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Hello everyone,
my much awaited script has arrived,(only jokin!)
If i don't reply, its because i'm still writing it!
I know the title is rubbish but hey i tried!
Short bit for now, more in a bit!
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This is for you Rachel!!!
A black Cab pulled up outside 43b Albert Square, Dennis and Zoë’s old flat.
The door opened and out stepped a gorgeous women, she was in a red low cut halter top which over the top she wore a white see-throughy blouse unbuttoned tied in a knot at front, mini skirt and high Red Wedge shoes, the outfit was perfect it showed off her gorgeous curvy body and her natural tan. She was a brunette with soft flowing curls just past her shoulders.
She paid the cab driver and he drove off.
Women * to herself *: So this is the brilliant Walford,
She looked around she obviously wasn’t to impressed with the place
Who is she and thanks babes I'm loving it already please post more as soon as
Glad ya like it! :cheer:
You'll find out who she is soon!
She started walking towards the Vic, she fumbled in her bag for something then bumped into someone, the contents of her bag went everywhere
Women: look I’m really sorry; I didn’t look where I was going
She bent down and started picking her things up
The person she had bumped into was Alfie
Alfie: aww, no darlin’ it was all my fault, in a rush to get everywhere
He bent down started helping her. They both went for her keys and then came up together
Alfie: <slightly embarrassed> There
He handed her the keys
Women: Thanks
Alfie: Well I mean all in a days work,
Women: Yeh, started laughing
Alfie: Right well I’ve got to go nice meeting you…
Women: Kacey
Alfie: Nice meeting you Kacey,
Kacey: Nice meeting you to
Alfie: Alfie, Alfie Moon,
Kacey:It was nice to meet you Alfie, Alfie Moon
Alfie: Alright bye,
He started walking off towards the market
Kacey: Oh Alfie hang on a minute
Kacey ran after him
Alfie turned round
Alfie: Yes?
Kacey: do you know where this place is?
She pulled a crumpled piece of paper out of her pocket, on it was an address she showed Alfie
Alfie: yeh darlin’ its just straight on three houses in, the one with the black door
Kacey: ok, thanks a lot, see you around
She walked off in the direction Alfie had just told her to go
She looked down at the piece of paper, it read:
5 Albert Square, Walford,
There was a phone number underneath but she didn’t have the bottle to ring it, it had been a good few years since…
OH MY GAWD does she know Johnny oh postively mysterious please post more sooooon
Luv ya loads
It drags on a bit, this script, the best bit is like near the end!
So it will get better!
Sorry its in short bits, i have t make it last as i'm still writing some of it!
This is for you rachel, because so far your the only one reading it! And because i luv ya! :wub:
She found it Number 5, she stood there for a while, just staring at the black door.
Kacey* to Herself*: I have to do this it’s now or never
She started walking up the stairs, she got to the top. She was just about to knock when the door flew open
Johnny: Hello, can I help
Kacey: Ummm, yes, Is Chrissie in?
Johnny: Chrissie?
Kacey: Yeh, Chrissie Watts, this is where she lives, ain’t it?
Johnny: No, she used to live her with her husband, but she lives in the pub now, The Queen Victoria
Kacey: Oh right sorry to bother you Mr…
Johnny: Allen, Johnny Allen
Kacey: Allen? * puzzled*
Johnny: Yeh
Kacey looked at him, and stared into his eyes
Kacey:Ok, thanks sorry to bother you!
She turned and started to walk down the steps
Johnny ran after her,he put his hand on her shoulder causing her to turn round
Johnny:Have we met before?
Kacey: No, No not that I can remember
Johnny: Sorry, its just you seem familiar
Kacey:Its ok
She walked off towards the pub
Johnny shook his head and jumped into his car, he drove past Kacey and waved.
OHHHHHHHH even better she knows the formidable Mrs Watts and recognised Johnny I'm hooked babes this is top stuff well worth the wait
Luv ya LOADS cos you posted this for me
Aww, thanks babe, i'm so glad ya like it everything MIGHT become clear soon!
Her ya go for you because I luv ya More!! :wub: :thumbsup:
Kacey got to the Vic, she stood there, she knew for definite she was here, she was having the same feelings she had back outside Johnny’s house, there were people going in and out, it was obviously a good boozer. She looked around, she then looked back at the pub doors,
Kacey: Not yet
She turned and walked away
Kacey’s phone starts ringing, she reaches into her pocket and answers it
Kacey: Hello
Mystery Man: Hey Sexy, how are you?
A smile appeared on Kacey’s face
Kacey: Oh its you, I’m fine babe, well there is one thing bothering me
MM: And whats that?
Kacey:Being away from you!
MM: Well I miss you too babes, where are you now, still in Manchester?
Kacey: Uhhhh, no
MM: So where are you then,
Kacey: In Walford
MM: What! I thought we were going to meet there tomorrow, you know together
Kacey:I know, I know and I’m sorry but I just had to come today.,tell me is everyone always gossiping?
MM:yeh you won’t have much trouble fitting in!
Kacey:Yeh nice one!
MM:Have you seen her?
Kacey: Seen wh…Oh no not yet but I will do, I mean I’ve got nowhere to stay!
MM:Yeh that’s going to be a good conversation, Hi we’ve not seen each other in a while can I kip here tonight?
Kacey: Yeh well,
MM: and don’t forget, don’t tell anyone who I am, I’ve history round
Kacey:Yes you’ve told me a thousand times
All of sudden, Kacey saw two very familiar faces
She recognised them instantly
Jake: Yeh Danny, b’coz that’s going to work!
Danny: well you never know it could
Jake: Yeh ok then, if it works I’ll snog the queen
Kacey giggled at the comment, they hadn’t changed!
Kacey:Yeh babe, look I have to go now, but I miss you
MM:Yeh, miss you too, Love you
Kacey:Love you Bye
She put the phone down and put it back into her pocket, and followed the brothers
So she knows Chrissie, the sexy Moon boys and Johnny and who is her mystery man post more soon I can't wait
Luv ya cos this script is brill and your da best
Thnkx!!Yeh she knows alot of people!! You'll find out who her mystery man is soon!!!
your so nice to me, my script ain't that good, i'm goignt o have to stop postiing soon or writing quicker, i'm running out of script!!!
Yor Are Offically my Number 1 fan!
So this is for you because your my SPECIAL friend!!
Luv ya Lots xxx
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Jake and Danny were now walking through the gardens
Danny:I’ll hold you to that
Jake:hold me to what?
Danny:Snogging the queen
Jake:Well I’ve always had a sof…..
Kacey had caught up, she was right behind them
Kacey:Small world,this is ain’t it?
Jake & Danny turned round
Kacey:Hello boys!
Jake:Kac is that you?
Kacey:Yeh
Danny:Oh my god
he hugged her
Kacey:Been a while right?
Jake:You can say that again
Jake gave her a hug to.
Jake: so what you doing in Walford?
Kacey: Could ask you the same question?
Danny: well it’s a really long story, firstly….
Jake: Danny,
Danny: Sorry, uhh , we’ve family here, a cousin and nana!
Kacey:Its Alfie right?
Jake:Yeh how do you know?
Kacey: we met earlier, but don’t worry he doesn’t know who I am, or that I know you two!
Jake: Anyway I though you were in spain?
Kacey: Yeh, well I was, but I’ve been back in England for a while now!
Danny: But why?
Kacey: Why, I don’t know really, I guess my family
Jake: Yeh but I thought you said didn’t have any
Kacey: No, I said that my dad had left when I was young, my mum had died, but that don’t mean I don’t have any family, I thought you two would of realised that being BROTHERS and all?
Danny: Oh, so you’ve got a brother?
Jake and Kacey looked at each other and laughed
Danny: What?
Kacey: You boys ain’t changed, but somehow Danny I think you may have got more stupider!
Jake: I don’t think that is possible!
Danny: Hang on a minute before you go taking the Mick! You didn’t answer the question Kac, Do you have any brothers or sisters?
Kacey: Yeh I have, didn’t you guys meet my brothers in spain?
Jake: Yeh we may of done, what were there names?
Kacey: Jason and Lewis
Jake and danny looked at each other
Danny: No doesn’t rinf any….
Jake: No actually I think we did meet them, yeh we did, they were nice!
Kacey: Oh Jake , I din’t know you felt that way, I mean they are my brothers
Jake:Not like that
Kacey:I know, I know, I was just teasing!
Danny: so Kacey….
This is great!
Sorry, I couldn't post before because I was out all day.
Post more soon :D
oh I'm your special friend well your mine cos you reply to all my scripts although i need to type faster too I'm running out Luv ya loads cos you post mopre script for me and reply to mine yay
This script is brill very mysterious who she knows etc i can't wait to find out more by the way how old is she is she young just curious luv ya
oh I'm your special friend well your mine cos you reply to all my scripts although i need to type faster too I'm running out Luv ya loads cos you post mopre script for me and reply to mine yay
This script is brill very mysterious who she knows etc i can't wait to find out more by the way how old is she is she young just curious luv ya
Same goes for me, but the other way round, i love your scripts they are wicked!!
Luv ya to!
Kacey is in her early 20's to answer your question
Thnkx Amber for repling aswell!
Next Part...for you rachel! Luv ya.....
Chrissie: theres your change Minty
Chrissie handed Minty a couple if pound coins
Minty: Thanks darlin
Chrissie: Right, * Looking around * arr,Johnny what can I get you?
Johnny stared at Chrissie
Chrissie: Hello, Johnny
Johnny: huh? Oh sorry, an orange juice please
At that moment Alfie walks into the Vic, he walks to over to Johnny at the bar
Alfie:Johnny
Chrissie:They are, * handed him the drink * What were you staring at before?
Johnny:Ohh, its just I saw this girl, woman in the square before, she was looking for you, and she reminded me of you, and I’m sure I know her from somewhere,
Chrissie looked a bit puxxled
Alfie: Yeh actually come to think of it I bumped into this girl and she was like a spittin image of you chrissie
Chrisse:That’s weird
Johnny: so no thoughts of who she is then?
Chrissie:No, not a clue1
Alfie:She did tell me her name, but I wasn’t paying much attention!
Chrissie: Pretty, is she?
Alfie: Yeh, stunning!
Chrissie: Oh and I’m not hey?
Alfie: No I din’t mean it like that!
Chrissie:I know, I know, well if her name comes into your head give me a shout and I’ll see if it sounds familiar
Alfie: Oh alright darlin,
xxxxxxx
Wow amazing this script is brill please post more as soon as you can your forever special friend Rachel he he luv ya loads
Thanks Ok, this is specially for you my forever special friend Rachel !
Jake: Sounds Fun
Kacey: you could say that!
Jake: well my,my would you just look at the time,
Kacey: Your not getting rid of me that easily
Danny: No seriously, we’ve got to go, we start work in 2 hours, and we have to get ready!
Kacey: oh right I see got to do your hair?
Danny:Oh haha
Kacey:where do you work?
Jake: At Scarlet, the nightclub, its just round the corner
Kacey: Oh
Danny: Why don’t you come?
Kacey’s face lite up
Jake:Yeh, come along. I mean your thinking of sticking round for a while aren’t you?
Kacey: well yeh, moving here I think
Jake:Excalty, so it’s a great chance to meet some new faces!
Kacey:Okay then, but I’ve got to go and do something first
Danny:What?
Kacey: Now that’ll be telling! Okay well I’ll see you at the club, about 8ish
Jake:Yeh, see ya
Jake and Danny walked back through the gardens to their house
Kacey stopped for a moment, she turned back round she could see it even now, she had to do it,She didn’t even know why she was scared
Kacey:Right,
She took a deep breath in and started walking towards the Vic
Chrissie:Mo, I’m just popping out I won’t be a minute
Mo: Ok
Chrissie grabbed her coat and went out the back, she walked through the cellar stopped and stared,
A single tear ran down her cheek, she quickly wiped it away and went out.
oh interesting this is wkd babes and I should know I'm your forever special friend and I don't lie luv ya and post more soooooooooon pleaseeeeeeeee
For you Rachel my forever special friend!
I'm just going to post this and another part for tonight but i'll write and post more for tomorrow
Luv ya
xxx
Kacey walked in through the doors, it was very busy, well it would be a Friday night, about 6 o clock, it was most peoples local aswell.
She walked up to the bar, she felt eyes burning into her,
A barmaid was coming over, it wasn’t her what shall she say???
Little Mo:Hello Darlin’, what can I get you?
Kacey: Urm, th…
Garry and Minty walked in
Garry:the thing is you can’t be to forceful, alright Mo, can we have two Pints please?
Mo:well garry, I’m just serving this lady
Garry: Well I can see that now, ‘ello gorgeous, this is minty and I’m
Kacey: Garry?
Garry: Well yeh, and you are
Kacey: I’m a Leo,now can I please carry on my conversation, that you interupted
Minty: urmmmmm
Garry:Yeh course, we’ll just go over here and play darts
Kacey: Ok, bye, she waved
Mo:sorry about them,there
Kacey: idiots
Mo laughed: you could say that,anyway what can I get you love
Kacey:Actually, I was hoping to have a word with Mrs Watts, this is her pub right?
Mo:Yeh, the thing is she just nipped out,but she should be back soon, you could just wait
Kacey:yeh
Mo:What was in involving
Kacey: Oh, just some paperwork I’m from the bank
Mo:Oh right, well you could always wait up stairs if you’d prefer?
Kacey:Yeh, that would be great, which way?
Mo:Oh just round there
Mo pointed to the door
Kacey:Ok, thanks
Kacey walked round to the back,why did she lie, she wasn’t from the bank at all,
Kacey walked past the bar, she turned and looked, she then walked over to the mirror, she checked her hair, perfect, she then walked upstairs, hopefully Chrissie wouldn’t be to long.
The bank my backside (see being polite) little mo's to trusting for her own good this is top stuff babes post the next part soon cos I can't wait to find out who she REALLY is luv ya forever Rach
Its nice to see that your being polite!
Last part for tonight more tommorw
You find out who she is in this part!!!
Luv ya forever to xxx
Specially for my forever special friend (you no who you are)
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Chrissie walked back through the bar it was really busy
Chrissie:You coping alright mo?
Mo:Yeh, tracy is a God send
Chrissie:I Know!Right I’m just going to go upstairs, I’ll be down before you can say The Queen Vic
Chrissie went into the bac kand upstairs
Mo: oh the banker, Chrissie,, oh well she find her in a minute, yes what can I get you?
Chrissie walked up the stairs, into the kitchen and put the kettle on she went into her room, and got a big surprise
Chrissie:Oh my god, Who are you and what are you doing in my room
Kacey turned round to face Chrissie
Kacey: Don’t you recognise me?
Chrissie was very suprised
Chrissie:Oh my god,
Kacey: Its been a while hey,
Chrissie:Yeh, * she started to cry, *
Kacey: Oh, and I thought you were pleased to see me
Chrissie: I am, oh god come here Kac
Chrissie pulled Kacey in close and they stayed there in an embracing hug for a few moments longer
Chrissie Finally realised Kacey, and dried her eyes
Kacey:I’m so glad to see you,
Chrissie: yeh me to, right do you want a cup of tea?
Kacey:Yeh, but what about the pub?
Chrissie:What about it?
Kacey:Well its getting really busy, shouldn’t you go and help?
Chrissie:Anyone would think you wanted me to go
Kacey: No, no course not its ju..
Chrissie: Look Little Mo, will be alright on her own, for a while longer, and even if she isn’t she’ll have to be, and I’m sure my admiring public won’t miss me that much
Kacey: Yeh Ok, what ever floats your boat
Chrissie: Hey
They both giggled and Chrissie hit Kacey playfully,
Kacey stopped laughing
Chrissie:Whats wrong babe?
Kacey: Nothing its just then when we were laughing and joking
Chrissie: What?
Kacey: it just reminded me of how it used to be, you know when Mum & Dad were alive.
Yes I know who I am and I'm off to beddy byes now so thanks for posting that can't wait for the next bit AWWWWWWW there sisters wkd babes luv ya loads your special friend forever and ever and ever
Yes I know who I am and I'm off to beddy byes now so thanks for posting that can't wait for the next bit AWWWWWWW there sisters wkd babes luv ya loads your special friend forever and ever and ever
You are soooooo kind!!!
I no i kept it a secret that they are sisters because i am sneaky!!
Post more tomorrow, off to bed to!
Luv ya special friends forever
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Loads and Loads and Loads
xxxx
Layne
x x x
Wow! I didn't see that coming!
Post more soon please!
Sorry wasn't on yesterday, I was revising. It is fab babe. So Chrissie has a sister. This is so so good. Post more right as soon as poss.
di marco
02-05-2005, 09:51
wow great brill marvellous! :D just read the whole lot and its fab! :) wanna find out more about chrissies sis. this is an excellent script, i enjoyed reading it. hope theres more soon, cant wait
Thnkx for all your replies! :cheer:
Here goes next part! (sorry its a bit boring!)
And i'm still writing it so you might have to wait for a little while until i post the next bit!
Luv ya all specially my Sepical Forever Friend xxx
Charlie: Mo, have you seen my keys?
Mo:No I ain’t, what was that stac?
Stacey:The baby smells
Ding Dong
Mo:Well change him
Stacey: No thanks
Zoe : I’ll do it
Ding Dong
Mo:I’ll get that then
Mo went and answered the door
Mo: Oh alright sam, come in it’s a mad house in here
Sam: I can tell, is zo’ in
Mo: yeh zoe,
Zoe: What?
Mo: its sam for you, go through
Sam:Thanks,
Sam waked into the Living room, Stacey was watching telly and zoe had just finished changing Freddie
Zoe: oh alright sam, Stacey take Freddie into nan in the kitchen, then go upstairs
Stacey:Nah, I’m alright here thanks
Zoe:Stacey now
Stacey: Fine I’m going,come on you
Stacey disappesred
Zoe: So what are you doing here?
Sam: Look zoe, can’t we be friends
Zoe:We are, well we have to act normal, I can’t go getting all close to you then just hating you people will get suspicios
Sam: Ok then, I was wondering do you want o go to the club tonight a bit of a girls night out
Zoe:If I must
Sam: oh don’t be to enthusiastic
Zoe: Look wait here I’ll run upstauurs and get changed quickly, won’t be two ticks
Sam: Ok
Zoe ran upstairs
di marco
02-05-2005, 11:25
brill! :D love staceys attitude, its great! :) cant wait for the next part, hope its soon
:thumbsup: Fab!
Can't wait for more!
This might be the last part till tomorrow, it depends if i get get back on the computer later!
Thnkx for all ya'll replies, luv ya all
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Here goes:
Chrissie:I can’t believe it
Kacey:I know
Chrissie:My baby sister is getting married, so who is he?
Kacey: I can’t tell you, hes coming over tomorrow so you can meet him then
Chrissie:I can’t wait, I hope you’ll be happy, married life ain’t all its cracked up to be,
Kacey:Whats that supposed to mean?
Chrissie:Oh nothing, do you…
Kacey:hang on a sec, I thought you were happily married, with den, come to think of it where is he?
Chrissie: Urmm, he left me, for a younger, blonder woman, so do you want another cup of tea
Chrissie got up from the table and walked over to the kettle
Kacey:Oh, I’m sorry, I thought you were really happy,
Chrissie: Yeh, anyway
Kacey: And I hate to say this but I told you so
Chrissie: What?
Kacey: Once a cheater always a cheater!
Chrissie:Yeh you could say that! Oh my god look at the time Mo, will be rushed off her feet, you can come down to if you like
Kacey: Actually I promised some old friends I’d go to this club with them, Scarlet?
Chrisie: yeh,ok, hang on, I thought you’d just come here,so who are these old friends?
Kacey: They are called Jake and Danny, I’ve known them for a while, we met in Spain, but I din’t know they were here in Walford and I kind if bumped into them before, you know them?
Chrissie: Jake and Danny Moon, I’d worry if you didn’t know them! Yeh we are friends,
A cheeky little smile appeared on chrissie’s face,
Kacey: The problem is I don’t have anything to wear
Chrissie: Well at least your asking this time, go into my room, and have a look in the wardrobe, I’m sure you’ll find something
Kacey gave Chrissie a kiss on the cheek
Kacey:You’re the best sister ever!
Chrissie: I have my uses now hurry, I’ll be downstairs ok
Kacey: Ok
Kacey ran into Chrissie’s room and started remerging through her clothes
di marco
02-05-2005, 19:46
fab! :D wonder what kacis future hubby is like! :) hope the next parts soon, cant wait
Thaxnk again for your replies, you'll find out who her hubby is soon, i promise!
Last part for tonight, post more tomorrow,
Luv ya all
:wub:
xxx
Jake: Danny hurry up, for god’s sake
Jake was standing at the entrance to Scarlet’s waiting impatiently
Danny:Okay, okay, keep your knickers on, I don’t know why your so bothered, its not like Johnny is going to sack you is it
Johnny: Yeh, danny your right, but I might just sack you if your not careful
Danny:Oh yer course
Johnny: you alright jake, you like you’ve something on your might
Jake:Huh?
Johnny: Lady troubles
Danny:Yeh he can’t find any
Jake: Oi, no I’m fine Johnny, after you
Jake and Danny followed Johnny into the club.
Chrissie:Your pints Gentlemen
Minty:Thanks Chrisise
Garry:Yeh, hey you don’t know where that gorgeous girl went do you?
Chrissie: Sorry?
Garry: yeh, she was about this tall and she had brown curly hair, a bit like yours
Minty: And she was wearing…
Chrisise: Okay, its nice to see you boys were paying attention
Garry:Well do you know where she went
At that moment Kacey appeared from behind the bar, she was wearing a Very Low-cut Black and red dress. Everyone in the bar was staring
Kacey: So how do I look?
Chrisie:You look lovely darlin’, that dress really suits you!
Kacey:Thanks, I might not be returning it!
Chrissie:Oh you will be
Garry: Hi I’m garry we met before, you look stunning
Kacey: Well thanks I do try!
Garry:Can I buy you a drink
Kacey: Sorry darling I’m on my way out, and anyway I don’t let strange men but me drinks, my Fiancé doesn’t approve
Garry: Fi,fi, fi
Kacey:Yeh sorry darlin, I’m going,
Chrisise: yeh ok,oh, Kacey, would you be able to tell jake I’m sorry for yesterday, and I hope he forgives me, he’ll know what I mean
Kacey: ok,
She gave chrissie a quick kiss on the cheek
Kacey:See you later and don’t wait up
Garry: Don’t think your fiancé would approve of that,
Kacey: What?
Garry: Kissing Chrissie
Kacey: Sorry ain’t I allowed to kiss my sister
And with that she walked out of the Pub
Garry: oh, I didn’t realise
Chrissie: Garry just shut up and pay me for your pint
xxx
More tomorrow
xxx
I'm loving this!
Post more as soon as possible!
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di marco
03-05-2005, 06:11
great again! :D garrys so funny bless him! :) hope theres more very soon, cant wait
MORE MORE MORE! Its fab babe. What is chrissie sorry for???
xxx
Sorry I wasn't on yesterday this is Brill lovin it completely please psot more very very soon your forever specail friend ME he he
Thankx for all your replies and Well because you asked so nicely
Jake: Danny tonight don’t let any Rif Raf in aright?
Danny:I don’t usually
Jake:Yeh whatever, right I’m going in now, you need me
Danny:Yeh, can I get back to my job now mum?
Jake:Haha
Jake walked into scarlets
Danny was standing at the gates letting everyone in the queue in a few at a time
Martin:Alright Danny?
Danny: Yeh thanks, in you go
Sonia: Cheers,
They went in
Danny:If you think your going in like that then you’ve got another thing coming
Danny just loved turing people away
Sam:It’ll be fine Zo’, don’t worry, oh great
Zoe: Oh great what?
Sam: Danny’s at the door
Zoe:I thought you two were
Sam: So did i…
Danny:Ladies
Sam: Danny
Danny:Hello gorgeous,
Sam: Danny don’t, just let us in
Danny: And why my dear should I do that
Zoe: Danny come on, I really need a good night out, just please let us in, you’ve got no reason not to
Danny: Oh yes I have
Sam:and …
Kacey Came round the corner
Kacey: Yey, I found it.
Danny:Why you had trouble locating us my dear
Kacey:You could say that, so you going to let me in then
Danny: Course, here you go
Danny opened the rope allowing Kacey through but none of the others
Kacey:Cheers babe, she kissed Danny on the Cheek
Danny:Its ok, just down there my love
Kacey: Cheers
Kacey disappeared sown the stairs
Sam:Oh let her in why don’t you, what is she old girlfriend?
Danny: No need to get jealous sam, shes an old mate, anyway theres only one lady in my life
He opened the rope
Sam:And who would that be?
Sounding a lot happier
Danny:My nana!
Sam:Thanks
Next part later
xxx
Fab as per usual :D
I liked Danny there :lol:
Post more soon
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di marco
03-05-2005, 21:05
brill! :D love danny, hes so funny! :) cant wait for the next part, hope its very soon
This is brilliant well you know what I think keeping posting babes I'm loving it
Fab once again babe. More
xxx
EastendersRox
04-05-2005, 17:56
So great! Plz post more soon!
Sorry its taken so long, been studing and trying to write this!
Sorry its short and it will get better Promise!
Thnkx for all your replies, they are dearly noted
For all of ya
Couz i love you so much :wub:
xxx
Jake: So you made it
Giving her a kiss on the cheek
Kacey:Yeh,
Jake:You look stunning
Kacey:Oh, thanks to a few good sources
Jake looked puzzled
Kacey:I borrowed it darlin
Jake:Oh right,
Johnny: so this the Lady jake?
Jake:Sorry Johnny
Johnny:the lady you were pondering over before
Kacey:Jake moon pondering over me, now that’ll be the day
Johnny: Hey, we meet before, out on the square, you were looking for Chrissie
Jake:Chrissie???
Kacey:Yeh, I found her thanks,oh and that reminds me Jake, she told me to say that she’s sorry for yesterday and she hopes you forgive her
Johnny: Oh so that’s the mystery woman
Jake:Johnny do you mind?
Johnny:No just go, wouldn’t want to keep the lady waiting,
Jake shot off
Kacey:So Jake is Laying my Sis, Nice
Johnny: I don’t think laying is the right term, and Chrissie is your sister?
Kacey:Yeh,
Johnny:I knew I recognised you from somewhere
Kacey: Yeh well we haven’t seen each other in a while, the only reason I came back was because….
She lifted up her left hand to reveal the Diamond
Johnny: oh well that’s nice, good taste?
Kacey:You could say that
Johnny: well I guess a congratulations is in order, a drink from the bar
Kacey:You’ve twisted my arm, I ‘ll have a gin and tonic
Johnny: I’ll go one better
He pulled out a bottle of Champagne
Tina: Johnny Allen
I love this script so much!
Please post more soon :D:D:D
I'm going off line now, so more tomorrow, for you all
Love ya
xxx
Johnny and Kacey both turned
Tina: We’ve just gone public and you’ve got another girl on the go
Johnny: Well what can I say, I’m a fast mover
Tina: Oh and Champagne, you must be special * directed to Kacey *
Tina and Johnny kissed
Johnny: Tina this is Kacey, she chrissies sister and an old mate of the brothers, Kacey this is Tina my girlfriend
Kacey:Well I’m honoured Tina
Tina: Yeh, I didn’t know Chrissie had a sister
Kacey: No one does, I guess she didn’t talk about me much then
Tina: Can’t say she did,
Kacey: Well I’ll be having words
Tina: Yeh, so anyway Champagne is for
Kacey: well Johnny here insisted that we celebrate my engangement
Tina: Congratualtions, Is he not celebrating with us?
Kacey:Thanks and no, he isn’t here, he’ll be coming tomorrow
Tina:Oh, well we’ll have to arrange a drink, I’d like to meet him
Kacey:Yeh course
Sam: Just stop worring no one knows, ok?
Zoe:Yeh yeh
Sam:Now come on I’ll buy you a drink
Zoe: Ok, look its that girl
Sam: What girl
Zoe: that one that knows Danny, seems like she knows Johnny to
Sam: Yeh, I cam’t say I’ve seen her round before
Zoe: No, me neither, maybe we should go and introduce ourselves
Sam:Yeh ok, and look Champagne
They walked over to the bar
Ps There is some serious JC loving in the next few parts!!!
Left you waiting noW!!!
Ps There is some serious JC loving in the next few parts!!!
Oooooooh :wub:
I can't wait :bow: !
I've just sat and read it all...it's brilliant, keep it coming :D
Hurry up and post more. Need JC loving.
xxx
More JC oh you are spoiling us as well as this wonderful script it's brill
EastendersRox
05-05-2005, 17:22
This is great, plz post more soon!
Thanks for all your Lovely replies,
Jc is coming after this part!
Sorry its short!
Dedi to all of ya, luv ya so much (specially my forever special friend x)
xxx
:wub:
Sam: Hey Johnny, Tina and
Kacey: Kacey, I pushed in front of you in the queue didn’t I?
Zoe:Yeh but its no worry, we got in didn’t we
Kacey: Yeh, sorry I didn’t catch your names
Sam: Oh, I ‘m sam and this is
Zoe: Zoe, nice to meet you
Kacey: the pleasure is all mine, look at me being rude, Johnny two extra glasses please, and I will pay!
Johnny: here are the glasses and no you won’t
Johnny poured six glasses of champagne
Kacey: Johnny, tina, sam, zoe and me, Johnny that is only five why have you poured six for?
Johnny looked at his watch: 5, 4, 3, 2 ,
Before he could finish, someone came rusinh into the club
Danny: so come lets get this party Sr=tarted!
Johnny:That is why, oi Danny
Danny: Hello, oh Champers, what we celebrating?
Kacey: My engangment, silly
Danny: Oh yer course
Sam: Well here is to Kacey
Zoe: Good Luck,
They all raised there glasses,
All: Cheers
Then danny downed his in one swig
Kacey: Nah you still ain’t changed
Like the countdown bit, trust down to know where there is champagne. Come on I want the JC loving, NOW! Come on!
xxx
Ok, i know you've all been waiting patiently, i think there may be more to come (JC LOving) but i don't no yet i ain't wrote it!
It ain't that good, but i know how we all like are Jc on this board!
So hope you enjoy and Luv ya all
xxx :wub:
Chrissie:Ok, thanks Mo, for tonight
Mo:It ok, I’ll see you tomorrow then
Chrissie: Yeh
Mo left and Chrissie Locked the door behind her
Chrissie turned around and noticed someone
Chrissie: Jesus Jake, give me a heart attack why don’t you
Jake: Sorry, Kacey told me that you said your sorry
Chrissie:Yeh I didn’t mean to shout,
With every word they took, they edged closer together,
Jake: Well I may forgive you
Chrissie: May?
Jake: Yes it all depends
Closer and closer
Chrissie: depends on what?
Jake: On this
They leaned in and kissed, it was no ordinary kjiss, it was a long, meaningful, full of life kiss,
After a while they broke apart
Chrissie: so
Jake: well what can I say
Chrissie turned round and walked over to the open door
Jake: Now I know I’m not that bad
Chrissie locked the door
She then walked over to the back entrance
Chrissie: I’m not saying you were
She gestured for jake to follow
He walked over to her
She kissed him again
Chrissie: so do you forgive me?
Jake: I’m still thinking
Chrissie: well I won’t be giving you this back then, she whipped out Jake’s wallet
Jake: oi,
Chrissie: you’ll have to catch me
She ran upstairs, they were both laughing and giggling
Jake grabbed her at the top of the stairs, they kissed passionately again
Jake pushed the bedroom door open
Chrissie:you still haven’t caught me
She ran into the bedroom, they kissed in a loving embrance
Chrissie started un-doing Jake’s buttons
Jake:You tease me
Chrissie: Well……
They kissed once again and fell onto the bed………
That was some very good JC lovin. Hope there will be more. absolutely top stuff, and it is good. More
xxx
:wub::wub::wub:
Wow! I need more JC lovin'!
Please post more 'cause this is so good!
I am going to read it again :D!
Luv ya,
Amber
~x~
:wub:
this is brilliant. is kacey's man someone we know. great to see the chrissie and jake loving. please post more soon.
EastendersRox
06-05-2005, 16:10
This is great.
this is brilliant. is kacey's man someone we know. great to see the chrissie and jake loving. please post more soon.
You'll find out soon enough!
Thanks for all your replies, i'll post more soon!
Luv ya
Layne
xxx
Please post more soon!
I can't wait any longer *Puts puppy dog eyes on!*
sorrt its taking so long, post more soon,
Luv ya all
Layne
x x x
Kacey:Look I’ve had a lot of fun tonight,thanks
They’d just come out of Scarlet’s,and started walking down Bridge Street,
Sam:its ok, we’ve had fun, haven’t we zo’?
Zoe: First time I’ve been out in ages
Kacey: How come
Zoe:Well the thi…..
Sam quickly butted in before Drunken zoe said anything she would regret
Sam: Zoe had a bit of relationship trouble, didn’t you
Zoe looked at sam, as sam egged her on
Zoe: Oh yer
Kacey: Well, you’ll find someone soon, I promise!Trust me!
Sam: Yeh, so Mystery Man coming tomorrow
Kacey: Yeh,I ‘m dead excited, we’ll all have to have a drink together
Zoe: Drink, deffinately
Sam:Yeh we’ll come, the Vic yeh
Kacey:Yeh, about 7-8ish tomorrow,
Sam:Yeh ok, well, I guess we’ll see you then,
Zoe:Yeh bye darlin’
Kacey:yeh, see you bye,
Sam and Zoe walked off through the square leaving Kacey stood outside the Vic.
She walked round the Back and into the cellar, trying to be as quiet as she could not wanting to wake Chrissie
All of a sudden, a familiar tune came into her head
Sha la la la la la la la la,
Kacey: Oh, my phone
She rumeged through her bag and found her phone
Was the that amarillo ringtone by any chance? Great again. Zoe is so going to say something eventually. can't wait to meet mystery man.
Was the that amarillo ringtone by any chance? Great again. Zoe is so going to say something eventually. can't wait to meet mystery man.
it was the amarillo ring tone, specially for Mordor, i know he loves it!
Ooooh I wonder who Kacey's mystery man is :hmm:
EastendersRox
07-05-2005, 07:46
Can't wait to find out more!
di marco
07-05-2005, 09:37
fab! :D just caught up. loving the script. wanna know who her mystery man is! :) more soon please, cant wait
Jake and Chrissie sitting in a tree :wub: K I S S I N G :wub: yay we love JC forever :love: your script is wonderful and I'm loving it your forever special friend :angel:
.:SpIcYsPy:.
07-05-2005, 22:27
This is for you rachel, because so far your the only one reading it! And because i luv ya!
That's so sweet!! Loving the script!!
.:SpIcYsPy:.
07-05-2005, 23:01
Wait!! There is no more? I want more. Please :( I read all 3 pages :) Sorry couldn't read earlier. Loving your scripts too joel beckett lover!!
EastendersRox
08-05-2005, 07:43
These scripts r grt!
Wait!! There is no more? I want more. Please :( I read all 3 pages :) Sorry couldn't read earlier. Loving your scripts too joel beckett lover!!
Thanks SpicySpy
Please Layne we all waiting pleaseeeeeee for me he he he
Really sorry its taken so long! It just makes you want more!!!
Wellhere is the next part,i'm writing as quick as i can!!
Mystery Man, well you'll just have to wait and see!! Hehe, i love being mean!
Dedi to all of you who have replied
Luv ya :wub:
and to Cheryl, who i meet at the BSa'a (she ain't on here but its the thought right!)
O and rachel! Luv ya girl!
Kacey: Hello?
Mystery Man: Hey Sexy, I didn’t wake you did I?
Kacey: No, no, I was just coming back actually
Kacey walked over to the New Concrete Floor and sat on a crate
MM: Coming back, does that mean you spoke to her
Kacey:yeh, Chrissie was very Surprised mind you
MM: Well you haven’t seen each other in about 5 years,
Kacey: Yeh, everyone is looking forward to meeting you!
MM:Everyone?
Kacey:yeh, I’ve met a few people, they don’t know who you are but I’ve invited them for a drink tomorrow so they can meet you
MM:Ok, everyone knows the?
Kacey:What that you and me are getting married, Yeh.
MM:I can’t wait!
Kacey: I know me neither,
Kacey heard someone upstairs
Kacey:Look I better go, don’t want to wake her highness
MM: Ok, well I love you
Kacey:I love you to, see you tomorrow, ring me when you get here
MM: I will
Kacey: And make sure you bring everything I packed
MM: I will, the removal lorry is coming in 2 days, is it alright if we stay with Chrissie till then?
Kacey: yeh,she said it would be fine
MM: ok, bye Love you
Kacey:Bye, love you to
The phone went dead
Kacey smiled to herself, then walked over the concrete and into the pub.
Kacey got to the top of the stairs and went into the spare bedroom, she whipped off the dress and shoved some Pj’s on that Chrissie was letting her borrow
She then went into the bathroom feeling really tired,she walked past the kitchen and saw someone in there, he resembled Jake, she went into the bathroom washed her hands and Face, the realised what she’d seen, she ran back to the kitchen
Kacey:Jake, Jake?
Nothing
Kacey: Just me and my mind seeing Things again
She went back into the bedroom, put her head on the pillow, and fell fast asleep
di marco
08-05-2005, 17:53
fab! :D i soooooooooooo wanna know who the mystery man is! :) post more very soon please, cant wait
.:SpIcYsPy:.
08-05-2005, 17:58
Well done! Once again!! Fab script. We want more, we want more!!
.:SpIcYsPy:.
08-05-2005, 18:04
:cheer:
excellent as ever. when are we getting more!
Like the bit with Jake just vanishing. Come on who is mystery man? More more more
xxx
EastendersRox
09-05-2005, 16:04
Who Is Her Mystery Man???????????
I am writing as i speak! Sorry to keep you waiting so long!
you'll find out who the mystery man is soon enough!
Sorry to Spicspy, i ain't done that thread yet! I've been so bust letely, i will do it i promise!
http://img177.echo.cx/img177/348/chrissieadjake9nd.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
And there is your banna spicspy, i hope its alright!Tell me if it ain't!
Please Can No one else use this, if you would like a banna, i'm sure i could make you one!
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
.:SpIcYsPy:.
09-05-2005, 17:07
Omg they look gorgeous!! Thank-you so much!! *cries*
.:SpIcYsPy:.
09-05-2005, 21:05
I want more of the script... :wub: thank-you so much for the banner :bow: how do I get it on using the image icon since I haven't got the program you said? :searchme:
Sorry its taken so long! I know i've kept you waiting!
Spicyspy i'll take you through it now on the shoutbox!
Hope ya all enjoy, some JC loving!
Luv ya
all :wub:
Layne
xxx
Jake’s eyes slowly adjusted to the light, he turned and looked at the clock, the red didgits were very bright, 8:57,
Jake: Right, Wakey Wakey sleeping Beauty,
He turned to find out Chrissie wasn’t there
He sat up, bolt right, he looked around,
Jake: So it wasn’t a dream, Chrissie?Chrissie you there?
He heard something in the kitchen
Jake: Aww, making me breakfast how sweet
He Jumped out of bed, pulled on his boxers and Went into the Kitchen, the fridge was open
Jake: Hello Gorgeous
Kacey emerged from inside the fridge
Kacey: Well Hel-lo, * looks down at his boxers *
Jake: Oops I thought you were chrissie
Kacey: Obviously, well sorry to disappoint
Jake: So where is she?
Kacey: how on earth am I supposed to know, I ain’t her minder
Jake: Okay, just asking
Kacey: You want a cup of tea?
Jake: If your offering
Kacey: I bet that ain’t what you said last night!
Jake: Oh haha, very funny
Kacey: Well, it comes naturally!
Jake sat down at the table
Kacey brought his tea over
Kacey: So you and my sis, you an item?
Jake: I don’t know, I’ve liked her for months, since I arrived, we’ve always been flirty
Kacey: And? But?
Jake: I don’t know,
Chrissie was standing at the doorway,
Chrissie: What is that Jake Moon?
Jake: Oh Noth….
Kacey: I asked him if you two were a couple
Chrissie: Oh right, and what did he say?
Kacey: I don’t know
Jake tried to but in, he knew Chrissie and he knew Kacey, he knew he wouldn’t get a word in edge ways, so he stopped trying
Chrissie: Oh right
Kacey: So?
Chrissie: So what?
Kacey: Well are you?
Chrissie walked over to jake and gave him the biggest snog ever
Chrissie eventually pulled out of it and walked over to the door
Chrissie: That answer your question, Jake you coming
Jake shrugged at Kacey and Followed Chrissie out of the kitchen
Kacey: I guess so
.:SpIcYsPy:.
09-05-2005, 22:01
Wow!! Fantastic Layne!! JC loving!! So I absolouty love it!! Keep it coming!!
:D:D:):D:D
Wooooooooooo! This is fab! Chrissie & Jake are finally together :wub:! Woooooooooo! I can't stop smiling!
di marco
10-05-2005, 08:08
brill! :D yay jake and chrissie together! :) hope theres more soon, cant wait
YEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!they are together. MORE MORE MORE!
xxx
EastendersRox
10-05-2005, 16:08
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HA HA I'm back this is amazin I'm loving Jake and Chrissie but who's her mystery man please tell us your forver special friend pleaseeeee
This bit is a bit rubbish, i'll post more later, sorry you have had to wait so long!!
Mysterry Man, well you might find out who he is tonight???
Luv ya
all
Layne
x x x
A;fie was rushing round the Kitchen
Alfie: My coat where is it
Danny: * Mumbling,* over there
Alfie Where what?
Danny: *mouth full of food * just there
Alfie: Okay, okay, keep your hair on grandma
Danny: Oh ha ha very funny
Alfie: Well I thought so, right I’m going, tell jake to sort Nana out with some Breakie ok?
Danny: I’ll do it
Alfie: No I said Jake for a reason, Danny, Last time you made toast you nealry set the house on fire
Danny: that was once and anyway Jake ain’t here
Alfie: What do you mean Jake ain’t here, he ain’t one for getting up early
Danny: He didn’t get up early, well he might of but I don’t know
Alfie: Danny your babbeling, Where is Jake?
Danny: Oh, urmm, anywhere
Alfie: What?
Danny: Well you see he lefty the club early after Kacey said something
Alfie: so he could be anywhere
Danny: yep, * putting more food into his mouth and Picking up the newspaper * But my guess is the Vic
Alfie: The Vic, this time in the mor…
Danny: No, not in the Vic, God alife, Upstairs in the Vic
Alfie still looked puzzled
Danny: In the bedroom
Alfie was not following
Danny: With Chrissie, god do I have to explain everything round here
Alfie: Oh, hang on Chrissie?
Danny: Chrissie
Alfie: Chrissie, Chrissie, Chrissie
Danny: Well do you know anymore Chrissie’s, yes Chrissie Chrissie
Alfie: I didn’t know those two where together
Danny: They ain’t, but I know Jake has liked her for ages
Alfie: Yeh I knew that to, but Den only just left
Danny: Well, I know Den was getting a bit jealous because jake was always flirting with her but
Alfie: What a naughty Boy, ok well I’ll go out and do the stall, you can pop to the caf, and get Nana Some breakfast
Danny: But I ain’t ready yet, I have to wash my hair
Alfie: oh danny, I’m sure you spend more time on your hair then a hairdresser does on there clients, just go and get nana some breakfast
With that Alfie grabbed his float and walked out the house
brill brill brill. please tell us soon who the mystery man is. :thumbsup:
Come on who is the mystery man? This is fab. Loved Alfie trying to figure out who Chrissie was. More more more
xxx
Post more soon or ELSE I love this script more JC and I want to know who the mystery man is pleaseeeeee forever special friend MEEEEEEE
EastendersRox
13-05-2005, 15:59
Lovin' JC lovin'
Thanks for all your replies, Luv ya all to pieces!!
Mystery man will be revealed soon, but i like keeping you all in suspense!
More JC Loving!!!
Jake just finished getting changed when Chrissie walked in
Jake:Little Mo okay?
Chrissie:Yeh, I opened up for her, but she said she’d be fine, what are you doing?
Jake: Getting Changed what does it look like
Chrissie: why, can’t you stay?
Chrissie walked over to Jake and started Kissing him
Jake: No, I’ve got to go to work
Chrissie: Can’t you pull a sicky, please for me
Jake: I really can’t
Chrissie got in a sulk,and stopped kissing Jake
Jake: Chrissie, don’t go like that on me, you know what Johnny is like
Chrissie: yeh I know, I just want you all to myself
Jake:Well if you want me all to yourself as much as I want you, well then I might just have to pull a sicky
They stared Kissing again
Chrissie: No, you go, don’t want you losing your job do we?
Jake: I guess not, well bye then
Chrissie Bye
She kissed him
Jake left
Zoe: Ow, my head
She walked into the kitchen
Stacey: Had a bit to much to drink ey zoe?
Zoe: yeh, can you please be a bit quieter, where is nan?
Charlie: Out on your stall
Zoe: oops,
Charlie: yeh you better thank her when she gets in, the only reason she done it was because you needed a good night out
Stacey: What and I don’t?
Zoe: Stacey Don’t shout
Charlie: Zoe has been through a lot stac’, drink this zoe
Charlie handed zoe a glass with a brownish coloured liquid in it
Zoe:What is it?
Stacey: Betty;s got the runs
Charlie:Stacey
Zoe:Ewww
Charlie:It ain’t zo’ drink it and you feel better
Stacey was making a cup of tea, stirring the milk in
Zoe:For Gods sake stop making so much noise
Stacey: I ain’t making any noise
Zoe: dad
Charlie: Look Stac, just go out yeh?
Stacey: Go out where?
Charlie: Anywhere, just leave zoe be, and anyway I’ve go to do some house work before Kat comes home, and that’s in about 2 hours
Stacey: yeh, whatever, well make sure you polish Princess zoes Crown while your at it!
Satcey stormed off, slamming the door loudly
Zoe: Owwwww!
That bit was a bit pointless but hey????
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
it wasn't pointless. like stacey making so much noise. loved chrissie and jake before aswell. more
xxx
di marco
14-05-2005, 08:42
great! :D just caught up. loved staceys comment about princess zoe! :) cant wait for ther next part, hope its very very soon
This is brill loving Jake and Chrissie post some more very soon love ya loads babes
EastendersRox
15-05-2005, 07:11
This brill, plz post more soon!
EastendersRox
15-05-2005, 07:11
This brill, plz post more soon!
.:SpIcYsPy:.
15-05-2005, 10:28
More!!!
Just going out, post more later, Luv ya all
Thanks so much for repling!
Luv ya
:wub:
Layne
x x x
Ps Spicy Love the sig! LOL!
EastendersRox
15-05-2005, 11:41
Come on, more!!!!!!!!!!!!
.:SpIcYsPy:.
15-05-2005, 17:25
Just going out, post more later, Luv ya all
Thanks so much for repling!
Luv ya
:wub:
Layne
x x x
Ps Spicy Love the sig! LOL!
Lol!! I really like it so much!! Thank-you sooooo much!! Di marco said I could help you two kidnap Joel.. is that ok with you :p Nearly there now!! Keep on writing more!! Thank-you once again!!
Its coming Promise!Course you can help kidnap Joel more the merrier!! But you have to share but you can have joel 1st, i'm having Nigel 1st and di marco is having marcus 1st!
Here is the Next part, sorry its taken so long!
I'll write more tomorrow and post it later on tomorrow
You'll find out who the Mystery man is, lastest will be Wednesday!
Sorry to keep ypou in suspense but it add to the story, i think you all may have a bit of a suprise when you find out who he is!
Dedi to all of you who have replied
Luv ya all Loads :wub:
And you forever Special Friend!! :wub:
Sisterly Bonding coming up:
Chrissie walked in to the bathroom Kacey was standing in front of the mirror
Chrissie: So what are you planning to do with yourself today
Chrissie picked up her toothbrush and started cleaning her teeth
Kacey:Well after I’ve finished doing my hair, I’m going to go into town, then hopefully by the time I get back
Chrissie: youf maf willfh bef ahere
Kacey: what
Chrissie spat out the toothpaste
Chrissie: I said you man will be here
Kacey;Yeh, oh Chrissie you’ll love him, I know you will
Chrissie:Umm
Kacey:But not as much as you Love Jake
Chrissie: I do not Lo.
Kacey: You do, well what was all last night about then
Chrissie: you shouldn’t of been listening
Kacey: It was hard not to
Chrissie hit Kacey playfully
Kacey:You like him don’t you
Chrissie: Who, oh jake yeh, I really do, you know Kacey I think I do Love him
Kacey: But you said
Chrissie: Yeh I know what I said but, no ones made me feel like this since, well a very long time
Kacey: Well Jake is obviously crazy about you, so why don’t you go for it
Chrissie:Go for what
Kacey: You know make a go of it, become couple, move in, marry, have kids
Chrissie: Hold your horses, I don’t think I’m ready for all that just yet, but the couple thing, people will talk
Kacey: And, since when has that stopped you, Chrissie you’ve never gieven a monkey’s about what people think of you before
Chrissie:Yeh I know but this is diff….
Kacey:its not though, you love him and he loves you what else is there to say
Chrissie:Ok
Kacey:Ok what?
Chrissie: I’ll do it, I’ll make it offical with jake, by this afternoon, we’ll be a couple
Kacey: Awww, I’m happy for you
Kacey gave Chrissie a quick hug,
Chrissie:That reminds me, do you mind helping me out downstairs for a bit
Kacey:What like behind the bar
Chrissie:yeh, well its not like you’ve never done it before
Kacey:yer course, yeh ok, I’ll just go get changed
Chrissie:Why?
Kacey:I can’t serve punters in this, unlike you Chrissie I do care what people think
Chrissie: oh haha very funny
Kacey ran into the bedroom to get changed
Chrissie:I’ll be downstairs
Kacey: ok!
xx xx xx
Aww this is so good! Chrissie and Jake are a couple :wub:! Shame it's not actually on EE *Sighs*.
Loving Kacey's character :thumbsup:
Post more ASAP
this is brill babes can't wait to see who her man ia and JC as a couple whoppeee FABAROONIE babes your special friend forever
Its coming Promise!Course you can help kidnap Joel more the merrier!! But you have to share but you can have joel 1st, i'm having Nigel 1st and di marco is having marcus 1st!
Can I help :wub: ?
I am in a bit of a kidnapping mood :angel:
Especially a Joel and Nigel one :love:
Amber
~x~
di marco
15-05-2005, 20:53
brill! :D awwwwwwww chrissies in love with jake, jake and chrissie forever lol! :) more soon please, cant wait
EastendersRox
16-05-2005, 16:21
More a.s.a.p.
More more more. This is fab. Jake and chrissie official, that's, good. Listen ee writers. More more more
xxx
P.s can I help with the kidnapping, they are all wonderiful
di marco
16-05-2005, 20:29
P.s can I help with the kidnapping, they are all wonderiful
course! but you have to follow the very very important rules, well the only rule anyway, and that is that you have to share them!!! lol!
oh can i come a kidnapping I think they are all brill specailly Joel- as you can tell by my name and NIGEL please come back we love him yummmeeee
EastendersRox
17-05-2005, 16:18
That is a bit off-topic. Never mind.
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
.:SpIcYsPy:.
17-05-2005, 16:21
Im having Joel 1st!!
di marco
17-05-2005, 20:42
oh can i come a kidnapping I think they are all brill specailly Joel- as you can tell by my name and NIGEL please come back we love him yummmeeee
course you can, but we all have to share! :)
Layne can we have more of your brill script pleaseeeeeeee
EastendersRox
21-05-2005, 07:34
Yeah, MORE!
Sorry i havent been posting, been major busy, i will get up to date, and post more later and tomorrow, sorry again
Thanks to all of you though for reading and repling,
Slight delay on the Unveilng of Mystery man, but you will find out soon enough!
Thanks Again and Sorry
luv ya
:wub:
Layne
x x x
Danny:Look Johnny, I don’t know where he is, If I did I would tell you
Johnny: I know you better than that Danny, you wouldn’t tell me, now where is Ja…..
Johnny was interrupted by Jake coming down the stairs
Johnny: Ears buring?
Jake:Huh?
Danny: Johnny was just asking where you were, I mean you ain’t usually late for work unless someone is involved maybe?
Jake knew that Danny knew that he was with chrissie, but he tired to ignore the unsuttle hints
Jake:I don’t know what you mean?
Danny: you were with her weren’t you?
Jake:no, I wan’t I was having a shower
Johnny: yeh, but danny said you weren’t at home
Jake:yeh I was urm, at Billy’s, are Hot water ran out
Danny:No it didn’t
Jake: Dann…
Johhny:Jake look, I don’t mind you being late,I just hope she is worth it
Jake: yeh, she is
Danny:Ha, I knew it, you were with Chrissie weren’t you
Jake: Danny, just shut-up
Johnny: well whoever she is, like I said before I hope she is worth it, I mean you would come into work and lie to your boss just to cover up a petty little fling
Jake:it isn’t a petty little thing though, well I hope not
Johnny: She has been through the wars Jake, well with Den and everything, just make sure you treat her right, she deserves good, and I think you could be it
Jake:yeh, maybe
Johnny:Right, anyway lets get back to work
Danny started walked up the stairs, exiting Scarlet
Johnny:Oi, where do you think your going?
Danny: you just said, I don’t mind you being late,
Johnny: yeh, and?
Danny:Well, I’m not going to be late, I’m just having an extended break
Johnny:Why?
Danny:So I can go and see Sam
Johnnt:I don’t think so
Danny:But you just said to jake..
Johnny: I know, but that was to Jake and Not you, and I know hes seripous about Chris, whoever it is
Danny:But I’m serious too
Johnny:You serious, he laughs
Danny:hey?
Jake: danny, the day your serious, truly serious about a girl, well pigs will fly
Danny: Fine if you want to be like that,
Danny walked back down the staids and into the back
Johnny:Pigs will fly, that’ll be the day
Johnny and Jake laughed together
awwwww poor Danny and Jake and Chrissie YAY Can't wait for da next part I wnat to know who da mystery man is LOVE YA forever special friend yay
di marco
22-05-2005, 16:31
fab! :D awwwwwwww poor danny! :) more very soon please, cant wait
Fab. Jc Yeah! Poor danny, but danny serious. HA! more more more
xxx
EastendersRox
23-05-2005, 16:17
Poor Danny, but ha ha!
.:SpIcYsPy:.
23-05-2005, 21:27
Poor Dan... nice Jake!! :p
Hello everyone, thanks for all your replies, i know i ain't posted in a while, i'll start catching up and post more soon, sorry its taken so long, i'll type as fast as i can
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
Chrissie: Honestly Mo, I don’t mind
Little Mo: Are you sure Chrissie?
Chrissie:No I don’t mind, look I no its important Kat coming back, so miss just go yeh
Mo: Well, ok, but tracy is ill, so who is going to cover for me?
At that moment Kacey came rushing into the bar,
Chrissie:her
Mo:Her, isn’t that the bank Manager?
Kacey: Well, <she looked at Chrissie> Sorry I had to say something to get up there
Chrissie:Its ok, but lying never gets you anywhere
Kacey:yeh sorry
Mo:hang on, whats going on?
Kacey:Oh right yeh sorry, I ain’t the bank manager I’m Kacey nice to meet you
She held out her hand and shook it with little Mo
Little Mo: Right ok, look Chrissie I’m sorry I let a stranger up into well upstais
Chrissie:Mo, its ok, she ain’t a stranger she is my younger sister
Little Mo:Oh right, oh my god, yeh I can see the resemblance now!
Kacey:Well, but I’m a lot prettier
Chrissie: Oi you, look Mo, are you going to stand round here being nice or are you going to go home and Welcome Kat back
Little Mo:Oh right yeh, see you later, we’ll be coming in for like a welcome home drink, and You can meet Kat ey Kacey
Kacey:yeh, ok
Little mo: Bye, she ran out the Vic
Kacey <to Chrissie quietly> Whos Kat
Chrissie:Local Tart, nice but urmmmm
Kacey: Loud, flirty, thinks she is
Chrissie:Yeh you got it!
Kacey:So we gonna stand here chatting all day or are we gonna serve some pints
Chrissie:That would be an idea, you sure your ok with everything?
Kacey: Look darlin, I have worked in plenty of Bars and clubs before I’ll be fine,
Chrissie: ok off you go
Kacey:thanks, so love what can I get you?
Jim:I’ll have a pint and a tomato jusice for the lady please?
Kacey:Coming right up
Kacey went to go and get the drinks,
Dot: I wonder who she is can’t say I’ve seen her round here before, and knowing Chrissie well she wonuldn’t giove just anyone a job would she
Chrissie:no your right Dot I wouldn’t, this is my sister
Dot: ooh I say
Kacey: How many more people are going to ask who I am
Chrissie: Kace. This is walford everyone knows everyones business so probably |Everyone
Kacey: Oh ok, that’ll be £3.75 please
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
Fab! Post more soon because I wanna know who on earth the mystery man is!
:D
Come on, who is that mystery man? Fab as per usual. more more more
xxx
di marco
25-05-2005, 12:24
great! :D but we really need to know who the mystery man is! :) post more very soon please, cant wait
Brilliant as per usual but mystery man WHO IS HE pleaseeeeeee special friend plea here
EastendersRox
25-05-2005, 16:13
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
more more mroe please!!!!!!!!!
want 2 know who the mystery man is!!
.:SpIcYsPy:.
26-05-2005, 16:56
Nice!!
Please post more babes :)
pretty pretty pretty pleaseeeee with a huge cherry on the top
Layne you have to post more of this. Its great
xxx
My next part is here! :cheer:
Sorry its taken so long, i've been really busy and also go to write more and something else come sup, but i promise this will get back on track and i will be posting more more reguarly!
Sorry again,
Hope you like, Thanks Rachel, for helping me out, i've changed it slightly though!!
Zoe:Look I don’t care, I’m going out onto the stall, to keep me busy
Big Mo: But what about kat?
Zoe: She won’t be here for ages, and anyway I need to go
Big mo: But
Before she could finish her sentence Zoe had gone
Big Mo: Might as well talk to a brick wall me
Kacey: Chrissie were you serious before?
Chrissie: About what? Theres your chance darlin’
Kacey: You no, Coming clean
Chrissie: Coming clean, about what?
Chrisie’s blod ran cold, how did Kacey know, She hadn’t said anything
Kacey: Jake
Chrissie: Shhhhh, Jake?
Still a bit confused
Kacey: The whole couple thing
A few punters looked in Chrissie’s direction
Chrissie: Kacey
Chrissie pulled Kacey into the back
Kacey:What?
Chrissie: People will hear you
Kacey: And isn’t that what you wanted?
Chrissie; yeh, no, I don’t know
Kacey:Make ya mind up
Chrissie:Yeh, but not like that
Kacey:then how?
Chrissie: Like well, don’t laugh, but like together, in here, in front of everyone, for him to just kiss me and well you know
Kacey Giggled
Chrissie:Hey, I said don’t laugh!
Kacey:I ain’t, well why don’t you make it happen
Chrissie: How?
Kacey:There is the phone ring him and tell him to come over
Chrissie: No, I can’t
Kacey:Why you just told me that is what you wanted
Chrissie: I know but…
Kacey: No buts, do it chrissie!
Kacey walked back out towards the bar, and started serving punters
Chrissie stared at the phone, Kacey looked back towards her and nodded, chrissie smiled and nodded back, she lifted up the phone and tapped in the number for the club, it started ringing,
Jake: Hello, Scarl…
Chrissie slammed down the phone, she couldn’t do it
Jake:ets, Hello, hello,
He put the phone down
Johnny: who was that ?
Jake: Don’t know, must have been a wrong number or something
Johnny: Must of
Kacey: you phoned him then?
Chrissie: yeh, yeh I did
Mystery Man will be reavealed soon!!!
xxx
di marco
12-06-2005, 15:01
brill! :D so glad its back! chrissie what you scared of just phone jake! :) more very soon please, cant wait
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Chrissie, phone back NOW! Fab again, post more soon
Chrissie Watts pick up that phone press re-dial right now worth the wait babes I'm loving it and your welcome hope Chrissie gets her wish soon though mystery man soon yippee
Chrissie press re-dial right now. So great to see this started again. more when you can
xxx
YEAH! REDIAL!
people, check out my DOCTOR WHO script, it's called doctor who
awww chrissie you should have told him!!! :wub:
more soon pelase!!! :thumbsup:
Hello guys!!
Glad ya liking it!!
The last part for tonight i think, post more tomorrow though (mystery man will be tomorrow!)
Luv ya all
Layne
x x x
Jake: Johnny, do you mind if I leave a bit early tonight?
Johnny: Well usually Jake I’d say yeh, but I have to pick Ruby up from St Agathas shes all finished up there now and I told her
Jake: Oh ok, doesn’t matter
Johnny: Can I ask why jake?
Jake: Well, I promised Danny a Pint
Johnny: More like you want to go and see that woman of yours
Jake: You know me to well Johnny
Johnny: No, I just can tell when someone is in Love
Jake:Love
Johnny: yes, Jake Love
Jake: But I’m not in Love, I mean Love is a strong word and to be in love you have to I don’t know, like you get this like kind of tingely feeling inside of you when your with the person and
Johnny: What and you don’t
Jake: You have to, sorry what Johnny
Johnny: Your telling me you don’t get a tingely feeling in the bottom of your stomach evry time you look at Chrissie
Jake: No, I mean yeh I do, every time I stare at her,her soft flowing hair, her big sexy smile, her curvacious body,
Johnny: Jake, your in Love
Jake looked up at Johnny, just coming to terms with it
Johnny: Look go would ya
Jake: Go,what, sorry?
Johnny: Go and get that gorl of yours
Jake: But what about Ruby?
Johnny: I can still go, I’ll get Billy, Jack, Louie and Danny in
Jake: danny?
Johnny: Yeh danny, that is how much I want you to go,
Jake: Ok thanks Johnny
Johnny: Its ok,
Jake nodded and walked out of the office
Chrissie:Kacey, you’ll be alright for a minute won’t you
Kacey:yeh why where are you going?
Chrissie:Upstairs
Kacey: Oh I see to get ready for the anoucement
Chrissie: yeh, that!
Chrisie walked into the back, she stared at the phone, come one she thought, you have to do this
She walked over the phone and picked it up, she again tapped in the numbers of the club, come on chrissie you can do this,
>>>>Beep beep beep You phone number you have called is busy please try again later beep beep beep>>>>
Chrissie out down the phone,
Kacey looked out the back, Chrissie what are you doing?
Chrissie: Nothing, I’m going upstairs now ok?
Kacey: yer yer, sorry love what can I get ya?
Chrissie made her way upstairs the whole time staring at the phone
xxx :wub:
di marco
12-06-2005, 20:35
brill! :D hurry up and get to the vic jake! :) more very soon please, cant wait
(cant wait to find out who the mystery man is either)
Get your ass over there Jake Moon and get your girl this is fab I love it please post more as soon as you can I wnat to know who her mystery man is he he
As JBL said Get over there right now Jake Moon or I will come hit you! Cant wait to finally meet MM. more it is great.
xxx
EastendersRox
13-06-2005, 16:16
Just spit it out!
Oi Jake! RUN TO THE VIC NOWWWWWWW!
I wanna know who the MM is, so please post more!
Next part guys, thanks for all you Wubly repiles
Luv ya all!!!
Sorry its dragging on a bit, but it will get better! Promise!!
Here you go
Layne
x x x
:wub:
Zoe: They are love, hope ya husband likes it
Alfie: But is she not coming then
Zoe:Oh she I scoming
Alfie: you don’t seem t happy about that zo’?
Zoe: Neither do you
Alfie: I guess, but she is your mother
Zoe: And she was your wife
Alfie: Ok, point taken
Zoe: She just left though, just got up and went,
Alfie: Tell me about it
Zoe:If she hadn’t of left then, none of this would of happened
Alfie: Zoe, don’t,
Zoe: Don’t what?
Alfie: Well it would of still happened, wouldn’t it
Zoe: yeh, but she could of helped me, I could of talked to her
Alfie: Come on zoe, don’t get upset
Alfie gave her a hug
Zoe: Thanks Alfie
Alfie: That’s ok,
Zoe: But Kat is not just coming back thinking that everything is the same, its not!
Alfie: I know
Alfie saw Little Mo out the corner of his eye
Alfie: Not the same at all
Chrissie pulled back the net curtains and looked outside, she saw Zoe on her stall, she was chatting with Alfie, she seemed to be getting on alright, considering,
A single tear ran down Chrissie’s soft, golden Cheek, that was the reason she was scared, scared to admit, scared to tell Jake she liked him, she loved him, it was easier before, just flirting, nothing harmaful with that, but that was before, before everything happened, now she was scared. Jake isn’t like that though, he wouldn’t do all that, she knew that, but it was like he was still here, still watching over her, that’s why she couldn’t admit to Jake that she Loved him, she Loved Den too, look how that ended up,
Chrissie:Why am I so scared,
She turned and walked over to the cabinet and pulled out a photo of her and Den, together
Chrissie: Why did I have to love you,why did you string me along
Another tear rolled doen her cheek
She placed the photo back into the cabinet
She walked back over to the window
Chrissie: I love you, I love you Jake Moon
She wiped her eyes, and out the corner of them she saw a familiar man alking accrosst he square towards the pub, it was him
She walked over to the mirror and shakily re-did her Lippy
She then walked out of the room, but before leaving she stopped inb front of the familiar cabinet
Chrissie: Your not going to ruin my Life any more Den watts, I ain’t scared no more,
She turned the photo around as to not show the faces
She took in one deepo breath and made her way downstairs
oh my god this is brilliant tell Jake please let her tell Jake me want to know who da mystery man is love it babes
She had better tell Jake. We need to know who the mystery man is. brill. more soon.
xxx
EastendersRox
14-06-2005, 16:10
Tell him, Chrissie!
Here ya are, post more tomorrow!!!
xxx
JC LOVING!!!!!!!
Alfie: You alright Jake?
Alfie walked over to his cousin
Jake: yeh,
He looked up at the upstairs window of the vic
Jake: yeh, just super
Alfie: Oh, you going in for a pint
Jake: Yeh, want to buy me one?
Alfie: No, but you can buy me one, come on
Alfie Pushed Jake into the Vic
Chrissie stopped and checked herself in the mirror
Chrissie: Perfect
She pushed a stray curl from her face back in to her hair, and walked out into the pub
Jake: Pint please Kacey babe, and alfie?
Alfie: urmm yeh I’ll have a pint to please
Kacey: Two pints coming up
Alfie: Hang on we’ve met ain’t we, out on the square
Kacey:yeh, yeh we have, Alfie weren’t It?
Alfie: yeh well Jake here just reminded you
Kacey: Yeh I guess he did, good old jake
Jake: And what is that supposed to mean
Kacey: Nothing
Alfie:hang on am I missing something?
Jake: No not really, but I know Kacey is missing a brain!
Kacey: Oh and your funny
She handed them over there drinks, jake went to give her a fiver
Kacey: Its ok, there on me!
Jake: thanks
Kacey: That’s ok
She went off to serve more customers
Alfie: So how do you know each other
Jake: well…….
Chrissie banged into Kacey as she was just coming out into the bar area
Chrissie: Sorry darlin,
Kacye: Its ok,
Chrissie went to serve someone
Kacey: chris…
Chrissie: yeh
Kacey: He’s over there
Kacey Pointed towards where Jake was sitting
Chrissie: Thanks
She started to walk over towards Jake
Come on, come on, you can do this, you love him, you do you love him
She looked at Jake, he looked at her, they had something
Chrissie walked round to the other side of the bar, to the side where Jake was,
Kacey had stopped serving,she wanted to see,to watch what was going to happen, causing punters to stop and stare, It was busy in the Vic, so not just a few peole but a lot of people, passers-by regualars, everyone was now staring
Chrissie got to jake, he turned round and faced her
She ran hers hands over his shoulders,
Chrissie:jake
Jake placed his hand on chrissie hips
Jake: Chrissie
Chrissie put her finger onto Jakes Lips: Shhhh
She leaned in and Kissed him,
Jake kissed her back,
Not just a peck though, a very passionate kiss, one you don’t see that often, one that is only when people really truly connect
Gasps came from all over the pub, pople started shouting things, about Chrissie, about Jake, about Den
Chrissie puled away from the kiss
Chrissie: Jake, I love you
Jake: Chrissie, I love you to,
yay!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
more more more soon please!!! :bow:
awwwwwwwwwwwwww me so happy this is brill JC forever babes hey but where is the mystery man we NEED to meet him post more please for me pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee I love it
Yeah, Jc finally together (who cares about Den????????) This is really good, but who is mm? You have to tell us. this is absolutly brill more. soon
xxx
WOW! They're together and they both said they loved each other!!!!
Post more babe!
This mystery man better be worth his soap weight in gold you've kept me waiting FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!
Too true Layne pleaseeeeeee I'll be really good
Layne please post, we need to know who the mystery man is.
xxx
Sorry its taken so logn, and its only short! post more on Sunday!
Luv ya all
layne
x x x
Rachel you have to be good now!! hehe
Kacey: Tracy, you sure you’ll be fine
Tracy: yeh, go on go
Kacey: I want to, its just you’re here on your own, her ladyship is upstairs with her new play boy and your are down here working the pumps,
Tracy: I don’t mind honest
Kacey: Ok, well you’re a life saver, I have to go meet my fiancé and he won’t be pleased if I’m late, I ain’t even supposed to be here
Tracy: well all the more reason to go then
Kacey: Good point, ok I’ll see you later,
Kacey ran upsairs to get her coat,
She ran into her room
Grabbed her coat and handbag, quickly checkedher hair and make-up and walked back out of her room, she walked past chrissie’s room and knocked on the door
Kacey: I’m going see ya later Chrissie
She walked out
Chrissie pulled away from jake,
Chrissie: By –hi, jake stop it, * giggling*
Jake: oh I see so your ticklish!
Jake carried on kissing and tickling chrissie, they fell onto the bed
Chrissie:why Mr moon, I never knew
Jake: Never knew what?
Chrissie: you were so naughty
They kissed once again
Kacey saw Zoe on the market, she looked at her watch, she could spare five minutes
Kacey:Zoe’
Zoe turned: oh hey Kacey, You ok
Kacey: yeh thanks, you
Zoe: Yeh, Kats going to be here in about ½ and hour
Kacey: You worried?
Zoe: Kind of, anyway where you off to you look like your in a rush?
Kacey:yeh, off to get the fiancé, and yeh actually better go, you’ll come for a drink later though, to meet him and everything?
Zoe: yeh course
Kacey: And kat can come to
Zoe: Cool ok, I’ll see ya later!
Kacey: ok, bye
Kacey walked off towards the tube station to meet her Fiance
Fab JC loving :wub: yay! Who is the MM? TELL ME!
AAAAAAhhhhhhhh. Still no Mystery man. This si brill though. Liking Jake and Chrissie. More on sunday plz.
xxx
I will be good I promise he he This is brill as per but still no mystery man it's driving me insane loving the JC awwww bless post more as soon as poss me want to know who MM is
EastendersRox
18-06-2005, 07:20
Lovin' JC!
di marco
19-06-2005, 12:38
fabbi! :D just caught up. so glad jake and chrissie said they love each other! but i wanna know who the mystery man is! :) more very soon please, cant wait
Sorry its taken so long (again) i have wrote a few parts in advance now so hopefully we willbe ok,
This part is only short i'll either post another bit tonight or tomorrow (morning hopefully)
Enjoy!!
Jc luving!
Chrissie: Why do you have to go?
Jake:I have to work,
Chrissie:Screw work
Jake: Actually I’d rather screw you, but
Chrissie: hey!
Jake: I’ll come over tonight if you like, buy you a drink
Chrissie: oh yes please I mean I ain’t been for a drink in ages, I mean its not like I live in a pub or anything
Jake: Ok ok, no need to be so sarcastic it was just a thought
Chrissie: Ok well I’m sorry, it was a nice thought!
Jake: I have loads!
Chrissie kissed him, Why do you think I like you!
Jake:Like?
Chrissie:OK love!
They kissed again!
Chrissie: Oh yer actually do come over you can meet Kacey’s fiancé
Jake: Yeh ok, what is his name?
Chrisise: Got no idea, I don’t know anything about him
Jake: All a big mystery hey
Chrissie:you could say that
Kacey: Babes its me, I’ve been waiting for ages, I was even here early so I could meet you, where are you, ring me back when you get this message, love you
She put down the phone
An oldish man walked over to Kacey
Man: hello love, are you alright, do you need some help, a ticket?
Kacey: No thanks, urm I’m waiting for someone actually,
Man: Ok, well the tubes are running a little late, I’m sure he’ll be here soon
Kacey: yeh hopefully
BTW you'll find out within the next few parts who he is!! hehe, i like keepiong it a secret it makes you all want more!! LOL!
squillyfer
19-06-2005, 21:03
but i cant wait a few parts i need to know now( stamps foot) LOL
di marco
19-06-2005, 21:11
great! :D layne youve kept us in suspense for way too long, i need to know who the mystery man is! :) more very soon please, cant wait
I'm huffing and puffing please we neeeeeeeeeeed to know who MM is I've got all kinds going through my head last night I even convinced myself it could be Grant Mitchell I need serious help so to stop me and everyone else going mad you have to post moreeeee please
This is brill I love the Jakssie (I have to get use to writing that) bits awwwww
Sorry i wasn't meant to drag the secret on this long, but i added loads of extra bits in (like the jakissie bits) I'll post more tonight, you'll find out then
Don't worry honey it ain't Grant!!!! I can promise ya that!!!
Thanks for all you lovely replies though :wub:
Layne
x x x
A Bus stopped just outside the Vic
woman:Thanks mate, yeh just here, cheers
She got off the bus,
Black Pointy shoes, Back Mini skirt, Leapord spot, tight plunge Top,
Hair a vibrant red, she hadn’t changed,
Suddenly she saw her, out the corner off her eye, the one thing she had missed, the one thing she really wanted to come back for,
Zoe finished serving a customer, when a familiar face walked over
Kat: hello babes, how are you?
Zoe turned and looked in disappointment to her mother,
Kat: Hello zo’, its me your mum
Zoe: I ain’t completely stupid you know, I do know who you are
Kat: Come on then give your mum a hug
Zoe stood there silently,
Kat: Ok then, well hows about we go back home and catch up ey?
Zoe: I have to do the stall
Kat: Yeh but I’m here you can leave that and come home?
Zoe: I can’t just leave the stall because your ‘ere
She turned back to the clothers and started packing a few into a box
Kat: Ok then, well hows about I help
Zoe : NO
Kat: Ok, I’ll see you at home in a bit then
Zoe carried on packin,Kat turned and started walking home,
Something was up and she was going to find out what
Kacey looked at her watch again, it had nearly been an hour
The ticket man came over again
Kacey:What were you saying about him being here soon
Ticket man: Still no sign,
Kacey: No, the tubes back to normal now
Ticket man: yeh, they are on time now
Kacey: Oh ok, thanks
Suddenly a car horn beeped, making Kacey and the ticket man jump
Man in car: ey ey sexy lady
Kacey turned round suddenly, it was him, in a silver sports car
Kacey: Oh babes you made it,What took you so long?
M Man: Well, your new prezzie, he beeped the car horn again
Kacey: What that is mine
M Man: yep, all yours, he got out the car and started walking over to Kacey
Kacey ran over and hugged him tightly,
Kacey:I love you
M Man: I love you too
They kissed passionately
M Man: Come on then, lets go see this sister of yours
He led Kacey back to the car
Kacey: Hang on
She ran back over to the ticket man, she kissed him on the cheek
Kacey:thanks,
Ticket mam: For what?
Kacey:Just for waiting with me!
She ran back over to the car and her fiancé
Kacey:Come on then lets go!
They sped off towards the Queen vic
di marco
20-06-2005, 08:04
fabbi! :D cant wait to find out who the mystery man is, damn it ill be wondering all day at school while im trying to do my exam! :) more very soon please, cant wait
Fab, woner who the mystery man is. someone with quite a bit of money. more tonight please.
xxx
Thank god it aint Grant he he this is brill babes I love it can't wait to find out his identity more very soon
Who is he? I want to know! Fab! Post more soon!
Here you are, yes i've put you all out of your misery, you find out who he is, but read it all not just the end, the suspese!!!
I still aint' finished the script though, you;ve just found out who he is
post more tomorrow
Lu vya
layne
x x x
Thanks for all your replies :wub:
Kat: Yeh I know,Thanks dad, anyway what is wrong with zoe?
Charlie: Oh you don’t know do ya?
Kat: Know what
Big Mo: Well dennis left her didn’t he
Kat: Oh well plenty more fish in the sea and all that, I told her he weren’t worth it but she didn’t……….
Kat suddenly stopped she saw the faces on her dad and nan and wondered whatshe’d said
Kat: what its true he ain’t worth it
Charlie:It ain’t that
Kat : then what is it?
Big Mo: well zoe fell pregnant with dennis of course then he left herm then she lost the baby
Kat: What zoe pregnant?
Mo nodded
Kat: Dennis left her
Mo nodded again
Kat: She lost it
Mo once again nodded
Kat: poor girl, I’ll tell you what I ever get my hands on that dennis, I’ll kill him you hear I’l kill him
Mo: that ain’t the half of it
Kat: what?
Mo: he left her for Sharon
Kat jumped out of her chair, SHARON?????????
MO: Calm donw Kat
Kat: Clam down, clam bloody down, not even putting me under section will calm me down, what a….
Charlie: Kat
Kacey:You ready babes?
MM:yeh, come on lets go,
Kacey: Look I’ll drop you off outside the Vic, and you go round the side and wait in the cellar, I’ll go park the car
MM:Ok, he leanded over and kissd her, be quick though!
Kacey: ok
The MM jumped out the car and ran round the side of the vic
Kacye: I love him, she drove off to park the car
He let himself in the side and closed the cellar door behind him, god it was cold, freezing in fact, oh well Kacey wouldn’t be long ,
He looked around, he noticed a slab of concrete, new, a different colour to the rest,
MM: Drains,
He paced around a bit more until he saw a old rusty barrel and he sat on it.
He started tapping the barrel, he always did things like that when he was nervous, Kacey was always on his case about it, why was he so nervous
He heards something, some one coming to the cellar he jumped doen and hide beneath some barrels the cellar door opened,
Kacey: Babe, you in here?
Only Kacye, he got up off the floor
Kacey: What you doing down there babes?
MM: Dunno, thought you was someone else, he brushed some of the dust off his trouses,
Kacey you missed a bit, she rubbedher hand over his bum
MM: oi you, he pulled her closer ad kissed her
Kacey: That was nice, right come on lets go.Actually lets me just make sure Chrissie is upstairs
Kacey walked through in to the bar,she saw Chrissie just chatting to some customers
Chrissie:Oh hello Kac, I thought you were bringing this mystery man too show me
Kacey: I am, I have, will you go upstirs and, make 3 cups of tea
Chrissie: Oh ok, so is he here
Kacey:yeh, please hurry up before he freezes to death
Chrissie: ok ok,Tracy you ok for 10
Tracy: yeh
Chrissie: Come on then
Chrissie made her way upstairs, Kacey disappeared into the cellar again
Kacey:Come on she is upstairs
Kacey reached out her hand, he grabbed it, they made there way upstairs behind Chrissie
Chrissie stood in the kitchen strring the tea, she heard Kacey coming upstairs
Chrissie: so you got something you want to show me
Kacey stood in the doorway of the kitchen, Yep
Chrissie turned round, well then
Kacey: Chrissie meet my Fiance, she steeped out the way to reveal him standing behind her
Chrissie’s expression dropped,
MM: Hello Chrissie,
Chrissie: Dennis?
hehe bet your kicking yourslef now,!! hehe
DENNIS oh my god I did not see that one coming but oh my god Dennis wow so he's engaged to Chrissie's sister wow what about Sharon oh my god babes it's brill
wow what about Sharon
Well you'll find out more in the next part, but this ain'ta a shannis script!!!!
Thanks!
Oh My God its Dennis! I know this aint Shannis but what about Sharon? This is great now we know the MM. More please
xxx
OMG! Dennis! Wow! I didn't see that coming! Fab! More soon!
dennis!!! :eek: :eek: what about sharon!!!:eek:
more soon please!!! :cheer:
di marco
26-06-2005, 11:57
fab! :D didnt think it would be dennis! :) more very very soon please, cant wait
EastendersRox
27-06-2005, 16:13
WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DENNIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What about Sharon?
Please post more. I am still in shock about Dennis
xxx
EastendersRox
30-06-2005, 16:06
Poor Sharon, but I can't wait to see what's next!
just wondered if anyone is still interested in this script?
i know its been a while, i've actually been wroking on another one as i don't know if i will carry on with this one, i've still got loads more to post though, but i'll ony post ot if your interested and want more
Sorry
layne
x x x
Will post the next part tomorrow if ya want more
xxx
I've been waiting ages for more of this babes please post more please and I look forward to your new script too
di marco
11-07-2005, 08:37
just wondered if anyone is still interested in this script?
i know its been a while, i've actually been wroking on another one as i don't know if i will carry on with this one, i've still got loads more to post though, but i'll ony post ot if your interested and want more
Sorry
layne
x x x
Will post the next part tomorrow if ya want more
xxx
corse we still want it, your scripts brill! cant wait for the other one either! :)
EastendersRox
11-07-2005, 16:10
Plz post more!
Hello everyone, sorry it has been so long!!!
I'll post two parts now, they are supposed to be one part but its very long, so i spilt it up!!!
i've posted the last bit from the last part just in case ya forgot!!!
So hope ya enjoy and i'll post more if ya want it
luv ya
layne
x x x
Chrissie stood in the kitchen strring the tea, she heard Kacey coming upstairs
Chrissie: so you got something you want to show me
Kacey stood in the doorway of the kitchen, Yep
Chrissie turned round, well then
Kacey: Chrissie meet my Fiance, she steeped out the way to reveal him standing behind her
Chrissie’s expression dropped,
MM: Hello Chrissie,
Chrissie: Dennis?
Dennis: Hello Chrissie,
Chrissie: what the..
Dennis: What not pleased to see me?
Chrissie: No, I mean yeh course I am
Dennis: come on then, where is me hug?
He opened his arms gesturing a hug from Chrissie
Chrissie walked over and gave him a hug, her eyes met Kacey’s, she was so happy, the hapopiest Chrissie had ever seen her, she couldn’t ruin that for her, she loved having her sister around, but she had to get rid of them, she could have dennis sleeping above his dead father.
Chrissie stepped back and walked back over to the now cold teas,
Chrissie:I’ll make more hey
She poured the tea down the sink and flicked on the kettle
Kacey:I told you you’d be happy Chris’
Chrissie:yeh, dennis, urm we need to
Dennis: catch up,
Chrissie: yeh, last time I saw you,
Chrissie’s mind went back to the night where she had bumped into dennis at the tube station when he told her all about Den and zoe, Chrissie felt her eyes welling up, she turned to the now bolied kettle and pured it into the 3 cups
Dennis: yeh, I know, urmmmm where is de…
Chrissie: So I thought you were, , where is Sharon?
She had to change the subject even though she knew dennis would want to talk to Den
Dennis: well the think is..
Kacey: I’m gonna go down and help behind the bar, let you two catch up,
she kissed dennis passionately,
Dennis: ok babe, see you in a bit
Kacey went downstairs
Chrissie: Sorry, have I dropped my foot in it, Kace’ don’t know about Sharon does she?
Dennis: No, no its ok, Kacey knows all about Sharon in fact they used to be, well still are very good mates!
Chrissie: oh right, well to be honest dennis, and I’m really glad for you and kac’ and everything but well how come your not with Sharon?
Dennis: I knew that you’d ask that, well you see the thing is, I’ve known Kacey for a while, I mean I never knew she was your sister, right I’m cocking this all up, I’ll start again,
Dennis cleared his thought and started again
Dennis: Right I’ve got a mate, stu, stuart, well me and him has been mates for donkeys years, and anyway, well he started seeing Kacey,
Chrissie: when was this?
Dennis: I while ago, urm before she moved to spain. The thing was stu went away on a business trip, and we were all sharing a house, and me and her you know had a bit to much to drink and ended up, sleeping together
Chrissie: But your mate?
Dennis: yeh I know, we were both drunk, well anyway, we kind of both wanted it to happen, so we carried on seeing each other while stu was away, then he got back, he didn’t suspect anything, but he then dumped Kacey as he had to move due to his job, we said are goodbyes to stu and became a proper couple. We were so in love, we both went over to spain, but then well stuff happened, and we spilt up
Chrissie fidgeted,
Dennis: sorry you don’t want my life story right?
Chrissie: well yeh
Dennis: ok, anyway, well I’ve always kept in contact with Kac’ and well when I left here I tthought it would be the ideal opputunity t see her again, and she’d moved back to England so we arranged to meet up as friends but well we hit it off again, and fell completely back in love, so well I proposed,
Chrissie: yeh honey that’s sweet and everything but what about Sharon?
Dennis: Well I think she may be still in America, I loved Sharon and everything, but I loved, still do love Kacey more
Chrissie: oh ok,I understand now, and congratulations
She got up and hugged dennis
Dennis: Thanks, it means a lot you know,
Chrissie:yeh,
Kacey came back upstairs
Kacey: Look honey, can we please go for a drink together,?
Dennis: Sweetheart we are in a pub
Kacey: I know but can we do it properly, like go round the front?
Dennis: Why?
Kacey: I just want to, please?
Dennnis: yeh ok, if it ok with chrissie, I mean you can’t just stop working
Chrissie: Course its fine, just go out the back and I’ll see you in a minute,
Kacey: ok,
She grabbed dennis’s hand, pulled him in close kissed him then led him downstairs
This is fabbie babes I love it please post more it's brill can't wait to find out more about their relationship and is he really over Sharon hmmm post more soon
EastendersRox
16-07-2005, 07:25
Brill!
Fab babes. Can Dennis really have gotten over Sharon. More please its brilliant
xxx
P.S I'm back
Fab babes. Can Dennis really have gotten over Sharon. More please its brilliant
xxx
P.S I'm back
welcome back honey!! xx and we will hav eot see if he is over sharon...............
di marco
16-07-2005, 15:07
brill! :D so dennis is over sharon hmmmmmmmm i wonder! :) more very soon please, cant wait
hmm i cant believe hes really over sharon!!! :searchme: :wub:
more soon please!!! :cheer:
ChrissieWatts
31-07-2005, 20:51
ok...... have u stopped writing this!!!!!
This script just came back to me so I was wondering if you'd totally dropped it, as I'm guessing or if you can't be bothered to post more yet?
xxx
Well that is infact all i wrote (couz i write in advance) so what i will do
I PROMISE is write more this weekend and post it and then this script can carry on or be finished.What ever you guys feel!
really sorry baout this, but i kinda forgot about it aswell to be honest!
But yeh i will write more and post this weekend
Sorry Guys
Layne
xxx
Good because it was a great script!
xxx
lil baby tash
09-11-2005, 21:43
wow can' wait for the next part i have just discovered it!!!
Jada-GDR
11-11-2005, 16:03
:p thats cool i'm loving it! :p
Emma-Lou
14-11-2005, 13:46
this is good i have just found it
Please update this layne!
xxx
Harmanizing
18-11-2005, 16:25
I'm going to see him too, on the 5th Dec. Can't wait!!
Well that is infact all i wrote (couz i write in advance) so what i will do
I PROMISE is write more this weekend and post it and then this script can carry on or be finished.What ever you guys feel!
really sorry baout this, but i kinda forgot about it aswell to be honest!
But yeh i will write more and post this weekend
Sorry Guys
Layne
xxx
*Taps foot on the floor* AHEM! What happened Layneykins?? Post more or I will kill you.. well maybe that was a bit harsh. I will kill Nigel, or maybe just kidnap him and keep him for me :D
So POST!
*Taps foot on the floor* AHEM! What happened Layneykins?? Post more or I will kill you.. well maybe that was a bit harsh. I will kill Nigel, or maybe just kidnap him and keep him for me :D
So POST!
:rotfl: God i had completly forgotten all about this. Please don't kill me and :eek: That is being greedy kidnapping nige and keeping him.
I may write some more if i can :p Amberkins!!!
Layne pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post more or I really will get Nige! *Begins to plan what to do with Nigel..*
Sam-Elle
10-11-2006, 13:42
this is brilliant babe! :wub:
ive just read it all through & i agree with amber about posting more...
pwetty please :angel: :p x
I'll do some more later or this weekend :rolleyes: God knows why you want more its crap!
Crap? Pah! It's not crap at all. It's fabulous :D *Is looking forward to reading more..*
Crap? Pah! It's not crap at all. It's fabulous :D *Is looking forward to reading more..*
*Has kidnapped Nigel* You can take him off the list now :D.. Unless you want to post some more of the fabulous-ness :wub:
Sam-Elle
01-04-2007, 14:05
*Has kidnapped Nigel* You can take him off the list now :D.. Unless you want to post some more of the fabulous-ness :wub:
ooh layneybabys been warned... tut tut :p now you know you have to post more :D
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