.

{Sharon and Dennis turn to walk out, but Sharon turns to Chrissie.}

Sharon: This isn’t over. I’ll be back!

Angeldelight
06-05-2005, 18:19
oh come on Sharon, he was a slimy, lying sack of rubbish, who cares where he is, you told him that night that you're father died years ago, and he did about 2-3months ago!!!! THANKS to CHRISSIE she should get a medal from the QUEEN!!!! she did US ALL a FAVOUR!!!!!

Princess
06-05-2005, 18:34
{Dennis is walking across the square to the Vic. Sharon is back at the flat.}

Chrissie: Hey.

Dennis: Hi

Chrissie: So where’s Sharon?

Dennis: She’s back at the flat.

Chrissie: Oh.

Dennis: I think we need to talk.

Chrissie: About what?

Dennis: Where Den really is.

Chrissie: There’s nothing to say.

Dennis: Come on Chrissie you’ve always told me everything.

Chrissie: This is different.

Dennis: No it isn’t.

Chrissie: Come on then follow me.

{Dennis follows Chrissie to cellar.}

Dennis: Why are we here?

Chrissie: Dennis listen to me. What I’m about to tell you mustn’t go any further than these four walls. Ok

Dennis: Ok

Chrissie: I’m serious. You can’t tell no one. Not even Sharon. Especially not Sharon.

Dennis: You’re scaring me now. Just spit it out.

Chrissie: Did Sharon tell you what happened the night she came back.

Dennis: Yeah

Chrissie: Well there’s more to it than that. After Sharon left Den got really mad. He blamed me for Sharon going. He attacked me. I thought he was going to kill me. Then Zoe she picked up this doorstop thing and hit him with it.

Dennis: Then what?

Chrissie: Dennis, Den’s dead. Zoe killed him. He’s buried where we are standing right now. He’s gone and he’s not coming back!

Angeldelight
06-05-2005, 18:49
OH MY GOD WOOOOOOOOOOOOW, this is so brilliant, it's absolutely fabulous!!! please post more

Amber
06-05-2005, 18:50
:eek::eek::eek:
Omg!
Post more soon

Princess
06-05-2005, 19:00
Dennis: Den’s dead and Zoe killed him?

Chrissie: Dennis you mustn’t tell anyone.

Dennis: How can you tell me something like that and expect me to keep it a secret?

Chrissie: Dennis you promised.

{Dennis runs out of cellar, through the pub and out into the square heading in the direction of he Slater’s house! Chrissie hopelessly runs after him.}

Chrissie: Stop. Think about what you’re doing.

Dennis: She killed a man.

Chrissie: You would have done the same thing. You hated him.

Dennis: He was Sharon’s dad.

Chrissie: She hated him too. He lied to her. He split the two of you up.

Dennis: She loved him once.

{Dennis knocks angrily on the Slater’s door.}

Charlie: Dennis? What are you doing here?

Dennis: Out of my way Charlie.

Chrissie: Sorry about this.

{Dennis and Chrissie run upstairs to Zoe’s room.}

Dennis: You stupid cow!

Zoe: What? You’ve no right to barge in here and shout at me like that.

Dennis: Oh shut up Zoe.

Zoe: What’s all this about?

Chrissie: He knows Zoe.

Zoe: He knows what?

Chrissie: He knows that you killed Den.

Angeldelight
07-05-2005, 17:36
OH MY GOD SHE TOLD him!!!! go Dennis go!!! but if everyone finds out that she killed him they will know Chrissie covered it up!! that's bad VERY BAD

.:Kitz:.
07-05-2005, 18:08
Oh wow, so he finally know! :)

Tamzi
07-05-2005, 18:32
wow
more right now
xxx

chocolate
07-05-2005, 22:29
THIS IS EXCELLENT!! i just hope that the EE writers will look at your script or do something similar ...please do some more soon... :bow:

EastendersRox
08-05-2005, 09:00
THIS IS GRT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just hope Chrissie doesn't get into trouble!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

di marco
08-05-2005, 09:59
brill! :D just read it all. hope everyone thinks it was zoe and that chrissie dont get into trouble too! wonder what sharons going to say! :) post more soon please, cant wait

Layne
08-05-2005, 10:15
I've just caught up, this is Reallly, Really Good! I love it!
Post more really soon
Luv ya
Layne
x x x

Amber
08-05-2005, 12:16
OMG!
Post more QUICK!

Harmanizing
08-05-2005, 13:57
Hi, I have been reading your script. It's great! I hope you enjoy my story as much as I am enjoying yours.

Princess
08-05-2005, 15:07
Zoe: Chrissie what have you done. He’ll tell The police. I’m going to be sent down. Chrissie how could you.

Chrissie: He had to find out someday. Its his dad.

Zoe: He hated him. You could have stuck to the story. He’s going to want to know everything now.

Dennis: Yeah I do. Why did you bury him, Chrissie? You didn’t do anything. It was her. She’s the killer.

Zoe: Don’t call me that. I thought he was going to kill Chrissie. It wasn't meant to happen.

Dennis: Come off it Zoe, you wanted him dead. He tricked you into sleeping with him. He got you pregnant. You hated him. You saw that night as the perfect opportunity, you weren’t going to miss the chance to kill him.

Zoe: That’s not true. It was an accident.

Dennis: I can see right through you Zoe. You’re lying.

Chrissie: Dennis calm down.

Dennis: Why should I. She killed Sharon’s dad. My dad.

Chrissie: Its not as if you two were the perfect match.

Dennis: But he was my dad.

Zoe: So you’re telling me you still him after all he did to me. After all he did to Sharon. After all he did to you!

Dennis: Of course not. I’ll never forgive him.

Chrissie: Well then, we’ll just carry on as normal. Not tell a soul.

Dennis: Its not that simple.

Chrissie: But it is Dennis. You’ve got to keep this to yourself.

Dennis: I can’t.

Angeldelight
08-05-2005, 15:10
oh no please don't let him tell Sharon, she go mad and call the police!!! hey that's not such a bad idea then you can get rid of Zoe YEY YEY get rid of her!!!

am really loving this, it's just so brilliant!!!

Princess
08-05-2005, 15:34
Chrissie: Dennis don’t go doing anything stupid.

Dennis: Its not stupid. Its something you should have done a long time ago.

{Dennis storms out of the Slater’s and over to the his and Sharon’s flat.}

Chrissie: Stop. Dennis wait.

Dennis: She’s not going to get away with what she done.

{Chrissie stops running after him, realising its hopeless.}

{Dennis runs into the flat.}

Sharon: Oh you’re back. I was just going to go over to the Vic and join you.

Dennis: Sharon, there’s something you should know.

Sharon: What?

Dennis: Sharon, Den didn’t run off with another woman.

Sharon: Don’t tell me he’s turned gay and ran off with a man!

Dennis: Sharon, I’m serious.

Sharon: So am I. With the stunts he’s pulled in the past. It wouldn’t surprise me.

Dennis: Den’s dead.

Sharon: What? Dennis don’t joke about this.

Dennis: I’m not joking.

Sharon: But why? How?

Dennis: Zoe.

Sharon: Zoe?

Dennis: She killed him. That night you came back here. After you left he attacked Chrissie. Zoe hit him with a concrete doorstop. He died there and then.

Sharon: Why didn’t know one tell me.

Dennis: No one knows.

Sharon: How can they not notice that Den Watts isn’t around. Wasn’t there a funeral or a service.

Dennis: Chrissie buried him.

Sharon: Where?

Dennis: In the cellar of the Vic.

Sharon: The Vic?

Dennis: Are you okay.

Sharon: Of course I’m not okay. My dad just died for the second time. He was murdered by that spiteful bitch.

{Sharon gets up and heads towards the door.}

Dennis: Where are you going?

Sharon: To pay Zoe a little visit!

Amber
08-05-2005, 15:43
Hehehe! Go Sharon :D!
Post more soon

Angeldelight
08-05-2005, 15:44
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

if Sam finds out she will try and prove Chrissie did it!! she still has the door stop

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Princess
08-05-2005, 15:47
By this point Chrissie has already give the doorstop back to Pauline.

Sam can't prove anything because Chrissie washed it so nobody's finger prints are on it.

Angeldelight
08-05-2005, 15:58
Phew, i was getting a little worried about that!!!! this is a really good script keep posting i have to know what happens!!!!

Princess
08-05-2005, 16:02
Won't be able to post any more to Monday or Tuesday.

Going to Dancing competiton now.

It will give me time to think up some ideas!

Angeldelight
08-05-2005, 16:11
okay, i will just have to read it over and over again!!!! lol good luck hope you do really well!!!!!

di marco
08-05-2005, 16:45
brill! :D go dennis and sharon! zoe needs to get everything she deserves! :) post more soon please, cant wait
ps. good luck with your dancing competition!

Layne
08-05-2005, 18:26
Good luck with your Dancing Comp, this is great, Den Gay, ha now that would be a first!!!
Post more soon
Luv ya
Layne
x x x

Harmanizing
08-05-2005, 19:37
I don't quite know why but I keep getting the e-mail notices for your story. I replied to two of them explaining that it wasn't me who posted it but they still keep coming! I just wanted to let you know that it's not my fault

mikepemb
08-05-2005, 20:50
more please

EastendersRox
09-05-2005, 17:20
More!!!!!!!!!!!!

Princess
09-05-2005, 20:27
Dennis: Be careful Sharon. Don’t do anything you’ll regret.

Sharon: I have no regrets.

{Sharon runs across to the Slater’s house and knocks on the door.}

Charlie: What’s up with everyone today. First Dennis now you. I wish someone would tell me what’s going on.

Sharon: Its private. Now is Zoe in?

Charlie: Yeah she’s in her room.

{Sharon runs upstairs.}

Charlie: You can’t go running in on people like that you know.

Sharon: Whatever.

{Sharon opens the door to Zoe’s bedroom and walks in.}

Zoe: Sharon?

{Sharon walks over and slaps her on the face!}

Zoe: What was that for?

Sharon: You know fine rightly what that was for, you evil vicious cow!

Zoe: Did Dennis tell you.

Sharon: Oh he told me alright and we’re going to make sure you don’t get away with it.

Zoe: Sharon please I didn’t mean for it to happen.

Sharon: Oh shut up. You knew exactly what you were doing. You killed my dad. The man who brought me as his own when my real parents abandoned me. The man who would do anything for me. The man who put his own life at risk just to come back here and see me. You killed him. You’re a murderer.

{Sharon slaps Zoe again but this time she doesn’t stop. She kicks her and punches her.}

Zoe: Stop it!

Sharon: Why should I? It should be you that’s dead not him. You should be buried in the Vic. You’re going to be put away for a long time. I’ll make sure of it!

Angeldelight
09-05-2005, 20:38
GO sharon GO!! Hope Zoe gets what she deserves....

di marco
09-05-2005, 20:43
great! :D good one sharon, hope you really hurt her! :) more soon please, cant wait

Layne
09-05-2005, 22:18
This is great stuff, more soon
Luv ya
Layne
x x x

EastendersRox
10-05-2005, 17:11
Go, Sharon, go!

chocolate
11-05-2005, 15:41
GO SHARON GO SHARON!! that was wicked!!! please post more soon!!!! they should put this kinda thing in eastenders...maybe you could write for them???!! :cheer:

Princess
11-05-2005, 19:35
I wish!!

Angeldelight
11-05-2005, 19:36
hey why don't you send it in and tell em this his how the viewers want things!!!! hehe

Post more some i'm sooooooooo hooked

Princess
11-05-2005, 19:49
Zoe: Sharon. You’ve got to listen to me. If you tell the police you’re going to get Chrissie and Sam in trouble as well as me.

Sharon: What do you mean?

Zoe: Well they were there that night as well. They helped me to cover it up. Chrissie buried him, not me.

Sharon: But it was you killed him. You’re the one who’s a murderer.

Zoe: That’s not going to matter to them. They’ll send the three of us down. Including Chrissie.

Sharon: Well that’s not my fault. She knew what she was getting herself into.

Zoe: You can’t send your own step mum to prison. If you tell the police about me. You tell the police about all of us.

Sharon: Well maybe I’ll not tell the police. Maybe I’ll make you pay some other way.

Zoe: What are you going to do?

Sharon: I don’t know. I’ll have to think about it.

Zoe: You can’t tell no one else.

Sharon: I don’t know about that. You’re not going to get away with this. I’ll tell the whole square if I have to.

Zoe: You can’t do that.
Sharon: You’re right I can’t. That would be far too easy. You’re name will be filth around here by the time I’m finished!

Angeldelight
11-05-2005, 19:56
WOW go Sharon go!!! she's all forceful and in control, even though she did EVERYONE a favour she still deserves to pay i can't wait to see what Sharon does!!!! BUt please pretty pretty PLEASE let Chrissie be ok i don't want her to og to prison or anything!!!!

Tamzi
11-05-2005, 19:57
Go sharon! This is fab. Sorry I haven't posted for a while. its brill though. more
xxx

Princess
11-05-2005, 19:59
WOW go Sharon go!!! she's all forceful and in control, even though she did EVERYONE a favour she still deserves to pay i can't wait to see what Sharon does!!!! BUt please pretty pretty PLEASE let Chrissie be ok i don't want her to og to prison or anything!!!!

Don't worry I don't want Chrissie to go to prison either!

chocolate
11-05-2005, 20:21
MORE MORE MORE please lol (sry)

Layne
12-05-2005, 08:30
This is great stuff post more ASAP!

Luna
12-05-2005, 12:37
I love it...post more soon please :)

EastendersRox
12-05-2005, 17:07
This is great! Hope Sharon brings Zoe and Sam down but plz not Chrissie!

Amber
12-05-2005, 19:15
Oi! Come back here right now and post more!
This is so good!

Princess
12-05-2005, 22:37
Sharon is back in the flat. She is has just told Dennis what happened at Zoe’s.}

Sharon: She is unbelievable. I just want to hurt her so much.

Dennis: But she’s right. You can’t tell the police. Chrissie will go down as well. And as for telling people round here. You know what they’re like. Once one person knows the whole of London will know.

Sharon: Well there’s got to be something I can do. I want to make her life a misery!

Dennis: Well there is one thing you could do.

Sharon: What?

Dennis: You could tell people about her and Den.

Sharon: Do you think that would work?

Dennis: It’s perfect. Once all her family know about the abortion , they’ll never want to see her again. That’s not what Slater girls do. Without her family she’s nothing.

Sharon: It’s worth a try. I’d do anything to make her pay.

Princess
12-05-2005, 22:54
{Sharon and Dennis walk into Vic and order drinks from Chrissie. Charlie, and Big Mo are there but Zoe is still at home.}

Sharon: I’m going to do it tonight. It’s now or never.

Dennis: Just be careful.

Dot: It’s lovely to see you back Sharon. The squares not been the same without you.

Sharon: Thanks Dot. It’s nice to be back.

Big Mo: Why did you leave in the first place. Got jealous of Zoe stealing your fella.

Sharon: Something like that. Not that its any of your business

Charlie: Stay out of it Mo.

Big Mo: I’m just curious. So have you seen that dad of yours yet.

Sharon: No. He’s busy.

Big Mo: Strange the way he just left like that wasn’t it?

Charlie: Shut up Mo. I’ve told you before not to meddle in people’s private lives.

Sharon: Don’t worry Charlie. We all have our problems like Zoe’s abortion. I was devastated when I heard about that.

Charlie: Her what?

Sharon: The abortion. It’s terrible isn’t it?

Big Mo: What the hell are you talking about? Our Zoe had no abortion.

Sharon: Oh you didn’t know. I’m so sorry. I just assumed. I mean when Den got her pregnant I was shocked. Couldn’t believe it. I mean your boyfriends dad. And on top of that having an abortion.

Charlie: Den?

Sharon: Silly me. Just blurting all this out. I’m so sorry. I thought you would have known by now.

Dot: Is this true Sharon?

Sharon Every last word of it Dot!

Charlie: You better be telling the truth here Sharon because if I find out your lying I’ll…..

{The door opens and Zoe walks in. The whole pub looks around and stares at her. She soon realises what Sharon has done.}

Sharon: Talk of the devil. Now you can ask her yourself Charlie.

Amber
12-05-2005, 23:38
Oooh go Sharon!
Post more soon

Layne
13-05-2005, 08:29
More more more more more more PLEASE!!!!

EastendersRox
13-05-2005, 17:32
Go Sharon, go!

Angeldelight
13-05-2005, 19:50
Oooh Sharon that was a bit catty!! can't wait to see what else she does!!
post more SOON or i... i don't know but it won't be very nice

di marco
14-05-2005, 09:24
great! :D go sharon! zoe deserves everything hahaha! :) post more soon please, cant wait

Princess
14-05-2005, 13:31
Charlie: Zoe love go home and I’ll follow you over. We need to talk.

Big Mo: To right we need to talk. You dirty little slapper.

Charlie: Shut it Mo. Zoe go. Go now.

{Zoe turns and runs home in tears. The whole pub is in silence.}

Charlie: Sharon, promise me you’re telling the truth.

Sharon: I promise. I can’t believe she didn’t tell you. Are sure she hasn’t got any more skeletons in her closet.

{Sharon looks at Chrissie.}

Chrissie: Sharon can I have a word.

Sharon: Sure.

Chrissie: In private.

{Sharon follows Chrissie up to the kitchen.}

Chrissie: How could you do that. You’re unbelievable.

Sharon: Me unbelievable! I’m not the one who killed a man Chrissie. She was.

Chrissie: Now that Charlie knows that she’ll tell him everything.

Sharon: So?

Chrissie: He’ll want answers. He’ll want to know where the body is. He’ll want to know why I didn’t stop her.

Sharon: And why didn’t you stop her Chrissie?

Chrissie: What?

Sharon: Well you were there. Why didn’t you pull her off him.

Chrissie: Den was attacking me. I thought he was going to kill me.

Sharon: Unless you wanted him dead.

Chrissie: Don’t be so stupid. I wouldn’t want my own husband dead.

Sharon: Wouldn’t you?

Chrissie: What are you trying to say Sharon?

Sharon: Something’s not adding up. I haven’t heard the full story, have I?

chocolate
14-05-2005, 15:13
this is brilliant please post so more soooooonn!!!!! :cheer:

di marco
14-05-2005, 15:43
brill! :D oh dear looks like theres going to be an argument between sharon and chrissie! glad zoes getting what she deserves! :) cant wait for the next part, hope its soon

EastendersRox
15-05-2005, 08:26
Zoe's getting what she deserves, even though it wasn't her who murdered Den. Plz don't let Chrissie get into trouble. Good script all the same!

Layne
15-05-2005, 09:21
will sharon figure it out?Post more soon please this is faB!

melonb
15-05-2005, 13:03
this is great!! :cheer: :bow: :clap:
i love strong and feisty sharon!!

Angeldelight
16-05-2005, 01:05
Oooohhhhh it's all happening now!!!!!!
feisty Sharon, you go girl!!!!
wow this is brill as usual keep it going i'm completely hooked......

Princess
18-05-2005, 20:37
{Chrissie is in the kitchen of the Vic. She is on the phone to Sam telling her about what happened with Sharon.}

Chrissie: She’s on to us. She knows there’s something we’re not telling her.

Sam: What are you going to do?

Chrissie: How do I know?

Sam: Well you’ve got to act quickly. Tell her you couldn’t forgive Den after what he did to you. Tell her you wanted Zoe to get send down.

Chrissie: Send down for killing my husband?

Sam: You’ve got to say something. And quick.

Chrissie: I know. She’s gonna put two and two together and realise I killed him. She’s going to figure out that I killed Den.

{Jake walks in.}

Jake: What was that?

{Chrissie turns round.}

Jake: You killed Den! I don’t believe you. Why didn’t you tell me?

Chrissie: Jake? Got to go Sam.

{Jake goes to leave.}

Chrissie: Jake wait.

Jake: Is it true?

Chrissie: Yeah its true.

Jake: You killed him. You told me he’d run off with another woman. You let me feel sorry for you. You let me fall in love with you.

Chrissie: Jake I’m so so sorry.

Jake: So am I.

{Chrissie breaks down in tears as Jake leaves.}

Layne
18-05-2005, 21:09
NOOOOOOOOOOO, Jake and Chrissie are meant for each other!!!!!!
this is fab please post more soon!
Luv ya
Layne
x x x

Princess
18-05-2005, 21:30
{Chrissie is still crying when Little Mo comes in.}

Mo: Chrissie. It’s getting really busy downstairs. I need a hand.

{Chrissie sobs.}

Mo: Are you alright?

Chrissie: I’m fine.

Mo: You don’t look fine?

Chrissie: Well I am. Could you just give some space.

Mo: Are you sure you’re ok?

Chrissie: Yeah. Just go.

{Mo turns round to leave but bumps into Jake.}

Mo: Oh you’re just the person to cheer her up.

Jake: What?

Chrissie: She’s been crying.

Jake: I’ll sort it. Go downstairs.

Jake: Chrissie.

Chrissie: What do you want?

Jake: I just want to say sorry.

Chrissie: Sorry - what for? You’re not the one who’s a murderer.

Jake: I’ll help you get through it. I’m here for you.

Chrissie: How can you say that? I’ve killed an innocent man and you say you’ll stand by me.

Jake: Well I love you don’t I.

Chrissie: Really.

Jake: Really. It doesn’t matter what you’ve done. You’re still the same old Chrissie.

Chrissie: Old?

Jake: The same young Chrissie!

Chrissie: Come here!

{Chrissie and Jake kiss.}

Amber
18-05-2005, 21:36
Awwwww! JC FOREVER!
This is so sweet! Post more soon please :D

Stacy
18-05-2005, 22:29
This is really good, more please!!

Layne
18-05-2005, 22:40
Yeyyyyyyy, they are together wooooooo!!!
this is a great script darlin keep posting
Luv ya
layne
x x x

di marco
19-05-2005, 09:16
great! :D so glad jakes gonna stand by chrissie! :) more soon please, cant wait

Ryan1
19-05-2005, 14:15
I think Sam really needs to tell Zoe that it was Chrissie who killed Den. Sam is supposed to be Zoe's friend but she's making her go through hell!! Then maybe Zoe can leave the square with a clearer conscience to start a new life in Spain with Kelly...

EastendersRox
19-05-2005, 17:04
Sam was on Zoe's side! What a cow!

Angeldelight
20-05-2005, 16:59
yey yey yey yey Jake and Chrissie forever n ever n ever

i've just caught up, this is brilliant so glad he's forgiven her, they'll make a great couple!!!

post more soon Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Princess
22-05-2005, 14:11
(Sharon is back at the flat talking to Dennis.)

Sharon: I’m telling you. She hasn’t told us the truth.

Dennis: What do you mean? She told us everything.

Sharon: So you think that’s what really happened?

Dennis: Yeah. Zoe killed Den. Chrissie buried him. He’s dead and gone.

Sharon: But why did Chrissie bury him? She could have left him there and let the police find him.

Dennis: Maybe she didn’t think.

Sharon: But that’s the thing. I think it was all planned.

Dennis: What?

Sharon: Well the night I came back Chrissie, Zoe and Sam were there in the Vic with Dad. They were arguing with him, telling them how much he’d hurt everyone.

Dennis: So?

Sharon: I think that Chrissie had it organised. Why else would they all be there at the same time. Its not as if they’re best mates.

Dennis: Maybe it was just a coincidence.

Sharon: I don’t think so.

di marco
22-05-2005, 14:19
brill! :D looks like sharons working it out! :) more soon please, cant wait

Angeldelight
22-05-2005, 16:19
WOW... she didn't plan to kill him... she didn't mean it... but thw world is better off with-out him... more more more

Layne
22-05-2005, 16:45
Sharon is sussing it all out,
More soon
Luv ya
Layne
x x x